專題10 英語作文（上海十六區(qū)二模）（上海專用）（解析版）

試卷第=page2020頁，共=sectionpages4040頁專題10英語作文編者按：上海十六區(qū)二模完整齊全，深度解析，排版整齊。（一）（2024年寶山區(qū)二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是李華，是希望中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生。現(xiàn)在你們班級英語課上的互動形式和內(nèi)容都越來越豐富了，但有一個現(xiàn)象需要注意，就是當(dāng)老師提出的問題學(xué)生不能及時回答時，有時候老師會代替學(xué)生回答，有時候也會出現(xiàn)較長時間的冷場。針對這種情況，請你給老師寫一封郵件，提出你的意見和建議。你的文章必須包括：簡單描述你覺得能改變這種現(xiàn)象方法；闡述你所提建議的理由。（文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearTeacher,IamLiHua,astudentfromouresteemedschool.Recently,IhavenoticedthatourEnglishclasseshavebecomeincreasinglyinteractiveandengaging.However,thereisasmallaspectthatIbelievecouldbefurtherimprovedupon.Occasionally,whenaquestionisposedandstudentshesitatetorespondpromptly,thereareinstanceswhereyoumightansweronourbehalforamomentarylullensues.Toaddressthis,Isuggestimplementingafewstrategies.Firstly,wecouldbeencouragedtodiscussinsmallgroupsbeforesharingourthoughtswiththeclass.Secondly,youcouldprovidepromptsorguidingquestionstohelpusbridgethegapinourthinking.Thereasonforthesesuggestionsistwofold.Firstly,itwouldfosteramorestudent-centeredlearningenvironment,encouragingactiveparticipationandcriticalthinking.Secondly,itwouldhelpbuildourconfidenceinspeakingEnglish,knowingthatwehavethesupportandspacetoexploreourideas.Thankyouforyourdedicationtoourlearning.Bestregards,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生假如是李華，是希望中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生?，F(xiàn)在你們班級英語課上的互動形式和內(nèi)容都越來越豐富了，但有一個現(xiàn)象需要注意，就是當(dāng)老師提出的問題學(xué)生不能及時回答時，有時候老師會代替學(xué)生回答，有時候也會出現(xiàn)較長時間的冷場。針對這種情況，請你給老師寫一封郵件，提出你的意見和建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累培養(yǎng)：foster→develop建議：suggestion→advice提出：pose→putforward提供：provide→offer2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Toaddressthis,Isuggestimplementingafewstrategies.拓展句：Ifwewanttoaddressthis,Isuggestimplementingafewstrategies.【點睛】[高分句型1]Recently,IhavenoticedthatourEnglishclasseshavebecomeincreasinglyinteractiveandengaging.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]Occasionally,whenaquestionisposedandstudentshesitatetorespondpromptly,thereareinstanceswhereyoumightansweronourbehalforamomentarylullensues.(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句和where引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)（二）（2024年崇明區(qū)二模）WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生徐晶，你遠(yuǎn)在英國的朋友Anna前幾天給你發(fā)來電子郵件，向你敘述了她未能成功入選校學(xué)生會的事情，為此一直悶悶不樂。恰巧你在圖書館看到下面圖中英國前首相丘吉爾講過的這句名言。你給Anna回一封郵件，用這句名言來勸慰和鼓勵她。在郵件中你必須：1.對Anna的失敗表示同情；2.用你對這句名言的理解和1-2個實例來勸慰和鼓勵A(yù)nna。注：不要在郵件中提及你的真實姓名和學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearAnna,I’msorrytohearaboutyourunsuccessfulbidforthestudentcouncil.Failurecanbetoughbutremember,asWinstonChurchillsaid,“Successisnotfinal,failureisnotfatal;itisthecouragetocontinuethatcounts.”So,don'tletonesmallfailurestandinyourway.ThinkofEdison,whofailedthousandsoftimesbeforeinventingthelightbulb.Hiscouragetopersevereledtoaworld-changingdiscovery.You,too,havethepotentialtoovercomethissetback.Don’tletthisfailuredefineyou;letitbeasteppingstonetogreatersuccess.Keepgoing,Anna.Itisyourcourageanddeterminationthatwillleadyoutonewheights.Ibelieveyouwillbeselectedsuccessfullyinthenextelection.Bestwishes,XuJing【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生對于遠(yuǎn)在英國的朋友Anna前幾天給你發(fā)來電子郵件，向你敘述了她未能成功入選校學(xué)生會的事情，為此一直悶悶不樂，恰巧你在圖書館看到下面圖中英國前首相丘吉爾講過的這句名言這一情況，給Anna回一封郵件，用這句名言來勸慰和鼓勵她?