高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：溫暖傳遞：為悲傷鄰居帶去希望的鄰里情+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)溫暖傳遞：為悲傷鄰居帶去希望的鄰里情1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Everymorning,hesatquietlyandmotionlessonthefrontstepsofhishouse.Hisbrightblueeyesseemedsodistantandsad.Everymorning,mydaughterandIwalkedtoherkindergartenandwepassedhishouse.Wewerenewtotheneighbourhood,soIdidn’tknowmanyofmyneighbours.Ononebeautifulmorning,aswepassedhishouse,mydaughterjoyfullycalledouttohim,‘Hi,Mr.Man!’Shewasanoutgoinggirl,andIwasn’tsurprisedathercheerfulness,butherenthusiasmsoonfadedwhenthemandidn’tlookatherorsay‘Hi’back.Aswecontinuedonourwalktoschool,mydaughtercuriouslyaskedwhythemandidn’twanttosayhitoher.Stumblingforwords,becauseIdidn’thavetheanswer,Isaidsimply,‘Maybeheishavingabadday.’Oncebackhome,Iwashedthebreakfastdishes,andIthoughtabout‘Mr.Man.’Whatwashisstory?Whydidheseemsosad?Determinedtodosomethingtocheerhimup,Ibrainstormedafewwaystomakehisdayabitbrighter,butnothingseemedspecialenough.4續(xù)寫原文Thenextmorning,afterdroppingmydaughteroffatschool,Isawoneofmyotherneighbourstendingherfrontgarden.AfterIintroducedmyself,sheinvitedmeinforachat.Shewasalong-timeresidentoftheneighbourhood,whokneweveryoneandeverything.Shewasabubblypersonality,butwhenIaskedheraboutthemanwholivednearby,shegrewserious.‘Bobrecentlylosthiswifeinacaraccident.Hehasn’tbeenthesamesince.’Thefollowingweekseemedtoflyby.IhadtalkedtomydaughteraboutwhatwecoulddotobringasmiletoMr.Man’sface.5段首句Paragraph1:WitheverysuggestionImade,mydaughtersimplysaid‘No,notthat.’Paragraph2:Inside,inperfectcalligraphy,itsimplyread,‘Thankyou,fromMr.Man.’6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8每天早上，“我”和女兒步行去幼兒園時都會經(jīng)過一位坐在自家門前臺階上的男子家。他總是靜靜地坐著，眼神憂郁又疏離。有一天，女兒熱情地向他打招呼，卻沒得到回應(yīng)。女兒好奇地詢問原因，“我”一時不知如何作答，只能簡單解釋他可能心情不好?；氐郊液螅拔摇币恢痹谒伎歼@位男子的故事，決定做點(diǎn)什么讓他開心起來，但一時沒有好主意。第二天送完女兒后，“我”和一位鄰居聊天，得知這位男子叫鮑勃，他的妻子在一場車禍中離世，自那以后他就變得消沉。接下來的一周，“我”和女兒討論如何能讓他露出笑容。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:WitheverysuggestionImade,mydaughtersimplysaid‘No,notthat.’我提出的每一個建議，女兒都只是簡單地說“不，不行”。我提議為他烤一些餅干，女兒皺著眉頭說：“不行，這不夠特別?！蔽矣终f可以為他畫一幅畫，女兒還是搖頭：“這也不夠。”我有些苦惱，不知道到底什么樣的辦法才能讓女兒滿意。突然，女兒眼睛一亮，興奮地說：“媽媽，我們給他種一束花吧！他每天坐在門口，一定很孤獨(dú)，看到漂亮的花心情一定會好起來?！蔽矣X得這個主意很棒，于是我們立刻行動起來。我們?nèi)セǖ晏暨x了一些顏色鮮艷、容易生長的花種，還買了花盆和花土?；氐郊液螅液团畠阂黄鹦⌒囊硪淼匕鸦ǚN埋進(jìn)土里，澆上水，然后把花盆放在陽光充足的地方。接下來的幾天，我們每天都會去觀察花種的生長情況，給它們澆水、施肥。終于，在我們的精心照料下，花種發(fā)芽了，嫩綠的小芽從土里探出頭來，可愛極了。我們滿心歡喜，期待著這些花能快快長大，給鮑勃帶去驚喜。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Inside,inperfectcalligraphy,itsimplyread,‘Thankyou,fromMr.Man.’里面，用漂亮的書法寫著：“謝謝，來自那位先生?！蹦翘?，我們帶著種滿鮮花的花盆來到鮑勃家門前。鮑勃像往常一樣坐在臺階上，看到我們，他微微抬起頭，眼中閃過一絲驚訝。女兒笑著走上前，把花盆遞給他，說：“這是送給您的，希望您能開心起來?！滨U勃的手微微顫抖著接過花盆，他的眼睛里閃爍著淚光。他看著我們，嘴唇動了動，似乎想說些什么，卻又說不出來。過了幾天，我們在門口發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個信封，打開一看，里面是一張紙條，上面用漂亮的書法寫著“謝謝，來自那位先生”?？吹竭@張紙條，我和女兒都開心地笑了。從那以后，我們每次路過鮑勃家，他都會主動和我們打招呼，臉上也漸漸有了笑容。那束鮮花不僅點(diǎn)亮了鮑勃的生活，也讓我們感受到了給予他人幫助的快樂。