最新高考英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)題解析課件-基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作[建議倡議].ppt

1. cover topics like. 涵蓋的主題有 2. arouse ones interest 激發(fā)某人的興趣 3. get involved in 參與，涉及 4. be well-received 廣受歡迎 5. make some suggestions 提一些建議,相關(guān)短語(yǔ),6. protect our environment 保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境 7. the environmental pollution 環(huán)境污染 8. be of great benefit to. 對(duì)大有好處 9. get well-prepared (for)(為)做好充分的準(zhǔn)備 10. take responsibility to do sth. 有責(zé)任做某事,11. the coming speech contest 即將到來(lái)的演講比賽 12. leave a deep impression on 給留下深刻的印象 13. take my suggestion into consideration 考慮我的建議 14. have the chance to do sth. 有機(jī)會(huì)做某事 15. help students improve their English 幫助學(xué)生提高英語(yǔ)水平,1. The main reason is that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.其主要原因是父母的壓力使他們幾乎沒(méi)有時(shí)間參加其他活動(dòng)。 2. The reason why Im late is that I missed the bus. 我遲到的原因是沒(méi)趕上公共汽車(chē)。,相關(guān)句式,3. I like it very much mainly for two reasons.我喜歡它, 主要有兩個(gè)原因。 4. In my opinion, there are three reasons for this.在我看來(lái), 有三個(gè)原因。 5. My views are based on the following reasons. 我的觀點(diǎn)是基于以下理由。,6. The reasons for this are as follows.其理由如下。 7. So I suggest that you take your friends advice.因此, 我建議你接受你朋友的建議。 8. Here I have some suggestions.這里我有幾條建議。,8. It would be better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.如果你能分擔(dān)更多的家務(wù), 如掃地、洗衣、做飯, 那就更好了。,1. 在建議倡議的寫(xiě)作中, 應(yīng)開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山指出寫(xiě)作目的, 陳述建議或倡議的內(nèi)容。如：I am writing to give suggestions about. (建議信)或In order to., I am going to make the following suggestions (倡議書(shū))。,2. 建議倡議類(lèi)型的作文都有相關(guān)的一些固定句型, 考生需要熟練掌握使用這些句型和相關(guān)的語(yǔ)法。比如, 在句中使用到advise, suggest或advice, suggestion等表示建議的詞時(shí), 要考慮到虛擬語(yǔ)氣的使用。,廣州某電視臺(tái)打算開(kāi)辦一個(gè)面向中學(xué)生觀 眾的英語(yǔ)節(jié)目, 新聘任了來(lái)自英國(guó)的John作為節(jié)目編輯助理。現(xiàn)在, John就節(jié)目?jī)?nèi)容向廣大中學(xué)生征求意見(jiàn)。 寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容 假如你是學(xué)生李華, 建議開(kāi)辦“廣州全接觸” (All-round Guangzhou)節(jié)目。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下節(jié)目設(shè)想給John寫(xiě)信：,Dear John， I know youre going to set up an English program for middle school students. So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round Guangzhou”. . I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration. Sincerely yours, Li Hua,例題導(dǎo)寫(xiě) 確定文體。建議信屬于應(yīng)用文信件類(lèi)的范疇, 寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候一般使用將來(lái)時(shí)或者一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。建議信在于給對(duì)方合理并且能夠接受的建議, 考生應(yīng)該注意使用一些委婉的語(yǔ)氣。,信息重組。我們可以把題中信息整合成以下5個(gè)漢語(yǔ)句子： 1. 節(jié)目包括廣州的歷史、教育、著名景點(diǎn)、飲食、名人。 2. 建議每周六、日舉辦，方便學(xué)生周末觀看。,3. 建議邀請(qǐng)中學(xué)生參加節(jié)目, 激發(fā)學(xué)生的收看興趣。 4. 這個(gè)可以使中學(xué)生更多地了解廣州文化, 還有助于提高中學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)水平, 這樣他們就能向外國(guó)游客介紹廣州。 5. 我肯定這個(gè)節(jié)目一定會(huì)收到中學(xué)生的歡迎。,詞語(yǔ)翻譯 翻譯或完成下列詞或短語(yǔ)。 句1： (1)包括(節(jié)目) _ (2)歷史，教育，景點(diǎn) ，飲食，名人 _,History, education, scenic spots / tourist attractions, food, famous people / celebrities,cover / include,句3： (3) 激發(fā)某人的興趣 _ 句4： (4)提高英語(yǔ)水平_ 句5： (5)受到歡迎 _ _,be popular among/with sb. / be well-received by/be welcomed by,spark / stimulate / arouse ones interest,improve ones English,難句翻譯 翻譯下列每組句子并合并成一句。 句2：(1) (這個(gè)節(jié)目將于)每周六、日(播放)。 (1) It would be better to broadcast it on weekends. / I suggest that the program be broadcast on weekends. / It is a good idea to broadcast it on weekends.,(2)方便學(xué)生周末觀看。 (2)We students can have the chance to watch it. /It will be convenient for us students to watch it.,合并：It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.(因果關(guān)系, 可以使用so. that.句型),句3：(3) (你也可以)邀請(qǐng)中學(xué)生參加節(jié)目。 (3)You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in / take part in the program. (4) (這個(gè)節(jié)目可以)提高學(xué)生的收看興趣。 (4) It will surely arouse /spark /stimulate other students interest in it.,合并： You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in / take part in the program, which will surely arouse / spark / stimulate other students interest in it.