中考英語(yǔ)作文指導(dǎo)課課件

1、How can we write a good composition(作文)?,中考寫作指導(dǎo)課,basic structure (基本結(jié)構(gòu)的安排),Dear Mr. Know， I m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us arent interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then its

2、 so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we c

3、ant understand the main idea, let alone(更不用說)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to me soon.,Lets go for it!,M

4、ary,(the beginning),(the ending),the body（正文）,basic rules (寫作考試規(guī)則),search（審） list（列） add(加: 開頭和結(jié)尾) connect(連) beautifY(美：諺語(yǔ)/例子),健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國(guó)際健康組織對(duì)此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請(qǐng)為國(guó)際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。,審(search),travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents

5、,work,如何度假 調(diào)查報(bào)告 倡議假日休閑,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,列(list),根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡(jiǎn)單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)。,A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.,列(list),How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey

6、 and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）,加(add),加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的

7、句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔、漂亮。,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacatio

8、n. People who relax well work well.,連(connect),Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）,方法一:善用高級(jí)詞匯,Which is better?,他們很早就到了。,A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.,我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境。,A We should protect the environment. B Its our duty to protect the environment.,方法二:活用多種句型,Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）,她還小，搬不動(dòng)這

9、么重的箱子。,A She is very young. She cant carry the heavy box. B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the,方法三:妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞,Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）,1.表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, as well as, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor 2.表示選擇: or

10、, eitheror 3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示條件: if , unless 6.表示對(duì)比: instead, notbut, while, in the same way, on the one handon the other hand 7.表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell

11、 the truth 8.表示順序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào): also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示結(jié)論: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short,關(guān)聯(lián)詞(connection words),Lets try,_ I am tired,

12、 I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,ThoughAlthough,instead,like,First,Next,FinallyAt last,How do people spend their vacation? W

13、e made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,連(connect),美(

14、beautify),We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit

15、 friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美(beautify),According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watchi

16、ng TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美(beautify),And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.,Proverb（諺語(yǔ)）/say

17、ing,集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí),We should concentrate on our studies.,As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.,加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying) 可用于開頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。,加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,加入英語(yǔ)俱樂部是學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好方法,Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,As the say

18、ing goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying) 可用于開頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。,加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,Enjoy some proverbs,1.Practice makes perfect. 2.Think twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans do.,三思而后行。,熟能生巧。,有志者事竟成。,

19、入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。,早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。,失敗是成功之母。,5.The early bird catches the worm.,3.Where there is a will, there is a way.,6.Failure is the mother of success.,Enjoy some proverbs,7.It is no use crying over spilt milk. 8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 9.All roads lead to Rome. 10.Never too old to learn.,覆水難收。,一天一蘋果

20、， 醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。,條條大路通羅馬。,活到老，學(xué)到老。,方法四:妙用諺語(yǔ)和例子（多用于“the body”）,Writing skills（“寫”的技巧）,青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球。,We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.,For example, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy

21、.,加例子,加例子,在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務(wù)活。,I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.,Lets Do it now ! / Dont do it again! As students, we should start from ourselves.,Dont wait. Join us now! Start to join us now! Dont put it off! Become a volu

22、nteer today! How amazing! I cant wait! Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet! It will be great fun!,結(jié)尾：提出倡議或號(hào)召,First，some of us arent interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of u

23、s dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent met before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we cant understand the main idea, let alone(更不用說)answer the questions about th

24、em. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences.,Lets go for it!,Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for you.,Yours ,_, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, yo

25、u can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill. _, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.,Your turn to go for

26、it!（試填一填）,Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for you.,Yours ,_, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it i

27、s necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill._, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.,To begin with,Of course,In fact,Then,Your turn to go for it!（check）,Lets practise.,During the winter holidays, It

28、 happened a lot of things. One of the things was helpt a small girl to find her mother. When my friends and me shopping in a shopping mall, we saw a small girl cried in a corner. We asked what happened on her . She said she cuondt found her mother. So we started to helpt she to found her mother. Luc

