Module 3 模塊話題滿分范文必背-2023-2024學年九年級英語上冊單元重難點易錯題精練（外研版）

Module3Heroes模塊話題滿分范文必背一、材料作文1．每個人都有自己心中的學習榜樣。鐘南山院士是我學習的榜樣。下面是關于他的一些簡要信息。根據(jù)這些信息，寫一篇80字左右的英語短文。1.鐘南山出生于1936年10月20日。他85歲了，每天堅持鍛煉身體。2.他是個醫(yī)生，勇敢，有愛心，知識淵博……3他的主要事跡：A．新冠Covid-19開始傳播的時候，他奔赴最危險的地方。B．對抗疫情。不放棄病人。4.我從他的身上學到了許多東西……_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Everyonehashisownrolemodel.Dr.ZhongNanshanismyrolemodel.ZhongNanshanwasbornonOctober20,1936.Althoughheis85yearsold,hestillkeepsexercisingeveryday.Heisoneofthemostfamousmedicalscientistsinthe21stcentury.Heisbrave,warm-heartedandknowledgeable.WhenCovid-19begantospread,hewenttolotsofdangerousplacestohelpothers.Hedefeatedtheepidemicbravelyanddidnotgiveuprescuingpatients.Ilearnedalotfromhim.Firstofall,weshouldkeepdoingexercisetokeepourselveshealthy.Secondly,weshouldbealwaysreadytohelpothers.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第三人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，整體介紹鐘南山的基本信息；第二步，闡述在疫情期間，鐘南山的事跡；第三步，最后說明從鐘南山身上學到的優(yōu)點。[亮點詞匯]①Although盡管②keepdoingsth一直做某事③giveup放棄[高分句型]①Heisoneofthemostfamousmedicalscientistsinthe21stcentury.（oneof+最高級+名詞復數(shù)“……中最……之一”）②Firstofall,weshouldkeepdoingexercisetokeepourselveshealthy.（動詞不定式作目的狀語）2．袁隆平被稱為“雜交水稻之父”。由于他的努力，中國的水稻產(chǎn)量大幅度提高。請根據(jù)以下提示對他進行介紹。提示：FatherofHybridRice，finisheduniversityinthe1960s，developedhybridricein1973要求：1）語法正確，表達流暢；2）拼寫正確；3）詞數(shù)：70左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文YuanLongpingisoneofthemostfamousscientistsinChina.Peoplecallhim“FatherofHybridRice”.Inthe1960s,hefinisheduniversity.Sincethen,hehasspentplentyofhistimedevelopingthenewtypeofrice.In1973,togetherwithotherscientists,hedevelopedhybridrice.Itwasagreatsuccess.Becauseofhishardwork,Chinanowproducesenoughriceeveryyeartofeeditspeople.HisachievementshaveencouragedalltheChinesepeople.WhatagreatscientistYuanLongpingis!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；介紹袁隆平做的事要用“一般過去時”③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當增加細節(jié)，并且突出寫作的要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，總得介紹下袁隆平；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。重點介紹了袁隆平的事跡和成就；第三步，書寫結語。感嘆袁隆平的偉大。[亮點詞匯]①plentyof大量的②developed培育，發(fā)展③achievements成就④encourage鼓勵[高分句型]①Sincethen,hehasspentplentyofhistimedevelopingthenewtypeofrice.（本句使用了現(xiàn)在完成時；spendsometimedoingsth.“花多長時間做某事”）②WhatagreatscientistYuanLongpingis!（感嘆句）3．一個有希望的民族不能沒有英雄，一個有前途的國家不能沒有先鋒。每個人心中都有自己的英雄?！禔BCKids》報社正在舉行“心中的英雄”為主題的英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容提示：1.Whatdoesaheromeaninyouropinion?2.Whoisaheroinyourheart?3.Whatcanyoulearnfromhimorher?注意：文中不得透露個人真實信息；詞數(shù)60~80；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Everyonehasaheroinhisorherheart._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Everyonehasaheroinhisorherheart.Ithinkaheromustbeagoodexampleforothers.TheheroinmyheartiscalledLiLanjuan.SheisadoctorfromZhejiang.ThereasonIlikeheristhatshe,aswellasherteam,savedalotofpatientsduringthepandemic.Sheisnotonlybraveinthefaceofthevirusbutalsoveryprofessional.Aftertakingheradvice,thousandsofpeopleweresaved.MaybeIcannotbeadoctorlikeherbutIwilltrymybesttocontributetohumansociety.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“內(nèi)容提示”中的關鍵信息，寫短文介紹自己心中的英雄。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹在自己看來英雄意味著什么；第二步，介紹自己心中的英雄；第三步，介紹自己從這個英雄身上學到了什么。[亮點詞匯]①notonly...butalso...不僅……而且……②inthefaceof面對③thousandsof數(shù)以千計的[高分句型]①Ithinkaheromustbeagoodexampleforothers.（省略that的賓語從句）②MaybeIcannotbeadoctorlikeherbutIwilltrymybesttocontributetohumansociety.（but連接并列句）4．假如你是某中學學生李華，最近你班觀看了《感動中國2021年度人物》，失聰女孩江夢南的事跡深深觸動了你。請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文，描述江夢南的經(jīng)歷，并表達你的想法。要點如下：（1）江夢南在六個月大的時候失去了聽力。（2）她父母鼓勵她學習唇語、練習開口說話，這讓她能夠與人正常交流。（3）有時候，學會一個單詞可能要練習上千遍。（4）她努力學習，終于在2018年被清華大學錄取。（5）你的想法……要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個

