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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Williamwasaschoolstudentlivinginasuburbanneighborhood.Hewasseventeenyearsold.Onesummerevening,Williamwasgettingreadyforbedafterfinishinghisassignmentswhenheheardthesoundsoffirealarmsandscreamscomingfromtheoutside.Hequicklyrealizedthattherewasafireinhisneighborhoodandthathisneighborsmightbeindanger.Helookedoutsideandsawthatoneofhisneighbors’houseswasonfire.Heknewthathehadtoactquicklytohelphisneighbors.Aftercalling911,heranoutsideandheardhisneighbors’littlesoncryinginsidetheirburninghouse.“Hemustbequitescaredandinadangeroussituation,”Williamthought.Williamquicklyassessedthesituationandfoundthatthehousewasalmostsurroundedbytheflames(火焰).Thebestwaywasthroughthefrontdoor,butitwasblockedbythefireaswell.Heknewthathehadtofindanotherwaytohelptheboyescapefromthehouse.Heranbacktohishouse,grabbedaladderandthenrushedtowardhisneighbors’house.Heplacedtheladderagainstthesecond-storywindowandmanagedtohelpthelittleboyclimbdowntosafety.Oncetheboywassafeontheground,Williamclimbedupintotheburninghouseagaintoseeifanyoneelsewastrappedthere.Ashemadehiswaythroughthesmoke,heheardcriesforhelpfromabedroomonthethirdfloor.Hequicklyranupthestairsandfoundanelderlywomanwhowastooweaktomove.Williamquicklypickedherupandcarriedherdownthestairsandtheladdertosafety.Bythistime,manyfiremenhadarrived,andtheydidtheirbesttoputouttheflames.Lookingaround,Williamsawthatafewotherhousesintheneighborhoodwerealsoonfire.Hewasawarethatthefirewasspreadingquicklyandthatmorepeopleneededhelp.Withouthesitation,Williamjoinedthosefiremen,whowereworkingtirelesslytoextinguishtheflames.Hehelpedelderlyneighbors,familieswithyoungchildren,andevenpets.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ThenWilliamsawoneofhisneighbors,Mr.Adam,holdingafewphotoswithtearsstreamingdownhisface.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________William’sgooddeedquicklyspreadinthecommunityandbeyond._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意17歲的學(xué)生威廉住在郊區(qū),一個(gè)夏夜,完成作業(yè)準(zhǔn)備睡覺(jué)時(shí),他聽(tīng)到火災(zāi)警報(bào)和尖叫,發(fā)現(xiàn)鄰居家失火,鄰居的小孩被困屋內(nèi)。他報(bào)警后,用梯子救下小孩,又沖進(jìn)燃燒的房子,救出一位行動(dòng)不便的老婦人。消防員趕到后,他看到火勢(shì)蔓延,還有其他房屋著火,便毫不猶豫地加入救援,幫助更多鄰居和寵物脫離危險(xiǎn)。故事山分析開(kāi)端:威廉在夏夜聽(tīng)到火災(zāi)警報(bào)和尖叫,意識(shí)到鄰居家失火,有人可能身處險(xiǎn)境。發(fā)展:他報(bào)警后,用梯子救鄰居小孩,接著又進(jìn)入燃燒的房子,救出老婦人。高潮:火勢(shì)蔓延,威廉看到更多房屋著火,更多人需要幫助,他沒(méi)有退縮,加入消防員的救援行動(dòng)。結(jié)局(待續(xù)寫(xiě)):通過(guò)威廉看到亞當(dāng)先生的反應(yīng)以及他的善舉在社區(qū)傳播后的影響,展現(xiàn)他行為的意義和價(jià)值,構(gòu)成故事結(jié)局。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)威廉的勇敢行動(dòng):為他后續(xù)持續(xù)參與救援以及受到贊揚(yáng)埋下伏筆,在續(xù)寫(xiě)中,他會(huì)繼續(xù)在救援中發(fā)揮作用,并且因?yàn)檫@些行動(dòng)被大家認(rèn)可?;饎?shì)蔓延:預(yù)示后續(xù)救援難度增加,也為威廉面臨更多挑戰(zhàn)和展現(xiàn)更多英勇行為做鋪墊,續(xù)寫(xiě)中會(huì)圍繞他在控制火勢(shì)和幫助更多人方面展開(kāi)。鄰居的困境:引出威廉的救助行為,在續(xù)寫(xiě)中,不同鄰居的反應(yīng)會(huì)體現(xiàn)威廉善舉的影響,如亞當(dāng)先生的舉動(dòng)。消防員的到來(lái):為救援行動(dòng)提供支持,也暗示威廉可能會(huì)與消防員合作,續(xù)寫(xiě)中他會(huì)和消防員共同努力,完成救援。威廉看到其他房屋著火:推動(dòng)他繼續(xù)參與救援,在續(xù)寫(xiě)中,他的行為會(huì)因?yàn)榛饎?shì)擴(kuò)大而更具意義,成為社區(qū)傳頌的事跡。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)(兩段)第一段:詳細(xì)描寫(xiě)威廉看到亞當(dāng)先生拿著照片流淚時(shí)的場(chǎng)景,亞當(dāng)先生可能講述照片對(duì)他的重要性,是他和家人珍貴的回憶,威廉的救援讓他保住了這些回憶,表達(dá)對(duì)威廉的感激。第二段:著重描述威廉的善舉傳播后的影響,社區(qū)為他舉辦表彰活動(dòng),學(xué)校表?yè)P(yáng)他,媒體報(bào)道他的事跡,他成為大家學(xué)習(xí)的榜樣,激勵(lì)更多人在他人遇到困難時(shí)伸出援手。情感線起初,威廉聽(tīng)到火災(zāi)警報(bào)時(shí),內(nèi)心充滿擔(dān)憂和緊張,擔(dān)心鄰居安危。救援過(guò)程中,他勇敢堅(jiān)定,一心只想幫助他人??吹絹啴?dāng)先生流淚時(shí),他體會(huì)到自己行為的意義,心中滿是溫暖和欣慰。善舉傳播后,他收獲無(wú)數(shù)贊揚(yáng)和認(rèn)可,自豪之情油然而生,也更加堅(jiān)定了自己幫助他人的信念,這種積極的情感在社區(qū)中傳遞,感染更多人。故事線威廉聽(tīng)到火災(zāi)警報(bào)和尖叫,發(fā)現(xiàn)鄰居家失火,鄰居小孩被困。他報(bào)警后,用梯子救下小孩,又進(jìn)入房子救出老婦人。消防員趕到,威廉看到火勢(shì)蔓延,還有其他房屋著火,決定加入救援。威廉看到亞當(dāng)先生拿著照片流淚,得知照片對(duì)亞當(dāng)先生的重要性。威廉的善舉在社區(qū)和更廣泛的范圍傳播。社區(qū)表彰他,學(xué)校表?yè)P(yáng)他,媒體報(bào)道他,他成為大家學(xué)習(xí)的榜樣。主旨升華句William'sheroicactionsremindusthatintimesofcrisis,asingleperson'scouragecaninspireacommunityandmakeasignificantdifferenceinthelivesofothers.(威廉的英勇行為提醒我們,在危機(jī)時(shí)刻,一個(gè)人的勇氣可以激勵(lì)整個(gè)社區(qū),并對(duì)他人的生活產(chǎn)生重大影響。)Thisstoryshowsthatkindnessandselflessnessarenotlimitedbyageorcircumstances,andthatevenateenagercanbecomeaherowhenfacedwiththeneedtohelpothers.(這個(gè)故事表明,善良和無(wú)私不受年齡或環(huán)境的限制,即使是一個(gè)青少年,在面對(duì)幫助他人的需求時(shí)也能成為英雄。)ThroughWilliam'sdeeds,welearnthattrueheroismliesnotinextraordinaryfeatsbutinthewillingnesstostepforwardandlendahandwhenothersareindanger.(通過(guò)威廉的事跡,我們了解到,真正的英雄主義不在于非凡的壯舉,而在于當(dāng)他人處于危險(xiǎn)時(shí),愿意挺身而出并伸出援手。)William'sactofbraverynotonlysavedlivesbutalsobecameabeaconofhope,inspiringcountlessotherstofollowinhisfootstepsandcontributetothewell-beingoftheircommunities.(威廉的勇敢行為不僅拯救了生命,還成為了希望的燈塔,激勵(lì)著無(wú)數(shù)人追隨他的腳步,為社區(qū)的福祉做出貢獻(xiàn)。)ThespreadofWilliam'sgooddeedservesasapowerfulreminderthatonesmallactofkindnesscanstartachainreaction,creatingaworldfilledwithmorecompassion,unity,andlove.(威廉善舉的傳播有力地提醒我們,一個(gè)小小的善舉可以引發(fā)連鎖反應(yīng),創(chuàng)造一個(gè)充滿更多同情、團(tuán)結(jié)和愛(ài)的世界。)寫(xiě)作示范一ThenWilliamsawoneofhisneighbors,Mr.Adam,holdingafewphotoswithtearsstreamingdownhisface.Mr.AdamlookedupatWilliamandsaid,"ThesearetheonlyphotosIhaveofmylatewifeandourfamily.IthoughtI'dlostthemforever.Thankyousomuchforyourhelp."WilliamwasdeeplytouchedbyMr.Adam'swords.Herealizedthathisactionshadnotonlysavedlivesbutalsopreservedpreciousmemories.

