2010年王老師英語作文范文.doc

石家莊佳鑫諾學(xué)校 三月份點(diǎn)睛?？及嗷馃嵴猩?！Salary or Interest？1. 有的人找工作的時(shí)候選擇興趣，有的選擇工資2. 你的看法審題概述這是一篇要求考生評(píng)判找工作時(shí)所持標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的文章。開篇需闡述兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)，有人認(rèn)為興趣重要，有人則把工資擺在第一位。對(duì)于大學(xué)生而言，結(jié)合自身的情況，可以表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。第一段，分述兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)，稍加展開；第二段，就自身談?wù)効捶??！痉段摹縎alary or InterestUpon graduation，virtually all college students will confront the problem of the career choice. It is truly a tough choice. Students opinions differ greatly on this issue. Some hold that priority should be given to their interest in jobs，but others take the attitude that salary is the most critical factor influencing their career choices.As to myself，I prefer the latter view. A well paid job exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people，with no exception to me. Although it might be impossible to measure the value of ones job in terms of money，salary counts most when I choose my future career. In my view，our career choices largely depend on how and where we have been brought up. I come from a poor urban family and my parents were both laid off workers. In order to finance my tuition，they have been working hard over the past four years. As the only son in my family，I have to shoulder the burden of supporting my family. In short，salary is the first and only consideration in my choice of career.第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：就大學(xué)生找工作時(shí)所持標(biāo)準(zhǔn)問題，闡述了兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)。語言點(diǎn)提示：（1）此句式priority should be given to something（應(yīng)優(yōu)先考慮），牢記。（2）注意分述不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，可使用不同的動(dòng)詞或動(dòng)詞短語，這樣可以避免重復(fù)，如： hold， take the attitude。第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：以己為例，表明觀點(diǎn)。語言點(diǎn)提示：（1）exert on 對(duì)施加(2) finance my tuition 承擔(dān)我的學(xué)費(fèi)Certificate Craze on Campus 1近幾年大學(xué)校園內(nèi)出現(xiàn)“考證熱” 2產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因 3你的看法 審題概述大學(xué)生熱衷于考證這一話題一直是社會(huì)的熱點(diǎn)，為什么會(huì)出現(xiàn)這樣的現(xiàn)象。對(duì)于大學(xué)生而言，結(jié)合自身的情況，可以表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。第一段，簡要描述現(xiàn)象：大學(xué)校園內(nèi)出現(xiàn)“考證熱”；第二段，探究產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因；第三段，結(jié)合自身情況，闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)?！痉段摹緾ertificate Craze on CampusIn recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing; quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear? There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another. From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value. 第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：簡要描述現(xiàn)象：大學(xué)生們熱衷于考證。語言點(diǎn)提示：此句Why does this craze appear?作為過渡，引出下文。第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：解釋出現(xiàn)這一現(xiàn)象的原因，注意所使用的連接詞語：first, second。語言點(diǎn)提示：the admission expansion of colleges 高校擴(kuò)招第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：以自己為例，具體說明。語言點(diǎn)提示：(1) nothing but=only(2) focus on/upon=concentrate on/uponHow Will Our Life Go on without Internet?1. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)提供給了人們豐富多彩和便捷的生活2. 很多人開始感覺離開網(wǎng)絡(luò)寸步難行3. 你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)依賴癥的看法審題概述網(wǎng)絡(luò)給人們帶來了豐富便捷的生活，但有些人卻因此離不開網(wǎng)絡(luò)，本文要求考生對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)依賴癥簡述自己的看法。第一段，簡單描述網(wǎng)絡(luò)為人們提供了豐富而又便利的生活；第二段，很多人覺得離開網(wǎng)絡(luò)就寸步難行；第三段，對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)依賴癥，闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)?！痉段摹縃ow Will Our Life Go on without Internet?If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if theyd seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.The power of the Internet is all pervasive, yet its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：簡要描述網(wǎng)絡(luò)帶給人們精彩便捷的生活。語言點(diǎn)提示：一句話中連用三個(gè)動(dòng)詞draw, realize, provide，顯得句子很有氣勢(shì)。第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：很多人覺得網(wǎng)絡(luò)已經(jīng)滲透到我們生活的方方面面，離開了網(wǎng)絡(luò)就寸步難行。語言點(diǎn)提示：從政府部門、研究機(jī)構(gòu)到普通老百姓，網(wǎng)絡(luò)已經(jīng)和我們的生活息息相關(guān)。原文通過列舉governments, political campaigns, universities and researchers and common folks，一氣呵成，讓我們真切地感受到網(wǎng)絡(luò)無處不在。第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：闡述自己對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)依賴癥的看法。語言點(diǎn)提示：(1) online pornography and violence，網(wǎng)絡(luò)色情和暴力。(2) Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence.網(wǎng)絡(luò)欺詐每天都在發(fā)生。Knowledge and Diploma1. 目前社會(huì)上存在這樣一種說法：文憑越高越吃香2. 而有些人則認(rèn)為文憑不等于知識(shí)3. 你的觀點(diǎn)審題概述本文針對(duì)時(shí)下一種流行的說法：文憑越高越好，要求考生結(jié)合實(shí)際闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。第一段，簡要描述目前社會(huì)上流行的說法：文憑越高越吃香；第二段，有些人卻持不同的意見，認(rèn)為文憑不等于知識(shí)；第三段，結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況，闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)?！痉段摹?Knowledge and DiplomaIt is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social realitythe higher diploma one gets, the more popular he becomes.On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesnt automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of ones educational experience rather than a guarantee of ones ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of ones knowledge by the grade of ones diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people dont have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the worlds most learned men. So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs ones lifelong devotion.第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：簡要描述最近社會(huì)上的一種流行說法：文憑越高越好。語言點(diǎn)提示：(1)句型It is generally believed that=It is generally acknowledged that 眾所周知。(2) a job candidate應(yīng)聘者第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：有些人則持不同的意見，認(rèn)為文憑不能等同于知識(shí)。語言點(diǎn)提示：(1) the acknowledgment of ones educational experience 對(duì)一個(gè)人的教育經(jīng)歷的認(rèn)可。(2) 特別注意本段中所使用的連接詞語：on the contrary, besides。第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：以己為例，闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。語言點(diǎn)提示：(1) equate a diploma with knowledge 將文憑和知識(shí)等同(2) nothing but a proof of a short-term study 只是對(duì)某一短期學(xué)習(xí)的證明For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On VolunteeringActivities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 越來越多的人從事志愿者工作2. 志愿者工作的社會(huì)意義 3. 作為大學(xué)生，應(yīng)該怎么做范文： In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for Olympic Games. Actually, an increasing number of people become volunteers every year in China. Volunteering is of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. Olympic Games are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games. Without them, it would be a tough task to hold this un-precedent Olympic Games. Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of these games. As modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering actions. By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team,