（2）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：失去聽力：loseone’shearing

唇語：lip-read清華大學：TsinghuaUniversity

錄?。篵eenrolledintoJiangMengnanwasborninHunanProvincein1992.She_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文JiangMengnanwasborninHunanProvincein1992.Shelostherhearingwhenshewasasix-month-oldgirl.Herparentsencouragedhertolearntolip-readandpractisespeaking.Thismadeitpossibleforhertocommunicatewithcommonpeople.Butthiswasalsoaverydifficultjourney.Sometimesitmighttakeherthousandsoftimestolearnevenaword.However,JiangMengnanneverthoughtofgivingup.ShestudiedhardandwasfinallyenrolledintoTsinghuaUniversity.Itseemedimpossible,butshedidit.Weallshouldlearnfromherbraveryandpersistence.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作時應用第三人稱形式來敘述；時態(tài)用一般過去時；可通過文中提示的五個方面以觀察者的視角來描述江夢南幼年時期的遭遇、父母在她生活和學習中對她的幫助以及她通過自己的努力最終考上清華大學的事跡；表述中條理應清晰。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作主題。引出需要贊揚的對象；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。描述江夢南幼年時期的遭遇、父母和她自己在生活和學習上遇到的挫折和堅持，最終如愿考入清華大學；第三步，書寫結語。根據(jù)以上描述總結我們應該向江夢南學習。[亮點詞匯]①encouragesb.todosth.鼓勵某人做某事②communicatewithsb.

與……交流③ittakessb.sometimetodosth.做某事花費某人多長時間④thinkofdoingsth.考慮做某事[高分句型]Thismadeitpossibleforhertocommunicatewithcommonpeople.（makeit+形容詞forsb.todosth.“使做某事對某人來說變得……”。it是形式賓語，真正的賓語是動詞不定式。）5．疫情三年中，涌現(xiàn)出了許多英雄，如鐘南山院士、李蘭娟院士、張繼先醫(yī)生等。他們當中誰最讓你欽佩呢？請你以“MyFavouriteAnti-epidemicHero”為題寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容要點：1.你最欽佩的抗疫英雄是誰？2.談談你欽佩他（她）的原因。3.你從他（她）身上學到了什么？注意：1.內(nèi)容必須包含所給要點；2.文中不得透露個人信息；3.詞數(shù)80左右。參考詞匯：anti-epidemic（抗疫）；COVID-19（新冠肺炎）；admiresb.forsth./doingsth.（敬佩、佩服）MyFavouriteAnti-epidemicHero____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyFavouriteAnti-epidemicHeroTherearemillionsofanti-epidemicheroes.Amongthem,theanti-epidemicheroinmyheartisanexcellentdoctor,ZhongNanshan.Heisakindmanwithcourage.Althoughhewasold,hetriedhisbesttofightagainstCOVID-19.Thoughhewasverytired,henevergaveuphiswork.Hesavedmillionsofpeople’slives.AndhehasmovedeveryChinesepeople.Iadmirehimnotonlyforwhathehasdonetothecountrybutalsoforhiscourage.Iwillstudyhardfromnowonandbecomeapersonlikehim.Heisatrueheroinmyheart.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，學生應注意不要遺漏“要點提示”中最欽佩的抗疫英雄、欽佩他（她）的原因以及從中學到了什么的介紹。適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山直接介紹最欽佩的抗疫英雄是誰。第二步，具體闡述欽佩抗疫英雄的原因。第三步，描述自己從最欽佩的抗疫英雄身上學到了什么。[亮點詞匯]①triedhisbest盡他最大努力②fightagainst對抗，與……作斗爭，為反對……而斗爭；③gaveup放棄④fromnowon從現(xiàn)在開始[高分句型]①Heisakindmanwithcourage.（with表伴隨）②Althoughhewasold,hetriedhisbesttofightagainstCOVID-19.（Although引導引導讓步狀語從句）③Iadmirehimnotonlyforwhathehasdonetothecountrybutalsoforhiscourage.（notonly…butalso…用于連接兩個表示并列關系的成分）6．“能吃苦，肯奮斗，有擔當，似一葉扁舟在激湍中逆流而上，如一株小樹在萬木前迎來春光。”這就是陸鴻，《感動中國》2022年度人物之一。雖幼時高燒導致身體殘疾，但他仍堅持學習。畢業(yè)后，由于身體殘疾，陸鴻沒有找到工作，他開始自主創(chuàng)業(yè)，從賣水、修自行車到最后成功開相冊廠，他幫助許多殘疾人就業(yè)，實現(xiàn)人生價值……請以“永不言棄”為話題，結合自身經(jīng)歷，寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文，講述陸鴻的成長經(jīng)歷以及他身上值得我們學習的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)。參考詞匯：相冊album；堅持persistence注意：1.短文條理清晰，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮；2.短文中不得泄露個人信息；3.詞數(shù)90左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))AmongallthepeoplewhowerepresentedwithTouchingChinaAwardthisyear,LuHongleftadeepimpressiononme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

