高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：被嘲笑的頭發(fā)：少女的困擾與勇氣的抉擇+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)被嘲笑的頭發(fā)：少女的困擾與勇氣的抉擇1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文“SaiBaba!SaiBaba!Hahahaha!”Rani’scheeksburnedwithshameandtearswelledupinhereyesasshepushedherwaytotheexitthroughthecrowdoflaughingboysinthepackedschoolbus.Itwasn’tthefirsttimeshe’dbeencalledSaiBaba,afterthefamousHinduholymanshe’dseenonTVwithhistrademarkafro(非洲式卷發(fā))toweringoverhishead.Butthistimewastheworst.Ranijumpedofftheschoolbusandlandedhardinthemuddyrainwater.IthadbeenaFridayfullofdisasters!AngrythoughtsraninsideRani’sheadasshemarchedhomeinthedrizzlingrain.Whydidtherainhavetocomepouringdownsohardjustattheendoftheschoolday?Whydidshehavetoforgetherraincoatbackhome?Whydidherhairhavetobelikeagiantcottoncandyballoonjustwhenshewantedittobehave?Why,why,why,Ranigrewangrierassheturnedthebackdoorkey.“Rani,isthatyou?”Papacalledfromthefamilyroom.4續(xù)寫原文“Ihatemyhair!”Ranicriedastearsofangerandshamestreameddownhercheeks.“Why,yourhair’sbeautiful!”“Thenwhydoeseveryonemakefunofitalthetime?Theboysteasedmeaboutmyhaironthebusridebackhome…”Shepausedandthentoreatherhairandpulledoutacoupleofpaperballsstuckinit.“Look,theyevenshotpaperballsatmyhair.”PapawentuptoRani,hugginghertightlyinhisarms.“Listen!Thoseboysarebullies.Theydidsoonlytogetanemotionalresponsefromyou.Whatyouneedtodoiseitherignorethemorspeakupforyourself.”Raninoddeduncertainly,rememberingthehours,daysandweeksshehadspenttryingtobringherhairundercontrol.“Papa?”shemurmured,“Idon’twanttoparticipateinthespeechcompetitiononMonday.”5段首句Paragraph1:“Why?”Papasoundedpuzzled.Paragraph2:ThenextMondaymorningdawnedbrightanditwastimeforthecompetition.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8Rani在擁擠的校車上，被一群男孩嘲笑頭發(fā)像印度著名圣雄SaiBaba，還被他們用紙條扔頭發(fā)，這讓她羞愧得滿臉通紅，淚水在眼眶里打轉(zhuǎn)。她氣憤地跳下校車，冒雨走回家?；丶液螅虬职挚拊V自己討厭自己的頭發(fā)，因?yàn)榭偸潜蝗巳⌒Γ踔吝€把粘在頭發(fā)上的紙團(tuán)扯下來給爸爸看。爸爸安慰她，說那些男孩是霸凌者，只是想從她身上得到情緒反應(yīng)，建議她要么無視，要么勇敢為自己發(fā)聲。Rani不太確定地點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，隨后告訴爸爸自己不想?yún)⒓又芤坏难葜v比賽了，爸爸對此感到很困惑。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:“Why?”Papasoundedpuzzled.Rani抬起頭，眼中淚光閃爍，聲音帶著一絲顫抖說道：“爸爸，我害怕站在臺(tái)上，所有人的目光都會(huì)被我的頭發(fā)吸引，他們會(huì)在臺(tái)下議論紛紛，嘲笑我的頭發(fā)，到時(shí)候我肯定會(huì)緊張得連話都說不出來。我不想在全校師生面前出丑，不想讓大家看到我的笑話。”爸爸輕輕地拍了拍Rani的肩膀，語重心長地說：“寶貝，你要明白，演講比賽比的是你的口才和思想，而不是你的頭發(fā)。你為了這次比賽付出了多少努力，準(zhǔn)備了那么多的資料，練習(xí)了那么多次，難道就因?yàn)閯e人的眼光而放棄嗎？那些嘲笑你的人只是在嫉妒你的才華，他們想用這種方式打擊你。你要是退縮了，就正好中了他們的圈套。你要勇敢地站在臺(tái)上，用你的演講去征服所有人，讓他們知道你的實(shí)力。我相信你一定可以做到的?！卑职值脑捵孯ani的內(nèi)心泛起了波瀾，她想起了自己為比賽付出的日日夜夜，那些努力和汗水難道真的要付諸東流嗎？她看著爸爸充滿信任的眼神，心中漸漸有了勇氣。