初中英語作文講解

1、初中英語作文高分秘訣1. 動(dòng)筆之前，認(rèn)真審題中考考試說明指出，書面表達(dá)要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認(rèn)真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動(dòng)筆，要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個(gè)框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時(shí)態(tài)、活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等。2. 圍繞中心，擬定提綱書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則有四條：（1）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；（2）運(yùn)用詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量；（3）運(yùn)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性；（4）上下文的連貫性。由此可見，要點(diǎn)是給分的一個(gè)重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點(diǎn)，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己

2、的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)逐條列出。根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾，設(shè)想幾個(gè)承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，寫時(shí)切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散，廢話連篇，嚴(yán)重跑題。書面表達(dá)，內(nèi)容廣泛，題材多樣，要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評(píng)論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記，要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況；如果是書信，則要注意書信的格式，注意短文字?jǐn)?shù)不要低于或超過規(guī)定的字?jǐn)?shù)太多。3. 語言通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確(1) 避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。(2) 多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型。可適

3、當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用。1) 語態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無誤。2) 主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。3) 注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。4) 注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。5) 注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)特別注意漢英的不同，例如： 漢語 英語 A. 句號(hào) 。 . B. 省略號(hào) C. 頓號(hào) 、 無(4) 描寫人物時(shí)，要生動(dòng)具

4、體，例如：1) 外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2) 服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3) 內(nèi)心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4) 感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5) 動(dòng)作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。(5) 上下文要

5、連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則，因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時(shí)間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法：1) 表示并列關(guān)系的過渡詞：and, as well as, or 2) 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過渡詞：but, yet, however 3) 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系的過渡詞：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past

6、, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that 4) 表示空間關(guān)系的過渡詞：near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside 5) 表示比較關(guān)系的過渡詞：in the same way, just like, just as 6) 表示對(duì)照關(guān)系的過渡詞：but, still,

7、 yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though 7) 表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過渡詞： also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again 8) 表示因果關(guān)系的過渡詞：because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result9) 表示解釋說明的過渡詞：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually 10) 表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的過渡詞：in fact, indeed, ne

8、cessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important 11) 表示目的的過渡詞：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, 12) 表示列舉的過渡詞：for example , such as 13) 表示總結(jié)性的過渡詞：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all,

9、 in a word, generally speaking 4. 不會(huì)表達(dá)，另辟蹊徑中考作文給分是以要點(diǎn)和語言準(zhǔn)確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準(zhǔn)確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯(cuò)，容易被扣分，閱卷場(chǎng)上有句話：“錯(cuò)誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個(gè)別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來或難以表達(dá)，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。(1) 迂回而行當(dāng)漢語詞義不會(huì)用英語表達(dá)時(shí)，可以想一個(gè)與這個(gè)漢語詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴(kuò)展思路，然后從英語中找出一個(gè)與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。(2) 小詞大用漢語中有些語意看來很復(fù)雜很文雅，但在英語中可用一些常用詞表達(dá)。下面這

10、些詞可能在你的書面表達(dá)中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。(3) 借花獻(xiàn)佛有時(shí)書面表達(dá)中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現(xiàn)。因?yàn)閯倓傋鲞^題，記憶猶新，那么就可信手拈來，為我所用。5. 錦上添花，量力而行如果你還有時(shí)間和精力，想把書面表達(dá)寫得更好，那么，請(qǐng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1) 句型多樣化，不要I（We）到底，使人覺得乏味。(2) 適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句。(3) 進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用定語從句。(4) 適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動(dòng)詞。(5) 偶爾使

11、用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感。(6) 適當(dāng)調(diào)換一下狀語在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。(7) 上下句子緊接時(shí)，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以節(jié)省篇幅。6. 書寫工整，卷面整潔字跡要清晰，讓閱卷人看得清楚，不可字跡潦草，難以辨認(rèn)，要保持卷面的整潔。7. 寫完之后，勿忘檢查中考作文時(shí)，由于時(shí)間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯(cuò)在所難免。因此，改錯(cuò)這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評(píng)卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來給分，根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時(shí)花幾分鐘時(shí)間用來檢查錯(cuò)誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手：(1) 格式是否有錯(cuò)。(2) 拼寫有無錯(cuò)誤。(3) 語言是否用錯(cuò)。(4) 時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。(5)