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累痛苦的：tough→painful挫折：setback→frustration克服：overcome→conquer決心：determination→resolution2.句式拓展簡單句變非謂語作狀語原句：I’msorrytohearaboutyourunsuccessfulbidforthestudentcouncil.拓展句：Hearingaboutyoufailedinyourbidforthestudentcouncil,Ifeelsosorry.【點睛】【高分句型1】ThinkofEdison,whofailedthousandsoftimesbeforeinventingthelightbulb.（運(yùn)用了關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。）【高分句型2】Itisyourcourageanddeterminationthatwillleadyoutonewheights.（運(yùn)用了Itis…that…的強(qiáng)調(diào)句式。）（三）（2024年奉賢區(qū)二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.隨著中國傳統(tǒng)文化的復(fù)興，漢服(Hanfu)作為一種獨特的服飾文化，逐漸受到人們的關(guān)注和喜愛。假如你是明啟中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你校正在向?qū)W生們征集新社團(tuán)的創(chuàng)建意向。作為漢服愛好者，你準(zhǔn)備成立漢服社，請給校委會寫一封郵件表達(dá)你的想法。你的郵件需包含：1.成立該社團(tuán)的目的；2.社團(tuán)擬開展的活動及原因。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSchoolCommittee,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.MynameisLiHua,astudentatMingqiHighSchool,andIamwritingtoproposetheestablishmentofaHanfuClubwithinourschoolcommunitywiththepurposeoftherevivalofHanfuclothing.TheactivitiesthattheHanfuClubplanstoundertakeareasfollows.Atfirst,wewillorganizeworkshopstoteachinterestedstudentsaboutthehistoryofHanfu,itssignificanceinChineseculture,andhowtowearitcorrectly.Thesesessionswillbeinteractiveandinformative,allowingstudentstoappreciatethebeautyandeleganceofHanfu.Besides,theclubwillhostculturalperformancesshowcasingvariousaspectsoftraditionalChineseculture,withafocusonHanfu.Byengagingintheseactivities,webelievethattheHanfuClubcancontributetofosteringagreatersenseofculturalprideandidentityamongourstudentbody.Thankyouforconsideringourproposal.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給校委會寫郵件，提出組建漢服社團(tuán)的申請?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累重要性：significance→importance得體地：correctly→decently此外：besides→inaddition各種各樣的：various→diverse2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Thesesessionswillbeinteractiveandinformative,allowingstudentstoappreciatethebeautyandeleganceofHanfu.拓展句：Thesesessionswillbeinteractiveandinformative,whichallowsstudentstoappreciatethebeautyandeleganceofHanfu.【點睛】【高分句式1】TheactivitiesthattheHanfuClubplanstoundertakeareasfollows.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)【高分句式2】Byengagingintheseactivities,webelievethattheHanfuClubcancontributetofosteringagreatersenseofculturalprideandidentityamongourstudentbody.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)（四）（2024年虹口區(qū)二模）WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生趙磊，你的外國朋友William一直對中國文化很感興趣。近日，他在網(wǎng)上了解到有兩個相關(guān)的線上節(jié)目（節(jié)目信息如下表所示），但他對節(jié)目選擇有些茫然，想聽聽你的建議。請給William回復(fù)一封郵件，郵件內(nèi)容須包括：（1）推薦其中一個節(jié)目；（2）通過比較兩個節(jié)目的信息，說明你推薦該節(jié)目的理由。