讀后續(xù)寫丟失錢包故事講義-廣西柳州高中高二下學(xué)期開學(xué)考試英語試題

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。LastSaturday,Idrovebackhomefromalonghardday.Itwassnowingheavilyandthetrafficinchedslowlyforwardlikesnails.IwassohungrybecauseIskippedmylunchthatIdecidedtostopbyKFCandhadaquickbitebeforeIcontinuedmyjourneyhome.Ittookmealongtimetofindaplacetoparkmycar.Withmyfaceburiedinmycollar,Iwalkedslowlyinthesnow.Soonmyhandswerenumb(麻木)withcold,soIpulledmyglovesoutofmycoatpocketandputthemon.Iorderedsomefriedchickenanddugintomypocketformywallettopay,onlytofinditwasnotthere!IrememberedIdidbringitwithmebeforeIsetout.Embarrassed,IleftthechickenonthecounterandsaidIwouldreturninaminute.Deeplyworried,IgotoutofKFCandrantowardsmycar,wonderingwheremywallet,witheverythinginit,was.Freshsnowwaslikeablankpaper,recordingmytracks.Myattentionfixedontheground,Iexpectedtofinditonmyway.Unfortunately,whatIfoundwasonlytheshapeofitinthesnow.Obviously,IlostitwhenIpulledmyglovesout.Judgingfromthefootprintsontheground,Iwasnottheonlyone.Therewassomeoneelsejoiningmyway.Butthefootprintsofthisguyweremessy.Itseemedthathewalkedbackandforth.Myheartsank.Atalossofwhichwayhewent,IknewIcouldneverclaimmywalletback.Bye,friedchicken,nottoday.Iwalkedtowardsmycarhelplessly.Ashort,skinnymanwasstandingbymycar.Heseemedlikehomelessbecausehewasdressedinoversizedwornoutcoatandhisfacewasdirty.Hewasstampinghisfeettokeepwarm.IfeltsorryforhimbecauseIhadnothingtohelphim,nomoney,nofood.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Themannoticedmeandaskedifthiswasmycar.________________________________________________________________________________Refusingmymoney,hewasabouttoleave.________________________________________________________________________________丟失錢包故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點第一段續(xù)寫要點：詳細描述男子與“我”對話時的神態(tài)、語氣和動作，突出他的真誠與質(zhì)樸。比如，他說話時目光堅定，微笑中帶著一絲靦腆，雙手將錢包遞出時動作自然。著重刻畫“我”看到錢包失而復(fù)得時的震驚與喜悅，通過表情、語言和動作展現(xiàn)，如眼睛瞬間睜大、情不自禁地喊出聲、雙手顫抖著接過錢包。補充男子講述撿到錢包過程的細節(jié)，包括他發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包的地點、當時的想法以及如何確定是“我”的錢包，豐富故事內(nèi)容。第二段續(xù)寫要點：具體描繪男子拒絕“我”的錢時的堅決態(tài)度，如他用力擺手、眼神中透著不容置疑，同時用簡潔有力的話語表明自己的立場。深入刻畫“我”看著男子離開時的內(nèi)心感受，從最初的驚訝、感動，到對自己之前誤解他的愧疚，以及對人性善良的深刻感悟，通過內(nèi)心獨白或細微的肢體動作體現(xiàn)。增加“我”決定將這份善意傳遞下去的具體想法和計劃，如思考在生活中遇到他人需要幫助時如何主動伸出援手，為故事增添積極的意義。情感線第一段中，“我”從丟失錢包后的焦急、沮喪，到看到男子拿出錢包時的震驚與喜悅，情感大起大落。男子則始終保持著真誠善良，他幫助“我”的行為背后是純粹的熱心。第二段中，“我”對男子拒絕報酬感到意外，繼而被他的高尚品格所感動，內(nèi)心產(chǎn)生愧疚與對人性美好的深刻感悟，情感從簡單的感激升華為對善良的敬意與傳承的決心。男子離開時的決然，更凸顯他善良不求回報的品質(zhì)，強化了情感的感染力。故事線雪天趕路與饑餓：在大雪紛飛的周六，“我”駕車回家，因路途漫長且未吃午飯感到饑餓，決定在KFC稍作停留。發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包丟失：在KFC點餐時，“我”發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包不見，回憶起可能是掏手套時掉落，匆忙跑出尋找，卻只看到錢包在雪地上的印記和凌亂腳印，判斷已被他人撿走。遇陌生男子：“我”無奈返回車旁，看到一個看似無家可歸的男子站在車邊，他穿著破舊、面容骯臟，正跺腳取暖。錢包失而復(fù)得：男子主動與“我”搭話，確認車是“我”的后，從口袋拿出錢包歸還，稱撿到后根據(jù)車判斷歸屬。男子拒絕報酬：“我”拿出錢感謝男子，他堅決拒絕，稱幫助“我”并非為錢，而是理解丟失重要物品的感受。感悟與決心：男子離開后，“我”深受觸動，意識到自己誤解了他，決定將這份善意傳遞下去，對人性善良有了新的信念。主旨升華句Thisencounterwiththekindheartedmanvividlydemonstratesthattruegoodnessknowsnoboundariesofappearanceorsocialstatus,andasimpleactofkindnesscanhaveaprofoundimpactonsomeone'slife.（與這位善良男子的相遇生動地表明，真正的善良不受外表或社會地位的限制，一個簡單的善舉就能對他人的生活產(chǎn)生深遠影響。）