12、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。(6) 人稱是否用錯(cuò)?！咀⒁狻看藭r(shí)不宜在卷面上作較大的改動(dòng)，以免顧此失彼，影響全局?？傊?，只要平時(shí)同學(xué)們多練習(xí)寫作并有意運(yùn)用上述方法和技巧，合理分配時(shí)間，在中考時(shí)一定能寫出高質(zhì)量的作文，得到令人滿意的考分。(一)掌握技巧：(1)注意篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，合理布局開始部分(opening paragraph)說出文中的要點(diǎn)、核心問題。正文部分(Body paragraphs)圍繞主題開展敘述、討論。結(jié)尾部分(concluding paragraphs)對(duì)全文的總結(jié)和概括。要做到全文中心突出、段落之間必須是有機(jī)地聯(lián)系，內(nèi)容完整、連貫。前后呼應(yīng)，祛除與主題無關(guān)的內(nèi)容。(2)確定主題句主題句是對(duì)全文的概

13、括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“畫龍點(diǎn)睛”的作用。通常主題句出現(xiàn)在一篇文章的開頭，而后，全文對(duì)主題句所提出的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行解釋，擴(kuò)展。寫主題句應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：歸納出你要寫的文章的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)提煉出一句具有概括性的話主題句應(yīng)具有可讀性，抓住、吸引讀者。(二)巧用連接詞要想使文章有整體性、連貫性，就要學(xué)會(huì)正確使用連接詞表示羅列增加First, second, third,First, then / next, after that / next, finallyFor one thingfor another,On (the) one handon the other hand,Besides / wh

14、ats more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also,Especially / In particular,表示時(shí)間順序now, at present, recently,after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,at first, in the beginning, to begin with,later, next, finally,immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that

15、 moment, as soon as, the momentform now on, from then on,at the same time, meanwhile,till, notuntil, before, after, when, while, as during,表示解釋說明now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreoverfurthermore, in fact, actually表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the c

16、ontrary, on the otherhand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, ofcourse, after all,表示并列關(guān)系or, and, also, too, not onlybut also, as well as, bothand, eitheror, neithernor表示因果關(guān)系because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to, due to, therefore, as aresult (of), ot

17、herwise, sothat, suchthat表示條件關(guān)系as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless表示讓步關(guān)系though, although, as, even if, even though, whetheror, however, whoever,whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when,whom)表示舉例for example, for instance, such as, takefor exampl

18、e表示比較be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)just like,just as,表示目的for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,表示強(qiáng)調(diào)in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly,obviously, above all,表示概括歸納in a word, in short, in brief, on

19、the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as faras I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in1考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑:1.問題現(xiàn)狀 2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)) In recent days, we have to face I problem-A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, -(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second, -(舉例進(jìn)一步說明現(xiàn)狀)

20、Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, -(解決方法一). For another -(解決方法二). Finally, -(解決方法三). Personally, I believe that -(我的解決方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because -(帶來的好處).2.觀點(diǎn)型作文：要求論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自

21、己的看法。1.有一些人認(rèn)為。2.另一些人認(rèn)為。3.我的看法。Thetopicof-(主題)isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsofit.SomeeoplesayAisheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof-(支持A的理由一)Whatismore,-理由二).Moreover,-(理由三).WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,-(支持B的理由一).Sec

22、ondly(besides),-(理由二).Thirdly(finally),-(理由三).Frommypointofview,Ithink-(我的觀點(diǎn)).Thereasonisthat-原因).Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.2)給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn),要求考生反對(duì)這一觀點(diǎn)Somepeoplebelievethat-(觀點(diǎn)一).Forexample,theythink-(舉例說明).Anditwillbringthem-(為他們帶來的好處).Inmy

23、opinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.Foronething,-(我不同意該看法的理由一).Foranotherthing,-(反對(duì)的理由之二).FormallwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat-(我對(duì)文章所討論主題的看法).3.作文的框架as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage inthetable(graph/picture/pie/chart), _作文題目的議題_ has been on rise/ decrease (goe

24、sup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from_ in _to _ in _. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that _.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasons accounting for _.Ontheonehand, _. Ontheotherhand,_ is duetothefactthat _.Inaddition,

25、 _ is responsiblefor _.Maybetherearesomeotherreasons toshow _.Butitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementionedreasonsarecommonly convincing.AsfarasIamconcerned,I hold the point of view that _.Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.1：投訴信 Dear_, I am . (自我介紹) I feel bad to trouble you but I am afrai