節(jié)目名稱故宮里的國寶TreasuresoftheForbiddenCity尋訪中國美食ExploringChineseCuisine節(jié)目內(nèi)容介紹故宮里的國寶及其背后的故事介紹中國傳統(tǒng)美食及其烹飪方式節(jié)目形式紀(jì)錄片短視頻節(jié)目語言英語解說無字幕(subtitles)中文解說英語字幕___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearWilliam,HavinglearntyouareinterestedinChinesecultureandthatyoucannotdecidewhethertooptfortheTreasuresoftheForbiddenCityortheExploringChineseCuisine,Iamwritingtoputforwardmyownideathatthesecondoptionmightbemoresuitableforyou.Thereasonsbehindthechoice,asfarasIcansee,canbeanalyzedinthreeaspects.Tobeginwith,asisuniversallyacknowledged,deliciouscuisineisalwaysapopulartopicaroundthewholeworld.Inthisprogramme,youwillbeintroducedtheprocessofmakingChinesetraditionalfood,whichisalsoapartoftheChineseculture.Inaddition,itwon'tcostyoumuchtimesinceitispresentedbyshortvideo,sothatyoucanchooseyourtimefreely.Lastbutnotleast,althoughtheprogrammeisspokeninChinese,thereareEnglishsubtitlesforyoutohaveafullunderstandingofthecontent.Tosumup,itisadvisablethatyouchoosethesecondone.Hopetheabovemightbeofanyhelptoyou.ThankyouforyourtimeandwishyouagreatsuccessinlearningabouttheChineseculture.Yours,ZhaoLei【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給外國朋友William寫一封郵件，給他提一些關(guān)于了解中國文化節(jié)目的選擇建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累選擇：option→choice總之：tosumup→inshort普遍地：universally→widely有幫助的：beofhelp→behelpful2.句式拓展改為復(fù)合句原句：Thereasonsbehindthechoice,asfarasIcansee,canbeanalyzedinthreeaspects.

拓展句：ThereasonswhyImadethechoicecanbeanalyzedinthreeaspects.

【點睛】【高分句型1】HavinglearntyouareinterestedinChinesecultureandthatyoucannotdecidewhethertooptfortheTreasuresoftheForbiddenCityorthe

ExploringChineseCuisine,Iamwritingtoputforwardmyownideathatthesecondoptionmightbemoresuitableforyou.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語和idea后that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句)【高分句型2】Tobeginwith,asisuniversallyacknowledged,deliciouscuisineisalwaysapopulartopicaroundthewholeworld.(運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)（五）（2024年黃浦區(qū)二模）WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.“人設(shè)”通常指人們向公眾展示的自我，現(xiàn)在很多學(xué)生經(jīng)常說“我的人設(shè)不能倒”。校學(xué)生會正在開展有關(guān)“人設(shè)能不能倒?(Canmypublicimagefallapart?)”的討論，請你在學(xué)生會郵箱投稿，表達(dá)自己的想法。你的投稿須包括(文中請不要出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名)：1)你覺得自己的人設(shè)是什么？2)你覺得你的人設(shè)能倒嗎？為什么？_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文CanMyPublicImageFallApart?Mypublicimageisthatofadiligentstudentandaresponsibleteamplayer.Istrivetomaintainthisimagebyconsistentlyperformingwellacademicallyandactivelyparticipatinginschoolactivities.However,Ibelievethatmypublicimagecanindeedfallapart.Nooneisperfect,andweallmakemistakes.IfIweretobehaveinawaythatcontradictsmyestablishedimage,itwouldnaturallycollapse.Thisisnotsomethingtofear,asitprovidesanopportunityforgrowthandself-reflection.What’simportantistolearnfromourmistakes,adapt,andstrivetorebuildamoreauthenticandsustainableimage.Therefore,whileIaimtoupholdmycurrentpublicimage,Iamalsoopentothepossibilityofitsfallibility.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封主題為“CanMyPublicImageFallApart?”的作文投稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累重要：beimportant→matter機(jī)會：opportunity→chance害怕：fear→scare維持：uphold→sustain2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Mypublicimageisthatofadiligentstudentandaresponsibleteamplayer.Istrivetomaintainthisimagebyconsistentlyperformingwellacademicallyandactivelyparticipatinginschoolactivities.