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)WitheverysuggestionImade,mydaughtersimplysaid‘No,notthat.’Isuggestedbakingsomecookiesforhim.Mydaughterfrownedandsaid,“No,that'snotspecialenough.”ThenIsaidwecoulddrawapictureforhim.Shestillshookherheadandsaid,“That'snotiteither.”Iwasabitfrustrated,notknowingwhatkindofideacouldsatisfymydaughter.Suddenly,mydaughter'seyeslitupandshesaidexcitedly,“Mom,let'splantabunchofflowersforhim!Hesitsatthedooreverydayandmustbeverylonely.Seeingbeautifulflowerswilldefinitelycheerhimup.”Ithoughtitwasagreatidea,sowetookactionimmediately.Wewenttotheflowershopandselectedsomebrightly-coloredandeasy-to-growflowerseeds,aswellasflowerpotsandflowersoil.Afterreturninghome,mydaughterandIcarefullyburiedtheflowerseedsinthesoil,wateredthem,andthenplacedtheflowerpotsinasunnyplace.Inthefollowingdays,weobservedthegrowthoftheflowerseedseveryday,wateringandfertilizingthem.Finally,underourcarefulcare,theflowerseedsgerminated.Thetendergreenshootspokedtheirheadsoutofthesoil,lookingextremelycute.WewereoverjoyedandlookingforwardtotheflowersgrowingupquicklyandbringingasurprisetoBob.13范文呈現(xiàn)Inside,inperfectcalligraphy,itsimplyread,‘Thankyou,fromMr.Man.’Thatday,wewenttoBob'shousewiththeflowerpotsfullofflowers.Bobwassittingonthestepsasusual.Whenhesawus,heslightlyraisedhishead,andtherewasaflashofsurpriseinhiseyes.Mydaughterwalkedforwardwithasmileandhandedtheflowerpottohim,saying,“Thisisforyou.Ihopeyoucanbehappy.”Bob'shandstrembledslightlyashetooktheflowerpot.Thereweretearsinhiseyes.Helookedatus,hislipsmovedasifhewantedtosaysomething,buthecouldn't.Afewdayslater,wefoundanenvelopeatourdoor.Whenweopenedit,therewasanoteinside.Inperfectcalligraphy,itread,“Thankyou,fromMr.Man.”Seeingthisnote,mydaughterandIbothsmiledhappily.Fromthenon,everytimewepassedbyBob'shouse,hewouldgreetusactively,andtherewasgraduallyasmileonhisface.ThoseflowersnotonlybrightenedupBob'slifebutalsomadeusfeelthejoyofhelpingothers.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)WitheverysuggestionIputforward,mydaughtersimplyretorted,‘No,notthat.’Ifirstproposedbakingsomedeliciouscookiesforhim.Mydaughter,withaslightfrownonherface,responded,“No,that'snotuniqueenough.”ThenIsuggesteddrawingabeautifulpictureforhim,yetshestillshookherheadvigorously,saying,“Thatwon'tdoeither.”Iwassomewhatvexed,cluelessaboutwhatideacouldmeetmydaughter'sexpectations.Allofasudden,mydaughter'seyessparkledwithexcitementassheexclaimed,“Mom,let'splantabunchofgorgeousflowersforhim!Hesitsatthedoorstepeveryday,surelyfeelinglonely.Seeingthoselovelyflowerswillsurelylifthisspirits.”Ideemeditanexcellentidea,andwesprangintoactionrightaway.Weheadedtotheflowershopandcarefullypickedoutsomebrightly-coloredandresilientflowerseeds,alongwithflowerpotsandflowersoil.Uponreturninghome,mydaughterandImeticulouslyburiedtheseedsinthesoil,wateredthemgently,andthenplacedthepotsinaspotbathedinsunlight.Inthedaysthatfollowed,wecloselymonitoredthegrowthoftheseeds,wateringandfertilizingthemregularly.Eventually,underourtendercare,theseedsgerminated.Thedelicategreenshootsemergedfromthesoil,lookingutterlyadorable.Wewerefilledwithelation,eagerlyanticipatingthedaywhentheflowerswouldbloomandbringapleasantsurprisetoBob.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Inside,inperfectcalligraphy,itsimplyread,‘Thankyou,fromMr.Man.’Onthatspecialday,wemadeourwaytoBob'shouse,carryingtheflowerpotsbrimmingwithbloomingflowers.Bob,asusual,wasseatedonthesteps.Whenhecaughtsightofus,heliftedhisheadslightly,aglimmerofsurpriseflashingacrosshiseyes.Mydaughter,wearingabrightsmile,steppedforwardandhandedtheflowerpottohim,sayingsweetly,“Thisisforyou.Wehopeitcanbringyouhappiness.”Bob'shan