26、d that I have to make a complaint about_. The reason for my dissatisfaction is _(總體介紹). In the first place,_(抱怨的第一個(gè)方面). In addition, _(抱怨的第二個(gè)方面). Under these circumstances, I find it _(感覺) to _(抱怨的方面給你帶來的后果). I appreciate it very much if you could_(提出建議和請(qǐng)求), preferably _(進(jìn)一步的要求), and I would like to

27、 have this matter settled by _(設(shè)定解決事情最后期限). Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming 2：詢問信 Dear _, I am _(自我介紹). I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding_.(要詢問的內(nèi)容) First of all, what are _?(第一個(gè)

28、問題) Secondly, when will_?(第二個(gè)問題) Thirdly, is _?(第三個(gè)問題) I would also like to inquire _(將最重要的問題單獨(dú)成段). Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects? Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated. Yours sincere

29、ly Li Ming 3：請(qǐng)求信 Dear_, I am writing to formally request to_(請(qǐng)求的內(nèi)容) The reason for _is that_（給出原因）.I_, so I _(給出細(xì)節(jié)) I would also like to request _(提出進(jìn)一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to

30、contact me at_(電話號(hào)碼). I look forward to a favorable reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming 初中英語寫作范文集錦一圍繞：學(xué)校讓學(xué)生打掃廁所和學(xué)校不讓學(xué)生打掃廁所兩種情況。寫一不少于80個(gè)詞的主題為“孩子的獨(dú)立教育”英語作文。給出詞：only child， moral educationnowadays in china， many students are the only child in their family. they are the apple of their parents eyes or even th

31、eir granparents， so they are free of any house work or menial labor. and moral education is no more than some bookish thing. studentsare largely dependent on their parents and teachers.to educate them to be independent， the most effective way is to let them experience on their own. therefore，they ar

32、e better to be given the opportunity to get some train at school-to clean the washing room，which can be regarded as part of the moral education.范文：關(guān)于國慶節(jié)的英語作文例1National Day is coming，and we can have a seven-day.My family are going to Hainan.Its a good seaside city.We are staying there for a week. We

33、are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.Were visiting Tianya Haijiao，Wanquan River and many other beautiful places.I think well have a good time there.國慶節(jié)來了，我有七天的假期。我們一家去海南。那是一個(gè)美麗的海濱城市。我們?cè)谀抢锎弦粋€(gè)星期。我們?nèi)ド碁?，還在海里游泳。我們游覽“天涯海角”，菀泉河還有別的許多好地方。我想我們?cè)谀抢飼?huì)玩得很開心。例2National Day HolidaysI went to my cou

34、sins house on the first day of the holidays and got a piece of good news that his wife was pregnant；She said shes worrying about getting fat，but on her face there was a unconcealable pleasure of conceiving a baby.My cousin told me that hell educate his child in a severe way，with a future fathers mat

35、ureness.Im happy for them.：）Yesterday，our research schools soccer team had a match with the graduate students from the department of international business.It was almost a close game in the first half，but we seemed lacking of vigor in the second half，so，we lost the game.Half of the National Day holi

36、days have passed bylife still goes with good and bad times.范文：中學(xué)生該不該上網(wǎng)（2）最近你們學(xué)校要舉行一次“中學(xué)生該不該上網(wǎng)”的討論。你是贊成者之一，認(rèn)為我們不應(yīng)該因噎廢食。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇發(fā)言篇。要求：字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右注意：不要逐句翻譯。益處 1.看國內(nèi)外新聞，獲取信息。2.發(fā)e-mail，打電話。 3.上網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)校，閱讀各種書籍，自學(xué)外語。 4.欣賞音樂，觀看體育比賽，玩棋牌等游戲，網(wǎng)上購物，豐富我們的生活。 5.提高我們操作電腦的能力 注意事項(xiàng)1不要沉湎于（be given to）上網(wǎng)以免影響生活和學(xué)習(xí)。2不要上不健康的網(wǎng)站

37、。 參考范文：In my opinion，the Internet is helpful rather than harmful as someone else thinks. As is known to all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. On the Internet，we can read news at home and from abroad and get as much information as we can. We can send e - mails