拓展句：Sincemypublicimageisthatofadiligentstudentandaresponsibleteamplayer,Istrivetomaintainthisimagebyconsistentlyperformingwellacademicallyandactivelyparticipatinginschoolactivities.【點睛】[高分句型1]What’simportantistolearnfromourmistakes,adapt,andstrivetorebuildamoreauthenticandsustainableimage.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)主語從句以及不定式tolearn作表語)[高分句型2]Therefore,whileIaimtoupholdmycurrentpublicimage,Iamalsoopentothepossibilityofitsfallibility.(運(yùn)用了while引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句)（六）（2024年嘉定區(qū)二模）WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.你所在的小區(qū)附近將新建一個大型游樂場，很多居民表示不滿。社區(qū)管理處決定征集居民意見并召開專題討論會，作為居民代表，寫一份討論會發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容需包括：1.你認(rèn)為新建大型游樂場可能會存在的問題(至少2個)；2.你對以上問題的建議和理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearneighbors,Iamhereasaresidentrepresentativetovoiceourconcernsabouttheupcominglargeamusementparknearourcommunity.Whiletheideasoundsexciting,therearepotentialissueswemustconsider.Firstly,noisepollutioncouldbecomeanimportantproblem.Theconstanthustleandbustleoftheamusementparkmightdisturbourpeaceandquiet.Secondly,trafficcongestionisanotherconcern.Theinfluxofvisitorsislikelytocausemajortrafficjams,affectingourdailycommutes.Toaddresstheseissues,Iproposeconductingathoroughnoiseimpactassessmentandimplementingnoisereductionmeasures.Additionally,weshouldexploretrafficmanagementstrategiestominimizecongestion.It'scrucialforourvoicestobeheardandconsideredinthisprocess.Let'sworktogethertofindsolutionsthatbenefitourcommunity.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】這是一篇發(fā)言稿。要求考生作為居民代表就你所在的小區(qū)附近將新建一個大型游樂場，很多居民表示不滿一事，寫一份討論會發(fā)言稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累變得：become→turninto重要的：important→significant問題：problem→issue合作：worktogether→teamup2.句式拓展同義句改寫原句：Firstly,noisepollutioncouldbecomeanimportantproblem.拓展句：Initially,thematterofnoisepollutionemergesasasignificantconcern.【點睛】【高分句型1】Whiletheideasoundsexciting,therearepotentialissueswemustconsider.（使用了關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為issues）【高分句型2】Toaddresstheseissues,Iproposeconductingathoroughnoiseimpactassessmentandimplementingnoisereductionmeasures.（使用了非謂語動詞作狀語）（七）（2024年金山區(qū)二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的學(xué)生吳磊，你在英語一考中取得了118分的成績，現(xiàn)在你正面臨著是否參加6月份二考的選擇，請談?wù)勀愕南敕ā?nèi)容需包括：1）說明你的選擇；2）闡述你的理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文MyDecisionontheSecondEnglishTestI'mWuLei,astudentfromMingqiHighSchool.IamwritingtosharemythoughtsonwhethertoparticipateinthesecondEnglishtestscheduledforJune.Aftercarefulconsideration,Ihavedecidedtoforegothesecondtest.Myprimaryreasonforthisdecisionstemsfromtheencouragingscoreof118Iachievedinthefirstexam.ThisresultindicatesthatIpossessasolidfoundationinthelanguage,andIbelievethatwithcontinuedeffortanddedication,Icanfurtherenhancemyproficiency.Additionally,Irecognizethatmytimeisvaluable,andIwishtoutilizeiteffectively.Participatinginthesecondtestmightnotsignificantlyimpactmyoverallscore,butitcouldpotentiallydetractfrommyfocusonothersubjectsandextracurricularactivities.Inconclusion,IamconfidentinmycurrentEnglishproficiencyandbelievethatmyeffortsshouldbedirectedtowardsmaintainingandimprovingmyperformanceinotherareas.Therefore,IhavechosennottoparticipateinthesecondEnglishtest.