高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)：以善制惡：從受欺到和解的校園轉(zhuǎn)變+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)以善制惡：從受欺到和解的校園轉(zhuǎn)變1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Michaelsawthetroublecoming.TherestandinginthehallwaywasFrank,theboywhoenjoyedmakingfunofanyoneatanygivenmoment.Frankwastallandstrong,sofewofhisvictimsstooduptohim.MichaelhatedtheideathatFrankalwaysgotawaywithhiswrongdoing.Yetlikemostkidswhowerepickedon,hejusttookitquietlyandwaitedfortheunpleasanttopass.Frankwalkedup,hiseyeslockedonthebooksinMichael’sarms.Whentheymet,Frankstoppedunexpectedly,“Hey,letmeseethosebooks!”SomestudentswatchedasMichaelheldoutthebookshewascarrying,tryingnottogiveawayhisnervousness.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Franktookabook,lookedinsideforasecond,andthenthrewthebookatMichael,whodroppedalltheotherbooks.“Hey,thoseareschoolproperty,”Frankbarked,“Becareful!”Thenhewalkedaway,laughingloudly.Michael,hischeeksturningred,halfkickedthefallenbooks.Suddenlyahandpickeduponebook.“Youlooklikeyoucoulduseapally(盟友),”afriendlyvoicesaid.ItwasRamon,themostathleticboyinthehighschool.Michaelcouldn’tbelieveRamonwasstoppingtohelphimastheybarelyspoke.5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“Thanks,”Michaelsighedwithrelief.“It’sconfusing.Idon’tknowwhathisproblemsis.”“Well,asIseeit,”Ramonsaid,“youneedtofindawaytoendthis.”Michaelnodded,stuckforwhattosay.Ramoncontinued,“YouknowmygrandmotherusedtotellmewheneverIhadaproblemwithsomeone.She’dsay,‘Youcancatchmoreflieswithhoneythanwithvinegar(醋).’”Lookingpuzzled,Michaelasked,“Whatdoesthatmean?”“Itmeanskindnessmaybemoreeffectivethananger,”Ramonexplained.“CanyoujusttellFranktostoppickingonme?”Michaelsuggested.“That’svinegar,”Ramonlaughedashewalkedaway.“Tryhoneyinstead.”Ramon’swordsleftMichaelthinking.ThenextschooldaybroughtMichael’susualpain.TherestoodFrank,andMichaelknewitwouldbejustsecondsbeforehehadtofacehiminthemiddleofthehall.Frankcamenearer.6段首句Paragraph1:Then,suddenly,theunexpectedhappened.Paragraph2:MichaelbentdownandquicklypickedupFrank’sbooksonthefloor.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9邁克爾在學(xué)校常被喜歡捉弄人的弗蘭克欺負(fù)，弗蘭克高大強(qiáng)壯，受害者大多默默忍受，邁克爾也不例外。一次，弗蘭克搶走邁克爾手中的書(shū)并扔向他，導(dǎo)致其他書(shū)掉落還指責(zé)是邁克爾的錯(cuò)，隨后大笑離開(kāi)。邁克爾又氣又羞時(shí)，學(xué)校里最具運(yùn)動(dòng)天賦的拉蒙出現(xiàn)幫忙，還分享了祖母“用蜜比用醋能捉到更多蒼蠅”的道理，意思是善良比憤怒更有效。邁克爾提議讓拉蒙幫他讓弗蘭克停止欺負(fù)他，拉蒙笑著拒絕，讓他嘗試用“蜜”。拉蒙的話(huà)讓邁克爾陷入思考。第二天，邁克爾像往常一樣又要面對(duì)弗蘭克，一場(chǎng)沖突似乎即將上演。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph1:Then,suddenly,theunexpectedhappened.接著，突然，意想不到的事情發(fā)生了。弗蘭克像往常一樣氣勢(shì)洶洶地朝邁克爾走來(lái)，眼神里透著挑釁，邁克爾的心提到了嗓子眼，雙手不自覺(jué)地握緊了手中的書(shū)，準(zhǔn)備迎接即將到來(lái)的羞辱。就在弗蘭克伸手要搶奪邁克爾手中的書(shū)時(shí)，學(xué)校的保潔阿姨正拖著濕漉漉的拖把經(jīng)過(guò)，弗蘭克沒(méi)注意到地面的水漬，腳下一滑，整個(gè)人向前撲去。他不僅沒(méi)搶到邁克爾的書(shū)，還因?yàn)槭テ胶?，手中的?shū)也飛了出去，人重重地摔倒在地上。周?chē)耐瑢W(xué)發(fā)出一陣驚呼，大家都沒(méi)想到會(huì)發(fā)生這樣的意外。弗蘭克狼狽地趴在地上，滿(mǎn)臉通紅，既尷尬又憤怒。邁克爾愣住了，他原本以為今天又要被弗蘭克欺負(fù)，可眼前的場(chǎng)景讓他不知所措。他看著摔倒在地的弗蘭克，心中閃過(guò)一絲報(bào)復(fù)的念頭，但很快，拉蒙的話(huà)在他耳邊響起，他決定放下怨恨，嘗試用善良去對(duì)待弗蘭克。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph2:MichaelbentdownandquicklypickedupFrank’sbooksonthefloor.