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托福寫作輔導：托福考試滿分作文欣賞（）Whichonedoyouprefer,tosolveproblemsonyourownexperienceandknowledge,ortoaskothersforadvice?Asknowledgeandexperienceserveastwimtowersinproblem-solving,oneisoftenpresentedwithtwomajorpathsthatpavethewayforfinalfulfillment,eitthertowrackhisbrain,justlikewhathappenedtoNeuton,siitingformanyyearsunderanappletreeandeventuallyfiguringoutondofthegreatestuniversalrulesthatgovernthewholeglobe,ortoseekforotherswidsomethroughtheiradvice,justasinthecaseofBenjininFranklin,gatheringgreatmindsunder oneroofandthenestablishingamostworld-renownlibray.Bothwayswork.Whenapracticalgoalisinvolved,however,BenjiminFranklinmaybestberegarededasarolemodelinthisrespectandaskingpeopleforadviceoftenturnouttobetheprimealternative.Experienceandknowledgeborrowedorlearnedfromothersadvicecontributegreatlytoeffectivenessandeffeciencyforagoal-accomplishment.Notallexperienceandknowledgerelatedtoproblem-solvingcanbeobtainedbypersonaleffortaloneduetolimitationsofmindandcapabilitiesofeachindividual.Asinglethoughtinsomeonesmindis,moreoftenthannot,farlessshiningcomparedwithgroupswisdom.Thatexplainsthefamousoldsayingthatoneseesfurtherwhenstandingupontheshouldersofpastgreatgiants;thatexplainswhyagreatleaderisalwayswithgreaterminds;thatalsoexplainswhyteamworkincorperationishighlyemphasizedinthe21stcentury.Brainstormandexchangeofideasbetweendifferentthoughtsneverfailtoenhancecapabilitiesofeachindividulainvolved,ateam,acompany,aninstitution,acountry,oreventheentireglobalvillage.Askingothersadviceinsteadofgettingeverythingdoneononesownpromotesdemocracyandcommunicationtoo.Intermsofdemocracy,itisnecessarytogiveothersrightsandchancestospeaksincetheproblemmayconcernthemindifferentways,andtheirsayinginturnreflectsourrespecttowardfreedomofspeechaswellastheirwisdom.Intermsofcommunication,ideaexchangesometimesfocusesmorethansolutions,andherebybettermutualunderstandingaboutperspectives,principles,praticalitiesandpersonalitiesofeachother.Admittelyturningtoothersforhelpandsuggestionbynomeansreferstoabsoluteandirresponsibledependence.Considerationupondifferentthoughtsandideasbroadensourmind,enlargesourvision,furthersunderstanding,enhancesmoreeffectiveandefficientbrainstorm,andstressesmutualrespectingroupsandcommunities,whichundoubtedlygivesrisetobetter,ifnotthebestsolutions.AsisparaphrasedfromJohnFKenedy,brainstormed,thereislittlewecannotdowhiledivided,thereislittlewecando.托福寫作輔導：托?？荚嚌M分作文欣賞(2)CaseofBenjininFranklin,gatheringgreatmindsunderoneroofandthenestablishingamostworld-renownlibray.Bothwayswork.Whenapracticalgoalisinvolved,however,BenjiminFranklinmaybestberegarededasarolemodelinthisrespectandaskingpeopleforadviceoftenturnouttobetheprimealternative.Experienceandknowledgeborrowedorlearnedfromothersadvicecontributegreatlytoeffectivenessandeffeciencyforagoal-accomplishment.Notallexperienceandknowledgerelatedtoproblem-solvingcanbeobtainedbypersonaleffortaloneduetolimitationsofmindandcapabilitiesofeachindividual.Asinglethoughtinsomeonesmindis,moreoftenthannot,farlessshiningcomparedwithgroupswisdom.Thatexplainsthefamousoldsayingthatoneseesfurtherwhenstandingupontheshouldersofpastgreatgiants;thatexplainswhyagreatleaderisalwayswithgreaterminds;thatalsoexplainswhyteamworkincorperationishighlyemphasizedinthe21stcentury.Brainstormandexchangeofideasbetweendifferentthoughtsneverfailtoenhancecapabilitiesofeachindividulainvolved,ateam,acompany,aninstitution,acountry,oreventheentireglobalvillage.Askingothersadviceinsteadofgettingeverythingdoneononesownpromotesdemocracyandcommunicationtoo.Intermsofdemocracy,itisnecessarytogiveothersrightsandchancestospeaksincetheproblemmayconcernthemindifferentways,andtheirsayinginturnreflectsourrespecttowardfreedomofspeechaswellastheirwisdom.Intermsofcommunication,ideaexchangesometimesfocusesmorethansolutions,andherebybettermutualunderstandingaboutperspectives,principles,praticalitiesandpersonalitiesofeachother.Admittelyturningtoothersforhelpandsuggestionbynomeansreferstoabsoluteandirresponsibledependence.Considerationupondifferentthoughtsandideasbroadensourmind,enlargesourvision,furthersunderstanding,enhancesmoreeffectiveandefficientbrainstorm,andstressesmutualrespectingroupsandcommunities,whichundoubtedlygivesrisetobetter,ifnotthebestsolutions.AsisparaphrasedfromJohnFKenedy,brainstormed,thereislittlewecannotdowhiledivided,thereislittlewecando.托福寫作輔導：托?？荚嚌M分作文欣賞(3)Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies,somestudentsliveintheirhometowns.Othersliveindifferenttownsandcities.Whichdoyouthinkisbeterr?Givereasonsforyouranswer.Aftertheycompletetheiruniverrsitystudies,somestudentspreferrtoliveintheirhometownswhileotherschoosetoliveindifferenttownsorcities.Everybodyhashisownreasonsforhispreference.Aftermygraduation,Iwillgobackandliveinmyhomecity.Ihavemadethisdecisionbecauseofthefollowingreasons.Firstly,myhomecityisabigcitythatcanofferalot.Thereareplentyofopportunitiesforwork,manybiglibrariesforstudies,severaldifferrentmusiumsforvisit,andnumerouscinemas,theatersandcentersforentertainment.WhenIgobackthere,IwillhavenodifficultyinfindingajobsuitableformeandIcanmakeuseofallthefacilitiesavailablethere.Secondly,ifIgobacktomyhomecity,Icanlookaftermyparents.ItakethisintoconsiderationbecauseIamtheironlychildandtheyarenowweakandgettingoninage.IfIliveinthesamecitywiththem,Icanvisitthemveryoftenandhelpthemwheneveritisnecessary.Thirdly,ifIliveinmyhomecity,Iwillhavealotoffriends,schoolmatesandrelativestovisitandtoturntoforhelpwhenIneed.Ofcourse,IcouldgetacquaintedwithmanypeopleandmakemanyfriendsifIweretogotoliveinastrangeplace,butthattakestime.IfIgobacktomyhomecity,everybodywillbewaitingformeandIwillbeabletosettledowncomfortablywithoutanytroubleandwasteoftime.Inshort,mychoiseisbasedonacarefulconsiderationofmyhomecityandmyfamily.Ithinkitisabetterorsensiblechoice;inacertainsense,itisamust.托福寫作輔導：托?？荚嚌M分作文欣賞(4)Neighborsarethepeoplewholivenearus.Inyouropinion,whatarethequalitiesofagoodneighbor?Usespecificdetailsandexamplesinyouranswer.Ifyouhaveagoodneighbor,youarealuckyperson.Youhavesomeonewhocaresaboutyourneedsandyourproperty,whoishelpfulinthelittleday-to-daysituationsthatcomeup,andwhoissupportiveintimesofcrisis.Agoodneighborissomeonewho,forinstance,understandsthatyourchildrenmayoccasionallyrunacrosshislawn,-eventhoughyoutellthemnotto.Hellrealizethatchildrencanbecarelessaboutthingslikethat,andhewontmakeabigfussaboutitunlessitbecomesaregularthing.Inthesamevein,heknowsthatyoullunderstandifsomeofthetrashfromhistrashcansblowsacrossintoyouryard.Inotherwords,heissensitivetotheunintentionalthingsthatcanhappen.Hedoesntmakeabigdealaboutthem.Agoodneighborisalsorespectfulofyourproperty.Forexample,sheasksyourpermissionbeforedoinganythingthatinterfereswithwhatsyours.Thismeansshewouldntplantahugetreeinbetweenyourhouseswithoutaskinghowyoufeltaboutit.Ifshewantedtoputupafence,shewouldletyou