讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+輪椅上的歌聲：簡(jiǎn)的夢(mèng)想續(xù)章 高三上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)輪椅上的歌聲：簡(jiǎn)的夢(mèng)想續(xù)章1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Asasinglemother,I’veneverdoubtedmydaughterJane’sdreamtobeasingeronthestage.Atanearlyage,shewascrazyaboutsinging.Whenevershehadachance,shewouldsingtoherheart’scontent.Hersweetandcharmingvoicetendedtogetpeoplearoundattractedtohersongs.Livinginasmallcity,Itookseveraloddjobs,determinedtodoeverythinginmypowertosupporther.SoonafterJaneattendedschool,hermusicteacherMarynoticedhertalentbychanceandvolunteeredtogivehersomeguidanceonhowtosing.Janepracticedsohardthatbeforelongshemadegreatprogressinsinging.4續(xù)寫原文Unfortunately,onenoonayearlater,Janewascrossingthestreetwhenacarelessdriverknockedherdown.Shewasrushedtohospital.WhenIhurriedthere,thedoctortoldmethatmydaughterwouldprobablynotstandonherownfeet.Ifrozewithshock,feelingasifIhadbeenthrownintoadarkworld.Weakanddizzy,Iwasabouttofalltothegroundwhensomeonetookholdofme.ItwasMary,whogotthenewsandracedhere.Shecomfortedme,sayingfirmly,“Grace,Janeneedsyou.Youmuststaycalmandstrong.”Inodded.Havingcalmeddown,IenteredthewardwithMary.5續(xù)寫原文Thatnight,Janerecoveredherconsciousness(知覺)andopenedhereyes.Holdingherhand,Isaid,“Mydear,everythingwouldbefine.”Marycomfortedhergently,“Iknowyouareastronggirl,Jane.Don’tworry.We’llbestandingbyyou.”IwasheartbrokentoseetearsstreamingdownJane’scheeks.Aftertwomonths,wereturnedhomefromhospital.Herteachersandfriendsfrequentlyvisitedher.Janeeventuallyacceptedthefactthatshewouldhavetogetaroundinawheelchair.Neverdidsherefertothesubjectofsingingagain.Iknewshewasaniceandunderstandinggirl,whowasafraidthattalkingaboutheroriginaldreamwouldupsetthetwoofus.6段首句Paragraph1：Oneday,however,Marycamewithgoodnews.Paragraph2：WhenthehostannounceditwasJane’sturn,shewaswheeledontothestage.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9單親媽媽努力支持熱愛唱歌的女兒簡(jiǎn)追求夢(mèng)想，音樂老師瑪麗也助力簡(jiǎn)進(jìn)步。但不幸的是，簡(jiǎn)被車撞導(dǎo)致無(wú)法站立。住院期間，瑪麗和媽媽給予安慰。出院后簡(jiǎn)雖接受坐輪椅的事實(shí)，卻不再提及唱歌夢(mèng)想，她不想讓媽媽和老師難過，為后續(xù)夢(mèng)想的重新燃起埋下伏筆。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

Oneday,however,Marycamewithgoodnews.然而有一天，瑪麗帶來了好消息。她興奮地告訴簡(jiǎn)和我，有一場(chǎng)專為殘疾青年舉辦的歌唱比賽。聽到這個(gè)消息，簡(jiǎn)眼中閃過一絲光芒，但很快又黯淡下去。她擔(dān)心自己的身體狀況，也害怕再次失望。我鼓勵(lì)她勇敢嘗試，瑪麗也在一旁加油打氣。最終，簡(jiǎn)決定報(bào)名參賽。接下來的日子里，她在瑪麗的指導(dǎo)下，每天刻苦練習(xí)，即便身體不便，也從未放棄。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：WhenthehostannounceditwasJane’sturn,shewaswheeledontothestage.當(dāng)主持人宣布輪到簡(jiǎn)上臺(tái)時(shí)，她被推上了舞臺(tái)。聚光燈灑在她身上，簡(jiǎn)深吸一口氣，眼神中透露出堅(jiān)定。隨著音樂響起，她開口歌唱，那熟悉而動(dòng)人的聲音瞬間響徹全場(chǎng)。她的歌聲飽含著對(duì)夢(mèng)想的執(zhí)著和對(duì)生活的熱愛。臺(tái)下觀眾被深深打動(dòng)，沉浸在美妙的歌聲中。一曲唱罷，全場(chǎng)爆發(fā)出雷鳴般的掌聲。簡(jiǎn)的臉上露出了自信的笑容，她終于實(shí)現(xiàn)了自己的夢(mèng)想。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Oneday,however,Marycamewithgoodnews.SheexcitedlytoldJaneandmethattherewasasingingcompetitionespeciallyfordisabledyouth.Uponhearingthis,aglimmerofhopesparkledinJane'seyes,butitsoonfaded.Shewasworriedaboutherphysicalconditionandfeareddisappointmentagain.Iencouragedhertogiveitatry,andMaryalsocheeredheron.Eventually,Janedecidedtosignupforthecompetition.Inthefollowingdays,underMary'sguidance,shepracticedhardeveryday.Despiteherphysicalinconvenience,shenevergaveup.14范文呈現(xiàn)WhenthehostannounceditwasJane’sturn,shewaswheeledontothestage.Thespotlightshonebrightlyonher.Janetookadeepbreath,hereyesfilledwithdetermination.Asthemusicstarted,shebegantosing.Herfamiliarandcharmingvoiceechoedthroughoutthevenueimmediately.Hersongwasfullofherperseveranceinherdreamandherloveforlife.Theaudiencewasdeeplymovedandimmersedinthewonderfulsinging.Whenthesongended,thunderousapplauseeruptedfromtheaudience.AconfidentsmilespreadacrossJane'sface.Shefinallyachievedherdream.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Oneday,however,Maryarrivedbearingexhilaratingnews.Withaglintofexcitementinhereyes,sherevealedthatasingingcompetitiontailoredspecificallyfordisabledyouthwasonthehorizon.Atthementionofthisopportunity,aflickerofhopemomentarilyignitedinJane'seyes,onlytobequicklyovershadowedbyacloudofdoubt.Thespecterofherphysicallimitationsloomedlarge,andthefearofdashedhopeslingered.ButI,withunwaveringconviction,urgedhertoseizethemoment,andMary,standingbymyside,addedhervoicetothechorusofencouragement.Buoyedbyoursupport,Janesummonedthecouragetoregisterforthecompetition.Inthedaysthatfollowed,underMary'smeticulousguidance,shededicatedherselftorigorouspracticesessions.Despitethechallengesposedbyherdisability,sheremainedsteadfast,herdeterminationunyielding.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)WhenthehostannounceditwasJane’sturn,shewasgracefullywheeledontothestage.Thespotlight,likeabeaconofhope,bathedherinawarmglow.Jane,takingadeep,steadyingbreath,steeledherselfforwhatlayahead.Asthemusicswelled,sheopenedhermouth,andavoice,bothfamiliarandnewlyempowered,filledtheauditorium.Eachnotecarriedtheweightofherjourney,atestamenttoherunwaveringcommitmenttoherdreamandherindomitablespirit.Theaudience,spellbound,sattransfixed,theirheartsstirredbytherawemotioninherperformance.Andwhenthefinalnotefadedintosilence,theroomer