邁克爾彎下腰，迅速撿起地上弗蘭克的書(shū)。他走到弗蘭克身邊，伸手想要扶起他，輕聲說(shuō)道：“你沒(méi)事吧？剛剛摔得挺重的，有沒(méi)有受傷？”弗蘭克抬起頭，眼中滿(mǎn)是驚訝，他完全沒(méi)想到邁克爾會(huì)在這個(gè)時(shí)候幫助他，還關(guān)心他的傷勢(shì)。他猶豫了一下，握住了邁克爾的手，在邁克爾的攙扶下站了起來(lái)。“謝謝。”弗蘭克小聲地說(shuō)道，聲音里帶著一絲不自然。邁克爾微笑著說(shuō)：“不用謝，誰(shuí)都有不小心的時(shí)候?！备ヌm克看著邁克爾真誠(chéng)的笑容，心中涌起一股復(fù)雜的情緒，他想起自己以往對(duì)邁克爾的種種刁難，不禁感到有些愧疚。從那以后，弗蘭克再也沒(méi)有欺負(fù)過(guò)邁克爾，兩人之間的關(guān)系也逐漸發(fā)生了變化，他們甚至偶爾會(huì)一起聊天、玩耍，成為了朋友。邁克爾也明白了，有時(shí)候，善良比憤怒更能解決問(wèn)題，能讓原本緊張的關(guān)系變得和諧。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Then,suddenly,theunexpectedhappened.FrankwasapproachingMichaelwithhisusualaggressivelook,hiseyesfixedonMichael'sbooks.Michael'sheartwaspoundingwildly,andhebracedhimselfforanotherroundofhumiliation.JustasFrankwasabouttograbthebooksfromMichael'shands,astudentrushedbyinahurryandaccidentallybumpedintoFrank.Franklosthisbalanceandfelltotheground.Hisbooksflewoutofhishandsandscatteredalloverthefloor.Everyoneinthehallwaywasshocked.Franklayontheground,lookingembarrassedandfurious.Michaelwasstunnedforamoment.Atfirst,hethoughtthiswasagreatopportunitytotakerevengeonFrank.Butthen,herememberedRamon'swords.Hedecidedtoputasidehisangerandgivekindnessashot.14范文呈現(xiàn)MichaelbentdownandquicklypickedupFrank’sbooksonthefloor.HewalkedovertoFrankandreachedouthishand,sayingsoftly,"Areyouokay?Thatfalllookedprettybad.Didyougethurt?"FranklookedupatMichaelwithalookofdisbelief.Hecouldn'tbelievethatMichaelwashelpinghimandshowingconcernforhim.HehesitatedforamomentandthentookMichael'shand,gettingupwithMichael'shelp."Thanks,"Frankmumbled,hisvoiceabitawkward.Michaelsmiledandsaid,"You'rewelcome.Everyonehasaccidents."FranklookedatMichael'ssinceresmileandfeltatwingeofguilt.HethoughtabouthowhehadbulliedMichaelinthepast.Fromthenon,FrankneverbulliedMichaelagain.Theirrelationshipgraduallychanged,andtheyevenbecamefriends.Michaelfinallyunderstoodthatsometimes,kindnessismoreeffectivethanangerinresolvingconflicts.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Then,suddenly,theunexpectedhappened.Frank,withhischaracteristicdomineeringmanner,wasstridingtowardsMichael,hiseyesfixedonthebookstightlyheldinMichael'sarms.Michael'sheartwasracingasifitwereabouttoleapoutofhischest,andhetensedup,mentallypreparingforyetanotherroundoftorment.JustasFrankwasonthevergeofsnatchingthebooksfromMichael,astudent,whowasrunninginagreathurry,crashedintoFrankunexpectedly.Losinghisbalance,Franktumbledtotheground,andhisbooksflewoutofhishands,scatteringeverywherelikeleavesinthewind.Theentirehallwayfellintoastateofshock.ThereFranklay,hisfaceredwithamixtureofembarrassmentandanger.Michaelstoodthere,frozeninplaceforamoment.Initially,athoughtofrevengeflashedthroughhismind.However,itwasatthatverymomentthatRamon'swordsechoedinhisears,promptinghimtosuppresshisangerandgivekindnessachance.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)MichaelbentdownandswiftlypickedupFrank’sbooksonthefloor.HewalkedovertoFrankandextendedhishand,speakingsoftly,"Areyouokay?Thatlookedlikeareallyhardfall.Didyougetinjured?"FranklookedupatMichaelwitheyeswideopenindisbelief.LittledidheexpectthatMichaelwouldcometohisaidandshowconcernforhim.Afteramomentofhesitation,hetookMichael'shand