初中英語書面表達(dá)練習(xí)題

1、（英語）初中英語書面表達(dá)練習(xí)題一、英語書面表達(dá)1書面表達(dá)在本周班會課上，同學(xué)們對“初中生什么時候放學(xué)比較合適？”這一問題進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論。大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5 點(diǎn)左右放學(xué)，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。請你寫一篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。time to leave school at 5 o clockat 4:45 at 5 o clock.activities to do after schoolexercise to keep healthy and read booksdo what we want, such as listening to musictake a par

2、t-time job.注意：（ 1）短文必須包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（ 2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；（ 3）詞數(shù)： 80-100；（ 4）短文開頭僅供參考，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文開頭： “what time should junior high school students leave school?” this week we haveheld a class meeting to talk about it. here is the result of the discussion._【答案】 “what time should junior high school stude

3、nts leave school?”this week we have held aclass meeting to talk about it. here is the result of the discussion.most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock. they can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.some think that students should leav

4、e school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.a few think 5 o clock is the best time to finish school. after school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.i am in favor of leaving school a

5、t five oclock. besides having time to play tennis, i can also drawsome pictures i like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting ，talkabout ， the result of ， keep healthy ， after school ，have more time to do ， want to do ， such as， listen to music ， in favor of ，clean the room ， play t

6、ennis 等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu) they can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school. 和 most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock./ some think that students should leaveschool at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listen

7、ing tomusic.等復(fù) 從句 構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多 化；同 most studentsthink / some think / a few think使敘述條理， 次分明，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué) 中注意 牢 一些固定句式及短 ，寫作 就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有 性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】 面表達(dá) 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求將所 定的材料內(nèi)容 整理后展開思 ，考 運(yùn)用所學(xué)英 知 準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，盡可能使用高 和 復(fù) 的句式 構(gòu)以便得到 高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2 面表達(dá)假如你是九年 學(xué)生李 ，你的美國筆友bill

8、y 來 件 你平 的情況。 你根據(jù)以下信息， billy 回封 子 件，并建 他每周都要花些 身體。寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 你最近正忙于 即將到來的體育 （physical test）做準(zhǔn) 。2. 介 你平 的情況：（ 1）每天 的 ：不到一個半小 。（ 2）偶 不 的原因：作 多，沒 。（ 3）擅 的體育運(yùn) ：球 運(yùn) 。3. 你 來了哪些好 。寫作要求：1. 不得使用真 的姓名和學(xué)校名。2. 可適當(dāng)加入 ，使內(nèi)容充 ，行文 。3. 字跡工整， 言精 ，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰。4. 至少80 。dear billy,it s my great pleasure to receive your-maile.

9、_best wishes!yours,li hua【答案】 dear billy,it s my great pleasure to receive your- maile. you wanted to know about my usual exercise. i ll tellit to you.i am busy preparing for the coming physical test. so i take exercise less than an hour every day. sometimes i don t do exercise, because i have so mu

10、ch homework that i have no time to do it. i do well in playing balls.doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. besides, i think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. so i advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.best wishes!yours,li hua【解析】【分析】 是

11、一篇 材料作文， billy 回封 子 件，介 自己平 的 情況，并建 他每周都要花些 身體。【 解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人稱 數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主 一致 ，句子 構(gòu)主要 系表 構(gòu)和 構(gòu)，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：i ambusy ， because i have，doing exercise can help， soiadvise you to等句式的 用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代 ，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述 序，符合 關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文 構(gòu) 湊， 言 。開 表示很高 收到?jīng)r，最后指出 我 來的好 以及我建 billy 的來信，接下來介 我平 的 情billy

12、 要多 。此 be busy doing sth,prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等 些 的運(yùn)用也 文章增色不少。3 面表達(dá)每年的 4 月 23 日是世界 日， 個 念日的意 在于推 更多人去 。假如你校將開展“ 好 ，促成 ”活 ， 你根據(jù) 活 的主 ，向全校同學(xué) 出倡 。1. 取知 ，開 野 的意 2. 使人愉悅，益于學(xué) 3. （自由 ）1. 作 多，無良好 狀2. 不知道 什么 ，不會 倡 （至少兩點(diǎn)）注意： 1. 數(shù) 90 左右。短文的開 已 你寫好，不 入 數(shù)；2. 短文 包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐 翻 ，可

13、適當(dāng) ，使短文 、通 ；3. 短文中不得出 真 的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。dear classmates,reading is very important in our daily life._let s start reading now!【答案】 reading is very important in our daily life first of all ，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books it can also help to open up a whole new world to us s

14、econd， reading will/can make us clever and happy it is good for our study and it can help us grow up third， reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful however ， there is usually so much homework for us to do that we dont have enough time for reading moreover ， some o

15、f us dont have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching tv and searching the internet in my opinion ， our school can have areading weekonce a term teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library we must spend more time reading some useful booksas a result，we