經(jīng)過一番思考，Rani深吸一口氣，堅(jiān)定地對爸爸說：“爸爸，我決定了，我要參加比賽。我不會(huì)再讓那些嘲笑我的人得逞，我要讓他們看到我的實(shí)力?！卑职中牢康匦α?，摸了摸Rani的頭，說：“這才是我的好女兒?！苯酉聛淼膬商?，Rani更加努力地準(zhǔn)備演講，她不斷地練習(xí)發(fā)音、語速和語調(diào)，還對著鏡子糾正自己的表情和動(dòng)作。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:ThenextMondaymorningdawnedbrightanditwastimeforthecompetition.周一的清晨，陽光明媚，比賽的時(shí)刻終于到了。Rani穿著整潔的衣服，邁著堅(jiān)定的步伐走進(jìn)了比賽場地。她的心跳得很快，但她努力讓自己保持冷靜。當(dāng)主持人念到她的名字時(shí)，她深吸一口氣，走上了演講臺(tái)。臺(tái)下的觀眾們紛紛投來目光，Rani感覺到了一些緊張，但她想起了爸爸的鼓勵(lì)，心中涌起了一股力量。她開始演講，聲音清晰而響亮，她的演講內(nèi)容豐富、生動(dòng)，充滿了感染力。隨著演講的進(jìn)行，臺(tái)下的觀眾們漸漸被她吸引，他們的目光不再聚焦在她的頭發(fā)上，而是被她精彩的演講所打動(dòng)。演講結(jié)束后，臺(tái)下響起了熱烈的掌聲。Rani成功了，她用自己的實(shí)力證明了自己。那些曾經(jīng)嘲笑她的男孩們，也都對她刮目相看。Rani走下演講臺(tái)，看到了爸爸欣慰的笑容，她知道，自己這次戰(zhàn)勝了內(nèi)心的恐懼，收獲了成長和自信。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Raniliftedherhead,hereyesglisteningwithtears,andhervoicetremblingslightly."Dad,I'mafraidthatwhenIstandonthestage,everyone'seyeswillbedrawntomyhair.Theywilltalkaboutitandlaughatmeintheaudience.IwillbesonervousthatIwon'tbeabletospeakaword.Idon'twanttomakeafoolofmyselfinfrontofalltheteachersandstudents.Idon'twanteveryonetoseemyjokes."DadgentlypattedRani'sshoulderandsaidearnestly,"Honey,youhavetounderstandthatthespeechcompetitionisaboutyoureloquenceandthoughts,notyourhair.Howmuchefforthaveyouputintothiscompetition?You'vepreparedsomuchinformationandpracticedsomanytimes.Areyougoingtogiveupjustbecauseofotherpeople'sopinions?Thosewholaughatyouarejustjealousofyourtalent.Theywanttousethiswaytodiscourageyou.Ifyoubackdown,youwillfallintotheirtrap.Youhavetobebraveenoughtostandonthestageandconquereveryonewithyourspeech,sothattheycanknowyourstrength.Ibelieveyoucandoit."Dad'swordsstirredupwavesinRani'sheart.Shethoughtofthedaysandnightsshehadspentpreparingforthecompetition,allthehardworkandsweat.Weretheyreallygoingtobeinvain?LookingatDad'strustingeyes,Ranigraduallygainedcourage.Aftersomethought,RanitookadeepbreathandsaidfirmlytoDad,"Dad,I'vedecided.I'mgoingtoparticipateinthecompetition.Iwon'tletthosewholaughatmesucceed.I'mgoingtoshowthemmystrength."DadsmiledwithreliefandtouchedRani'shead,saying,"That'smygoodgirl."Inthenexttwodays,Ranipreparedforthespeechevenmorediligently.Shekeptpracticingpronunciation,speedandintonation,andalsocorrectedherexpressionsandmovementsinfrontofthemirror.13范文呈現(xiàn)ThenextMondaymorningdawnedbrightanditwastimeforthecompetition.Raniwalkedintothecompetitionvenuewithfirmsteps,wearingneatclothes.Herheartwaspoundingfast,butshetriedherbesttokeepcalm.Whenthehostcalledhername,shetookadeepbreathandwalkedontothestage.Theaudienceintheaudiencecasttheireyesonher.Ranifeltalittlenervous,butsherememberedDad'sencouragementandasurgeofstrengthwelledupinherheart.Shestartedtogiveherspeech,hervoiceclearandloud.Herspeechwasrichandvivid,fullofappeal.Asthespeechwenton,theaudienceintheaudienceweregraduallyattractedbyher.Theireyeswerenolongerfocusedonherhair,butweremovedbyherwonderfulspeech.Afterthespeech,therewaswarmapplausefromtheaudience.Ranisucceeded.Sheprovedherselfwithherstrength.Thoseboyswhohadlaughedatherbeforealsolookedatherwithneweyes.RanisteppeddownfromthestageandsawDad'srelievedsmile.Sheknewthatthistimeshehadovercomeherinnerfearandgainedgrowthandconfidence.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)“Why?”Papasoundedpuzzled.Rani,withhereyesbrimmingwithtearsandvoicequiveringslightly,liftedhergazetomeetherfather's."Dad,I'mterrifiedthatonceI'monthatstage,everyone'seyeswillbefixatedonmyhair.They'llbewhisperingandlaughingatmeintheaudience.I'llbesonervousthatIwon'tbeabletoutterasingleword.Idon'twanttoembarrassmyselfinfrontofalltheteachersandstudents.Idon'twanttobethelaughingstock,"sheconfessed.PapagentlyplacedhishandonRani'sshoulderandspokeearnestly,"Honey,youmustunderstandthatthespeechcompetitionisaboutyoureloquenceandideas,notyourhair.You'veinvestedsomucheffortintothiscompetition.You'vespentcountlesshourspreparingmaterialsandpracticing.Areyoureallygoingtoletotherpeople'sopinionsmakeyougiveup?Thosewholaughatyouarejustjealousofyourtalent.They'retryingtoundermineyou.Ifyoubackdownnow,you'llbeplayingrightintotheirhands.Youneedtobebraveandstandonthatstage,usingyourspeechtowinovereveryoneandshowthemyourtruestrength.Ihavecompletefaithinyou."Papa'swordsresonateddeeplywithinRani.Sherecalledthedaysandnightsshe'ddedicatedtopreparingforthecompetition,allthehardworkanddeterminationshe'dpouredintoit.Wasitallgoingtobewasted?Lookingintoherfather'seyesfilledwithtrust,Ranigraduallysummonedupthecourage.Afteramomentofcontemplation,shetookadeepbreathanddeclaredfirmly,"Dad,I'vemadeupmymind.I'mgoingtoparticipateinthecompetition.Iwon'tletthosewhomockmehavethelastlaugh.I'llprovemyworth."Papasmiledwithprideandpattedherhead,saying,"That'smygirl."Inthefollowingtwodays,Ranithrewherselfevenmorewholeheartedlyintoherspeechpreparation.Shepracticedpronunciation,speed,andintonationrelentlessly,andmeticulouslycorrectedherexpressionsandgesturesinfrontofthemirror.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)ThenextMondaymorningdawnedbrightanditwastimeforthecompetition.Dressedneatly,Ranistrodeintothecompetitionvenuewithresolutesteps.Herheartwaspoundingwildly,butshedidherutmosttoremaincomposed.Whenthehostannouncedhername,shetookadeep,steadyingbreathandascendedthestage.Th