高考英語(yǔ)二輪專題突破檢測(cè) 短文改錯(cuò)模擬.doc

短文改錯(cuò)(建議用時(shí): 40分鐘)下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。增加: 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(), 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意: 1. 每句不超過(guò)兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤; 2. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞; 3. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。1(2013吉林模擬)dear dad, you are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health. i was worried about your health all the time. id like to give you some advices. i hear that walking is the best sport. your company isnt far away from home, is it? why not to walk to the office? youd better take exercise at most once a week. you can play a basketball in the gym. going to swim is a nice choice, too. trying not to stay up too lately. having enough sleep can help your brain work better. of course, this is very important to have healthy food. dad, please receive my advice. i really wish you healthy! your loving daughter, mary2(2013廣元模擬)yesterday morning i was surprising to hear that my friend allen had been hit by a car and was in hospital. the other day he is going to cross a street. he was very careful and didnt go after he saw traffic lights turn green. but when he got the middle of the street he saw a car suddenly appear on her right-hand side and come directly towards him. that was too late for allen to dodge(躲閃). he was hit by a car and thrown a few meter away. he was sent to hospital immediate and had an operation. when i went to see him last night, he out of danger but still looked pale. 3(2013玉溪模擬)as students, we have classes for early morning till late afternoon. therefore, take a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary. otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. during the ten-minute break we did something to get rid of tiredness. what we need is to have real rest, instead of getting even tired. so dont do anything that will make you too excited. my ten-minute break is always pleased. i usually take some exercise. sometime i have a free chat with my classmates. when the new class begins, i feel freshly again. 4(2013天水模擬)its reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. in my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. while used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others. in the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. after all, life is not a small matter. 答案解析1答案: dear dad, you are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health.soi was worried about your health all the time. id like to give you some advices. am advicei hear that walking is the best sport. your company isnt far away from home, is it? why not to walk to the office? youd better take exercise at most once a week. you leastcan play a basketball in the gym. going to swim is a nice choice, too. trying trynot to stay up too lately. having enough sleep can help your brain work better. of latecourse, this is very important to have healthy food. itdad, please receive my advice. i really wish you healthy! accept your loving daughter, mary1. 【解析】將第一句中的very改為so。so. . . that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。2. 【解析】將第二句中的was改為am。此處是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3. 【解析】將第三句中的advices改為advice。advice不可數(shù)名詞。4. 【解析】將第六句中的第一個(gè)to去掉。why not+動(dòng)詞原形, 表示建議。5. 【解析】將第七句中的most改為least。at least至少。6. 【解析】將第八句中的a去掉。球類前面不加冠詞。7. 【解析】將第十句中的trying改為try。此處為祈使句, 動(dòng)詞原形開(kāi)頭。8. 【解析】將第十句中的lately改為late。late表示時(shí)間晚。9. 【解析】將第十二句中的this改為it。it是形式主語(yǔ)。10. 【解析】將第十三句中的receive改為accept。接受意見(jiàn)用accept。2答案: yesterday morning i was surprising to hear that my friend allen had been hit surprised by a car and was in hospital. the other day he is going to cross a street. he was very wascareful and didnt go after he saw traffic lights turn green. but when he got the before tomiddle of the street he saw a car suddenly appear on her right-hand side and come his directly towards him. that was too late for allen to dodge(躲閃). he was hit itby a car and thrown a few meter away. he was sent to hospital immediate and had the meters immediatelyan operation. when i went to see him last night, he out of danger but still looked waspale. 1. 【解析】第一句中的surprisingsurprised修飾人時(shí), 要用-ed形容詞, 意為“感到吃驚的”。2. 【解析】第二句中的iswas時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)the other day說(shuō)明事情發(fā)生在過(guò)去, 故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。3. 【解析】第三句中的afterbefore根據(jù)句意“他看到綠燈亮之前沒(méi)穿過(guò)馬路?！笨芍胋efore。4. 【解析】第四句中g(shù)ot后加toget to到達(dá), 為固定搭配。5. 【解析】第四句中的herhis根據(jù)前文可知我的朋友a(bǔ)llen是男性。6. 【解析】第五句中的thatit分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知真正的主語(yǔ)為后面的不定式, 故采用形式主語(yǔ)it。7. 【解析】第六句中的第一個(gè)athe特指前面已經(jīng)提到的汽車(chē), 用定冠詞the。8. 【解析】第六句中的metermetersmeter為可數(shù)名詞, a few修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。9. 【解析】第七句中的immediateimmediately修飾動(dòng)詞要用副詞。10. 【解析】在第八句中的he后加was根據(jù)并列連詞but可知其前面應(yīng)為完整的句子, 此處是主系表結(jié)構(gòu), 根據(jù)上下文時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致, 故加was。3答案: as students, we have classes for early morning till late afternoon. therefore, fromtake a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary. taking classes otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. during the ten-minute break andwe did something to get rid of tiredness. what we need is to have real rest, instead do aof getting even 或even tired. so dont do anything that will make you too excited. moremy ten-minute break is always pleased. i usually take some exercise. sometime i pleasing sometimeshave a free chat with my classmates. when the new class begins, i feel freshly again. fresh1. 【解析】將第一句中的for改為from。from. . . till固定結(jié)構(gòu), 從到 。2. 【解析】將第二句中的take改為taking。構(gòu)成v. -ing短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)。3. 【解析】將第二句中的class改為classes。在兩節(jié)課之間。4. 【解析】將第三句中的or改為and。并列關(guān)系, 與前面的both構(gòu)成both. . . and. . . 。5. 【解析】將第四句中的did改為do。全文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為基礎(chǔ)時(shí)態(tài)。6. 【解析】在第五句中的have后面加a。have a rest休息。7. 【解析】將第五句中的even去掉, 或者在even后面加more。even不可以修飾形容詞原級(jí), 但可以修飾比較級(jí)。8. 【解析】將第七句中的pleased改為pleasing。主語(yǔ)是事情, 故用v. -ing形式的形容詞作表語(yǔ)。9. 【解析】將第九句中的sometime改為sometimes。有時(shí)。10. 【解析】將第十句中的freshly改為fresh。feel是連系動(dòng)詞, 后面用形容詞作表語(yǔ)。4答案: its reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. road safety diehas aroused the widely attention of the public. many rules have made to wide beenreduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. in my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. while used the take usingr