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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Lastsummer,agroupofhigh-schoolstudents,includingme,volunteeredtoparticipateinanenvironmentalprotectionprojectinaremotemountainousarea.Themomentwearrived,wewereattractedbythebreathtakingsceneryofthemountainscoveredwiththickforestsandtheclearstreamswindingthroughthevalleys.Ourtaskwastocleanupthegarbageleftbytouristsintheforestandraiseenvironmentalawarenessamongthelocalvillagers.Atfirst,everythingwentsmoothly.Weworkedingroups,pickingupplasticbottles,paperbags,andotherwaste.Thelocalvillagerswerefriendlyandshowedgreatinterestinourproject.However,oneday,whileweweredeepintheforest,asuddenheavyrainstormhit.Therainpoureddownsoheavilythatthesmallstreamsquicklyturnedintoragingtorrents.Wetriedtofindasafeplacetotakeshelter,butthepathwecamefromwasalreadyflooded.Worsestill,someofthegroupmemberswerestartingtopanic.注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Astheraincontinuedtopour,IknewIhadtostaycalmandcomeupwithaplan.___________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Afterwhatseemedlikeages,therainfinallystopped.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________環(huán)境保護(hù)項目故事的續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(兩段)?第一段:?詳細(xì)描述“我”在暴雨中迅速冷靜的心理過程,如“我深吸一口氣,努力讓狂跳的心平靜下來,大腦飛速運轉(zhuǎn),深知此刻必須保持清醒,為大家找到出路”。?具體展現(xiàn)召集團(tuán)隊成員時的動作與呼喊,“我揮舞著手臂,大聲呼喊:‘大家別慌,都到我這里來!’聲音在暴雨中略顯沙啞,但充滿力量,隊員們紛紛聚攏過來”。?著重刻畫發(fā)現(xiàn)洞穴后的決策與行動,包括帶領(lǐng)大家前往洞穴時的艱難行進(jìn),“我指著不遠(yuǎn)處的洞穴,喊道:‘那里有個山洞,我們?nèi)ツ抢锒阌?!’大家手拉手,艱難地在湍急水流中前行,水幾乎沒過膝蓋,每一步都充滿艱辛,不時有人險些滑倒,但憑借相互扶持,最終抵達(dá)洞穴”。?深入描寫在洞穴內(nèi)的應(yīng)對措施,如收集雨水時對防水袋的使用方式、檢查成員傷勢的細(xì)致動作,“我拿出防水袋,教大家撐開袋子接雨水,同時逐一檢查隊員們的身體狀況,輕輕詢問是否有疼痛或不適,確保每個人都安然無恙”。?第二段:?生動描繪雨停后陽光初現(xiàn)時的場景,“陽光像利劍般穿透云層,灑在濕漉漉的森林里,樹葉上的水珠閃爍著光芒,仿佛在宣告艱難時刻即將過去”。?具體闡述走出洞穴后看到森林慘狀時的反應(yīng),如隊員們的表情、話語,“我們小心翼翼地走出洞穴,眼前的景象讓大家倒吸一口涼氣。隊員們紛紛發(fā)出感慨:‘這雨可把森林折騰慘了?!凵裰型嘎冻鰣远ǎ瑳]有絲毫退縮之意”。?著重刻畫清理垃圾和新debris的行動過程,包括分工合作的細(xì)節(jié),“我們迅速分工,一部分人清理倒下的樹枝,一部分人撿起被雨水沖刷出的垃圾。大家干勁十足,有的用樹枝當(dāng)工具,有的直接用手撿起垃圾,汗水和雨水交織在一起”。?深入描寫當(dāng)?shù)卮迕窦尤牒蟮膮f(xié)作場景,以及最終森林恢復(fù)后的景象,“當(dāng)?shù)卮迕窨吹轿覀兊男袆樱布娂娂尤?。大家齊心協(xié)力,森林逐漸恢復(fù)生機,樹木重新煥發(fā)出綠意,溪流再次清澈見底,仿佛之前的災(zāi)難從未發(fā)生過”。?情感線(150字)?暴雨來襲,團(tuán)隊從最初的順利工作轉(zhuǎn)為極度恐慌,“我”作為核心迅速冷靜下來,安撫大家并帶領(lǐng)尋找安全處,此時團(tuán)隊成員從慌亂到逐漸安心。雨停后,看到森林的糟糕狀況,大家雖感震驚但堅定決心,隨著村民加入,大家齊心協(xié)力,情感從擔(dān)憂轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)榉e極樂觀,最終因共同努力讓森林恢復(fù)而充滿成就感,深刻體會到團(tuán)結(jié)和保護(hù)自然的意義。?故事線(6條)?去年夏天,包括“我”在內(nèi)的一群高中生志愿者前往偏遠(yuǎn)山區(qū)參與環(huán)境保護(hù)項目,被當(dāng)?shù)孛谰拔?項目初期進(jìn)展順利,志愿者分組清理森林垃圾,與當(dāng)?shù)卮迕裼押媒涣鳌?一天,在森林深處突遭暴雨,小溪變成洪流,來時道路被淹,部分成員恐慌。?“我”冷靜下來,帶領(lǐng)團(tuán)隊找到洞穴躲避,在洞穴內(nèi)收集雨水并檢查成員狀況。?雨停后,志愿者們看到森林一片狼藉,決定清理新debris和原有垃圾,當(dāng)?shù)卮迕窦尤肫渲小?經(jīng)過大家共同努力,森林恢復(fù)往日美麗,環(huán)境保護(hù)項目不僅改善了環(huán)境,還增進(jìn)了社區(qū)凝聚力。?主旨升華句5句英文?Thischallengingexperiencevividlydemonstratesthatinthefaceofnature'sfury,unityandafirmcommitmenttoenvironmentalprotectioncantransformdespairintohopeandrestorethebeautyofournaturalworld.?這段充滿挑戰(zhàn)的經(jīng)歷生動地表明,在大自然的憤怒面前,團(tuán)結(jié)一心以及對環(huán)境保護(hù)的堅定承諾能夠?qū)⒔^望轉(zhuǎn)化為希望,恢復(fù)我們自然世界的美麗。?Throughthisadventure,welearnthatenvironmentalprotectionisnotjustataskbutacollectiveresponsibilitythatbindsustogether,enablingustoovercomedifficultiesandsafeguardourpreciousecosystems.?