Throughthelostandfoundofthewallet,welearnthatinaworldoftenfilledwithuncertainty,therearestillcountlessindividualswhoseselflessactsofkindnesscanrestoreourfaithinhumanityandwarmourhearts.（通過錢包的失而復(fù)得，我們了解到，在一個常常充滿不確定性的世界里，仍有無數(shù)人無私的善舉能夠恢復(fù)我們對人性的信心，溫暖我們的心靈。）Thistouchingstoryservesasapowerfulreminderthatourinitialjudgmentsbasedonappearancescanbegrosslywrong,andweshouldalwaysbeopentotheunexpectedkindnessthatexistswithineverypersonwemeet.（這個感人的故事有力地提醒我們，我們基于外表的最初判斷可能大錯特錯，我們應(yīng)該始終對遇到的每個人身上存在的意外善意保持開放的心態(tài)。）Intheend,theman'sactofreturningthewalletteachesusthatkindnessisnotaboutseekingrewardsbutaboutthepureintentiontohelpothers,anditisthisselflessspiritthatmakestheworldabetterplace.（最終，男子歸還錢包的行為告訴我們，善良不是為了尋求回報，而是出于幫助他人的純粹意愿，正是這種無私的精神讓世界變得更美好。）Thestoryofthelostwalletshowsthateveninthecoldestofcircumstances,bothliterallyandmetaphorically,thewarmthofhumankindnesscanshinethrough,inspiringustopayitforwardandcreateamorepassionatesociety.（丟失錢包的故事表明，即使在最寒冷的環(huán)境中，無論是字面上還是隱喻上，人性善良的溫暖都能閃耀光芒，激勵我們將善意傳遞下去，創(chuàng)造一個更具同情心的社會。）寫作示范一（細膩情感風）第一段續(xù)寫Themannoticedmeandaskedifthiswasmycar.Hisvoicewasroughbutgentle,andhelookedatmewithkindeyes.Inodded,stillabitdazed.Then,withabigsmile,hereachedintohispocketandpulledoutmywallet.“Ifoundthisonthegroundoverthere.Sawyouwalkingaroundlookingworried,soIguesseditmightbeyours.Andsincethisisyourcar,Iwasprettysure,”heexplained,hiswordsflowingsmoothly.Iwasstunned.Myeyeswidenedindisbelief,andmyhandstrembledasItookthewalletfromhim.“Ohmygod,Ican'tbelieveit!Thankyousomuch!”Iexclaimed,myvoicefilledwithjoyandrelief.Iquicklyopenedthewallettocheck,andeverythingwasthere,justasIhadleftit.IwassogratefulthatIwantedtodosomethingtoshowmyappreciation.第二段續(xù)寫Refusingmymoney,hewasabouttoleave.HefirmlyshookhisheadwhenIofferedhimsomecash,hiseyesserious.“No,no.Ididn'tdothisformoney.I'vebeenintoughsituationsbefore,andIknowhowitfeelstolosesomethingimportant.Ijustwantedtohelp,”hesaid.Iwatchedhimasheturnedtowalkaway,histhinfiguredisappearingintothesnow.Ifeltalumpforminginmythroat.IrealizedhowwrongIhadbeentojudgehimbyhisappearance.Hemighthavelookedlikeahomelessman,buthisheartwasfullofgold.Istoodthereforawhile,reflectingonthisunexpectedactofkindness.Idecidedthatfromthenon,Iwouldalwaysbemoreopenmindedandreadytohelpothers,justlikehehadhelpedme.Igotintomycar,feelinganewsenseofwarmthandpurpose,determinedtopaythiskindnessforwardineverywayIcould.寫作示范二（簡潔明快風）第一段續(xù)寫Themannoticedmeandaskedifthiswasmycar.Inodded,confused.Thenhetookoutmywallet.“Founditontheground.Thoughtitwasyours,”hesaidsimply.Iwasshockedandhappy.“Thankyousomuch!”Isaid,takingthewallet.Iwantedtogivehimmoney,butherefused.“Notformoney.Justwantedtohelp,”hesaid.第二段續(xù)寫Refusingmymoney,hewasabouttoleave.Iwatchedhimgo,feelingashamedforthinkinghewasjustahomelessguy.Hiskindnesschangedmyview.IdecidedtohelpotherswheneverIcould.Thissmallactofkindnessmademeseetheworlddifferently.Igotinmycar,readytospreadthiswarmth.參考答案Themannoticedmeandaskedifthiswasmycar.SurprisedasIwas,Inodded,waitingforwhathewasgoingtosay.Heseemedexcited,directlyingcloserandquicklytakingoutawallet,whichIknewwasmineatthefirstglance.Icouldn’tstopstaringatthesurprisingpacket.IknewIwouldn’tsaygoodbyetomyfriedchickentod