《寫作四六級(jí)加分句》PPT課件.ppt

1、四六級(jí)作文,Tips,構(gòu)思簡(jiǎn)單，少犯錯(cuò)誤。外語(yǔ)考試的作文，考查的目標(biāo)不是考生的思維水平或邏輯分析能力，而是考核語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。所以建議采取的措施是，簡(jiǎn)化自己的思維和分析。也就是，如何降低自己的思維水平，來迎合自己有限的語(yǔ)言狀況。 語(yǔ)言上，關(guān)鍵在于變化，變化不分難易，只要有變化就行。變化分為詞的變化、句的變化。在用詞上，同一文章中，相同意義的詞要爭(zhēng)取不斷的用近義詞替換。 廣大考生可以靈活運(yùn)用寫作套路，比如上課時(shí)候?qū)W的一些經(jīng)典句型或結(jié)構(gòu)?，F(xiàn)在的作文大多還是提綱式的文章，可以把提綱變?yōu)橹行木浞旁诿慷蔚拈_頭，后面加上由邏輯詞鏈接的分支觀點(diǎn)。這就是所謂的老路新走，不變應(yīng)萬變。,Theme: 選題得當(dāng)，主題

2、突出。 Tense: 動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)要正確、一致、變化合理 Sentence pattern: 句型要盡量多樣化。 Punctuation: 正確適時(shí)使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。 Logical: 內(nèi)容要符合邏輯。 Ambiguity: 盡量不去使用可能引起歧義的詞語(yǔ)或句子。,1句子成分殘缺不全,We always working till late at night before taking exams. We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams We should read books may b

3、e useful to us. We should read books which may be useful to us.,While observing characters in classic novels going up and down can definitely learn essential life ethics.,2句子成分多余,This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. One test ends, but another is waiting for you. The driver

4、 of the red car was died on the spot. The driver of the red car died on the spot.,Sometimes they are difficult to understand them.,Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. Some think that reading should be selective. My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. My sister goes to

5、the cinema at least once a week.,3主謂不一致,4動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的誤用,I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. We have little time to read some books which we interest. We have little time to read some b

6、ooks in which we are interested. I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. I have been studying in the college for two years,5詞類混淆,It is my point that reading must be selectively. In my opinion, reading must be selective. Honest is so important for every person. Honesty is so imp

7、ortant for everyone. The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street.,The important of reading classic The classics is very importance in our learning time.,In order to earn more incomes, they kill all their time in their jobs , an

8、d they even dont want to take any time in it.,作文加分句型,一、 the + est + 名詞 + (that) + 主詞 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc),海倫是我所看過最美麗的女孩。 Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 張老師是我曾經(jīng)遇到最仁慈的教師。 Mr.Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.,二、Nothing is + er than to

9、+ V Nothing is + more + 形容詞+ than to + V,沒有比接受教育更重要的事。 Nothing is more important than to receive education.,三、 cannot emphasize the importance of too much.(再怎么強(qiáng)調(diào).的重要性也不為過。),我們?cè)僭趺磸?qiáng)調(diào)保護(hù)眼睛的重要性也不為過。 We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.,四、There is no denying that + S + V .(不

10、可否認(rèn)的.),不可否認(rèn)的，我們的生活品質(zhì)已經(jīng)每況愈下 There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.,五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子 (全世界都知道.),全世界都知道樹木對(duì)我們是不可或缺的。 It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.,六 There is no doubt that + 句子 (毫無疑問的.),毫無疑問的我們的教育制度令

11、人不滿意。 There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.,七、An advantage of is that + 句子(.的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是.),使用太陽(yáng)能的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是它不會(huì)制造任何污染 An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create (produce) any pollution.,八、The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子(.的原因是.),我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應(yīng)我們新鮮的空氣。 The

12、reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.,But less and less classics are read. For one reason is that compared with some other novels, its less fashionable.,九、So + 形容詞+ be + 主詞+ that + 句

13、子(如此.以致于.),時(shí)間是如此珍貴，我們經(jīng)不起浪費(fèi)它。 So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.,十、Adj + as + Subject(主詞)+ be, S + V (雖然.),雖然我們的國(guó)家富有，我們的生活品質(zhì)絕對(duì)令人不滿意。 Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. by no means = in no way = on no account一點(diǎn)也不,十一、The + er + S + V,the

14、+ er + S + V ,The harder you work, the more progress you make. 你愈努力，你愈進(jìn)步。 The more books we read, the more learned we become. 我們書讀愈多，我們愈有學(xué)問。,十二、By + Ving, can (借著.，.能夠.),By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借著做運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們能夠始終保持健康。,Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. 聽音樂使我們能夠感覺輕松。,十三、

15、enable + Object(受詞) + to + V (.使.能夠.),十四、On no account can we + V (我們絕對(duì)不能.),On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我們絕對(duì)不能忽略知識(shí)的價(jià)值。,十五、It is time to,It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems. 該是有關(guān)當(dāng)局采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧﹣斫鉀Q交通問題的時(shí)候了,十六、Those who (.的人.),十七、There

16、is no one but (沒有人不.),There is no one but longs to go to college. 沒有人不渴望上大學(xué),十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不.),Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports. 既然考試迫在眉睫，我不得不放棄做運(yùn)動(dòng),十九、It is conceivable that + 句子(可想而知的)It is obvious that + 句子(明顯的)It is a

17、pparent that + 句子(顯然的),It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 可想而知，知識(shí)在我們的一生中扮演一個(gè)重要的角色。,二十、That is the reason why (那就是.的原因),Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I dont like it. 夏天很燠熱。那就是我不喜歡它的原因。,二十一、For the past + 時(shí)間，S + 現(xiàn)在完成式.(過去.年來，.一直.),For the past two years, I

18、 have been busy preparing for theexamination. 過去兩年來，我一直忙著準(zhǔn)備考試。,二十二、Since + S + 過去式，S + 現(xiàn)在完成式。,Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 自從他上高中，他一直很用功。,二十三、It pays to + V (.是值得的,It pays to help others. 幫助別人是值得的。,二十四、be based on (以.為基礎(chǔ)),The progress of thee society is based on harm

19、ony. 社會(huì)的進(jìn)步是以和諧為基礎(chǔ)的,二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遺余力的),We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. 我們應(yīng)該不遺余力的美化我們的環(huán)境。,高分作文標(biāo)志:,1：是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉； 2、是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ)； 3、用詞是否多樣，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞； 4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞； 5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。,1. 適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attentio

20、n to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段： It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.,2. 善于使用插入語(yǔ)，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。 比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ,3. 一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。 (考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good,