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是否長短句交叉;2、是否會(huì)使用插入語;3、用詞是否多樣,準(zhǔn)確,形象,盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞; 4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重復(fù)詞; 5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng): 1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng),這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入語,比如說把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語放在中間,一般放在主語、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間,一般放在動(dòng)詞,助動(dòng)詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。 比如說: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞,換形象,具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge替換enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物競爭力) 下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。 Computer and I By Simmy I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替換 very thrilling 替換 exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth. google 替換 search an army of 替換 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型,用來描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular Coincident with 非常地道的句型,表達(dá)“與一致”的意思,替換 With ;Advancement 替換 development ;Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換 enter into ;Current ( currently )替換 now ;Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth. ;Growing individuals 替換 more and more people ;It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型, 說某事是毫不夸張的 ;For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email. ;For a start 替換 To begin with ;We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法 ;our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動(dòng) ;Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides ;Deliver 替換 send ;There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,*, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying. There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處,首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型,還有however作為插入語, function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to Emerging 替換 appearing ( fading 替換 disappearing ) Net citizen 網(wǎng)民,屬于精彩用詞 As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides Computers do play ,do 強(qiáng)調(diào) Positive 替換 important / good 等 A slice of 替換 a part of Unfavorable 替換 bad Impacts 替換 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入語 Fruits 而且fruits 用的非常形象, merits/ virtues) 替換 advantage ( defects 替換 disadvantage ) Facet 替換 aspect 各位同學(xué),上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點(diǎn),作文怎么會(huì)不得高分呢! 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more( 注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞,副詞用increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly13.beneficial, rewarding替換helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替換 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb. be interested in 18.capture ones attention替換attract ones attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.22. There are several reasons behind sth 替換.reasons for sth23.desire 替換want.24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替換remember26. enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)27. interaction替換communication28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with st29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible 希望各位朋友能夠在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中多總結(jié)精彩、地道的詞匯和句型閃光點(diǎn),并與大家共享!as the saying goes, .(相關(guān)的名言或諺語)as far as i am concerned, .in conclusion, .last but not least, .一、 the + est + 名詞 + (that) + 主詞 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) the most + 形容詞 + 名詞 + (that) + 主詞 + have ever + seen ( known/ heard/ had/ read, etc) 例句:Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海倫是我所看過最美麗的女孩。 Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 張老師是我曾經(jīng)遇到最仁慈的教師。 二、Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容詞 + than to + V 例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education. 