通過這次冒險,我們明白環(huán)境保護(hù)不僅僅是一項任務(wù),更是一種將我們緊密相連的集體責(zé)任,使我們能夠克服困難,保護(hù)我們珍貴的生態(tài)系統(tǒng)。?Thejourneyfromasuddenrainstormthatthreatenedtoderailourprojecttothesuccessfulrestorationoftheforestshowcasesthepowerofperseveranceandtheprofoundimpactofcommunitycooperationinenvironmentalconservation.?從一場可能使我們項目脫軌的突如其來的暴雨,到森林的成功恢復(fù),這段歷程展示了堅持不懈的力量以及社區(qū)合作在環(huán)境保護(hù)中的深遠(yuǎn)影響。?Thisnarrativeservesasapoignantreminderthatouractions,nomatterhowsmall,canhaveasignificantimpactontheenvironment,andwhenweworktogether,wecancreateamoresustainableandbeautifulworld.?這個故事有力地提醒我們,我們的行動,無論多么微小,都能對環(huán)境產(chǎn)生重大影響,當(dāng)我們齊心協(xié)力時,我們能夠創(chuàng)造一個更可持續(xù)、更美好的世界。?Fromtheinitialenthusiasmforenvironmentalprotectiontotheunwaveringdeterminationinthefaceofadversityandtheultimateachievementofacleanerforest,weseethateveryeffortcountsandthatourlovefornaturecanovercomeanyobstacle.?從最初對環(huán)境保護(hù)的熱情,到在逆境中堅定不移的決心,再到最終實現(xiàn)森林的清潔,我們看到每一份努力都有價值,我們對自然的熱愛能夠克服任何障礙。?寫作示范一?Paragraph1:?Astheraincontinuedtopour,IknewIhadtostaycalmandcomeupwithaplan.Itookadeepbreath,tryingtosteadymynerves.Lookingaround,Ispottedalargecavenotfaraway.Iquicklygatheredthegroup,shouting,“Everyone,followmetothatcave!It'sourbestchancetostaysafe.”Weformedahumanchain,holdingtightlytoeachother.Thewaterwasrisingfast,andthecurrentwasstrong,butwemanagedtoreachthecave.Onceinside,wewereshiveringfromthecold.Isuggestedwehuddletogetherforwarmthanduseourbackpackstocreateabarrieragainstthewind.Wealsocheckedoneachother,makingsurenoonewashurt.?Paragraph2:?Afterwhatseemedlikeages,therainfinallystopped.Thesunpeekedthroughtheclouds,castingawarmglowovertheforest.Westeppedoutofthecave,shockedbythesight.Theforestwasamess,withfallentreesanddebriseverywhere.Butwedidn'tloseheart.Wedecidedtostartcleaninguprightaway.Justthen,thelocalvillagersarrived.Theywereimpressedbyourdeterminationandjoinedus.Together,weworkedhard,clearingthebranchesandpickingupthegarbage.Bytheendoftheday,theforestwasstartingtolookbeautifulagain.Ourprojectnotonlycleanedtheforestbutalsobroughtthecommunitycloser,makingusallmoreawareoftheimportanceofprotectingnature.?寫作示范二?Paragraph1:?Astheraincontinuedtopour,IknewIhadtostaycalmandcomeupwithaplan.Icalledouttomyteammates,myvoicefirm,“Weneedtostaytogetherandfindshelter.”Scanningthearea,Isawalargecaveonasmallhill.Ipointedandsaid,“Thatcave!Let'sgo.”Welinkedarmsandslowlymadeourwaythroughtherisingwater.Someteammemberswerestillpanicking,butweencouragedeachother.Onceinthecave,Isaid,“Let'suseourwaterproofsheetstocollectrainwater.Wemightneeditlater.”Wealsosharedouremergencysnackstokeepourenergyupandcheckedforanyinjuries.?Paragraph2:?Afterwhatseemedlikeages,therainfinallystopped.Thesunlightfilteredthroughthetrees,makingtheforestlookmagical.Weemergedfromthecave,determinedtocleanupthemess.Theforestwasfilledwithfallenbranchesandmud.Butwewerenotdeterred.Westartedbyremovingthelargebranchesblockingthepaths.Thelocalvillagers,whohadbeenwatching,joinedus.Witheveryone'shelp,weworkedefficiently.Bytheendoftheday,theforestwasalmostbacktoitsoriginalstate.Thisexperiencetaughtusthateveninthefaceofdifficulties,ourcommitmenttoenvironmentalprotectioncouldmakeadifference,andthepowerofcommunitywasinvaluable.?參考答案Astheraincontinuedtopour,IknewIhadtostaycalmandcomeupwithaplan.First,Igatheredeveryonetogetherandtoldthemtostaypositive.Then,Irememberedthatwehadamapoftheareainourbackpack.Iquicklytookitoutandstudieditcarefully.Afterawhile,If

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