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的學(xué)生吳磊，你在英語一考中取得了118分的成績，現(xiàn)在你正面臨著是否參加6月份二考的選擇，請談?wù)勀愕南敕?。【詳解?.詞匯積累參加：participatein→joinin此外：additionally→besides提高：enhance→strengthen總之：inconclusion→inshort2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Additionally,Irecognizethatmytimeisvaluable,andIwishtoutilizeiteffectively.拓展句：Additionally,afterIrecognizethatmytimeisvaluable,Iwishtoutilizeiteffectively.【點睛】[高分句型1] IamwritingtosharemythoughtsonwhethertoparticipateinthesecondEnglishtestscheduledforJune.(運(yùn)用了特殊疑問詞+不定式作賓語)[高分句型2]InconclusionIamconfidentinmycurrentEnglishproficiencyandbelievethatmyeffortsshouldbedirectedtowardsmaintainingandimprovingmyperformanceinotherareas.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)（八）（2024年靜安區(qū)二模）假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)李華，你校藝術(shù)節(jié)即將舉辦主題為“最美瞬間”的攝影展，捕捉“熱愛生活、積極向上、全面發(fā)展”等正能量的精彩瞬間?，F(xiàn)邀請每位同學(xué)提供自己生活中的一張照片參展，并撰寫攝影作品的介紹供參觀者閱讀。你打算提供什么樣的照片？請寫一篇短文作為參展攝影作品的介紹，內(nèi)容包括：1)對該照片的簡要描述；2)你選擇該照片參展的理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Thisisaphotodepictingasunriseoveramistymountainpeak.Intheimage,thesunisjustpeekingoverthehorizon,castingawarmgoldenglowacrosstheskyandilluminatingtherollingcloudsthatclingtothemountainslopes.Ichosethisphotofortheexhibitionbecauseitcapturesabreathtakingmomentofnaturalbeautyandserenity.Thevibrantcolorsofthesunrisesymbolizehopeandnewbeginnings,reflectingthethemethattheartfestivalseekstopromote.Additionally,thetranquilatmosphereofthesceneencouragesviewerstopauseandappreciatethewondersofnature,fosteringasenseofmindfulnessandgratitude.Thephotoinvitesviewerstoconnectwiththeirsurroundingsandfindinspirationinthesimplejoysofeverydaylife.Itservesasaremindertoembraceeachmomentwithenthusiasmandapositiveoutlook.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放性作文。題目要求學(xué)生以李華的身份，參與學(xué)校藝術(shù)節(jié)即將舉辦的“最美瞬間”攝影展，為參展攝影作品寫一篇介紹，需涵蓋簡要描述和選擇的理由。【詳解】1.詞匯積累描繪：depict→portrary捕捉：capture→catch,seize象征：symbolize→representsignify激勵某人做某事：encouragesb.todo→motivatesb.todo,inspiresb.todo培養(yǎng)：foster→cultivate,develop2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Thisisaphotodepictingasunriseoveramistymountainpeak.拓展句：Thisisaphotothatdepictsasunriseoveramistymountainpeak.【點睛】[高分句型1]Intheimage,thesunisjustpeekingoverthehorizon,castingawarmgoldenglowacrosstheskyandilluminatingtherollingcloudsthatclingtothemountainslopes(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語、that引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Ichosethisphotofortheexhibitionbecauseitcapturesabreathtakingmomentofnaturalbeautyandserenity.(運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)（九）（2024年浦東新區(qū)二模）隨著人工智能的快速發(fā)展，ChatGPT已進(jìn)入我們的生活，正逐漸影響我們的學(xué)習(xí)方式和體驗，有人認(rèn)為它會帶來諸多便利，也有人心存顧慮。假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的學(xué)生王磊，學(xué)校貼吧就此話題正在熱議，你對此很感興趣，決定回帖響應(yīng)?；靥麅?nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.你是否支持使用ChatGPT;2.你的理由。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AsastudentatMingqiHighSchool,IamintriguedbytheongoingdiscussionsurroundingtheintegrationofChatGPTintoourlivesamidsttherapiddevelopmentofartificialintelligence.RegardingtheuseofChatGPT,Iamcautiouslysupportive,recognizingbothitspotentialbenefitsandconcerns.Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseofitsconvenienceandaccessibility.WithChatGPT,wehaveinstantaccesstoinformationandassistance,whichcangreatlyenhanceourlearningexperiences.Whetherit’sclarifyingconcepts,practicinglanguageskills,orreceivingpersonalizedfeedback,ChatGPToffersvaluablesupportthatcomplementstraditionallearningmethods.Additionally,ChatGPTcanfostercreativityandexploration.ByinteractingwithChatGPT,studentshavetheopportunitytoengageinstimulatingconversations,explorenewideas,andexpandtheirknowledgeindiversesubjects.Thisinteractivelearningexperiencecansparkcuriosity,inspireinnovation,andencourageindependentthinkingamongstudents.However,IalsoacknowledgetheneedforcautionwhenusingChatGPT.Aswithanytechnology,thereareconcernsaboutprivacy,accuracy,andoverreliance.It’sessentialtouseChatGPTresponsibly,criticallyevaluatetheinformationitprovides,andmaintainabalancebetweentechnologicalassistanceandindependentlearning.Inconclusion,whileIsupporttheuseofChatGPTasavaluabletoolineducation,it’simportanttoapproachitsintegrationthoughtfullyandmindfullytomaximizeitsbenefitswhileaddressingpotentialchallenges.(word:217)【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。隨著人工智能的快速發(fā)展，ChatGPT已進(jìn)入我們的生活，正逐漸影響我們的學(xué)習(xí)方式和體驗，有人認(rèn)為它會帶來諸多便利，也有人心存顧慮。假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的學(xué)生王磊，學(xué)校貼吧就此話題正在熱議，你對此很感興趣，決定回帖響應(yīng)。【詳解】1.詞匯積累提高，促進(jìn)：enhance→prompt/facilitate鼓勵：inspire→motivate重要的：essential→vital總之：inconclusion→toconclude2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseofitsconvenienceandaccessibility.拓展句：Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseitisconvenientandaccessible.【點睛】【高分句型1】Whetherit’sclarifyingconcepts,practicinglanguageskills,orreceivingpersonalizedfeedback,ChatGPToffersvaluablesupportthatcomplementstraditionallearningmethods.（運(yùn)用了whether...or引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）【高分句型2】WithChatGPT,wehaveinstantaccesstoinformationandassistance,whichcangreatlyenhanceourlearningexperiences.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）（十）（2024年普陀區(qū)二模）假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生張磊，你的英國朋友Michael來信說他打算今年暑期來中國度假，你想邀請他去你的家鄉(xiāng)游覽。請你給他回信，內(nèi)容需包括：1）你最想帶他去的幾個地方，以及參與的活動；2）你所提建議的理由。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMichael,I’mverygladtohearthatyouplantocometoChinaforavacationthissummer.I’dliketoinviteyoutovisitmyhometown.ThereareseveralplacesI’dliketotakeyouto.First,wecangotothelocalhistorymuseumtolearnaboutthecultureandhistoryofmyhometown.Then,wecanvisitthebeautifulnaturalscenery,suchasthemountainsandrivers.Wecanalsoparticipateinsomelocalactivities,liketastingthelocalfoodandexperiencingthetraditionalcustoms.Isuggesttheseplacesandactivitiesbecausetheycangiveyouacomprehensiveunderstandingofmyhometown.Youcannotonlyappreciatethebeautyofnaturebutalsofeelthecharmofthelocalculture.Ibelieveyouwillhaveagreattime.Lookingforwardtoseeingyousoon!Yours,ZhangLei【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的邀請信。要求考生給英國朋友Michael寫信，邀請其去你的家鄉(xiāng)游覽。【詳解】1.