全國高考英語二輪突破.ppt

,道歉信,全國高考英語二輪突破,celebrate the precious moment 慶祝這珍貴的時刻 the final examinations 期末考試 be around the corner 即將到來 appointment 約會 accept sb. sincere apology 接受某人真誠的道歉 a face-to-face talk 一次面談 for my healths sake 為了我的健康 keep to sb. word 遵守承諾 further ones studies 進(jìn)修；繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí),【必備詞語】,pick sb. up at the airport 到機(jī)場接某人 fix another time for 安排另外一個時間 much to my regret 讓我感到很遺憾 miss the opportunity 錯過機(jī)會 wish the activity to be a great success 祝這次活動成功 places of historical interest 名勝古跡 consider my situation 考慮我的情況 forgive 原諒,【必備詞語】,1. Im terribly sorry I couldnt reply to your email in time. 十分抱歉我不能及時回復(fù)您的郵件。 2. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. 我十分抱歉沒有及時回信。 3. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. 我再次為我的錯誤真誠地道歉。 4. It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together. 錯過了在一起的機(jī)會，我感到很遺憾。,【好句朗誦】,5. Once again, please accept my sincere apology. 請?jiān)俅谓邮芪艺嬲\的道歉。 6. Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for . 如論如何，我真心希望我們可以再找一個時間 7. I have been looking forward to it. 我一直都在期待著。 8. Im awfully sorry for the sudden change of plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity. 對突然的改變我感到十分抱歉，對錯過這個機(jī)會感到很可惜。,【好句朗誦】,1. I am so sorry for my mistake and I am now writing to apology for my carelessness.,1. apology改為apologize,2. Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday so I had to stay at home to look after my sick mother.,2. so改為because,【單句改錯】 每句只有一個錯誤,3. I feel terrible sorry for missing the chance of attending your graduation ceremony.,3. terrible改為terribly,4. I very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week.,4. very前面加am,5. Please forgive me for my careless and the inconvenience that I may have caused.,5. careless改為carelessness,【單句改錯】 每句只有一個錯誤,6. Again, I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apologize.,6. apologize改為apology,7. I am really sorry, but Ive lost the book that you lend me when I stayed with you in June.,7. lend改為lent,8. I would like to buy a new copy of that book and post them to you.,8. them改為it,【單句改錯】 每句只有一個錯誤,9. My mobile phone ran out of battery, because I didnt get your text messages.,9. because改為so,10. I got the message you leave at the hotel when I got back there late on Thursday.,10. leave改為left,【單句改錯】 每句只有一個錯誤,【2013山東卷改編：未及時回復(fù)而道歉】 假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時回復(fù)。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件： 1. 未及時回信的原因； 2. 你假期的打算（如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等）,【真題滿分佳作賞析】,滿分佳作（一） Dear Tom, Im terribly sorry I couldnt reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately. I was so occupied with the final exams. As for the coming summer holiday, I will first do a part time job in a fast-food restaurant. Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it. And then I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest. Finally, Ill go to Yaan to work as a volunteer. There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help. I hope what I will do will make a great difference to them. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,滿分賞析 先用Im terribly sorry對未能及時回信道歉，terribly加強(qiáng)了道歉的語氣。 接著簡單講明原因；be occupied with sth./doing sth.(忙于某事/做某事)的運(yùn)用體現(xiàn)了作者的語言功底，不是用簡單的詞匯busy，可給評卷老師留下好印象。 Not onlybut also 連接并列句，屬于本書在“寫作基礎(chǔ)”部分訓(xùn)練的句型。注意：not only在句首，謂語動詞要用倒裝形式；gain some social experience的運(yùn)用也體現(xiàn)了作者平時注意積累語言素材。,滿分賞析 運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的定語從句修飾地點(diǎn)，使句式避免簡單化；places of interest(名勝古跡)也運(yùn)用得當(dāng)，考生需注意積累，否則只能生造出中式英語。 運(yùn)用了There is no doubt that(毫無疑問)這樣的萬能句型；be badly in need of help(急需幫助)這一短語也給評卷老師眼前一亮。 make a difference(起作用、產(chǎn)生不同)這一短語也是增分點(diǎn)。 本篇句句高級、詞詞地道，怎能不拿滿分？