AmongallthepeoplewhowerepresentedwithTouchingChinaAwardthisyear,LuHongleftadeepimpressiononme.LuHongcomesfromJiangsu.Ahighfevercausedphysicaldisabilitywhenhewasyoung,buthestillpersistedinstudying.Aftergraduation,duetohisphysicaldisability,LuHongcouldn’tfindajob.Heisnotcomplaining,notdepressed,andunwillingtobecomeaburdentohisfamily.Hestartedhisownbusiness,fromsellingwaterandrepairingbicyclestosuccessfullyopeningaphotoalbumfactory.Hehelpedmanydisabledpeoplefindemploymentandrealizetheirvalueinlife.LuHongisnotafraidofhardship,willingtostrive,responsible,andnevergivesup.Heisamodelforallofus.ComparedtoLuHong,thereisnothingthatcannotbeovercomeaboutthedifficultieswefaceinlifeorstudy.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文，講述陸鴻的成長經(jīng)歷及他的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的提示要點，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，總寫，陸鴻給我留下了深刻印象，引出介紹的內(nèi)容（文章已給出）；第二步，具體講述陸鴻的成長經(jīng)歷。第三步，最后寫陸鴻值得我們學習的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)，結束全文。[亮點詞匯]①leaveadeepimpressiononsb.給某人留下深刻印象②comefrom來自③beunwillingtodosth.不愿意做某事④becomeaburdento成為…的負擔⑤benotafraidofhardship不怕吃苦⑥comparedto與……相比，比起⑦dueto由于[高分句型]①Ahighfevercausedphysicaldisabilitywhenhewasyoung,buthestillpersistedinstudying.（時間狀語從句、but連接的并列句）②AmongallthepeoplewhowerepresentedwithTouchingChinaAwardthisyear…（定語從句）③ComparedtoLuHong,thereisnothingthatcannotbeovercomeaboutthedifficultieswefaceinlifeorstudy.（therebe句型和定語從句）④Hehelpedmanydisabledpeoplefindemploymentandrealizetheirvalueinlife.（動詞不定式作賓語補足語）7．假如你校英文報正以“Myhero”為題開展征文大賽。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示寫一篇英語短文參賽，介紹你心目中的英雄——顏寧。要求：1.內(nèi)容須包含所有要點提示，可適當發(fā)揮；2.語言表達要準確，語意要通順、連貫；3.詞數(shù)不少于100。Myhero________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyHeroYanNingisaheroinmyheart.ShewasborninJinan,Shandong.YanNing,45yearsold,hasbeenoneofthetopscientistsintheworld.AndsheisthefounderofShenzhenAcademyofMedicalSciences.Iadmireherbecausesheisadreamfollower.Whenshewasalittlegirl,shedreamedofbeingascientist.Toachieveherdream,sheexperiencedalotofdifficulties.Butshenevergaveupherdream.Instead,sheworkedhardtofightforit.Fromher,Ilearnedthatthekeytosuccessishardwork.Nopains,nogains.AslongasItakeaction,I’msuremydreamwillcometrueoneday.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第三人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹顏寧的基本個人信息；第二步，介紹她的成就；第三步，介紹她成為你心目中英雄的原因以及你從她身上學到了什么。[亮點詞匯]①bebornin出生于②dreamofdoingsth夢想做某事③giveup放棄④takeaction采取行動[高分句型]①Iadmireherbecausesheisadreamfollower.