(補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明關(guān)系, 可以使用which非限制性定語(yǔ)從句),句4：(5)(這個(gè)節(jié)目幫助)中學(xué)生可以更多地了解廣州文化。 (5) This program can get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou. (6) (中學(xué)生可以)向外國(guó)游客介紹廣州。 (6) The students can introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors. (7) (這個(gè)節(jié)目)有助于提高中學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)水平。 (7) This program helps students improve their English.,合并： Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.(第5個(gè)句子和第7個(gè)句子是并列關(guān)系, 因此我們可以用not only.but also.這組連詞把它們連接起來(lái), 并且注意統(tǒng)一主語(yǔ),第6句是作者提出建議的原因, 可以用so as to 引導(dǎo)出目的狀語(yǔ)。),參考范文 Dear John， I know youre going to set up an English program for middle school students. So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round Guangzhou”. This program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Guangzhou. It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.,Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will surely arouse other students interest in it. Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors. I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students. I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration. Sincerely yours, Li Hua,連句成篇?？忌丫渥雍喜⒊善碌臅r(shí)候, 需要注意建議信常用的一些句型結(jié)構(gòu)。如在建議信開(kāi)頭表示來(lái)信的目的, 如：You have asked me for my advice on.and I will try to make suggestions./ Thanks for trusting me. /Regarding., Id like to make some suggestions等句型。在表示建議的時(shí)候, 考生可以使用I feel that it would be beneficial if./ I would like to suggest that.等句型。另外, 考生若是使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句子If I were you, I would., 也會(huì)讓文章增色不少。,能力提高,To Whom It May Concern As 1 _ student of this university, I would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation 2 _ your kind assistance as always. Meanwhile, I feel that 3 _would be 4 _(benefit) to express my views 5 _(concern) the quality of the library service.,concerning,a,for,it,beneficial,In the first place, I find that most keyboards of the library computers are in poor operation, 6 _ brings much inconvenience to the users. I would also recommend the library 7 _ (improve) the efficiency of buying new books and academic journals. Last 8 _not least, the study rooms need to be furnished 9 _a better lighting system. I hope that you take my suggestions into serious 10 _(consider). Yours sincerely, John,which,to improve,but,with,consideration,假設(shè)你是小明的好朋友李華，小明參加了一個(gè)英語(yǔ)演講比賽，他對(duì)比賽非常擔(dān)心，向你求助，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他寫(xiě)一封建議信。,寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容 1. 說(shuō)明回信的意圖； 2. 向小明提出建議； 3. 預(yù)祝小明比賽成功。 Dear Xiaoming， . Yours， Li Hua,參考范文 Dear Xiaoming, You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror.,Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words, dont be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it. Wish you success in the speech! Yours， Li Hua,精華點(diǎn)評(píng),建議信的寫(xiě)作關(guān)鍵在于作者給出建議的語(yǔ)氣委婉而中肯, 使對(duì)方容易接受。很多考生習(xí)慣使用祈使句或者You should的句型表示建議, 這樣比較生硬，因此考生轉(zhuǎn)換不同的句型使語(yǔ)言豐富, 如范文中使用了you should., you had better., remember to do等句型。在最后祝愿對(duì)方成功的時(shí)候, 可以用簡(jiǎn)明扼要的句型, 如wish you good luck / wish you success / may you succeed, 使文章長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合得當(dāng)。,由于廢氣、污水、白色垃圾等環(huán)境污染已危及到人類(lèi)的健康與生存, 為鼓勵(lì)大家節(jié)能環(huán)保,你們學(xué)校將舉辦一次“低碳行動(dòng)”的環(huán)?；顒?dòng), 假設(shè)你是高三6班的一名學(xué)生, 將要在這個(gè)活動(dòng)中向全體師生發(fā)起“低碳生活”的倡議,以下是倡議的內(nèi)容： 1. 盡量綠色出行：采取步行或自行車(chē)方式; 2. 少喝一次瓶裝水；,3. 盡量不用一次性制品, 如一次性木筷子和塑 料袋； 4. 每周至少手洗衣服一次； 5. 每周少開(kāi)手機(jī)、電視一天。 寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容 1. 活動(dòng)背景; 2. 倡議目的; 3. 倡議內(nèi)容。,Hello everyone, I am Li Hua from Class Six, Senior Three. . I believe everyone, as a member of this global village, should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign!,參考范文 I am Li Hua from Class Six, Senior Three. We human beings are seriously threatened by the environmental pollution, such as waste gases, dirty water and white pollution. In order to encourage all of us to save energy and protect our environment, I am going to make the following suggestions. It is suggested that we should walk or take bikes if we go out. To avoid white pol