16、 can have a better future lets start reading now!【解析】亮點(diǎn) 明： 篇 作的 次清晰，內(nèi)容 ，表達(dá)流 。文中使用了非常好的短 ，例如 first of all ， all kinds of books ， help to do ， be good for ， more and further ， so much， spend too much time doing ， search the internet ，in my opinion ，as a result 等。同 first of all ，/ second， / third 等 副 和

17、 however/ moreover / as a result 等 構(gòu)副 的運(yùn)用，既使文章的思路清晰、 次分明， 豐富了 作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多 ，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛： 面表達(dá) 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求將所 定的材料內(nèi)容 整理后展開思 ，考 運(yùn)用所學(xué)英 知 準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，盡可能使用高 和 復(fù) 的句式 構(gòu)以便得到 高的分?jǐn)?shù)。4 面表達(dá)初三的學(xué) 生活繁忙中有困惑、淚水，也有 步、喜悅。 根據(jù)表格提示，寫一篇 “ our school life in grade nine的短文，介” 九年 的學(xué)校生活，并提出希望和建

18、。老 工作 真 ，充 心在校學(xué)生（至少 兩點(diǎn)）作 作 多舍棄 好周末其它活 ， 愿望（ 一到兩點(diǎn)）要求：1所寫內(nèi)容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：2文章不少于90 詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3語意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。our school life in grade nineit is more than half a year since we became a grade nine student. here is what our school life is like now.【答案】 our school lif

19、e in grade nineit is more than half a year since we became a grade nine student. here is what our school life is like now.at school, all of our teachers work very hard. most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. as a result, they won h

20、igh respect from us. as for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. after class, we are busy doing our homework. every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.at weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. so we cant afford time

21、for our hobbies any more. i feel a bit stressed actually, so i try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite tv program to get relaxed.no pains, no gains. but the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如

22、at school， work hard ， most of ， patient enough ，help sb. with sth. ，all kinds of problems ， in our life ， as a result， as for students ， listen to ， be busy doing ， try to do ， spend a lot of time doing ， not any more ，play basketball 等。而 it is more than half a year since we became a grade nine stu

23、dent./ but the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be. 等多種特殊比較級句式結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5書面表達(dá)假如你是華 ,你的英國筆友對中國文化很感興趣,想到中國旅行感受中國文化。你想

24、請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。1 位置 :中國東部 ,安做省南部 :2.氣候 :春暖花開 ,秋季涼爽3.景點(diǎn) :山和古村落 :4.文化 :茶、黃梅戲5.建議提示詞 :黃梅戲 huangmei opera注意 :1.詞數(shù) 80-1002.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己真實(shí)的校名和人名4.開頭和結(jié)展己給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)dear davei know that you are interested in chinese culture and im glad you are planning a trip to china.why not co

25、me to anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】 dear dave，i know you are interested in chin ese culture and i m glad you are planning a trip to china. whynot come to anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.anhui province lies in the east of china. the best time to come here is in autumn, because itreally c

26、ool and you can just take some light coats. there are many famous places to see. forexample, mt. huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. besides, anhuiis also famous for ancient villages such as xidi, hongcun and so on. as a fan of chinese culture,don t forget to try green

27、tea in anhui which smells good and tastes better. what s more,and watch huangmei opera. it s easy to understand and won t let you down!welcome to anhui! i m looking forward to seeing you here!yours,li hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友 dave 寫信，邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng) 安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應(yīng)從以下幾個內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來

28、這里最好的時候；接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化，并給出建議。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應(yīng)合理安排幾個內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。另外，英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，因此寫作時不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。如可以使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌握，不容易出錯。但為提升文章檔次，也應(yīng)穿插一些并列句結(jié)構(gòu)或復(fù)合句，以及使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請 dave 來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化。短文有如下幾個特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，并對細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)

29、充和修飾，使內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、豐富。短文先對dave 發(fā)出邀請，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等，并提出了建議。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英 的表達(dá) 。短文以一般 在 來敘述，注意了 第三人稱 數(shù)形式的 化。句式 構(gòu)以 句 主，也使用了并列句、 從句、狀 從句等復(fù)合句， 有一些好的句型，如the best time to come here is in autumn, because its really cool and you can just takesome light coats 、 besides,

30、 anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as xidi, hongcun and soon.、 what s more, come andwatch huangmei opera. it s easy to understand and won t let youdown! 、 i m looking forward to seeing you here!等。6 面表達(dá)根據(jù)下列表格的提示，寫一篇 changes in our hometown 的英 短文（80 左右）文章內(nèi)容必 包含所 的所有信息開 已 出，不 入 數(shù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)： 去 在1

31、舊房1高樓2河水 2河水清澈（ clean and clear）3步行、 自行 上班3乘公交 、小汽 上班4道路狹窄（ narrow ）4街道 （ wide ），干 整 5居住條件（ living conditions ）差5生活越來越好， 境（ environment ）越來越舒適6你的感想 （寫兩到三句）changes in our hometownin the past ten years ， great changes have taken place in our hometown 【答案】 changes in our hometownin the past ten years,