沒有比接受教育更重要的事。 三、 cannot emphasize the importance of too much.(再怎么強(qiáng)調(diào).的重要性也不為過。) 例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我們?cè)僭趺磸?qiáng)調(diào)保護(hù)眼睛的重要性也不為過。 四、There is no denying that + S + V .(不可否認(rèn)的.) 例句:There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否認(rèn)的,我們的生活品質(zhì)已經(jīng)每況愈下。 五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子 (全世界都知道.) 例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 全世界都知道樹木對(duì)我們是不可或缺的。 六、There is no doubt that + 句子 (毫無疑問的.) 例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫無疑問的我們的教育制度令人不滿意。 七、An advantage of is that + 句子 (.的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是.) 例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create (produce) any pollution. 使用太陽能的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是它不會(huì)制造任何污染。 八、The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 (.的原因是.) 例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應(yīng)我們新鮮的空氣。 九、So + 形容詞 + be + 主詞 + that + 句子 (如此.以致于.) 例句:So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it. 時(shí)間是如此珍貴,我們經(jīng)不起浪費(fèi)它。 十、Adj + as + Subject(主詞)+ be, S + V (雖然.) 例句:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. by no means = in no way = on no account 一點(diǎn)也不 雖然我們的國家富有,我們的生活品質(zhì)絕對(duì)令人不滿意。 十一、The + er + S + V, the + er + S + V The + more + Adj + S + V, the + more + Adj + S + V (愈.愈.) 例句:The harder you work, the more progress you make. 你愈努力,你愈進(jìn)步。 The more books we read, the more learned we become. 我們書讀愈多,我們愈有學(xué)問。 十二、By +Ving, can (借著.,.能夠.) 例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借著做運(yùn)動(dòng),我們能夠始終保持健康。 十三、 enable + Object(受詞)+ to + V (.使.能夠.) 例句:Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. 聽音樂使我們能夠感覺輕松。 十四、On no account can we+ V (我們絕對(duì)不能.) 例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我們絕對(duì)不能忽略知識(shí)的價(jià)值。 十五、It is time + S + 過去式 (該是.的時(shí)候了) 例句:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems. 該是有關(guān)當(dāng)局采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧﹣斫鉀Q交通問題的時(shí)候了。 十六、Those who (.的人.) 例句:Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished. 違反交通規(guī)定的人應(yīng)該受處罰。 十七、There is no one but (沒有人不.) 例句:There is no one but longs to go to college. 沒有人不渴望上大學(xué)。 十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不.) 例句:Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports. 既然考試迫在眉睫,我不得不放棄做運(yùn)動(dòng)。 十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的) It is obvious that + 句子 (明顯的) It is apparent that + 句子 (顯然的) 例句:It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 可想而知,知識(shí)在我們的一生中扮演一個(gè)重要的角色。 二十、That is the reason why (那就是.的原因) 例句:Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I dont like it. 夏天很燠熱。那就是我不喜歡它的原因。 二十一、For the past+ 時(shí)間,S + 現(xiàn)在完成式.(過去.年來,.一直.) 例句:For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination. 過去兩年來,我一直忙著準(zhǔn)備考試。 二十二、Since + S + 過去式,S + 現(xiàn)在完成式。 例句:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 自從他上高中,他一直很用功。 二十三、It pays to + V (.是值得的。) 例句:It pays to help others. 幫助別人是值得的。 二十四、be based on (以.為基礎(chǔ)) 例句:The progress of thee society is based on harmony. 社會(huì)的進(jìn)步是以和諧為基礎(chǔ)的。 二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遺余力的) 例句:We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. 我們應(yīng)該不遺余力的美化我們的環(huán)境。 二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 (讓.明白.事) 例句:We should bring home to people the value of working hard. 我們應(yīng)該讓人們明白努力的價(jià)值。 二十七、be closely related to (與.息息相關(guān)) 例句:Taking exercise is closely related to health. 做運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康息息相關(guān)。 二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving = make it a rule to + V (養(yǎng)成.的習(xí)慣) We should get into the habit of keeping good hours. 我們應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成早睡早起的習(xí)慣。 二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, (因?yàn)?) 例句:Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream. 