詞匯積累高興的：glad→happy/delighted打算做某事：planto→intendto參觀：visit→payavisitto參與：participatein→takepartin2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：First,wecangotothelocalhistorymuseumtolearnaboutthecultureandhistoryofmyhometown.拓展句：First,wecangotothelocalhistorymuseum,wherewecanlearnaboutthecultureandhistoryofmyhometown.【點睛】【高分句型1】ThereareseveralplacesI’dliketotakeyouto.（運(yùn)用了省略關(guān)系代詞that的定語從句修飾先行詞places）【高分句型2】Isuggesttheseplacesandactivitiesbecausetheycangiveyouacomprehensiveunderstandingofmyhometown.（運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）（十一）（2024年青浦區(qū)二模）假設(shè)你是浦潤中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李青。學(xué)校將舉辦“中國工坊”（ChineseWorkshop）活動，主題涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中國傳統(tǒng)手工藝（handicraft）、中國書法（calligraphy）和中國繪畫。屆時，英國姐妹學(xué)校的師生代表將到校訪問。學(xué)校擬招募學(xué)生現(xiàn)場教授相關(guān)技能。請寫一封自薦信，內(nèi)容必須包括：申請參加本次活動；闡述你對本次文化交流活動意義的理解；結(jié)合個人興趣和特長，說明一項你想要教授的技能，并陳述理由。（注：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名及學(xué)校名稱。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearOrganizingCommitteeIamLiQing,aGrade12studentfromPurunHighSchool.Iamwritingtoexpressmykeeninterestinparticipatingintheupcoming“ChineseWorkshop”event.ThisculturalexchangeholdsprofoundsignificanceasitoffersaplatformforourBritishcounterpartstointimatelyexperiencetherichnessofChineseculture.Throughthisworkshop,wecanbridgeculturaldividesandfostermutualunderstanding.GivenmypassionforChinesecalligraphy,Iameagertosharethisancientartwithourguests.Calligraphyisnotjustaboutwriting;it’sareflectionofone’sspiritandcharacter.Teachingthisskillwillnotonlyimpartknowledgebutalsopromoteculturalappreciation.Ibelievethatmyenthusiasmandproficiencyincalligraphywillcontributetothesuccessofthisworkshop.Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.Sincerely,LiQing【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。學(xué)校將舉辦“中國工坊”（ChineseWorkshop）活動，主題涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中國傳統(tǒng)手工藝（handicraft）、中國書法（calligraphy）和中國繪畫。屆時，英國姐妹學(xué)校的師生代表將到校訪問。學(xué)校擬招募學(xué)生現(xiàn)場教授相關(guān)技能。要求考生根據(jù)提示寫一封自薦信。【詳解】1.詞匯積累強(qiáng)烈的：keen→strong參加：participatein→engagein即將到來的：upcoming→forthcoming重要性：significance→importance2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：IamLiQing,aGrade12studentfromPurunHighSchool..拓展句：IamLiQing,whoisaGrade12studentfromPurunHighSchool.【點睛】【高分句型1】Iamwritingtoexpressmykeeninterestinparticipatingintheupcoming“ChineseWorkshop”event.（運(yùn)用了動名詞participating作賓語）【高分句型2】Ibelievethatmyenthusiasmandproficiencyincalligraphywillcontributetothesuccessofthisworkshop.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）（十二）（2024年閔行區(qū)二模）假設(shè)你是上海市明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華，你的新西蘭筆友Terry即將在下個學(xué)期來你們學(xué)校參加為期2個月的學(xué)習(xí)交流項目。他發(fā)來郵件，請你給他一些在上海生活和學(xué)習(xí)的建議。請你回復(fù)郵件。你的郵件須包含2～3條建議和相關(guān)理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearTerry,Happytoknowthatyouwillcometoourschooltoparticipateina2-monthlearningexchangeprogramnextsemester,I’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsonyourlifeandstudyhere.First,itisbettertoliveinthedormitory,whichcangiveyoumorechancestocommunicatewithyourclassmatesandknowmoreaboutourschool.Besides,youcangooutatnighttoShanghaiBundtoenjoyitsbeautyandlearnsomecustomsandcultur