Module 12 Western music-2021-2022學(xué)年七年級(jí)英語下學(xué)期單元話題滿分寫作外研版

2021-2022學(xué)年七年級(jí)英語下學(xué)期單元話題滿分寫作Module12：Westernmusic單元話題：音樂范文11．假如你叫李雷，是一名中學(xué)生，經(jīng)常收聽由主持人Philip主持的音樂節(jié)目，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，用英語給主持人寫一封信。要點(diǎn)：1.你很喜歡這個(gè)節(jié)目，特別是節(jié)目播放的英文歌曲很棒，歌詞很優(yōu)美。2.在你感到疲勞時(shí)，你會(huì)打開收音機(jī)收聽這個(gè)節(jié)目。3.你從節(jié)目中學(xué)到了很多單詞。4.告訴主持人你最喜歡的音樂類型，請(qǐng)他給你推薦一些相關(guān)的歌手和CD。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearPhilip,MynameisLiLei.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Ioftenlistentoyourprogramatnight.Ilikeitverymuch,especiallytheEnglishsongs.IliketheEnglishsongsthathavegreatlyricsbecausegoodlyricscanbeimportantforpeopletounderstandthemeaningofthesongs.Everynight,IwillturnontheradioandlistentoyourprogramwhenIfeeltired.Ithelpsmerelaxmyself.Bytheway,IhavelearntmanyEnglishwordsfromthesesongs.Ilikesingerswhocansingclearlyandwritetheirownsongs.CouldyoupleaserecommendsomesingersandtheirCDstome?Youcane-mailmeatLilei@.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Thankyouverymuch!Yours,LiLei【解析】1.題干解讀：題目要求用英語給主持人寫一封回信，結(jié)合提示要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫作，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱行文，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。作文可以分為三段，第一段進(jìn)行自我介紹，表明自己的態(tài)度；第二段根據(jù)要點(diǎn)說說自己的想法及感受；第三段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。范文22．根據(jù)表格提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文，介紹朋友和父母喜歡的音樂。詞數(shù)60左右，開頭已給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Whatkindofmusic?Whydotheylistentoit?Howdoesitmakethemfeel?Friend1Friend2ParentsMyfriendLiHualikespopmusic.Becauseitispopular.Itmakeshimfeelrelaxed.MyfriendWangJianlikes…____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyfriendLiHualikespopmusic.Becauseitispopular.Itmakeshimfeelrelaxed.MyfriendWangJianlikesclassicalmusicbecausehethinksthatclassicalmusicisricherthanpopmusic.Classicalconcertsmakehimfeelveryrelaxed.ButmyfriendZhangQilikesrockmusic,becauseitismorepowerful.Whensheisverytired,shealwayslistenstorockmusic,andshewillbecomemoreenergetic.Myparentslikelisteningtolightmusic.Theythinklightmusicismorerelaxing.Whenevertheycomehomefromwork,theyalwayslistentolightmusictorelax.【解析】1.題干解讀：題目要求表格內(nèi)容，描寫不同的人喜歡的不同的音樂類型以及理由，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要與已給出的開頭融合起來，本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。范文33．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示以“Mozart”為題目介紹音樂家莫扎特的情況。莫扎特是一位很重要的作曲家。他于1756年出生于奧地利。不到6歲就開始彈奏鋼琴，還可以演奏小提琴。他的家人帶著他在歐洲許多城市進(jìn)行巡演。他譜寫了幾百首動(dòng)聽的樂曲。然而他變的很窮。并且在1791年，年僅35歲的莫扎特去世了。和施特勞斯父子一樣，他是一位偉大的歐洲音樂家，許多人仍然認(rèn)為他的曲子是完美的。1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.文章要包含所有要點(diǎn)。不能有遺漏。提示詞：作曲家composer；奧地利Austria；施特勞斯JohannStraussMozart__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文：MozartMozartwasaveryimportantcomposer.HewasborninAustriain1756.Beforehewassixheplayednotonlythepiano,butalsotheviolin.HisfamilytookhimaroundEuropeandhegaveconcertsinmanycities.Hewrotehundredsofbeautifulpiecesofmusic.Buthebecameverypooranddiedin1791whenhewasonly35.LikeJohannStrauss,fatherandson,hewasagreatEuropeanmusician,andmanypeoplestillthinkhismusicisperfect.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。介紹莫扎特的相關(guān)信息。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般過去時(shí)。從他的出生地，學(xué)習(xí)和演奏鋼琴的經(jīng)歷，以及人們對(duì)他的評(píng)價(jià)等方面來進(jìn)行描述。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。范文44．假如你是張磊，你的幾位朋友喜歡不同的音樂。請(qǐng)寫一篇英語短文，向大家介紹一下。60詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hello,everyone!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Hello,everyone!I'mZhangLei.Ihavethreefriends.Theylikedifferentmusic.Peterlikespopmusicbest.HelikesLiuHuanbecausethewordsaregood.LindalikesChineseclassicalmusic.HerfavouritemusicianisLangLangbecauseheplaysthepianobest.Timlikesrockmusicbest.HisfavouritemusicianisCuiJian,afamousChineserocksinger.Hethinkshismusiccanmakepeopleexcitedandhappy.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。介紹自己的幾位朋友喜歡的音樂。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。介紹朋友喜歡的音樂及其原因，寫作時(shí)要注意保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，敘述完整。范文55．根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇作文。冼星海，1904年生于澳門(Macao)一個(gè)貧苦的家庭，7歲時(shí)跟隨母親去了新加坡(Singapore)，開始學(xué)習(xí)音樂。他先后去過上海、北京學(xué)習(xí)鋼琴和小提琴，1928年他去法國繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)音樂。1939年創(chuàng)作了著名的歌曲《黃河大合唱》(TheYellowRiver)。1945年去世。冼星海是一位偉大的音樂家，在今天他的許多音樂作品仍然非常流行。要求：(1)包括所給內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)條理清楚、意思連貫、語句通順、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確；(3)70詞左右。(短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))XianXinghaiisagreatChinesemusician.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：XianXinghaiisagreatChinesemusician.HewasborninMacaoin1904.AtsevenhismothertookhimtoSingaporeandhebegantolearnmusic.TolearntoplaythepianoandtheviolinhewenttoShanghaiandBeijingaswell.In1928hestudiedinFrance.HewrotethesongTheYellowRiverin1939.Thesongmadehimveryfamousallovertheworld.Hediedin1945whenhewasonlyforty.Butmanypeoplestillthinkhismusicisperfect.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題屬于記敘文寫作，要求考生介紹冼星海，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭；利用所給信息敘述冼星海的家庭背景、學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷、代表作品、去世年份以及對(duì)他的評(píng)價(jià)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)主要用第三人稱以及一般過去時(shí)進(jìn)行書寫。人物描述已給出，考生應(yīng)注意用準(zhǔn)確的語言將要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。書寫時(shí)注意條理清晰，層次分明，語言規(guī)范。范文66．英語課上，老師和同學(xué)們正在討論自己最喜歡的事物。請(qǐng)你加入他們的討論，介紹一下你最喜歡的人或物，并寫一篇題為MyFavorite…的作文。要求：1.介紹自己最喜歡的人或物，并給出至少兩個(gè)喜歡的原因，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名；3.字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80詞。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________