2025屆浙江溫州高三二模英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫范文講解課件

南瓜的秘密溫州市普通高中高三第二次適應(yīng)性考試

2025屆高考備考沖刺：讀后續(xù)寫-親情篇I’dalwaysbeentoldtotakecareofmyolderbrother,Brian,whowasbornweakandsmall.I’doftentiehisshoesorprepareanotherglassofwaterforhim.MymomsawmylargersizeandstrongbodyasasignthatIwastobeakindofguardianangelforBrian.However,thatwasnotthecase.Onedayourschoolsponsoredapumpkin-carvingcontest.Firstprizewas$100,andIknewjusthowIwouldspendit.Therewasabrand-newgameIwasdyingtoown.SoIdecidedthefirst-placebonusdefinitelyhadtolandinmypocket.WhenIhadtocarvetheperfectpumpkinI’dpickedout,itdawnedonmethatwithmybigclumsyfingersI’dsurelyscrewitup.IthoughtofBrian’ssmaller,delicatehandsandknewhewasthemanforthejob.IimmediatelybeggedBrian.Unexpectedly,heaskedforacut.Thatwasfifty-fifty.Quicklydoingthemathinmyhead,IfiguredoutevenifIsplitthefirstprize,I’dstillhaveenoughcashforthegame.SoIgaveintoBrian’sdemands.Withskillfulhands,Briancarvedtheperfectface,andnowwehadthebestpumpkinever.“我”從小被教導(dǎo)要照顧體弱多病的哥哥Brian。在學(xué)校舉辦的南瓜雕刻比賽中，為了購(gòu)買游戲，我渴望獲得第一名并得到100美元的獎(jiǎng)金。因?yàn)槲冶容^笨拙，所以我說(shuō)服手藝精巧的布萊恩幫忙雕刻，并答應(yīng)平分獎(jiǎng)金。Thentheunexpectedhappened:Wecameinsecond.Unfortunately,secondprizewasonly$50,andIneededeverypennyofthattobuythegame.Thedayoftheawardsceremony,theprincipalhandedoverthemoneytomebecauseBrianwashome,sickwithacold.Ifhereallywantedtowin,hewouldhavebeenheretoday,Ithoughttomyself,justifyingstealingthecashfromunderpoorBrian’srunnynose.Withhardlyathought,Irantothestoreandboughtmydreamgame.ThatnightwhenBrianaskedifwehadwon,Idenied,afraidtolookintohiseyes.ThewholethingwasnevermentionedagainuntilthedaywhenBrianwaspackingforcollege.IplayedmyusualroleinhelpinghimpackwhenIcameacrossanoldalbumfilledwithphotoshehadtakenastheschoolphotographer.然而，意外發(fā)生了，我們只獲得第二名，只有50美元的獎(jiǎng)金，我獨(dú)吞了獎(jiǎng)金，并對(duì)生病的哥哥撒謊。Para.1Iwasenjoyingthephotoswhenonecaughtmyeye.Para.2“Youactuallyknewanddidn'tsayanything?”Iwasshocked.Paragraph1:

照片內(nèi)容——回憶涌現(xiàn)——決定詢問(wèn)Paragraph2:哥哥解釋——內(nèi)疚感激——頓悟“守護(hù)天使”的含義(1)Sb

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…….(5)某人既XX感情又XX感情，某人做了某事。(6)一……,就

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.讀后續(xù)寫常用句型：(11)DeterminedtodoA,sbdidB.(12)Awaveof感情名詞surgedthroughme./感情

名詞washedoversb.(13)So感情形容詞wassbthat+句子.(14)Neverhadsbdonesth.(15)Barelycouldsbwaittodosth.(16)Atthatmoment,itdawnedonmethat+句子(17)Untilthendidsbrealizethat+句子.(18)sb.did1,did2anddid3三連動(dòng)(11)決心要做A,某人做了B.(12)某感情席卷某人.(13)某人太.......，以至于……。(14)某人從沒(méi)做過(guò).(15)某人等不及做某事(16)在那一刻，某人意識(shí)到……(17)直到那一刻，某人才意識(shí)到...短語(yǔ):1.handsbsth=handsthtosb

把某物遞給某人2.catchsightof...看到...... 3.Myheartskippedabeat.

我的心漏跳了一拍4.Thebloodrushedtomyfacewithembarrassment我因?qū)擂味鴿M臉通紅5.walkovertosb走向某人

6.Hisgazefellon... 他的目光落在…..上

7.givemyshoulderareassuringpat

輕輕拍我的肩膀以示安慰

8.lookstraightintosb'seyes 直視某人的

9.Mythroattightened我的喉嚨收緊了。

10.Wordfailedme.我一句話也說(shuō)不出來(lái)，

11.pullsbclose把某人拉近12.strokemyheadinasoothinggesture

用手輕輕撫摸我的頭以示安慰13.tolerance寬容14.forgiveness原諒feelmyheartpoundingwildly感到我的心狂跳不止patmyshoulder拍我的肩膀

