中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)知識(shí)點(diǎn)(大全)經(jīng)典1

1、中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)知識(shí)點(diǎn)( 大全 ) 經(jīng)典 1一、中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1“ 帆起航新學(xué)期，學(xué)姐學(xué) 提建 ”。你 上就要 了，在初中的學(xué) 和生活中你一定有很多收 ， 學(xué)弟學(xué)妹 提幾點(diǎn)建 吧！要求： 1. 內(nèi)容完整， 言流 ， 寫(xiě) 范清晰。2. 短文中不能出 正式姓名，校名。100 左右。【答案】 Im going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes

2、Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful

3、 school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.【解析】【 解】 篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短 ， 文章增色不少，如be going to ，graduatefrom ， to begin with ， both and，get along well with others ， be active in， as important as ， as well 等。而 To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not leas

4、t, 等短 的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多 化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué) 中注意 牢 一些固定句式及短 ，寫(xiě)作 就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有 性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】 面表達(dá) 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求將所 定的材料內(nèi)容 整理后展開(kāi)思 ，考 運(yùn)用所學(xué)英 知 準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，盡可能使用高 和 復(fù) 的句式 構(gòu)以便得到 高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2隨著社會(huì)的 展，通 的方式從 古 代的 信到當(dāng)今的互 網(wǎng)， 著巨大的 化。 你寫(xiě)一篇短文， 你 代通 工具的使用及看法。內(nèi)容包括：1. 你喜 使用的通 方式有哪些？2. 它

5、的 點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么？3. 你 使用 代通 工具要注意什么？要求： 1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出 真 的學(xué)校名稱(chēng)和姓名；2. 意 ， 數(shù)80左右。開(kāi) 已 出，不 入 數(shù)。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me,【答案】 As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by

6、 mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones.By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about

7、mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文， 我 代通 工具的使用及看法?！?解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人稱(chēng) 第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主 一致 ，句子 構(gòu)主要 系表 構(gòu)和 構(gòu)，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：thereare ， I prefer t

8、o ，Mobile phones bring ，we can ， we should ，So let 等s句式的 用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代 ，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述 序，符合 關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文 構(gòu) 湊， 言 。開(kāi) 介 了我喜 使用的通 方式有哪些；接下來(lái)介 它 的 點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么，以及使用 代通 工具要注意什么；最后呼吁號(hào)召大家合理使用 代通 工具。此 prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in ones opinion,try one s best等 些 的運(yùn)用也 文章增色不少。3 面表達(dá)“小手拉

9、大手 ,同做文明人。 ”自 建文明城市文明 村以來(lái),淄博人民萬(wàn)眾一心,眾 志成城 ,讓人點(diǎn) 的行 隨 可 。作 中學(xué)生,我 也做出了自己的努力。 根據(jù)以下所 要點(diǎn) ,寫(xiě)一篇 100 左右的英 短文。1.種植花草 木；2.遵守交通 ；3.公共 合不大聲喧 ；4.公交 上主 有需要的人 座；（自主 ,至少兩點(diǎn)）參考 : civilized 文明的make joint efforts 共同努力obey 遵守【答案】 Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint eff

10、orts （共同努力） . Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addi

11、tion （此外） , we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never litteringanywhere. Furthermore （而且） , we are accustomed to （習(xí)慣于） queuing up （排隊(duì)） for a ti

12、cket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如 make joint efforts ， as junior students ， for example ， obey the traffic rules ， run red light， in addition ， no longer ，in public ， an

13、d so on ，whats more ，on a bus， in need， be accustomed to ， queue up ， all in all 等。而 to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo ci

14、ty more civilized. 等插入語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使語(yǔ)言表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。4安全對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語(yǔ)小短文。提示：1. 體育鍛煉2. 上下樓梯3. 交朋結(jié)友4. 食品衛(wèi)生要求： 1. 語(yǔ)句通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容連貫；2短文可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；但要包含以上要點(diǎn)。3詞數(shù)： 801

15、00 詞。短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to usstudents._ _【答案】 Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially importantto us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we ar

16、e having sports.Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So donwith each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident.Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don t quarrel or even fight. Last but tnot least

17、 , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, its important to remember these for us all.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。結(jié)合要點(diǎn)提示，可知本文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，注意圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時(shí)態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。5書(shū)面表達(dá)你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding sc

18、hool ）和走讀（ a day school）兩類(lèi)學(xué)校的選擇。請(qǐng)你以 “A boarding school or a day school為題?！睂?xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容須包括：讀寄宿學(xué)校的利和弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利和弊；你的選擇和理由（不得與上述兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容重復(fù)）。注意： 1. 詞數(shù) ;100 詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, _【答案】We

19、 are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we

20、 choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us.As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文?？梢苑秩螌?xiě)。第一段要寫(xiě)總體交代你即將升入高

