Module 11 Body language-2021-2022學(xué)年七年級英語下學(xué)期單元話題滿分寫作外研版

2021-2022學(xué)年七年級英語下學(xué)期單元話題滿分寫作Module11:Bodylanguage單元話題：社交禮儀范文11．假如你叫李碩，你的美國筆友Cindy要來中國，她發(fā)電子郵件說想了解中國的一些社交禮儀。請根據(jù)下面四幅圖片及文字提示給她回復(fù)一封電子郵件。shakehandsit'srudetopointatotherswithchopsticksarriveatthepartyontimedon'tgiveaclockasapresent注意：（1）郵件中須包括提示中的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，提示詞語供參考；（2）郵件中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名；（3）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearCindy,I'mgladtoknowthatyouarecomingtoChina.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文22．在八年級即將結(jié)束之際,八(1)班將舉行一次主題班會,要求同學(xué)們談?wù)勔荒陙碜约旱氖斋@與變化。請為Simon準(zhǔn)備一份100字左右的英語演講稿,具體內(nèi)容如下:過去現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)做作業(yè)粗心,功課不好認(rèn)真聽講,對課程越來越喜歡了業(yè)余生活大部分業(yè)余時(shí)間聽音樂,玩游戲現(xiàn)在用來閱讀,因?yàn)椤Y儀亂扔垃圾,在公共場所大聲喧嘩通過做……來保護(hù)環(huán)境,有禮貌……展望未來相信自己在九年級會……Hello,everyone.I’mSimon.Backtothelifeinthelastyear,IthinkIhavechangedalotandmadegreatprogressinsomeways.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文33．中華文化源遠(yuǎn)流長，而且中國素來就是禮儀之邦。假如你是李華，本學(xué)期將有一批來自美國的中學(xué)生來你們學(xué)校進(jìn)行交流學(xué)習(xí)，為了讓這些美國交換生更好地了解我國的傳統(tǒng)文化禮儀，請你用英語介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)禮儀文化，可以包括餐桌，社交行為禮儀等，并請你談下這些禮儀對我們中學(xué)生的成長和生活的影響和作用。要求：1）詞數(shù)：80-100詞左右；可以圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫。2）文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文44．上周日，你們?nèi)胰I江公園游玩。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語寫一篇短文，以“HowToBehavePolitely”為題。要點(diǎn)提示：親身經(jīng)歷1.你們在濱江公園欣賞自然美景，看到野鳥在長江上飛。濱江公園確實(shí)是結(jié)束一天忙碌工作后放松的好去處。2.但我們發(fā)現(xiàn)了一位年輕女孩采摘公園里的花。3.然后我上前阻止，她意識到自己的錯(cuò)誤行為。我的觀點(diǎn)1.對于我們而言，學(xué)習(xí)禮儀方面的知識是必要的。2.列舉3條在公共場合應(yīng)當(dāng)遵守的規(guī)矩。提示詞匯：濱江公園BinjiangPark

長江theYangtzeRiver注意：1.短文中應(yīng)包含所要求的信息，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.短文中請勿提及真實(shí)校名或姓名。HowToBehavePolitelyLastSunday,myfamilyandIwenttoBinjiangPark.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文5中國和美國的課堂是有一些差異的，請根據(jù)下列表格中的信息描述一下這些差異，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?0詞以上。中國課堂美國課堂（1）不直呼老師的姓名（2）認(rèn)真聽課、做筆記（3）舉手發(fā)言（1）學(xué)生面對面坐（2）比較放松，可以喝飲料（3）自由討論參考詞匯：facetoface面對面；freely自由地范文66．為普及餐桌禮儀，增強(qiáng)大家的禮貌用餐意識，請你以“TableManners”為題，寫一篇英文短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.吃飯時(shí)不喜歡的食物可以不用管它，但是不要大聲說出來(speak…out)；2.如果你喜歡的食物離你很遠(yuǎn)(befarawayfrom)，你夠不著，可以叫別人幫你夾菜而不是(insteadof)自己站起來夾；3.如果你忍不住要打噴嚏(sneeze)，最好不要對著餐桌。要求：1.語言通順，內(nèi)容完整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；2.80詞左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文77．假設(shè)你的班里有一些來自外國的學(xué)生,他們對下面這些肢體語言不太了解。請你根據(jù)對這些肢體語言的理解向他們介紹這些肢體語言的含義：(1)點(diǎn)頭和搖頭；(2)握手和擁抱；(3)把食指(forefinger)放在嘴前。50詞左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示短語：shakehands,forthefirsttime__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：1．例文DearCindy,I'mgladtoknowthatyouarecomingtoChina.Chinaisacountrywithalonghistory,sotherearemanycustomshere.Letmetellyousomeofthem.Firstly,youaresupposedtoshakehandswhenyoumeetsomeoneforthefirsttime.Secondly,whenyoueatmealswithotherpeople,it'srudetopointatotherswithyourchopsticks.Anddon'tmakenoisewhenyouhaveyoursoup.Besides,ifyouaregoingtoaparty,youaresupposedtoarriveatthepartyontime,orafewminutesearlier.Youarenotsupposedtogiveaclocktoafriendasapresent,becausethatmeansdeathinChinese.What'smore,whenyoueatoutwithfriends,generallyyourfriendsandyoushouldtaketurnstopayforthemeals.Ihopethatthesetipsareusefulforyou.HaveagoodtimeinChina!Bestwishes!Yours,LiShuo【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。假定你是李碩，給美國筆友Cindy發(fā)一封郵件介紹中國的一些社交禮儀；注意要點(diǎn)要齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)主要以第二人稱來介紹，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文可分為四段，第一段引出話題；第二段詳細(xì)介紹有關(guān)中國社交禮儀的建議，包括第一次見面、飲食、準(zhǔn)時(shí)、送禮物和請客幾方面；第三、四段收尾，表達(dá)美好祝愿。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。2．