William’sgooddeedquicklyspreadinthecommunityandbeyond.Thelocalnewspaperreportedhisheroicstory,andtheschoolheldaspecialceremonytohonorhim.Peoplefromalloverthecitycametoexpresstheiradmiration.Williambecamearolemodelforeveryone,especiallytheyoungpeople.Hisstoryinspiredmanytobebraveandhelpfulinthefaceofdifficulties.寫(xiě)作示范二ThenWilliamsawoneofhisneighbors,Mr.Adam,holdingafewphotoswithtearsstreamingdownhisface.WilliamwalkedoverandMr.Adamgrabbedhishandtightly."Yousavedthemostimportantthingstome,"Mr.Adamsobbed."ThesephotosareallIhaveleftofmyfamily'spast."Williamfeltasenseofwarmthandpride,knowingthathiseffortshadtrulymadeadifference.

William’sgooddeedquicklyspreadinthecommunityandbeyond.Thecommunityorganizedabigcelebrationinhishonor.Newschannelsinterviewedhim,andhisstorywassharedonsocialmedia.Hisactofbraveryencouragedotherstobemoreinvolvedintheircommunitiesandtoalwaysbereadytohelpthoseinneed.【答案】ThenWilliamsawoneofhisneighbors,Mr.Adam,holdingafewphotoswithtearsstreamingdownhisface.Theirchildren,BillandAlice,huddledtogether,lookingscaredandlost.Williamwalkedovertothem,notknowingwhattosay.HejustputhishandonMr.Adam’sshoulderandsaid,“Iamterriblesorrythatthishashappened.Lookaheadandeverythingwillturnoutfine.”Theyagreedandnoddedtheirheads.Aftercomfortingthem,Williamwentontohelpfightagainstthefire.Afterhoursofeffort,fortunately,thefirewasfinallyputout.Thenexhaustionbegantosetin,buthefeltwarminhisheart.Havingmadesureeveryonewassafe,hequi

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