高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：Anna+Collins的暖心善舉與意外收獲+課件

AnnaCollins的暖心善舉與意外收獲1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文AnnaCollinswasa34-year-oldsinglemother.Herhusbanddiedwhiletheirtwinsonswerestillbabies.Whenthetwinsturnedone,Annaexperiencedyetanotherchallenge:Oneofhersons,Adam,couldn’twalkduetolegdiscrepancy(不一致).Afterconsultingseveredoctors,thebestsuggestiontheycouldgivewasforAdamtoreceivesurgery.Tosupportthefamily,Annaworkedtwojobs,oneasawaitressatafast-foodchainandtheotherasapizzadeliveryworker.However,theamountshewastakinghomewasn’tenoughtocoverAdam’ssurgery.4續(xù)寫原文OneFridayafternoon,Annadecidedtogotothegrocer'stobuyhertwins’foodfortheweek.Asshelineduptopay,shenoticedanoldmaninfrontofherlookingconfused.“Sorry.Ican’tgiveyougoodsunlessyouhaveenoughmoneytopay!”explainedthecashierpatiently.Annafeltawkwardfortheoldman.AlthoughshewashavingahardtimesavingupforAdam’streatment,shedecidedtohelp.Shepaidfortheoldman’sgroceries.“Doyouknowyourwayhome?”sheaskedhim.Themanstoodstill,lookingconfusedagain.ItwasthenthatAnnarealizedthemanwaslikelysufferingfrommemoryloss.Luckily,theoldmanhadanaddresscardinhispocket.Itwasacoupleofblocksfromthegrocerystore.Annahelpedhimcarryhisgroceries,andtheywalkedtowardtheparkinglotwheresheparkedherpizzadeliveryservicecar.Aftershetookhimhome,Annawentstraighttowork.5續(xù)寫原文Afewdayslater,Annareceivedacallfromtheoldman’ssonJames.“Ijustwanttothankyouforhelpingmydadouttheotherday,”saidJames.Annareplied,“I’mgladIwasabletohelphim.Ishedoingalright?”Jamesrepliedthathisfatherwasreceivingtreatmentbecauseofmemorylossandwasrecoveringgradually.6段首句Paragraph1:ToAnna’ssurprise,Jamessaidhehimselfwasadoctortreatinglegs.Paragraph2:AftercheckingAdam’slegs,JamestoldAnnathegoodnews.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9本文圍繞單身母親Anna展開。Anna丈夫早逝，獨(dú)自撫養(yǎng)雙胞胎兒子，兒子Adam因腿疾需手術(shù)，她身兼兩職卻難以負(fù)擔(dān)手術(shù)費(fèi)。一次購物時(shí)，她幫助了一位沒錢付賬且疑似失憶的老人，送老人回家后繼續(xù)工作。幾天后，老人兒子James致電感謝，故事在此處留下懸念，后續(xù)發(fā)展聚焦于James身為醫(yī)生，是否會(huì)為Adam的病情帶來轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1：ToAnna’ssurprise,Jamessaidhehimselfwasadoctortreatinglegs.分析：此段應(yīng)承接上文，描述Anna得知James身份時(shí)的震驚與驚喜?？稍敿?xì)刻畫Anna的心理活動(dòng)，如從不敢相信到燃起希望。接著，James主動(dòng)提出為Adam檢查，Anna講述Adam的情況，James帶著醫(yī)療設(shè)備前往Anna家檢查，過程中展現(xiàn)他的專業(yè)認(rèn)真，為下文的好消息做鋪墊。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2：AftercheckingAdam’slegs,JamestoldAnnathegoodnews.分析：這段重點(diǎn)在于James告知Anna關(guān)于Adam病情的好消息，詳細(xì)說明Adam的狀況并非毫無希望，介紹可行的治療方案，強(qiáng)調(diào)醫(yī)院會(huì)提供幫助，如資金支持和優(yōu)質(zhì)護(hù)理。Anna得知消息后，情緒從擔(dān)憂轉(zhuǎn)為欣慰和感激，最后可升華主題，突出善良會(huì)帶來美好回報(bào)。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph1:ToAnna’ssurprise,Jamessaidhehimselfwasadoctortreatinglegs.Whenhearingthis,Annawasshockedatfirst.Then,aglimmerofhopesparkedinhereyes.ShequicklytoldJamesaboutAdam'sconditionandtheirdifficultfinancialsituation.JameslistenedattentivelyandofferedtocheckAdam'slegsforfree.Thenextday,JamesarrivedatAnna'shomewithsomemedicalequipment.HeexaminedAdamcarefully,movingAdam'slegsgentlyandtakingnotesfromtimetotime.Annawatchednervously,hopingforgoodnews.Paragraph2:AftercheckingAdam’slegs,JamestoldAnnathegoodnews.HesaidthatalthoughAdam'slegproblemwaschallenging,itcouldbecured.Therewereseveraltreatmentoptionsavailable,andhebelievedAdam'smobilitycouldbeimproved.Moreover,JamesinformedAnnathathishospitalwouldofferfinancialsupportandthebestmedicalcare.Annawasoverjoyed.Shecouldn'tstopthankingJames.SheknewthatthiswasaturningpointforAdam,andabrighterfuturewaswaitingforherson.14范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph1:ToAnna’ssurprise,Jamessaidhehimselfwasadoctortreatinglegs.Annawassoastonishedthatshealmostdroppedthephone.