32、great changes have taken place in our hometown. in the past, there used to be old houses. the river was very dirty. the roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. people were not rich. they went to work on foot or by bike. but now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. we ca

33、n see the clean river and the clear water . even we can see fish in the water. there are many wide and clean roads. our life is better and better the environment around us is more and more comfortable. people usually go to work by bus or by car.i am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. bu

34、t i think it s still important to remembe the past. it tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【 解】亮點(diǎn) 明： 篇 作的 次清晰，內(nèi)容 ，表達(dá)流 。文中使用了非常好的短 ，例如take place， in our hometown ， in the past ， used to be ，go to do ， on foot ， by bike，better and better ， more and more 等。而 i think its still important to

35、 remember the past/it tells thatwe should cherish the present life. 等賓語從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。7書面表達(dá)假如你是李明，你的英國筆友jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。請你按照以下提示給他回一封e-mail 。內(nèi)容如下：1

36、. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴(yán)重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。參考詞匯：霧霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù) 80 左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。dear jack,i m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health . now i d like to tell you somet

37、hing about the haze._yours,li ming【答案】 dear jack,i m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. now i d like to tell you something about the haze.the hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. it was bad for our daily life.

38、 more and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. a great number of people have to stay at home .people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. the government suggests that people go to work or school by public transpo

39、rt, such as the bus and the subway.as for me, i will go to school by bike or on foot. in addition, i will tell the people i meet to protectthe environment. would you l ike to tell me some good ideas? i m looking forward to your reply.yours,li ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國筆友寫信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。題目中列出了三

40、個要點(diǎn)，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)提示，來組織語言，充實(shí)內(nèi)容。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴(yán)重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎么做。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段，一個內(nèi)容一段。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡單句的基本句型，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句；語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧

41、霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實(shí)際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達(dá)清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用了一般過去時、一般將來時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。短文中語言得體，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句式有more and more people have to go tosee the doctor due to the serious disease

42、s caused by the haze 、 people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、 the government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 in addition, i will tell the people i meet to protect the environment. 等。8書面表達(dá)難忘的初中三

43、年學(xué)習(xí)生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲，你一定既有收獲又有不足，也有許多對自己未來的期待。請以my unforgettable middle school life為題，根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。注意 :1. 數(shù) 90 左右。短文的開 已 你寫好，不 入 數(shù);2.短文 包括所有要點(diǎn)，并 充相關(guān)信息，可適當(dāng) 。 言 、通 ;3.短文中不得出 真 的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。how time flies! my colourful middle school life is nearly ending. here is what i think about myself.

44、【答案】 how time flies! my colourful middle school life is nearly ending. here is what i thinkabout myself.in the past, i learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. so, i am very grateful to them. they helped me a lot! i also got on well with my classmates. we shared happ

45、iness and sadness together. we were like a big family. however, i still have a lot to improve. i didn t do well in maths because i gave up easily when meeting difficult maths problems. besides, i didn t have a good sense of time. i used to go to school late andthat made my teachers angry. therefore,

46、 in the future, i will try my best to become better. i will work harder and organize mylife and my time better. i hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】 分析：本篇 面表達(dá)以“my unforgettable middle school life ，” 合本 所 的寫作信息， 述自己 忘的中學(xué)生活。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會用一般 去 和一般將來 ，注意一些常 句式的 用。寫作中注意 、固定短 的交替使

47、用，使文意 接 密， 要注意使用豐富的 句，注意敘述 序，符合 關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文 構(gòu) 湊，要點(diǎn) 全， 言 。文中not onlybut also，help a lot ，share happiness and sadness， do well in ， give up, besides， so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.， therefore, be proud of 等 （ ）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意 接 密；文章的最后 i hope one day, my school and te

48、achers will be proud of me! 表達(dá)了自己愿望與想法，使文章增色不少， 得學(xué) 。9書面表達(dá)為了配合 “足球進(jìn)校園 ”活動，你們班開展了一次主題班會。請你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。歷史悠久，深受喜愛常 識世界杯 4 年舉行一次男生女生皆可參加好 處利于培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神考生自擬（至少1 點(diǎn)）偶 像梅西，有足球天賦夢 想考生自擬（至少1 點(diǎn)）注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 90 左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；1.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；2.短文中不得真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

49、參考詞匯：梅西messidear classmates,i m very excited to hear that china will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.thank you for your attention.【答案】 dear classmates，i m very excited to hear that china will build 20， 000 football-themed schools by 2020 football has a very long history it is liked by people all over the world the world cup takes place every four years playing football has lots of advantages first ，both boys and girls can take part in it second， it helps develop team spirit what s more， playing football is good for our health i m a football fanmess