題型25 書面表達之提綱作文（練習）

第25講書面表達之提綱作文（模擬精練+真題演練）模擬精練1.（2023·江蘇宿遷·校聯(lián)考一模）習近平在講話中引用李大釗的話說，“青年者，國家之魂”，“一個民族只有寄望青春、永葆青春，才能興旺發(fā)達?！弊鳛榍嗌倌甑奈覀儯F(xiàn)行之重是當好學生。請以“HowtoBeaGoodStudent”為題，談談我們應該怎樣做，才能不負自己，不負時代賦予我們的責任。注意事項：1.必須包含表格中的提示，可以自由發(fā)揮，要求語句通順，意思連貫，合理展開想象；2.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名、人名等信息。HowtoBeaGoodStudentAsteenagers,weshouldbegoodstudentsatpresent.Thenwhatshouldwedo?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.（2023·寧夏銀川·校考模擬預測）即將成為一名高中生的你，應該怎樣完善自己而成為一名優(yōu)秀的高中生呢？請你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“Howtobeanexcellenthighschoolstudents”為題，寫一篇英語短文。提示：1.developgoodstudyhabits2.obeytheschoolrules3.lovelabor(勞動),learnbasiclifeskills4.bepoliteandfriendlytoothers要求：1.文中須包含提示內(nèi)容中的各項；2.至少補充一條自己的想法；3.合理增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù));2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。HowtobeanexcellenthighschoolstudentIamgoingtobeaseniorhighschoolstudent.Andhowtobeanexcellenthighschoolstudent?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.（2023·遼寧朝陽·校聯(lián)考二模）在過去的幾年里，涌現(xiàn)出了很多為了夢想拼搏奮斗的人物。例如，圓夢航天，勝利返航的神舟十三號的3名宇航員；開場失利，永不言棄，最終奪得亞洲杯冠軍的中國女足運動員……正是這種對夢想執(zhí)著追求的精神，使得他們?yōu)樽鎳龀隽送怀鲐暙I。作為新時代的青少年，你的夢想是什么？請以“MyDream”為題，寫一篇短文。要點：1.你的夢想是什么？2.原因是什么？3.為此你會怎么做？注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不允許出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和學校。MyDream____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.（2023·遼寧盤錦·校聯(lián)考三模）擁有健康的體魄在我們的日常生活中尤為重要。某校園英文網(wǎng)站以“Howtoliveahealthylife”為題征文，請從運動、飲食、睡眠、心態(tài)等方面提出建議，呼吁同學們關愛自己的健康。要求：1.內(nèi)容符合題目要求，詞數(shù)80-100；2語言準確，行文連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名和地名。Howtoliveahealthylife____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.（2023·吉林長春·長春市解放大路學校?？寄M預測）初三的生活是具有挑戰(zhàn)性的，我們可能面臨各種困難。如：溝通問題，學業(yè)壓力、健康問題等。假如你是李華，值此畢業(yè)之際，你校英語社團公眾號計劃做一期主題為“學長學姐有話說”的推送。請你根據(jù)下列要點用英語給八年級的學弟學妹們寫一則寄語。不少于40詞。要點：1.看法；2.建議；3.寄語。要求：要點齊全；表達通順；簡潔得體。Dear8th-graders,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua6.（2023·福建福州·福建省福州第十六中學校聯(lián)考模擬預測）假如你是李華，上周末你們學校組織學生去一所盲人學校幫助盲人學生。你受學生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一篇短文介紹此次活動，并談談感受。詞數(shù)80左右。TimelastweekendPlaceatablindschoolActivitiesdothecleaning,readbooks,playgames...Feeling(s)...注意事項：1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當發(fā)揮，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名和校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2023·重慶大渡口·統(tǒng)考二模）人生中有很多第一次，如第一次學游泳，第一次跟家人外出旅行，第一次做家務，第一次贏得比賽等，一定有一次讓你記憶深刻。請以“TheFirstTimeI________.”為題，用英語寫一篇短文說說你的某個第一次經(jīng)歷及感受。要求：1.將題目補充完整。2.80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.（2023·福建南平·校聯(lián)考模擬預測）國家提出將“勞動教育（laboreducation）”納入中小學國家課程方案，請結合自身的勞動經(jīng)歷，談談你對勞動教育的看法。內(nèi)容包括：你對勞動教育的看法begoodforhealth;relaxfromthehardstudy...你自身的勞動經(jīng)歷及感受athome:dothedishes...atschool:cleantheclassroom...你對勞動教育課程的建議offerdifferentkindsoflaborclasses;holdcompetitionsaboutlaborskills...要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；2.短文必須包含表格內(nèi)所有信息，可適當發(fā)揮；語句通順，意思連貫,書書工整；3.詞數(shù)：80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。It’sreportedthatlaboreducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.Ithink____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（2023·福建三明·統(tǒng)考模擬預測）近年來中學生身體健康越來越受到重視。假定你是李華，你校英語校報正在開展主題為“我運動，我健康”的征文比賽。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文，向校報投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.你的運動方式（兩種）；2.你對運動的看法：（1）增強體質(zhì)；（2）緩解壓力；（3）……。注意：1.所寫內(nèi)容應包括以上要點，內(nèi)容連貫，并進行合理拓展；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；3.詞數(shù)80左右。Asstudents,wecandodifferentkindsofsportsafterclass.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（2023·重慶大渡口·統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李平，你校英語校報正在開展“Goodwaystospendyourfreetime.”的征文活動。請結合下表所列活動方式和你的親身經(jīng)歷，選擇2—3項展開描述，并簡單說明理由，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。要求：1.80—120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.活動方式與內(nèi)容均可結合自身實際進行適當拓展；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關的信息；參考信息：GoodWaystoSpendYourFreeTime◆dohousework

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◆watchmovies◆…Asweknow,wehavemorefreetimeafterschoolnow.Butwhatarethegoodwaystospendit?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．（2023·四川涼山·模擬預測）2012年7月24日，中辦國辦印發(fā)《關于進一步減輕義務教育階段學生作業(yè)負擔和校外培訓負擔的意見》?！兑庖姟芬唤?jīng)出臺，在教育界引起了軒然大波。一時間，學生和家長們對輕松的學業(yè)反而不知所措。請你根據(jù)以下提示，就實施雙減政策后學生如何規(guī)劃自己的學習和課余生活寫一篇短文。要求:1.語言表達準確，短文連貫、通順；2.短文應包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯。3.詞數(shù)80左右。文章開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。雙減政策下學生如何規(guī)劃自己的學習和課余生活在校1.充分利用在校時間。2.提高課堂聽課效率。3.及時向老師和同學尋求幫助，解決學習問題。在家1.培養(yǎng)興趣愛好。2.堅持閱讀書籍和運動。3.參與家務勞動。4.制定每日學習計劃。你的感受……It’sreallyawonderfulnewsthatthepolicyof“double-lighteningtheburden”hasbeencarriedout.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．（2023·陜西西安·?？寄M預測）健康對我們每個人來說都是最為重要的，但是怎樣保持健康呢？你知道哪些可以幫助我們保持健康的生活習慣嗎？請根據(jù)所給提示談一談如何在日常生活中保持健康。Dos:1.多吃蔬菜、水果；2.有規(guī)律地（regularly）運動并且運動后適量喝水；3.充足的睡眠……Don’ts:1.吃太多垃圾食品（junkfood）；2.熬夜，太過勞累……要求：（1）短文需包括提示內(nèi)容并適當發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名等個人信息；（3）80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（4）字跡工整，語言流暢，表達正確，條理清楚。HowtostayhealthyHealthisthemostimportantthingforallofus.Inordertostayhealthy,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．（2023·甘肅武威·?？寄M預測）“少年智則國智，少年強則國強”，請根據(jù)下圖提示寫一篇短文，描述作為青少年的你們將如何成長，并說明原因或目的。buildupourbodiesby...;keephealthy…騎自行車打籃球跳舞畫畫developsomeinterests；makeourselvesfullydevelopedhelpparentsdohousework;learntobeindependent打掃衛(wèi)生遛狗?