漫畫作文10.29.ppt

書面表達(dá)專題寫作指導(dǎo),Writingbasedonacartoon,湖南省地質(zhì)中學(xué)鐘亞平Oct29th,2015,Acartoon(周練15),StepI.觀察漫畫-Observethepicture,Howtowriteanessaybasedonacartoon?,StepII.解析意圖-Extractthetheme,StepIII.布局謀篇-Designthestructure,Environmentalproblems,StepI.Observethepicture-Topicsofcartoons,Socialphenomenon,Attitudestowardslife,Whatarethecommontopicsofcartoons?,Environmentalproblems,Socialphenomenon,Attitudestowardslife,Title,StepII.Extractthetheme-Tothepoint,Languageclues,Whatshouldwepayspecialattentiontowhilejudgingthethemeofacartoon?,Example下面的漫畫反映了一種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)對(duì)這幅漫畫的理解，用英語寫一篇短文，描述一下他們的不同境遇，并就如何解決此問題發(fā)表你的看法。,ThecomparisonindicatesthephenomenonofeducationinequalityinmodernChina.,Education?,EducationInequality!,Comparison!,Letshaveacompetitionjudgingthethemesofsomecartoons!,Peoplelackcommunication.,Protectanimals.Nobuying,nokilling.,Peoplecantaffordheavymedicalfees.,Onefalsemovemaylosethegame.Lookbeforeyouleap.,Moneycantbuyeverything.Healthisthebestwealth.,下圖是某人壽保險(xiǎn)公司的一則經(jīng)典廣告畫，這則廣告想要告訴我們什么？,Ifunexpectedcantforesee,protectourselvesandbuyinsurance,Theadvertisementaboveshowsusthattherearealwayssomeunexpected“ifs”inourlife,butnotallofuscanforeseethemclearly.Sobuyinginsuranceforlifeislikelythebestwaytoprotectourselvesfromadeadly“if”.,StepIII.布局謀篇-Designthestructure,Howmanypartsshouldbeincludedinourwriting?Andwhatarethey?,PartI.Descriptionofthepicture,StepIII.布局謀篇-Threeparts,PartII.Analysisoftheissue,PartIII.Solutionstotheproblem,Letspractice!,Writing:目前醫(yī)療費(fèi)不斷攀升，有人因付不起昂貴的醫(yī)療費(fèi)而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人們強(qiáng)烈呼吁政府應(yīng)當(dāng)建立有效的醫(yī)療保障體制。假設(shè)你是一名人大代表，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面圖畫，以“HealthCare”為題寫一篇不少于120詞的短文，簡(jiǎn)要說明圖畫中所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，重點(diǎn)闡述這種現(xiàn)象所帶來的后果和你的建議。,Makeanoutlineofthewriting:簡(jiǎn)要說明圖畫中所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，重點(diǎn)闡述這種現(xiàn)象所帶來的后果和你的建議。,體裁(genre):_人稱(person):_時(shí)態(tài)(tense):_PartI:_PartII:_PartIII:_,argumentation,thirdperson&firstperson,simplepast&presenttense,descriptionofthecartoon,phenomenon&itsconsequences,yoursuggestions,PartI:Combinethekeypointsandformthedescriptionparagraph.,Keypoints:anoldman,heartattack,inhospital,medicalfeebillwith$50,000,anotherheartattack,fellontothefloor,PartI.Descriptionofthepicture,FromthepicturewecanseethatAscanbeseeninthepicture,Asisvividlyportrayedinthepicture,Letslookatthepictureabovefirst.ItsapictureaboutThisisafunnyandinstructivepicture,fromwhichwecanseethat,Brieflyandproperly,Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,wecanseethatanoldmanwasinformedofpayinghismedicalfeeforhisheartattack.Themomenthesawthebillwith$50,000,soshockedwashethathenearlyfellontothefloor.Itwasnodoubtanotherheartattacktohim.,Myversion,Brieflyandproperly,Phenomenon,Consequences,-Themedicalfeesareveryhigh.,Society:Itwontbebeneficialtothebuildingofourharmonioussociety.,People:Peoplecantaffordtheheavymedicalfeesandhavetobearthepainofillness.,PartII.Analysisoftheissue,PartII.Analysisoftheissue,Whatthecartoonreflects/illustrates/showssetmethinkingalot.Inreality,itsquitecommonthatAfterseeingthepicture,IwasgreatlyshockedbythephenomenonthatThereasonsforthephenomenonareasfollows.Firstofall,Andthenthesecondreasonisthat.Thelast,Ithink,isItseemsveryridiculousthatHowever,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.Andtheremay/mightbesomeconsequencesresultedbythisphenomenon.,Facts/Reasons/Consequences,PartII:Fillintheblanksandformtheparagraphofanalysis.,_.Inreality,itscommonthat_,somemaygetintodeepdebtinordertogetpropermedicalcareorhavetobearthepainofdiseases._,somemayhavetowaithelplesslyforthelastdayoftheirlife.If_,itwillsurelycausetheinstabilityofoursocietyandeventuallyinterferewiththedevelopmentofourcountry.,manypeoplecantaffordheavymedicalfees.,Becauseofthis,Worsestill,thissituationcontinues,Whatthecartoonreflectssetmethinkingalot,PartIII.Solutionstotheproblem,Measures,Hospital:,Government:,PartIII.Solutionstotheproblem,Inmyopinion,weshouldraisepeoplesawarenessoffirstly.Andthenitishightimewetooksomemeasures.Ontheonehand,Ontheotherhand,AsfarasImconcerned,somemeasuresasfollowsshouldbetakentoputanendtothisissue.Firstandforemost,thegovernmentshouldmakelawstoMeanwhile,themediacanappealforLastbutnottheleast,allpeopleinthecommunityshouldOnlyinthesewayscanwe,awarenessactiongovernmentcommunityindividual,AsfarasImconcerned,somemeasuresasfollowsshouldbetakentoputanendtothisissue.Ontheonehand,thegovernmentshouldbuildupafavorable,medicalsystem.Ontheotherhand,thehospitalshouldputthebenefitsofthepatientsinthefirstplaceandreduceth