因?yàn)樗墓膭?lì),我終于實(shí)現(xiàn)我的夢想。 三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V! = How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么.!) 例句:What an important thing it is to keep our promise! How important a thing it is to keep our promise! 遵守諾言是多么重要的事! 三十一、Leave much to be desired (令人不滿意) 例句:The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired. 我們的交通狀況令人不滿意。 三十二、Have a great influence on (對(duì).有很大的影響) 例句:Smoking has a great influence on our health. 抽煙對(duì)我們的健康有很大的影響。 三十三、do good to (對(duì).有益),do harm to (對(duì).有害) 例句:Reading does good to our mind.讀書對(duì)心靈有益。 Overwork does harm to health.工作過度對(duì)健康有害。 三十四、Pose a great threat to (對(duì).造成一大威脅) 例句:Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. 污染對(duì)我們的生存造成一大威脅。 三十五、do ones utmost to + V = do ones best (盡全力去.) 例句:We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life. 我們應(yīng)盡全力去達(dá)成我們的人生目標(biāo)Theabovepiechartconsistsof6segments,thelargestonerepresentingfood,whichaccountsfor60%ofthetotal.Clothesandentertainmenteachtakesup10%.5%goestotransportationand3%books.Alltherestexpenses,12%ofall,isspendonunknownitems. 總結(jié)寫作模式: piechartconsistsofsegments,thelargestonerepresenting,whichaccountsforofthetotal.eachtakesup.goesto.Alltherest,ofall,. 八.原因結(jié)果 1.(結(jié)果),owingto(原因)owingto為分詞結(jié)構(gòu) 2.(結(jié)果),attributableto(原因)attributableto為形容詞短語 3.(結(jié)果)lieinthefactthat(原因)同位語從句 4.(結(jié)果)resultfrom(原因)句型一般 5.Itispreciselybecause(原因)that(導(dǎo)致結(jié)果)強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu) 6.,asaresult,(導(dǎo)致結(jié)果)asaresult做插入語 7.(原因)beresponsiblefor(結(jié)果)常見句型 8.(原因),whichinturn(結(jié)果) eg.Theygiverisetounfaircompetition,whichinturnthrowsoriginalbusinessesintoacommercialpanic. 九.采取措施,提出建議 1.Mysuggestiontodealwith/solve/relievetheproblemareasfollows.Inthefirstplace,.Secondly,.Finally,常見句型 2.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,.Bythattime,.如果讓這種情況繼續(xù)發(fā)展下去,那么。到那個(gè)時(shí)候,。比較好的句型 3.Moreandmorepeoplearerealizingtheimportanceof進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài),moreandmore比many好 4.Greatefforts/Moremeasures/Dueattentionmustbetaken/paidtodo被動(dòng)語態(tài),dueattention和bepaidto搭配 5.If,willtherebeanythingthatcanmakemeevenhappier?如果(我們?cè)趺丛趺醋?,那將沒有比這令我更高興的了。條件句,反問句 6.Itisimportant/necessary/urgent/desirable(希望)/advisable(明智)forsb.todosth.Itisfortodo句型 7.enhancetheawarenessofpeoplethat 8.Thefirstnutforustocrackis我們首先要解決的是。比Thefirstthingweshoulddois句型高級(jí)的多,精彩的多,生動(dòng)的多 9.assoonaspossible常見句型 10.sth.beoftheutmostimportancebeofn.結(jié)構(gòu),比sth.bemuchimportant好十.方式,比較 1.(Just)as,so正如比較句型 eg.Justaswateristhemostimportantofliquids,soairisthemostimportantofgases. 2.inmuchthesameway/mannerthat正如,和一樣 eg.TheAmericansspendChristmasDayinmuchthesamewaythattheEuropeansdo. 十一.讓步 1.nowthat既然讓步從句 eg.Nowthatthedecisionhasbeenmade,wemusttryourbesttocarryitout. 2.unlessnot讓步從句 eg.Itisaviciouscycleandunlessyouconsiderthesesocial,economicandenvironmentalproblemsinonecontext,youarenotseriousaboutmeetingthechallenges.注意例句中的considersth.inonecontext句型:把什么事情放在一起加以綜合考慮 十三.強(qiáng)調(diào)句 1.only既是強(qiáng)調(diào)句,又是倒裝句 eg.Onlyinthiswaycanyouhopetoimprovethepresentsituation. 2.Itisthat eg.Itisbecausehewastoocarelessthathefailedintheexam. 3.nothingbut只不過;只有 eg.Ifwhatwehavebeenstrivingforisnothingbutpleasure-seeking,ournationwillbedeprivedoftherighttorise.(這里nothingbut可以去掉,不影響句意,但有了nothingbut,就強(qiáng)調(diào)了后面的名詞) 十四.假設(shè) 1.Supposing,itislikelythat.假設(shè),那么很可能假設(shè),虛擬語態(tài) eg.Supposingyouwantedtobuyawashingmachine,itismorethanlikelyyouwouldobtaindetailsregardingperformance,price,etc.fromanadvertisement. 十五.反問 1.Whatelsecan?.還能做什么呢? eg.Whatelsecanthepoorparentsdobutobey?這些可憐的家長除了聽從外還能做什么呢? 2.Howcould?怎能. eg.HowcouldIputtheEnglishbooksasidetoreadpastimebooks?三.起伏 1.togoupanddown起伏不定 eg.Thestrikeratewentupanddownduringtheperiodfrom1952to1967. 2.Therebeupsanddowns有起有伏 eg.Between1972and1979,therewereseveralupsanddownsin(某方面). 四.穩(wěn)定 1.toremainsteady/level/unchanged保持
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