2025屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)：從+“糞”+事?lián)鷳n(yōu)到同學(xué)認(rèn)可+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)從“糞”事?lián)鷳n(yōu)到同學(xué)認(rèn)可1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文IchewedonmypencilasIwalkedbackandforthacrossmybedroom.WhatwasIgoingtodo?ItwasbadenoughthatIwasthenewkid.ButnowIwassuretogetlaughedatbymyclassmates.Howcouldmyfirsthomeworkbesuchadisaster?“MynameisAnna,andthissummerI...”Istopped.HowcouldIstandinfrontofmyclassandsaythatI’dspenttheentiresummerhandlingsomethingthatmostpeopledon’tevenliketotalkabout?Poop(糞便).I’dspentthreemonthsshoveling(鏟),collecting,andanalyzingcowpooponmygrandparents’farm.ItriedtothinkofadifferentadventureIcouldshare.MaybeIcouldsayI’dspentthesummerontheWeatherControlTeampreventingfloods.“Timefordinner,”mymomcalled.Iwalkedslowlydownthestairsandslidintomychair.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“You’vebeeninyourroomsinceyoucamehomefromschool,”Momsaid.“Whatareyouworkingon?”Isighed.“IhavetotelltheclasswhatIdidthissummer.”Myyoungerbrother,Seymour,begantolaughuncontrollably.“Noonewillwanttositnexttoyouaftertheyhearyouwerecoveredincowpoopallsummer!”“OK,that’senough,Seymour,”Dadsaid.“Anna,”saidMom,puttinggreenbeansinabowl,“beproudoftheworkwedidthissummer.Ourplanetwouldbeinsadshapewithoutscientistslikeyourgrandfather.”It’struethatmygrandfatherdoesimportantwork.Hedevelopedaneasywaytousepoopasasourceoffuel.Usingthepoopisnoweasy,economical,andenvironmentallysafe.5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“Iknow,Mom,”Isaid,staringatmymeatloaf.“Butit’snotexactlysomethingpeoplewanttohearaboutbeforelunch.”ThatnightIdreamedaboutmoresplendidadventures:cavedivinginMexico,hikingthroughtheAmazonrainforest...Atschoolthenextday,Ibentovermydesk,listeningtoeachkidspeak.Mypalmsweresweaty,andtheknot(結(jié))inmystomachgrewtighter.“AndthatwasmyjourneytoMountEverest,”EmberAdamssaid,finishingherreport.Shebowedandlookherseat.6段首句Paragraph1：“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteachersaid.Paragraph2：Afterclass,someofmyclassmatesapproachedme.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9轉(zhuǎn)校生安娜因要向同學(xué)分享暑假經(jīng)歷而苦惱，她整個(gè)暑假都在祖父母農(nóng)場(chǎng)處理牛糞，覺(jué)得這會(huì)遭同學(xué)嘲笑。吃飯時(shí)家人討論此事，弟弟嘲笑，媽媽鼓勵(lì)她為爺爺?shù)目蒲泄ぷ髯院馈．?dāng)晚她夢(mèng)到精彩冒險(xiǎn)。第二天在學(xué)校，聽(tīng)了同學(xué)們的精彩分享后，安娜越發(fā)緊張，此時(shí)輪到她發(fā)言。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteachersaid.“輪到你了，安娜。”老師說(shuō)道。我感覺(jué)心跳陡然加快，雙腿像灌了鉛般沉重，緩緩走向講臺(tái)。站定后，我深吸一口氣，鼓起勇氣說(shuō)道：“我叫安娜，今年夏天我在祖父母的農(nóng)場(chǎng)度過(guò)，在那里我一直在處理牛糞?！蓖瑢W(xué)們先是一愣，隨后交頭接耳起來(lái)。我趕忙接著講述爺爺研發(fā)的用牛糞作燃料的方法，以及這對(duì)環(huán)保的重要意義。講述過(guò)程中，我偷偷觀察同學(xué)們的反應(yīng)，發(fā)現(xiàn)他們臉上的驚訝逐漸被好奇取代。當(dāng)我講完，有同學(xué)舉手提問(wèn)：“那牛糞具體是怎么變成燃料的呢？”這讓我緊張的心情稍有緩解。