高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+蘋果與我在山谷的驚險遭遇

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習蘋果與我在山谷的驚險遭遇1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ThatDecembermorning,IdecidedtotakeAppletopayavisittomyaunt.I’dhadAppleonlyacoupleofweeks,butwe’dbecomenearlyinseparable.Iopenedthecardoor.Applejumpedinandsettleddownonthepassengerseat.Istartedthecarandsetoff．It’salwaystrickyturningaround.Iliveinaremoteareaupinthehills,surroundedbywoods.Ihavetodriveupthemountaintogettomydriveway,whichishardlywideenoughforonecarandendsatasteep(陡峭的)valley．Itwistedaroundandbackedupslowly.Justthen,aflashofsunlightblindedme.Iputmyhanduptocovermyeyes.Ifeltashakeastheleftrear(后部的)partofthecardropped.Oh,no!Thecarslippedandrolled.Welandedupsidedown.Ifeltasharppaininmychestandmylegs.Icouldn’tmove.IlookedovertofindApple.Shewasstillinthepassengerseatandfortunatelyshewasokay．4續(xù)寫原文Igrabbedmycellphoneanddialed911.ButjustasI’dfeared;therewasnosignal(信號)atthebottomofthisvalley.Nowwhat?Windy,myclosestneighbor,livedaquartermileuphillfromme,andhadherowndriveway.Itwasunlikelythatsheoranyoneelsewoulddriveuptomyhouse．Applebarkednervously.AtleastIcouldgetheroutofhere.Therewasaholeinthedriver’ssiderearwindow.“Comeon,Apple,”Isaid.Painfully,Ireachedover,pickedherupandgentlyputherheadthroughthehole.“Gohome,baby.”Shejumpedtothegroundandracedupthesideofthevalley．Asthesunset,itturnedcold.Itrembledwithcoldandpain.HadApplefoundherwayhome?Shehardlyknewthearea.Mypulse(脈搏)wasweakening.Iclosedmyeyes.SuddenlyIwasawakenedbyloudbarks．5段首句Paragraph1：“Help!”Ishoutedwithallmystrength.Paragraph2：Later,Windytoldmethatwhenshegothomefromwork,Applewaswaitingforher.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了作者帶著寵物蘋果去看望阿姨，在開車過程中車子不慎墜入山谷翻倒。作者受傷無法動彈，手機沒有信號。作者讓蘋果從車窗的洞出去尋求幫助，在寒冷且身體虛弱的情況下等待。最終蘋果引來了鄰居溫迪，作者獲救。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：“Help!”Ishoutedwithallmystrength.作者在車翻倒后，大聲呼喊“救命”。忍著疼痛，仔細聽周圍的動靜，期望能有救援。此時，蘋果在一旁緊張地叫著，作者希望它能盡快帶來幫助。作者不斷地嘗試挪動身體，雖然疼痛難忍，但還是努力尋找著可以脫困的辦法。隨著時間流逝，寒冷和疼痛不斷加劇，作者的身體越來越虛弱。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Later,Windytoldmethatwhenshegothomefromwork,Applewaswaitingforher.后來溫迪告訴作者，蘋果在她下班回家時就等在門口。蘋果帶著溫迪來到車旁，溫迪看到車子翻倒十分震驚，立刻撥打了急救電話。作者被救出后，對蘋果的行為感到十分感動。蘋果不僅是寵物，更是作者的救命恩人。作者恢復后，與蘋果的感情更加深厚。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)“Help!”Ishoutedwithallmystrength.Itriedtocalloutagain,butmyvoicewasweakandhoarse.IcouldhearApplebarkingloudlynearby,andIhopedshewastryingtogetsomeonetocometomyrescue.Iwasgrowingmoreandmoredesperateastimepassed.Suddenly,Iheardacarapproaching.Itwasthesoundofavehicledrivingdownthehill.Ifeltaglimmerofhope.Itriedtoshoutagain,andthistimeIheardavoicecallingout.ItwasWindy.Shehadcometomyaid.Shequicklyopenedthecardoorandhelpedmeout.Iwassorelievedandgrateful.13范文呈現(xiàn)Later,Windytoldmethatwhenshegothomefromwork,Applewaswaitingforher.ApplehadmanagedtoreachWindy'shouseandwasbarkingloudly.WindyimmediatelyrealizedsomethingwaswrongandfollowedApplebacktomycar.Shesaidshewasshockedtoseethecarinsuchastate.IwassothankfulforApple'sactions.Shehadsavedme.AfterIwastakentothehospital,Irecoveredgradually.AppleandIbecameevencloser.Iwassogladthatshehadbeenbymyside.Shetrulywasmyhero.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)“Help!”Ishoutedwithallmystrength.Iwastrappedintheupside-downcar,painshootingthroughmybody.AsIlaythere,InoticedApplebarkingfuriouslybesideme.Herbarksseemedtobeadesperatecallforhelp.Icouldn'tmove,andmyvoicewasweak,butItriedtocalloutagain.Suddenly,Iheardthesoundofacarapproaching.Itwasthesoundofavehiclethatseemedtobecomingdownthehill.IhopeditwasWindy.Itwasasiffatehadsenthertomyrescue.Thecarstopped,andWindyopenedthedoor.Shequicklyhelpedmeoutofthecar,andIwasfinallyfreefromthenightmare.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Later,Windytoldmethatwhenshegothomefromwork,Applewaswaitingforher.ApplehadmanagedtoreachWindy'shouse,barkingloudlyalltheway.Windyimmediatelyrealizedsomethingwaswrong.ShefollowedApplebacktomycar.Windysaidshewasshockedtoseethecarinsuchastate.IwassogratefulforApple'sactions.Shehadsavedme.AfterIwastakentothehospital,Irecoveredg