高中英語(yǔ)寫作擴(kuò)句.doc

擴(kuò)句的方法在學(xué)習(xí)擴(kuò)句法之前，先對(duì)學(xué)生進(jìn)行五個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句句型，并列句和復(fù)合句的專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練，打好基礎(chǔ)。擴(kuò)句是在基本句型的基礎(chǔ)上，添加各種修飾成分，使句子得到擴(kuò)展，即根據(jù)表達(dá)的需求增加定語(yǔ)，狀語(yǔ)，同位語(yǔ)等成分，或者舉例子補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，或者添加諺語(yǔ)俗語(yǔ)等。1 1. We arrived in Sanya.- We arrived in Sanya, happily and excitedly. (添加副詞)2 2. I like to make friends with my classmates.- I like to make friends with my classmates, who have the same interest as mine. (添加定語(yǔ)從句)3 3. We were happy and returned home.- We were happy and returned home after we had finished collecting all the rubbish.(添加狀語(yǔ)從句)4 4. I like reading books.- I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers.(通過(guò)舉例補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié))5 5. We should study hard.- As we all know, “Practice makes perfect”. So we should study hard.（添加諺語(yǔ)）6 6. I often join in many activities.- I often join in many activities in order to communicate with other students and broaden my mind. (添加目的狀語(yǔ))三 具體應(yīng)用試題要求：假如你是一名中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)以My colorful school life為題，寫一篇短文。要求100個(gè)字左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。要點(diǎn)提示：1：上課認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講 2：課后完成作業(yè) 3：經(jīng)常參加體育鍛煉 4：去圖書館閱讀Im a high school student and I understand what Im studying for. I have been working hard. _ May there always be colorful life around my school. 學(xué)生的習(xí)作：Im a high school student and I understand what Im studying for. I have been working hard. I listen to the teacher carefully. I finish my homework after class. I often take exercise. I often read in the school library. May there always be colorful life around my school.點(diǎn)評(píng)：該學(xué)生能完整的寫出各個(gè)要點(diǎn)，沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)太大的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，表達(dá)通順，單詞拼寫無(wú)誤。但是很明顯字?jǐn)?shù)不夠，沒(méi)有達(dá)到100個(gè)字左右，字?jǐn)?shù)不夠是很多學(xué)生面臨的共同問(wèn)題。其次，句子的表達(dá)過(guò)于平淡無(wú)奇，沒(méi)有句式多樣化和使用高級(jí)詞匯，固定搭配、固定短語(yǔ)等使表達(dá)地道。而且，沒(méi)有使用連接詞，上下文的連接不夠順暢。 改進(jìn)方法：步驟一：列要點(diǎn) 把要寫的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)化，做到要點(diǎn)齊全。 1: Listen to the teacher carefully 2: finish my homework 3:take part in exercise 4: often read in the library步驟二：造簡(jiǎn)單句 充分利用五個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句句型對(duì)各個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，使其變成一個(gè)完整的句子。每個(gè)句子都要注意句子成分的完整性，語(yǔ)法是否正確，說(shuō)法是否符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。 1: I listen to the teacher carefully in the class. 2: I finish my homework after class. 3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates. 4: I do some reading in the school library.步驟三：擴(kuò)展句子 1: I listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.(增加目的狀語(yǔ)從句) 2: I finish my homework after class, which is a piece of cake for me.（增加定語(yǔ)從句） 3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates, such as playing football, going swimming and playing badminton etc.（舉例說(shuō)明） 4: I often do some reading in the school library when I have nothing to do after class.（增加時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）步驟四：潤(rùn)色句子 根據(jù)高考（海南）英語(yǔ)作文評(píng)分細(xì)則，第五檔的要求：24-25分，至少有3個(gè)復(fù)雜句，2種從句形式，語(yǔ)氣自然，敬語(yǔ)得體，無(wú)中式英語(yǔ)，語(yǔ)言基本功扎實(shí)，詞匯豐富。這就要求我們?cè)谧l詞造句方面下工夫?！皾?rùn)色句子包括詞語(yǔ)的選擇與句型的運(yùn)用?！?比如可以用高級(jí)詞匯，短語(yǔ)和固定搭配來(lái)替換一般詞匯。增加習(xí)慣表達(dá)句式，倒裝句，it當(dāng)形式主語(yǔ)和形式賓語(yǔ)，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等，使用多種句式，使其多樣化。 1: It is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. (把第一句換成it當(dāng)形式主語(yǔ)的用法，使句式多樣化。) 2: I take homework seriously and finish it in time, which is a piece of cake for me.(增加了takeseriously和in time兩個(gè)短語(yǔ)，是句子更加生動(dòng)) 3: In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc.（增加了in order to do sth目的狀語(yǔ)和different kinds of使句子的意思更完整。） 4: Interested in reading books, I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on my favourite books.（使用過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)，再添加短語(yǔ)develop the habbit of 使文章增加亮點(diǎn)）步驟五：連句成篇 “過(guò)渡詞在文章中起著承上啟下的作用，它好比一座橋梁，能將全文各句有機(jī)地聯(lián)系在一起，從而使句子不再是孤立的獨(dú)立的個(gè)體?！笔褂帽硎巨D(zhuǎn)折，并列，遞進(jìn)，因果關(guān)系等連詞把句子連接起來(lái)，“有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊”使上下文更加通順，邏輯性更強(qiáng)。Im a high school student and I understand what Im studying for. I have been working hard.（原文已給） First of all(過(guò)渡詞), it is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. Whats more(過(guò)渡詞), I take homework seriously and finish it in time, which is a piece of cake for me. In addition(過(guò)渡詞), In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc. Finally(過(guò)渡詞), Interested in reading books, I develop the habit of go