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Afterclass,someofmyclassmatesapproachedme.下課后，一些同學(xué)朝我走來(lái)。他們眼中滿(mǎn)是欽佩，一個(gè)同學(xué)興奮地說(shuō)：“安娜，你做的事太酷了！沒(méi)想到牛糞還能有這么大用處，這對(duì)保護(hù)地球很有幫助??！”另一個(gè)同學(xué)也附和道：“是啊，我們都沒(méi)想到你暑假經(jīng)歷這么特別又有意義?！卑ber也走過(guò)來(lái)，笑著說(shuō)：“你的經(jīng)歷獨(dú)一無(wú)二，相比之下，我的冒險(xiǎn)好像就沒(méi)那么有價(jià)值了。”聽(tīng)著同學(xué)們的夸贊，我心里樂(lè)開(kāi)了花，也意識(shí)到真實(shí)的經(jīng)歷，哪怕看似不那么光鮮，也能贏得他人的尊重和認(rèn)可。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteachersaid.MyheartracedandmylegsfeltliketheywerefilledwithleadasImademywaytothefrontoftheclass.Standingthere,Itookadeepbreathandsummonedupmycourage.“MynameisAnna,andthissummerIwasatmygrandparents’farm,whereIdealtwithcowpoop,”Isaid.Theclassmateswerestartledatfirstandthenbegantowhisperamongthemselves.Hurriedly,Icontinuedtotellthemaboutmygrandfather'smethodofusingcowpoopasfuelanditssignificanceforenvironmentalprotection.AsIwasspeaking,Isecretlyobservedtheirreactionsandfoundthatthesurpriseontheirfaceswasgraduallyreplacedbycuriosity.WhenIfinished,aclassmateraisedhishandandasked,“So,howexactlydoesthecowpoopturnintofuel?”Thisquestionmademefeelalittlelessnervous.14范文呈現(xiàn)Afterclass,someofmyclassmatescameuptome.Theireyeswerefullofadmiration.“Anna,whatyoudidissocool!”oneclassmateexclaimedexcitedly.“Ineverthoughtcowpoopcouldbesouseful.Itreallyhelpsprotecttheplanet!”Anotherclassmatechimedin,“Yeah,wedidn'texpectyoursummerexperiencetobesospecialandmeaningful.”Emberalsowalkedoverandsaidwithasmile,“Yourexperienceisunique.Comparedwithyours,myadventureseemslessvaluable.”Listeningtomyclassmates'praise,Ifeltextremelyhappyandrealizedthatarealexperience,evenifitdoesn'tseemglamorous,canalsowinothers'respectandrecognition.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteacherannounced.Instantly,myheartstartedpoundingwildly,andmylegs,asifweighteddownbylead,carriedmereluctantlytothefrontoftheclassroom.Standingthere,Itookadeep,steadyingbreathandmusteredupmycourage.“MynameisAnna,andthissummerIspenttimeatmygrandparents’farm,wheremydayswerefilledwithhandlingcowpoop,”Ibegan.Theinitialreactionfrommyclassmateswasoneofshock,followedbyamurmurofwhispers.Hastily,Iwentontoelaborateonmygrandfather'sinnovativemethodoftransformingcowpoopintofuelanditsprofoundsignificanceforenvironmentalconservation.AsIspoke,Istoleglancesattheirexpressions,andtomyrelief,theinitialshockgraduallygavewaytocuriosity.NosoonerhadIfinishedthanaclassmateraisedhishandandinquired,“So,preciselyhowdoesthecowpoopgetconvertedintofuel?”Thisqueryalleviatedsomeofmynervousness.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Afterclass,severalofmyclassmatesapproachedme.Theireyessparkledwithadmiration.“Anna,whatyouaccomplishedistrulyremarkable!”oneclassmateexclaimedwithexcitement.“NeverdidIimaginethatcowpoopcouldholdsuchgreatu