2026屆新高考英語熱點復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫VIP

2026屆新高考英語熱點復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫Inaquiethome,ayounggirlnamedEmilysatatherpiano,herfingersdancingacrossthekeyswithlovethatoftenleftherinaworldofherown.Hermother,astrictwomanwithhighexpectations,alwaysrequiredhertofocusonherstudies.Musicwasaluxurytheycouldn'tafford,she'dsay."Emily,youneedtostopthisdaydreamingandconcentrateonyourmath,”hermotherwoulddemand,withaseriouslookonherface.Emily'sheartwouldsinkathermother'swords.Oneday,Emilygatheredthecouragetoplayapieceshehadcreatedforhermother.Herfingersshookasshebegan,pouringhersoulintoeverynote.“Mom,Iwantyoutohearthis,"Emilysaidinalowvoice.Hermother,buriedinherwork,hardlylookedup."Canitwait,dear?I'mquitebusy."Emily'sfingersfrozeonthekeys,herheartachingwithhermother'swords.Shewantedtoshout,tomakehermotherunderstandtheimportanceofmusicinherlife,butthewordscaughtinherthroat.Instead,shequietlyclosedthepianolidandreturnedtoherroom,herunappreciatedsongechoing(回響)inhermind.Thatnight,asEmilylayinbed,thesilencewasdeafening,andhertearsrolleddown.Shefeltalone,withherdreamsbeingasecretinherheart.Thenextmorning,sheawoketothesoundofhermother'ssoftknockonthedoor.Thedoorcrackedopen,andEmily'smotherstoodtheresilently.

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原文分析

描述了一個熱愛音樂的女孩Emily與嚴格要求她學(xué)習(xí)的母親之間的沖突，以及Emily試圖通過音樂表達自己情感和夢想的故事。?Emily熱愛音樂，但母親認為音樂是負擔不起的奢侈，要求她專注于學(xué)習(xí)。?Emily鼓起勇氣為母親演奏自己創(chuàng)作的曲子，但遭到母親的忽視。?第二天，母親敲響Emily的門，暗示了可能的轉(zhuǎn)折。2.續(xù)寫邏輯

?第一段續(xù)寫（Para1）母親在第二天敲響了Emily的門，這為續(xù)寫提供了切入點。這一段重點描述母親進入Emily房間的情景，通過母親的表情、動作、語言表示她內(nèi)心的后悔和想要和解的意愿。?第二段續(xù)寫（Para2）通過Emily的淚水表達了她的期望和理解，同時母親的話語表達了對Emily情感的理解和支持，進一步展開了母女之間的對話和情感交流，為故事畫上了圓滿的句號。

Thedoorcrackedopen,andEmily'smotherstoodtheresilently.Herexpressionwassofterthanusual,asignofconcernetchedonherface.Shehesitatedforamomentbeforespeaking,hervoicegentleandunexpected."Emily,Iheardyouplayinglastnight.Itwasbeautiful.Ididn'trealizehowmuchmusicmeanttoyou.MaybeI'vebeentoohardonyou,pushingyouonlytowardsschooling.”Hearingwhathermothersaid,Emilywassocheerfulthatshealmostjumpedup，withtearsfillinghereyes.Possibleversion1:

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Shehadneverimaginedhermotherwouldacknowledgeherpassionsosincerely."Mom,thankyou,"shewhispered,hertearssparkingoutwithemotion."Ilovestudying,butmusicismysoul.It'swhereIfindpeaceandjoy."Hermothernodded,wearingasmileatherlips."Thenlet'sfindawaytobalanceboth.Youcancontinuewithyourstudies,butalsopursueyourmusic.Iwantyoutobehappy."Emily'sheartswelledwithgratitudeasshehuggedhermothertightly,feelinganewfoundsenseofunityandsupport.Possibleversion1:

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Thedoorcrackedopen,andEmily'smotherstoodtheresilently.ShewalkedslowlytoEmily'sbedsideandsatdown,hereyesfilledwithregret."Emily,"shesaidsoftly,"I'msorryforbeingsoignorantyesterday.Ididn'trealizehowmuchmusicmeanttoyouandhowpassionateyouareaboutmusic,andIrealizeI'vebeentoofocusedongradesandpracticalmatters."ShereachedoutandgentlystrokedEmily'shair."Ilistenedtothemusicyoumadeofthatpiece,anditwasbeautiful.Youhaveagift,andIshouldhavesupportedyou.“Herwordswerelikeawarmbreeze,breakingthroughthechillthathadsettledoverEmily'sheart.Possibleversion2:

TearsofunderstandingandhopewelledupinEmily'seyes.Shethrewherarmsaroundhermother,feelingawarmthandacceptance."Thankyou,Mom,"shewhispered,hervoicechokedwithgratitude.Hermothersmiledandpromisedtobemoreunderstandingtogiveherspacetopursuemusic.Fromthenon,thepianointhelivingroombecameasymboloftheirnewconnection,withEmilyplayingfreelyashermotherlistenedcarefully,thehousenowwasfilledwiththeharmonioussoundofdreams.Importantly,theyfoundawaytokeepabalancebetweenmusicandstudy.描寫“開心，高興”

形容詞：happy,glad,delighted,enjoyable,joyful,pleased,cheerful,overjoyed,lighthearted,副詞：happily,gladly,merrily,joyfully,cheerfully名詞：happinessdelight,enjoyment,joy,pleasure,高頻語塊

1.toone’sdelight/joy令某人開心的是2.inagoodmood心情很好3.incheerful/highspirits心情愉快4.onthetopoftheworld心滿意足5.beseizedbyjoy快樂起來6.beovercomewithhappiness非常高興7.bewildwithdelight欣喜若狂

8.bedelightedat對...很高興9.bejoyfulover/about

因...而高興10.beassweetashoney像蜜一樣甜11.dancewithjoy高興地雀躍12.brightenone'sheart使某人心情愉快13.grinfromeartoear滿面笑容14.roarwithlaughter放聲大笑15.beamwithpleasure喜不自勝請運用以上必備單詞或高頻語塊，把下面的語篇補充完整。

Learningthechildren’sidea,Mrs.Meredithwasso

1

(高興的)thatshesmiledbrightly.Then,thechildrengotdowntopreparingpopcorn

2

(高興地).Withabasketofpopcorn,theyleftfortheBernard’s

3

(高興地)

tosharewithBernardthegoodplan.Hearingwhattheysaid,Bernard4

(高興地雀躍),withtearsfillinghiseyes.Atthesightofthebasketofpopcorn,hisparentswerealso5

(非常高興).Later,

6

(另他非常高興的是),thepopcornwassotastythatitsoonsoldout.

Hesoonreturned,hiswholeface

7

(高興得滿臉通紅).8

（笑聲在房間里縈繞）Learningthechildren’sidea,Mrs.Meredithwasso

overjoyed

thatshesmiledbrightly.Then,thechildrengotdowntopreparingpopcorn

cheerfully.Withabasketofpopcorn,theyleftfortheBernard’s

joyfully

tosharewithBernardthegoodplan.Hearingwhattheysaid,Bernard

dancedwithjoy,withtearsfillinghiseyes.Atthesightofthebasketofpopcorn,hisparents

werealsoseizedwithjoy.Later,

muchtohisdelight,thepopcornwassotastythatitsoonsoldout.Hesoonreturned,hiswholeface

beamingwithdelight.

Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.描寫“開心，高興”1.得知……，她非常高興，她笑得很燦爛。Learning…，shewassodelightedthatshesmiledbrightly.2.聽到…的話，她高興地幾乎跳了起來，熱淚盈眶。Hearingwhatsbsaid，shewassocheerfulthatshealmostjumpedup，withtearsfillinghereyes.3.當媽媽親吻他時，小baby開心極了。

Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,

hisface

beamed(堆滿笑容)andhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.

(笑容照亮房間)4.他給了我一個熊抱，露出他平常露齒的微笑。Hegavemeabearhug,revealinghisusualtoothysmile.5．她一言不發(fā)，卻是一副水汪汪的笑容，緊緊地握住了我的手。Shedidn’tsayaword,butsmiledawaterysmileandheldmyhandtightly.6．他聽到這個令人滿意的結(jié)果后，一種喜悅和幸福的感覺涌上心頭。Afterhelearnedthissatisfactoryresult,asenseofjoyandhappinessfloodedoverhim.即時訓(xùn)練描寫你演講比賽獲得第一名的興奮開心。IwasexcitedwhenIwonthefirstprizeinthespeechcontest.WhenthehostannouncedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthespeechcontest,Ifeltasenseofexcitementanddelightwellingupinmyheartandsurgingthroughme.Itookadeepbreath,raisedmyheadandwalkedtotheplatform.“Forthisaward,Iamverygratefultomyteachersandclassmatesfortheirencouragement.”Isaidinanexcitedvoice,withtearsfillingmyeyes.Possibleversion1:

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ItwasannouncedthatIwonthefirstprize.Learningthesatisfactoryresult,asenseofexcitementfloodedoverme,withtearsrollingdownmycheeks.Myfrie