請補充要求：1)除提示中的內(nèi)容外，請你至少再補充一條；2）語言通順，要點齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范，可適當發(fā)揮；3)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；4)80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Asteenagers,wearethefutureofourhomeland.Weshoulddevelopourselvesfully.Buthow?Hereismyopinion.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．（2023·甘肅隴南·模擬預測）暑假悄然而至，在這個期待已久的假期中，你想要做什么？Jim正在考慮他的假期，他打算找一份工作，如果他找到工作，就能賺到一些錢，買衣服、買書籍、買音樂光盤、上網(wǎng)球課……請你以Jim的語氣寫一份自己的暑假計劃，注意使用if引導的條件狀語從句。I’mthinkingaboutwhatI’mgoingtodo.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________真題演練15．（2023·內(nèi)蒙古·統(tǒng)考中考真題）“綠色”不僅僅是一種顏色，也意味著一種低碳環(huán)保的生活方式。請以“MyGreenerLife”為題，為學校的英語報刊寫一篇征文。要點：1.Whatdoyouusuallydotoliveagreenerlife?（rubbish,bicycle...）2.Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?/Whatarethechangesinyourlife?3.Whatareyougoingtodointhefuture?要求：1.文章應包括所有要點并圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮；2.文章應句式多樣，語句流暢，意思連貫；3.詞數(shù)90詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、校名等個人信息；2.不許抄襲、套改。MyGreenerLifeGreenismorethanjustacolour.Italsomeansakindofgreenerlife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．（2023·西藏·統(tǒng)考中考真題）在全民閱讀的浪潮中，閱讀已成為我們生活中的一部分，青少年應該養(yǎng)成閱讀習慣，以“EnjoyReading”為題寫一篇英語短文。EnjoyreadingWhat?Kinds（種類）storybooks,newspapers...Favorite（最喜歡的）Myfavoriteis...Why?Reasons（原因）beinterestedingetknowledgeandopeneyesHow?Time（時間）:onweekends,infreetimePlaces（地點）:atschool,inthelibraryWays（方式）:ontheInternet,onpaper寫作要求:1）詞數(shù)不少于70詞，短文的標題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2）語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確；3）寫作要點齊全，可適當發(fā)揮；4）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名或地名。EnjoyReadingReadinghasbecomeoneofthemostimportantpartsinmydailylife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________17．（2023·內(nèi)蒙古呼和浩特·統(tǒng)考中考真題）你校將舉辦以“自我提升”為主題的英文征文活動，請你寫一篇文章分享自我提升的四種方法。內(nèi)容包括：1.運動；2.讀書；3.……；4.……要求：1.需寫出適當?shù)拈_頭和結尾；2.要點齊全，語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范，可適當增加細節(jié)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名等；4.詞數(shù)80—100左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________18．（2023·湖北荊門·中考真題）我國于今年5月30日成功發(fā)射神州十六號載人飛船。航天員乘組中的載荷專家桂海潮從小就有一個航天夢，并不斷在為實現(xiàn)夢想而努力。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下要點，號召大家向桂海潮學習，通過努力實現(xiàn)夢想。要點：1.努力學習各種知識，豐富大腦；2.積極參加體育鍛煉，增強體質(zhì)；3.勇于面對不同挑戰(zhàn)，永不放棄；4.樂于尋求他人幫助，學會合作；5.你的看法……要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名或地名；2.語言通順，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3.要點齊全，內(nèi)容可適當發(fā)揮；4.詞數(shù)：100左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：發(fā)射launch（v.）；豐富大腦enrichone’smind；樂于bewillingtodo；合作cooperate（v.）Dearteenagers,I’mLiHuafromJingmen.ChinalaunchedtheShenzhou-16successfullyonMay30ththisyear.OneoftheastronautsGuiHaichaoisourmodel.Asteenagers,wecanlearnalotfromhimtorealizeourdream.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudents’Union19．