參考范文：Hello,everyone.I’mSimon.Backtothelifeinthelastyear,IthinkIhavechangedalotandmadegreatprogress(進(jìn)步)insomeways.First,Iusedtobecarelesswithmystudyandwasbadatmylessons.ButnowIlistencarefullyinclass.Iammoreandmoreinterestedinallmylessons.Second,Ispentmostofmyfreetimelisteningtomusicandplayingcomputergames.ButnowItrytospendmyfreetimereadingbecauseitcanopenupmyeyesandmakemerelaxed.Third,inthepastIoftendroppedlittereverywhereandshoutedloudlyinpublicplaces.Now,Icanbehavepolitely.Ialwaysrecyclethewastetoprotecttheenvironment.IbelieveIwillbebetterandbetterinGrade9.Thanksforyourlistening!【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇演講稿，在主題班會,要求同學(xué)們談?wù)勔荒陙碜约旱氖斋@與變化。根據(jù)表格提示，要求要點(diǎn)覆蓋全面，可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充；注意寫作時(shí)要點(diǎn)齊全，同時(shí)也要緊扣主題。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文用到的一般過去時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱用第一人稱。分別從學(xué)習(xí)；生活；禮儀方面介紹了自己過去和現(xiàn)在的不同，并展望未來，寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，注意連詞的使用。全文要點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，語法運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，上下文注意連接的流暢度。3．范文：Asweknow,differentcountrieshavedifferentculture.Today,I’dliketointroducesomethingaboutChinesetablemanners.InChina,tablemannersaretoomuch.Forexample,youarenotsupposedtoeatwithknivesandforks.Chineseusuallyusechopsticksinstead.Butwearenotsupposedtostickourchopsticksintoourfood.Andwearesupposedtolettheoldstarteatingfirstandsoon.Infact,thesetablemannersarenottooserious.Soyoudon’tneedtoworryaboutthemsomuch.Buttheseritualshaveagreatinfluenceonourgrowthandlife.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)包括提示內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.例文點(diǎn)評：例文采用一段式；用第一人稱和第二人稱敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，條例清晰，行文連貫。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：wouldliketodo；tablemanner；forexample；besupposedtodo；stickinto；letsbdosth；soon；infact；needtodo；worryabout；haveainfluenceon。語法：并列連詞and、but、so的運(yùn)用；as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。4．范文：HowToBehavePolitelyLastSunday,myfamilyandIwenttoBinjiangPark.WeenjoyedthenaturalbeautythereandsawwildbirdsflyingontheYangtzeRiver.Thereweremanypeopleplayinginthepark,becauseBinjiangParkisreallyagoodplacetorelaxafterabusyday’swork.Wewereenjoyingourselveswhensomethingunpleasanthappened.Wefoundayounggirlpickingflowersinthepark.ThenIstoppedherandsherealizedherwrongbehavior.Inmyopinion,itisnecessaryforustolearntheknowledgeofetiquette.Forexample,weshouldpayattentiontoourmanners.Whenweareinthelibrary,weshouldkeepquiet.Whenwecrosstheroad.Weshouldwatchthetrafficlightsfirst.Beforewegetonabus,weshouldwaitinlineandsoon.Allinall,weshouldbehavepolitely.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭，根據(jù)漢語提示的內(nèi)容，第一段敘述在游玩濱江公園時(shí)遇到的事情和自己的行為和做法，第二段介紹自己的觀點(diǎn)并列舉三條在公共場合應(yīng)當(dāng)遵守的規(guī)矩。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱為主來敘述內(nèi)容，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。在敘述內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求描寫細(xì)致，敘述完整，保證條理清晰，行文連貫。5．TherearesomedifferencesbetweenaChineseclassandanAmericanclass.Nowlet’shavealook.InChina,studentscalltheirteacherswith“Mr”or“Ms”.Inclass,theyalwayslistentoteachersandtakenotescarefully.Iftheywanttosaysomething,theyshouldputuptheirhandsfirst.ButinAmerica,it’sverydifferentfromthatinChina.Thestudentssitarounddesksfacetoface.Theycandrinkinclassandtheycantalkfreelytoo.ButIthinktheChineseclassisbetter.It’spoliteofthestudentstoobeytheschoolrules.【解析】試題分析：本題是一篇材料作文，也是話題作文，話題是介紹中國和美國的課堂的差異?？忌紫纫J(rèn)真閱讀表格內(nèi)的內(nèi)容提示，認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示，列好提綱內(nèi)容。本文主要時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意主謂一致。盡量使用熟悉句型，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性，提示詞需用上。本文主要分為三段，第一段總，說明中美課堂有差異。第二段，中國課堂情況。第三段，介紹美國課堂情況。寫完以后，重新閱讀一遍，認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有語法錯(cuò)誤，拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。文中使用了條件狀語從句Iftheywanttosaysomething,theyshouldputuptheirhandsfirst.固定句型It’spoliteofthestudentstoobeytheschoolrules.是高分點(diǎn)，寫作內(nèi)容包括所有提