讀后續(xù)寫-貓罐頭里的溫暖：獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院的暖心故事+講義 高二上學(xué)期1月期末考試英語(yǔ)試題

expensivefood.Justthedaybefore,IhadhadaconverWhenIenteredthevethospital,theplacewasbusywithactivity.Thevetassistantwasoccupiedhelpinganothercustomer.Fortunately,sherecognizedmeandkneaskedmeifIwantedhalfacaseorathen,anothercustomepolitelysaid,“Goaheadandservethisgentleman.Meanwhile,IShelookedrelievedandsaid,"Thanks,tThegentleman,akind-lookiyouwereherebeforeme."IwavedmyhandandrepliedHejokinglyreplied,"Wow,howcanIthWithoutreallythinking,inamomentofcheerfulness,Isaid,“Youcouldbuymeacaseha."IlaughedandthenturnedtoAsIwalkedoutofthevethospital,Icouldn'thelpbuts注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。 文章大意文章講述了“我”在去當(dāng)?shù)厮幍晖局?，想起要給女兒的貓買獸醫(yī)推薦的昂貴罐裝貓糧。在獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院，忙碌的獸醫(yī)助理認(rèn)出了“我”，知道“我”所需的貓糧。這時(shí)另一位顧客進(jìn)來，“我”因不著急，便讓他先辦理業(yè)務(wù)，自己去藥店，還開玩笑說若要感謝就幫“我”買一箱貓糧。離開獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院時(shí)，“我”因這次意外互動(dòng)感到溫暖，卻不知接下來會(huì)有驚喜。故事山分析開端：“我”要給女兒的貓買昂貴的獸醫(yī)推薦的貓糧，女兒經(jīng)濟(jì)困難，“我”也負(fù)擔(dān)有壓力。發(fā)展：在獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院，“我”讓后來的顧客先辦理業(yè)務(wù)，還開玩笑說讓他買箱貓糧作為感謝。高潮（續(xù)寫部分）：10分鐘后“我”回到獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院，發(fā)現(xiàn)那位顧客真的幫“我”買了貓糧，這一情節(jié)將故事推向高潮。結(jié)局：“我”帶著貓糧回家，心中充滿感動(dòng)，領(lǐng)悟到生活中善良的互動(dòng)能帶來美好。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆：“我”與女兒的對(duì)話提及貓糧昂貴，自己負(fù)擔(dān)有壓力?；貞?yīng)：為后面顧客幫忙買貓糧，“我”的驚喜和感動(dòng)做鋪墊，突出這份幫助的珍貴。伏筆：“我”在獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院讓后來的顧客先辦理業(yè)務(wù)?；貞?yīng)：體現(xiàn)“我”的善良，促使顧客產(chǎn)生回報(bào)的想法，推動(dòng)顧客幫“我”買貓糧情節(jié)的發(fā)展。伏筆：“我”開玩笑說顧客若感謝就買箱貓糧?；貞?yīng)：顧客當(dāng)真，直接引出續(xù)寫中顧客買貓糧的情節(jié)。伏筆：“我”離開時(shí)因意外互動(dòng)感到溫暖?；貞?yīng)：與續(xù)寫中“我”收到貓糧后的感動(dòng)相呼應(yīng)，強(qiáng)化情感遞進(jìn)。伏筆：“我”說不知未來有何驚喜。回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫中顧客買貓糧就是那個(gè)驚喜，前后呼應(yīng)。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）第一段：10分鐘后“我”回到獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院，看到那位顧客還在，且旁邊放著一箱貓糧，獸醫(yī)助理告知“我”顧客已幫“我”付款，“我”十分驚訝和感動(dòng)，與顧客交流，表達(dá)感激。第二段：“我”帶著貓糧回家，迫不及待告訴女兒這個(gè)溫暖的故事，女兒也很感動(dòng)?！拔摇鄙羁腆w會(huì)到生活中不經(jīng)意的善良能帶來意想不到的美好，決定以后也要更多傳遞善意。情感線起初，“我”因負(fù)擔(dān)女兒貓咪昂貴的貓糧費(fèi)用而有些憂慮。在獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院與顧客互動(dòng)時(shí)，“我”以輕松玩笑的態(tài)度應(yīng)對(duì)，離開時(shí)感到一絲溫暖。當(dāng)10分鐘后回到醫(yī)院發(fā)現(xiàn)顧客幫“我”買了貓糧，“我”從驚訝轉(zhuǎn)為深深的感動(dòng)?；丶遗c女兒分享后，這種感動(dòng)進(jìn)一步升華，“我”意識(shí)到生活中善意的傳遞如此美好，內(nèi)心充滿對(duì)人性美好的贊美和對(duì)傳遞善意的堅(jiān)定決心。故事線“我”因女兒貓咪的昂貴貓糧經(jīng)濟(jì)有壓力，去獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院購(gòu)買。在獸醫(yī)醫(yī)院，“我”讓后來的顧客先辦理業(yè)務(wù)，并開玩笑讓他買貓糧感謝。10分鐘后“我”回到醫(yī)院，發(fā)現(xiàn)顧客真幫“我”買了貓糧?！拔摇迸c顧客交流，表達(dá)感激?！拔摇睅е埣Z回家，告訴女兒這件事?！拔摇鳖I(lǐng)悟到生活中善意傳遞的美好，決定傳遞善意。主旨升華句5句英文Thissmallactofkindnessnotonlylightenedmyfinancialburdenbutalsoreaffirmedmyfaithinthegoodnessofhumanity.這一小小的善舉不僅減輕了我的經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)，也再次堅(jiān)定了我對(duì)人性美好的信念。Theunexpectedgenerosityfromastrangertaughtmethatasimpleactofkindnesscanhaveaprofoundimpactonsomeone'slife.來自陌生人的意外慷慨讓我明白，一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的善舉能對(duì)他人的生活產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)影響。Inaworldoftenfilledwithstressandchallenges,thisexperienceremindedmeofthepowerofkindnesstobringwarmthandhope.在一個(gè)常常充滿壓力和挑戰(zhàn)的世界里，這次經(jīng)歷讓我想起善良帶來溫暖和希望的力量。Thekindnessshownbythegentlemanmademerealizethateveninthemostordinarymoments,wehavetheopportunitytomakeadifferencebybeingkind.這位先生展現(xiàn)的善良讓我意識(shí)到，即使在最平凡的時(shí)刻，我們也有機(jī)會(huì)通過善良產(chǎn)生影響。Thisheart-warmingincidentinspiredmetopayitforwardandspreadkindnesswhereverIgo,believingthatsmallactscancreateabigrippleeffect.這個(gè)暖心的事件激勵(lì)我將善意傳遞下去，無論走到哪里都傳播善良，相信小小的舉動(dòng)可以產(chǎn)生巨大的連鎖反應(yīng)。寫作示范一Ireturned10minuteslater.AsIwalkedbackintothevethospital,Inoticedthekind-lookingmanstillstandingatthecounter.Tomyastonishment,therewasacaseofcatfoodbesidehim.Thevetassistantsmiledatmeandsaid,“Thisgentlemaninsistedonbuyingthecatfoodforyouasatokenofgratitudeforyourkindness.”IwassosurprisedthatIwasatalossforwords.Ilookedattheman,andhejustsmiledandsaid,“Apromiseisapromise.”Ithankedhimprofusely,andwechattedforawhileabouttheimportanceofkindness.