（because引導的原因狀語從句）②Whenshewasalittlegirl,shedreamedofbeingascientist.（when引導的時間狀語從句）8．今年是學習雷鋒六十周年紀念日，雷鋒同志說過：“我要把有限的生命，投入到無限的為人民服務之中去?！闭垖懸黄馑歼B貫，符合邏輯，不少于80字的作文。在作文中，簡單表述你對雷鋒的崇敬之情，為什么向雷鋒叔叔學習以及你在日常生活中是如何幫助他人的。LearnfromLeiFengLeiFengwasknownasapatternthatofferedhelptoothersselflessly.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LearnfromLeiFengLeiFengwasknownasapatternthatofferedhelptoothersselflessly.Hedevotedallhislifetohisbelovedcareeraswell.Iwastotallyshockedbyhischaracter.Suchishumannature:peopletracethegood,waterflowstolow.Everyoneshouldcopyhisspiritasourdailylifegoesinsteadofutteringameaninglessslogan“l(fā)earnfromLeiFeng,ourdecentidol”,sothatwecoulddefinitelyseealotmoresmilingfacesratherthanconflict.Tohelpothersisnotahardthing,however,whatyouneedistoconsistdoingit.Takemyselfasanexample.Iamtherepresentativeofmathtocollecthomeworkismydailytask,however,Iwouldturnthemtotherightpageforshortenthetimeforteacherswhencorrectingthem.IstronglysuggestthatifeachofustakesLeiFengasourrolemodelandcopieshisspirit,weshallseeabetterworld.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，表達自己對雷鋒的崇敬之情；第二步，介紹向雷鋒叔叔學習的原因，并講述在日常生活中是如何幫助別人的。[亮點詞匯]①insteadof代替②sothat以便③take...asanexample以……為例[高分句型]①Iwastotallyshockedbyhischaracter.（一般過去時被動語態(tài)）②IstronglysuggestthatifeachofustakesLeiFengasourrolemodelandcopieshisspirit,weshallseeabetterworld.（that引導賓語從句）9．冬奧會上年僅18歲的中國自由式滑雪運動員谷愛凌成為了全世界的焦點。她參加了三項滑雪賽事，獲得了兩金一銀的驕人成績。她不僅是優(yōu)秀的運動員，還是學霸和模特，同時擅長籃球、芭蕾等，她的成功來源于她對滑雪的熱愛和努力付出以及她骨子里的自信和永不放棄的精神。請大家根據(jù)以上的導語提示，寫一篇英語作文。要求：1.字數(shù)90-100左右。

2.不允許在文中出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和學校。參考詞語：英文名字：EileenGu

自由滑雪者：freeskier

芭蕾：

ballet學霸：grade-Astudent

自由式滑雪：

FreestyleSkiing

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AttheWinterOlympicsthisyear,EileenGuwontwogoldmedalsandonesilvermedalforChinainthewomen’sfreestyleskiing.First,Eileen’ssuccessneedsherdeeploveintheskiing.It’sknownthatinterestisthebestteacher.Second,hardworkingisthekeytosuccess.Successneedsustodevoteourtime.Finally,herconfidenceenabledhertoperfectlyshowherskill.Infinalracesheeventriedtechniqueswhichsheneversuccessfullycompleted.Inaword,fromthisfantasticeighteen-year-oldgirl,wecanbetterunderstandpassion,hard-working,andconfidence.【詳解】［總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏題目要求中每一項內(nèi)容，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。［寫作步驟］第一步，表明寫作意圖。開門見山提出介紹谷愛凌的個人成就；第二步，具體闡述她取得這樣成就的原因；第三步，書寫結語，總結可以從她身上學習的精神。［亮點詞匯］①Inaword總之［高分句型］①It’sknownthatinterestisthebestteacher.（賓語從句）②Infinalrac