38、or make phone calls to our family as well as to our friends. We can also attend the net school，read many books and even teach ourselves English. We can also enjoy music，watch matches and play computer games on the Internet. We can even do shopping on line. Besides，we can improve our ability to opera

39、te the computer.But we should not be given to the Internet，or well get our life and study destroyed. Besides，we should keep off the harmful websites. Anyhow，this doesnt prevent the Internet becoming our friend. We cant throw away the apple because of the core，can we？范文：我的同學(xué) My Classmate （3）請(qǐng)以“My Cla

40、ssmate”為標(biāo)題寫一篇記敘文要求：1、主題明確，語言流暢，思路清晰。 2、字?jǐn)?shù)在100字以內(nèi)。思路點(diǎn)撥：寫記敘文要按照事物發(fā)展的客觀規(guī)律敘述，所敘述的內(nèi)容要交代清楚，條理清晰，重點(diǎn)突出，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。這篇文章也是記敘文，主人公應(yīng)該用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主。本文以主人公為中心線索，以一、兩件事件為重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容去組織材料，反映主人公的形象特征。整個(gè)內(nèi)容情節(jié)要合情合理，有真實(shí)感，敘述時(shí)可按事情發(fā)展的順序進(jìn)行，同時(shí)加以點(diǎn)評(píng)。參考范文My ClassmateLiu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to h

41、elp others.One day on his way to school，he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived，a

42、nd he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom，the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.初中英語寫作范文集錦二范文：介紹學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)情況It is my honor to show you around，and now I will introduce something about our study. At present w

43、e learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses. We can study what we are interested in. In this way，we can develop ourselves in different aspects. And we can also study on the Internet.范文：A piano playerWhat do I want to do when Im older？ Someone wants to be a doctor. Someone wants

44、 to be a basketball player because they are good at sport. Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing. Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.I like playing the piano and I good at it. So I want to become a piano player. Play the piano is very interesting. And yo

45、u can learn something of music. Piano can make you like music. A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.I play the piano when Im ten years old. Now Im in grand five. I hope when Im sixteen years old ， I can become grand eight. Ill be harder and harder to practise.Become a piano play is a

46、hard job. But I believe I can do it.范文：my dream placeThe winter vacation passed quickly. In those days， I have done some things. Playing， doing homework and so on. Sometimes I helped my mother doing some housework. She thanked to me. Though， I was proud of myself. I also went over my English learnin

47、g. I think I have known more than before. In the new term， I will study hard.范文：The thing that Ill never forgetHow time flies！Im fifteen years now.During the long time，there was one thing that I will never forget.The Spring Festival is our traditional festival.During the Spring Festival，people usual

48、ly visit their friends and relatives.When I was 9 years old，my family took the bus to my grandparents to say “Happy New Year” to them.In the bus，I had a good seat.At 7：30，the bus came to a village.A woman got on with a baby in her arms.At that time，there was no seat.But she must look after her baby

49、carefully.She had to stand next to me.I wanted to stand up and let her sit down，but I was afraid of hearing the other people say“That girl want to be praised.”I looked around.Most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping.Suddenly，a little boy behind me，stood up and made room for

50、 the woman.She said “Thank you very much” with a big smile.The boy smiled，too.When I told my cousin about it after that，he said “The child is the father of a man.” Im very ashamed.Why couldt I do the same thing as the little boy did？From that I learn that we should do our best to help people who nee

51、d help.If everyone makes a contribution to helping others，the world will become much more beautiful！范文：怎樣學(xué)習(xí)英語 How to study English？作文一：Study English，You do need to use English with speakers who are not teachers of English. This isnt easy，since everyone feels constrained speaking English with friends

52、 with whom it would be natural to use a shared mother tongue. Joining an English Club is a good idea and joining a club with an international membership （where English is in use at least some of the time） is，for many people，even better. If nothing like this is accessible，you might consider what would be involved in getting something going.你需要常常和英語教師以外的人士用英語交談。這當(dāng)然很不容易，因?yàn)榕c母語相同的人自由交談時(shí)，彼此若用英語交談總會(huì)覺得很不自在。亦可參加英語俱樂部或國際會(huì)員的俱樂部（至少有時(shí)使用英語溝通），這樣對(duì)很多人而言更有益。如果沒有合適的社團(tuán)可加入，也不妨考慮任何足以提高英語能力的機(jī)會(huì)。作文二：There are four key points to study English：liste