Withthecaseofcatfood,Igothome.Icouldn'twaittotellmydaughterwhathadhappened.Hereyeswidenedindisbelief,andthenabigsmilespreadacrossherface.Shewasdeeplytouchedbythestranger'skindness.Thisexperiencemademerealizethatasimpleactofkindness,likelettingsomeonegoaheadinline,canleadtoawonderfulchainreaction.Italsotaughtmethatinaworldfullofchallenges,thereisalwaysroomforkindnessandunexpectedblessings.IdecidedthenandtheretobemoregenerousandspreadkindnesswhereverIcould.寫作示范二Ireturned10minuteslater.WhenIenteredthevethospital,Iwasgreetedwithasightthatmademyheartskipabeat.Thegentlemanwasstandingtherewithahugesmile,andrightnexttohimwasthecaseofcatfoodIneeded.Thevetassistantexplained,“Hewaitedforyoutocomebackandpaidforthecatfood.Hesaiditwastheleasthecoulddo.”Iwasoverwhelmedwithgratitude.Ishookhishandfirmlyandexpressedhowmuchhisgesturemeanttome.Hejustsaid,“It'samazinghowalittlekindnesscanmakeabigdifference.”

Withthecaseofcatfood,Igothome.Irushedtosharethisheart-warmingstorywithmydaughter.Shewasmovedtotears,andwebothfeltasenseofwarmthandhope.Thisencountermademeunderstandthatkindnessisauniversallanguagethatcanbridgegapsbetweenstrangers.Itdoesn'ttakemuchtobekind,buttheimpactithascanbeimmeasurable.Fromthatdayon,Imadeupmymindtobeacarrierofkindness,hopingtocreatemorebeautifulmomentslikethisintheworld.OnepossibleversionIreturned10minuteslater.WhenIwalkedbackintothevethospital,Iwasgreetedbythevetassistantwithabigsmile.Shesaid,"Youhaveaverykindgentlemanwaitingforyou."IwasabitpuzzleduntilIsawthemanwhoIhadletgoaheadofme.Hewasstandingtherewithacaseofcatfoodwithhishands.Hesmiledatme,saying"IthinkIshouldkeepmypromise.Here'syourcaseofcatfoodasathankyouforyourkindness."Iwascompletelysurprised.Ineverthoughthewouldactuallytakemyjokeseriously.Ithankedhimgenerously,andhejustshruggedandsaid,"It'stheleastIcoulddo."Wechattedforawhile,andIfoundoutthathewasalsoananimallover