“Areyouserious?”sheaskedindisbelief.Jamesassuredherandexpressedhiswillingnesstohelp.AnnapouredoutherworriesaboutAdam'sconditionandthefinancialburden.JamescomfortedherandarrangedtovisitAdamsoon.Whenhecame,hegreetedAdamwithakindsmile,makingAdamfeelatease.Then,hestartedthethoroughexamination,carefullyobservingeverydetail.Paragraph2:AftercheckingAdam’slegs,JamestoldAnnathegoodnews.“Adam'ssituationisnotasbadaswethought,”hesaidwithconfidence.“Wecanuseanewsurgicalmethodtotreathislegs,andthesuccessrateisveryhigh.”Jamesalsosaidthatthehospitalwouldwaivepartofthemedicalfees.Annawasoverwhelmedwithgratitude.Tearsofjoyrolleddownhercheeks.ShehuggedAdamtightly,feelingthatallhereffortswereworthit.Fromthenon,shelookedforwardtoAdam'srecoverywithfullhope.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph1:ToAnna’ssurprise,Jamessaidhehimselfwasadoctortreatinglegs.Uponhearingthisunexpectedrevelation,Annawasrenderedspeechlessforamoment,hermindracingwithawhirlwindofemotions-shock,disbelief,andacautiousglimmerofhope.Summoninghercomposure,shebegantopourouttheheart-wrenchingdetailsofAdam'sconditionandthefinancialstrugglesthathadbeenplaguingher.Jameslistenedintently,hisempatheticnodsandwordsofcomfortofferingAnnaamodicumofsolace.Eagertohelp,JameswastednotimeinarrangingavisittoexamineAdam.Thenextday,hearrivedatAnna'shumbleabode,equippedwithstate-of-the-artmedicalequipment.GreetingAdamwithawarmsmile,heimmediatelysettowork,meticulouslyexaminingAdam'slegs,hisprofessionaldemeanorinspiringconfidence.Paragraph2:AftercheckingAdam’slegs,JamestoldAnnathegoodnews.Withareassuringsmile,Jamesbegan,“Anna,Adam'scondition,whilecomplex,isindeedtreatable.Wehavearevolutionarysurgicalapproachthathasshownremarkableresultsinsimilarcases.Thisprocedurewillnotonlyimprovehismobilitybutalsoenhancehisqualityoflifesignificantly.”Jamesfurtherdisclosedthatthehospital,touchedbyAnna'skindness,haddecidedtoshoulderasubstantialportionofthemedicalexpenses.Overwhelmedwithafloodofemotions,Annawasreducedtotearsofjoy.ShethankedJamesprofusely,hervoicechokedwithgratitude.Inthatmoment,shefeltaprofoundsenseofrelief,knowingthatabrighterfutureawaitedAdam.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph1:ToAnna’ssurprise,Jamessaidhehimselfwasadoctortreatinglegs.ThemomentthewordsleftJames'mouth,Annafroze,herbreathcatchinginherthroat.Itwasasifarayofsunlighthadpiercedthroughthethickcloudsofdespairthathadbeenhangingoverher.Strugglingtocontainherexcitement,sherecountedAdam'sconditioningreatdetail,hervoicetingedwithbothworryandnew-foundhope.James,deeplymovedbyherstory,promisedtodoeverythinginhispowertohelp.Soonafter,hearrivedatAnna'shome.Adam,alittlenervousatfirst,wasquicklyputateasebyJames'friendlymanner.Jamesthencarriedoutacomprehensiveexamination,hiseyesfocusedandhismovement