21、中，面臨寄宿（ a boarding school ）和走讀（ a day school）兩類(lèi)學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫(xiě)詳細(xì)敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?！驹斀狻繉?xiě)作之前要1.審清題目，看看有哪些要求？哪些時(shí)態(tài)？人稱(chēng)？2.確定文章類(lèi)型，記敘文？說(shuō)明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？3.確定時(shí)態(tài)，單一還是混合。4.寫(xiě)下關(guān)鍵詞、短語(yǔ)、句型。5.列出提綱和段落，并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^(guò)渡詞銜接。6.根據(jù)提綱和段落結(jié)構(gòu)句型及關(guān)鍵詞句完成文章。寫(xiě)完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤(rùn)色，人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過(guò)渡法和自然銜接法來(lái)是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語(yǔ)、句型：bo

22、th kinds of 、If we choose a boarding school 、 At the same time 、 As for me, I prefer a boarding school 、 payattention to 、來(lái)增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。6誠(chéng)信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，也是社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀內(nèi)容之一。而你的朋友Daming 最近卻被誠(chéng)信危機(jī)所困擾。上周末，他本來(lái)和Lingling 相約一起去電影院看電影，但是他卻因?yàn)樵诩覐?fù)習(xí)考試，把

23、這件事忘了，直到第二天才想起來(lái)。因此，Lingling 很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。請(qǐng)你就此事給校報(bào)投稿，以“The Importance of Promise 為題”，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1、簡(jiǎn)述事件；2、談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，并給Daming一些建議。注意：1、詞數(shù) 80100；2、行文連貫，邏輯合理；3、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名；4、文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)） the importance of the promise, and they h

24、ate people who break their promise.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.Yours,Tony【答案】 The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it wa

25、s really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, itwas really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling

26、 s anger, but also made her lo trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. WhatDaming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件，需要學(xué)生通過(guò)大明和

27、玲玲之間，大明沒(méi)有信守承諾的事情，談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫(xiě)出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說(shuō)自己對(duì)此的看法?！驹斀狻渴紫?，第一句話(huà)直接點(diǎn)明作者的觀點(diǎn)，大明是犯錯(cuò)了的。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)。接下來(lái)說(shuō)出自己對(duì)此事件的看法，不信守承諾會(huì)導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任，對(duì)大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯(cuò)之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯。【點(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴(yán)密。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but ， so，because of 等，使文章更加通順。7書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是李明，你

28、的英國(guó)筆友Jack來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。請(qǐng)你按照以下提示給他回一封e-mail 。內(nèi)容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴(yán)重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。參考詞匯：霧霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；2. 語(yǔ)言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù) 80 左右，信件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for t

29、he weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something about the haze._Yours,Li Ming【答案】 Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my

30、hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government sug

31、gests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protectthe environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I m looking forward to your reply. Yours,Li M

32、ing【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國(guó)筆友寫(xiě)信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。題目中列出了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)提示，來(lái)組織語(yǔ)言，充實(shí)內(nèi)容。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴(yán)重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎么做。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時(shí)態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，寫(xiě)完整的句子，利用簡(jiǎn)單句的基本句型，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句；語(yǔ)句之間

33、使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實(shí)際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達(dá)清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，作者根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。短文中語(yǔ)言得體，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句式有More and more peopl

34、e have to go tosee the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze 、 People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、 The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 In addition, I will tell the

35、 people I meet to protect the environment. 等。8假如你叫李華，最近你班里的美國(guó)交換生Lucy 想要感受中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化。周末你和父母商議后，打算邀請(qǐng)她去老舍茶館。你通過(guò)微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。提示詞語(yǔ)： Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問(wèn)題： Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】 Hi, Lucy! I know you l

36、ike Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinesetraditional culture there. Let s meet at the gate of Laoshe

37、Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】 是一篇 材料作文，我通 微信告 Lucy 要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何 何地 面。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 和一般將來(lái) ，人稱(chēng) 第一人稱(chēng)，注意主 一致 ，句子 構(gòu)主要 系表 構(gòu)和 構(gòu)，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：I wantto ， We are going to，We can ， Let s meet at 等句式的 用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代 ，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述 序，符合 關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文 構(gòu) 湊， 言 。開(kāi) 介 了我想要邀 你去老舍茶 ，接下來(lái)介 我 去那里做什么，最后指出我 要在何 何地

38、 面。此 want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb dosth, at the gate of等 些 的運(yùn)用也 文章增色不少。9假 你是Beth,前段 曾向英 ?？端鸵黄?My English Teacher Miss Zhang 的短 。近日，又至 季， 生 忙著互致 言。 此， 部策劃開(kāi)“A Letter to MyTeacher ” ，邀 你以信件的形式重新投稿。短 如下：My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and hel

39、pful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her.注意事 ：1.稿件內(nèi)容 根據(jù)短 展開(kāi)合理想象，不得抄寫(xiě)短 原文：2.要求 句通 、意思 、符合情境。3. 數(shù)在 70 個(gè)左右，稿件的首尾已在答 卡上 出，不 入 數(shù)：4.稿件必 寫(xiě)在答 卡指定的位置上。_【答案】 Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher She is Miss Zhang.She

40、is my English teacher She is in her forties Her small round glasses make her look smart She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours She is kind and helpful ， too She always helps us with our study She loves jogging， so she looks healthy To my surprise， she has donated blood

41、many times since 2001 She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular TeacherI hope that you agree with me Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【

42、詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開(kāi) “A Letter to My Teacher專(zhuān)欄”，邀請(qǐng)你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。【點(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)