Afterwhatseemedtobeacentury似乎過(guò)了一個(gè)世紀(jì)后summon/muster

thecourage鼓起勇氣one’sfaceflushed臉漲得通紅containone’semotions抑制某人情緒throwoneselfintoone’sarms撲進(jìn)某人的懷抱Tearsofguiltandgratitudeblurredone’seyes愧疚與感激的淚水模糊了某人的雙眼UntilthendidIrealizethat

直到那時(shí)我才意識(shí)到Neverhadsbdonesth某人從未做過(guò)Allthememoriescameflashingback所有記憶如潮水般涌來(lái)照片里，我站在舞臺(tái)上，校長(zhǎng)正把錢遞給我(用原文原句)。

(Sb.didsth,獨(dú)立主格)看到這的瞬間，我的心狂跳不止，臉漲得通紅。(Themoment/instantsb.didsth.,sb.did.)

我從未想過(guò)他會(huì)知道獎(jiǎng)金的事，畢竟他當(dāng)時(shí)在家，感冒生病(用原文原句)。

(Neverhadsb.thoughtsb.woulddosth.)Inthepicture,Istoodonthestage,theprincipalhandingoverthemoneytome.ThemomentIcaughtsightofit,Ifeltmyheartpoundingwildlyandmyfaceflushed.

NeverhadIthoughtthathewouldknowabouttheprizesincehewashomethen,sickwithacold.Paragragh1:所有記憶如潮水般涌來(lái)——布萊恩如何雕刻南瓜，我如何承諾平分獎(jiǎng)金，又如何自私地獨(dú)占并對(duì)他撒謊。

(sth.cameflashingback)一陣強(qiáng)烈的愧疚感席卷了我，我感到血液涌上臉頰。(withsthdoing/done,sbdid)

Brain注意到了我的異常行為，便走過(guò)來(lái)，他的目光落在了那張照片上。(HavingdoneA,sbdidB)似乎過(guò)了一個(gè)世紀(jì)后，我鼓起勇氣轉(zhuǎn)向布萊恩，緩緩舉起照片。(Afterwhatseemedtobeacentury,sb.did1,did2anddid3)

Allthememoriescameflashingback—howBriancarvedthepumpkin,howIpromisedtosplittheprize,howIselfishlytookthemoneyandhowIliedtohim.Withawaveofguiltwashingoverme,Ifeltthebloodrushingtomyface.Afterwhatseemedtobeacentury,Isummonedmycourage,turnedtoBrianandslowlyraisedthephoto.Havingnoticedmyunusualbehaviour,Brainwalkedovertomeandhisgazefellonthephoto.Paragragh1:布萊恩拍拍我的肩膀，輕聲說(shuō)道：“我很遺憾沒(méi)能幫你贏得一等獎(jiǎng)，也知道如果錯(cuò)過(guò)新游戲你會(huì)非常失望?！?/p>

(Sb.didsth,sayingina...voice,“...”)聽(tīng)到這里，我的喉嚨發(fā)緊，說(shuō)不出話來(lái)。

(Hearing...,sb.didsth.)Brianpattedmyshoulder,sayinginagentlevoice,“Ifeltsorrythatlcouldn’thelpyouwinthefirstprize,andIknewyouwouldbedeadlydisappointedifyoumissedthenewgame.”Hearingthis,Ifeltmythroattightenedandwordsfailedme.情緒再也無(wú)法抑制，我撲進(jìn)他的懷抱，緊緊抱住他，愧疚與感激的淚水模糊了我的雙眼。(Adj.,sb.didsth.,withsth.doing.)

Unabletocontainmyemotions,Ithrewmyselfintohisarmsandhuggedhimtightly,withtearsofguiltandgratitudeblurringmyeyes.Paragragh2:我深吸一口氣，凝視著他的眼睛(與前文不敢直視呼應(yīng))，終于鼓起勇氣說(shuō)：“對(duì)不起，Brian，我太自私了?！?doing,sbdid.)Drawingadeepbreathandlookingintohiseyes,Ifinallymusteredthecourage,“I’msorry,Brian.Iwassoselfish.”直到那時(shí)我才意識(shí)到Brain也是我的守護(hù)天使，用他的寬容和原諒守護(hù)著我。（UntilthendidIrealizethatsbdid,doingsth)UntilthendidIrealizethatBrainwasmyguardianangeltoo,guardingmewithhistoleranceandforgiveness.Paragragh2:Para1:Iwasenjoyingthephotoswhenonecaughtmyeye.

Inthepicture,Istoodonthestage,theprincipalhandingoverthemoneytome.

ThemomentIcaughtsightofit,Ifeltmyheartpoundingwildlyandmyfaceflushed.NeverhadIthoughtthathewouldknowabouttheprizesincehewashomethen,sickwithacold.Allthememoriescameflashingback—howBriancarvedthepumpkin,howIpromisedtosplittheprize,howIselfishlytookthemoneyandhowIliedtohim.Withawaveofguiltwashingoverme,Ifeltthebloodrushingtomyface.Havingnoticedmyunusualbehaviour,Brainwalkedovertomeandhisgaz