,滿分佳作（二） Dear Tom, How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, Ive been preparing for the final exams these days. Now, I am writing to tell you my plans for the summer vacation. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots in order to enjoy some appealing scenery. What is more, I will do some voluntary work to enrich my life. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, whats your plan to spend your summer vacation? Yours sincerely, Li Hua,滿分賞析 第一句為朋友式的日常問候，符合朋友間書信的特點(diǎn)。 I feel terribly sorry for 用來引出道歉的內(nèi)容，句型運(yùn)用得當(dāng)。 本段用了to start with, in addition, whats more等連接詞，使行文連貫；not onlybut also也是必須學(xué)會運(yùn)用的高級句型；broaden my horizons也體現(xiàn)了作者平時勤于積累，能給閱卷老師留下良好的印象。 It is a fabulous choice to(是極佳的選擇)一句是難得的高級表達(dá)；appealing(吸引人的)一詞也體現(xiàn)了語言能力。 最后一段，作者再次用I sincerely apologize again for表達(dá)了真誠的道歉；并詢問了對方的暑期計(jì)劃，符合真實(shí)交際情境。,【模擬真題1：道歉不能赴約】 作文原題 假設(shè)你是李華，前天是你的外國朋友Anne的生日。你本答應(yīng)要參加她的生日聚會，但你當(dāng)時正忙著準(zhǔn)備期末考試，忘了赴約。請寫封信向Anne表達(dá)你的歉意，說明原因，并提出補(bǔ)救的方法。,【模仿翻譯】,作文翻譯 親愛的Anne， 我十分抱歉我未能參加你前天的生日派對。 你邀請我去生日派對真是太有心了。我理應(yīng)來與你慶祝這珍貴的時刻。但是期末考試就在眼前，所以我忙于準(zhǔn)備考試，以致我忘記了約會。我希望你能理解我的情況并原諒我。有沒有可能我和你在考試后進(jìn)行一次私人的見面？ 我十分遺憾錯過了相聚的機(jī)會。請?jiān)俅谓邮芪艺嬲\的道歉。 你真誠的， 李華,Dear Anne, I am indeed very sorry that I didnt attend your birthday party the day before yesterday. It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come and celebrate the precious moment with you. But the final examinations are around the corner, so I was so busy preparing for the exams that I forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examinations? It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together. Once again, please accept my sincere apology. Yours truly, Li Hua,【模擬真題2：道歉不能赴約】 作文原題 假如你是李華，你和你的外籍老師Mrs. Brown約好明天下午要一起討論你英語學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的問題，但是你臨時有其他的事而不能赴約，請你給Mrs. Brown寫一封道歉信。內(nèi)容包括： 1. 對她表示歉意； 2. 說明原因：你的醫(yī)生打電話給你，通知你明天下午去醫(yī)院談體檢結(jié)果； 3. 你想與Mrs. Brown另約在本周六。,作文翻譯 親愛的Brown夫人， 我非常遺憾地告訴您明天下午我將無法和您見面討論我英語學(xué)習(xí)的問題，因?yàn)槲乙谕惶炜瘁t(yī)生。 今天早上，我的醫(yī)生打電話給我，希望和我面對面討論我前些天進(jìn)行的健康檢查結(jié)果。為了我的健康，我必須說我可能會失言了。您可以考慮我的情況并理解我嗎？ 我的確希望和您進(jìn)行討論，因此如果我們可以在星期六見面，我將無盡感激。我保證會按時到達(dá)。 你的， 李華,Dear Mrs. Brown, I am terriblely sorry to tell you that tomorrow afternoon I will be unable to meet you to talk about the problem about my English study because I have to see the doctor on the same day. This morning, my doctor called me, hoping to have a face-to-face talk with me about the result of my health examination on the other day. For my healths sake, I have to say that I may fail to keep to my word. Would you please consider my situation and try to understand? I do hope to have a discussion with you, so I would be very grateful to you if we could meet on Saturday. I promise to be there on time. Yours, Li Hua,【2010山東卷改編：因故不能赴約而道歉】 假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你和在上海上學(xué)的英國朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給他寫一封電子郵件： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解釋原因； 3. 另約時間。 Dear Tom, Nice to hear from you. Sincerely yours, Li Hua,【全真考場】,【2010山東卷改編：因故不能赴約而道歉】 Dear Tom, Nice to hear from you. But Im sorry to tell you that I cant make it to Beijing with you next weekend as we planned beforehand. You see, a couple of days ago, my cousin Li Ming, who has been to Australia to further his studies, called and said that he would be coming back next weekend, and I will have to pick him up at the airport. After all, its been more than one year since we saw each other. Im terribly sorry for that. Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for a trip to Beijing, when I will show you around the places of historical interest there. Looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely yours, Li Hua,【模擬真題：道歉不能參加活動】 假如你是李華，國際學(xué)