（2023·遼寧阜新·統(tǒng)考中考真題）根據(jù)要求完成作文?！白x書破萬卷，下筆如有神?！遍喿x不僅能讓我們獲得知識，而且能開闊我們的眼界。在科技發(fā)達的時代，人們有多種多樣的閱讀方式，比如看紙質(zhì)書、報紙和雜志，在線閱讀或者使用app聽書等。你最喜歡哪一種閱讀方式呢？請以“Myfavoritewayofreading”為題寫一篇英文短文。提示詞語：e-book,environment,convenient,download,searchforinformation提示問題：1.What’stheimportanceofreading?2.What’syourfavoritewayofreading?3.Whydoyouchoosethisway?(至少寫出2點理由)要求：1.緊扣主題，語言連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名與人名，詞數(shù)在60—80詞左右。MyfavoritewayofreadingToday,readinghasbecomeanimportantpartofeverydaylife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________20．（2023·四川樂山·統(tǒng)考中考真題）2022年1月生效的《家庭教育促進法》規(guī)定：未成年人的父母或其他監(jiān)護人應該重視家庭教育，關心孩子身心健康。對于此規(guī)定，作為學生的你有話想說。請你給校英語專欄寫一篇短文，對父母提出建議并表明觀點。內(nèi)容包括：1.多花時間陪我們，如教做家務、一起玩耍等；2.幫助我們養(yǎng)成好的習慣；3.常與我們溝通談心；4.信任我們并保護我們的隱私。注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校等信息。參考詞匯：physicalandmentalhealth身心健康；privacyn.隱私Accordingtothelaw“FamilyEducationPromotion”,parentsorotherguardiansofminorsshouldberesponsibleforfamilyeducation.Itasksparentstopayattentiontochildren’sphysicalandmentalhealth.Herearemysuggestionsforparents.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________21.（2023·廣西·統(tǒng)考中考真題）藝術充滿魅力，藝術課使校園生活豐富多彩。你校英文周刊以“Myfavouriteartcourse”為題向同學們征稿。請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.學校開設的藝術課（如音樂、繪畫、舞蹈、書法、戲劇等）；2.你最喜歡的一門藝術課及其開課情況（如上課時間、活動等）；3.喜歡的理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)為80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學校名稱；4.短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：artcourse（藝術課），painting（n.繪畫），calligraphy（n.書法），drama（n.戲劇）MyfavouriteartcourseArtcoursesareimportantatschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

第25講書面表達之提綱作文（模擬精練+真題演練）模擬精練1.（2023·江蘇宿遷·校聯(lián)考一模）習近平在講話中引用李大釗的話說，“青年者，國家之魂”，“一個民族只有寄望青春、永葆青春，才能興旺發(fā)達。”作為青少年的我們，現(xiàn)行之重是當好學生。請以“HowtoBeaGoodStudent”為題，談談我們應該怎樣做，才能不負自己，不負時代賦予我們的責任。注意事項：1.必須包含表格中的提示，可以自由發(fā)揮，要求語句通順，意思連貫，合理展開想象；2.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名、人名等信息。HowtoBeaGoodStudentAsteenagers,weshouldbegoodstudentsatpresent.Thenwhatshouldwedo?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Howtobeagoodstudent?Asteenagers,weshouldbegoodstudentsatpresent.Thenwhatshouldwedo?Firstofall,listentotheteacherscarefullyinclass.Wecangooverwhatwehavelearnedasoftenaspossibleandprepareforthenewknowledgeintime.Also,Wecanreaddifferentkindsofbooksinourfreetime.Secondly,itisimportantforustodosomeexerciseandhaveahealthydiet.Weshouldgotobedearlyandgetupearly.Thirdly,Wemustobeyschoolrulesandtrafficrules.Besides,weshouldbehavepolitelyinpublic.Weshouldalwaysrespecttheoldandcarefortheyoung.What’smore,weshoulddosomehouseworkathome.Anditismeaningfulforustoworkasvolunteersinourcommunity.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：寫作要求已給出，考生注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節(jié)，表述完整。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接上文，表述在學習方面我們應如何做好；第二步，表述在運動、個人安全及行為表現(xiàn)方面我們應該如何做好；第三步，表述在其他方面我們應該如何做好。[亮點詞匯]①atpresent目前②differentkindsof不同種類的③What’smore此外[高分句型]ItismeaningfulforustoworkasasVolunteersinourcommunity.（it作形式主語）2.（2023·寧夏銀川·校考模擬預測）即將成為一名高中生的你，應該怎樣完善自己而成為一名優(yōu)秀的高中生呢？請你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“Howtobeanexcellenthighschoolstudents”為題，寫一篇英語短文。提示：1.developgoodstudyhabits2.obeytheschoolrules3.lovelabor(勞動),learnbasiclifeskills4.bepoliteandfriendlytoothers要求：1.文中須包含提示內(nèi)容中的各項；2.至少補充一條自己的想法；3.合理增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù));2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。HowtobeanexcellenthighschoolstudentIamgoingtobeaseniorhighschoolstudent.Andhowtobeanexcellenthighschoolstudent?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtobeanexcellenthighschoolstudentIamgoingtobeaseniorhighschoolstudent.Andhowtobeanexcellenthighschoolstudent?

Firstly,Imustobeytheschoolrules,goingtoschoolontimeandneversmoking.Secondly,asahighschoolstudent,it’simportanttohavegoodstudyhabits.Ishouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclassanddosomesportstorelaxmyselfafterschool.Thirdly,Iamgoingtocommunicatebetterwithmyteachersandclassmates,bepoliteandfriendlytoothers.Fourthly,athomeIwilltrymybesttohelpmyparentsdosomehousework,likedoingthedishesandcleaningthehousewhentheyareverytiredeveryday.Atlast,I’llprotecttheenvironmentandtakeanactivepartinthevolunteerworkasoftenaspossible.Followingthesesuggestions,IbelieveIcanbeanexcellentstudent.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示，并適當添加細節(jié)，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，首先承接短文開頭。第二步，介紹自己要成為一名優(yōu)秀的高中生該如何做。第三步，總結全文，表明自己的美好愿望。[亮點詞匯]①ontime準時②listento聽③dosomesports做一些運動④communicatewith與……溝通⑤takeanactivepartin積極參與[高分句型]①Secondly,asahighschoolstudent,it’simportanttohavegoodstudyhabits.（it的固定句型）②Fourthly,athomeIwilltrymybesttohelpmyparentsdosomehousework,likedoingthedishesandcleaningthehousewhentheyareverytiredeveryday.（when引導的時間狀語從句）③Atlast,I’llprotecttheenvironmentandtakeanactivepartinthevolunteerworkasoftenaspossible.（asoftenaspossible盡可能經(jīng)常）3.（2023·遼寧朝陽·校聯(lián)考二模）在過去的幾年里，涌現(xiàn)出了很多為了夢想拼搏奮斗的人物。例如，圓夢航天，勝利返航的神舟十三號的3名宇航員；開場失利，永不言棄，最終奪得亞洲杯冠軍的中國女足運動員……正是這種對夢想執(zhí)著追求的精神，使得他們?yōu)樽鎳龀隽送怀鲐暙I。作為新時代的青少年，你的夢想是什么？請以“MyDream”為題，寫一篇短文。要點：1.你的夢想是什么？2.原因是什么？3.為此你會怎么做？注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不允許出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和學校。MyDream____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyDreamEveryonehashisdream.Mydreamistobeadoctor.WhenIwasinGradeSeven,Iwassickandoftenwenttoseedoctors.Thedoctorswereveryfriendlytomeandtheyoftencheeredmeup.Withthehelpofthem,Iwasgettingbetter.NowIamveryhealthy.SincethenIhavehopedtobecomeadoctor.Inordertoachievemydream,Iwillstudyhard.I’llgivemylovetothepatientsas