29、kily, we found her mother, they were very happy and we were happy, too. I think it was the most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays because I found I also can help others.,The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays.,Check and correct this article.,a lot of things happened

30、.,helping,I,were shopping,crying,happened to,couldnt,find,help,her,find,.,They,could also, so,滿分作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：,第一檔：（1720分） 完全符合題目要求，觀點(diǎn)正確, 要點(diǎn)齊全，立意高。 句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，具有邏輯性。 卷面書寫干凈， 整潔，無涂抹，字跡大小適中，疏密合適，書寫美觀。標(biāo) 點(diǎn)，大小寫正確。 最好能有一兩個(gè)亮點(diǎn)句。 （主從，定從，表從，諺語(yǔ)）,規(guī)范三寫：大 小 寫,拼 寫,書 寫,隨著人口的增多，人類不僅需要越來越多的地方居住，而且需要越來越多的食物。

31、人類把森林變成了耕地；新的城市和道路占據(jù)了動(dòng)物的棲息地；許多動(dòng)物遭到獵殺所有這些都導(dǎo)致了越來越多的動(dòng)物瀕臨滅絕。然而動(dòng)物是我們?nèi)祟惖呐笥?，我們有?zé)任去保護(hù)他們，而不是傷害或獵殺它們。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)上述內(nèi)容寫一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文。 要求： 1.語(yǔ)言規(guī)范、意思連貫、表達(dá)完整； 2.提示的內(nèi)容要全部用上。,Its your turn! (練練筆),Lets Help Our Friends （ 滿分作文賞析） With the increasing population, human needs more places to live in and more food to eat. As a re

32、sult, we change the forests into farmland. I feel pity for the animals. More and more new cities and roads are built on animals habitat. A lot of animals are killed because of their tasty meat or beautiful fur. There used to be lots of animals, but now more and more animals become endangered because

33、 of our crazy and silly behavior. For example, there are only 2500 manatees in the USA now. Do you want to see these gentle and shy animals disappear? Do you want our children only to see model animals in the future? Dont you think animals are our lovely friends? I know your answer is “No”. So its o

34、ur duty to protect them instead of hurting or killing them. Dont put it off！Lets try our best to help our friends today!,Thank you! Goodbye!,A good passage= A right title + A healthy body + A nice conclusion/ end,HOMEWORK:書面表達(dá)（共20分） 根據(jù)中文設(shè)置的情景、英文提示詞語(yǔ)以及表格所提供的信息，寫出語(yǔ)法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。 注意：1字?jǐn)?shù)60一80。 2所給的

35、英文提示詞語(yǔ)及表格所提供的信息必須都用上。（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮） 3發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。（請(qǐng)不要抄寫在答題卡上） 假設(shè)你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學(xué)校組織的赴加拿大“綠色之旅”夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備一篇在開營(yíng)式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿。,發(fā)言稿（介紹）,name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Beijing, favorite subject, biology ,Dear friends, Im very glad to introduce myself to you. Thats all. Thank you for listening.,Dear fri

36、ends , Im very glad to introduce（介紹） myself to you. My name is Zhang Bin . Im fifteen years old . I live in Beijing . One of my favorite subjects is biology . Im interested in drawing . In my free time , I often go camping（野營(yíng)） , draw some pictures of plants , and enjoy the singing of birds in nature

37、 . I want to be a biologist（生物學(xué)家） when I grow up . I feel lucky to join you . I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make our earth more beautiful and much greener . Thats all . Thank you for listening .,I like many sports, such as swim, fish and so on. But of all the sports, basketball is

38、 my favorite sport. I like basketball best because it can help me keep health. I play basketball with my classmates at school twice a week. I make a lot of good friends when I play basketball. And it bring me a lot of happy. Whats more ,it can make me to grow not only taller but also strong. I love

39、play basketball. I hope be a basketball player in the future.,My favorite sport,swimming,fishing,healthy,brings,stronger,to be/ I will be,happiness,playing,grow,The Life as a Grade 9 Student How time flies! Now Im in Grade Nine. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be. Now Im

40、as busy as a bee. Theres a lot of homework and exams. The only feeling I have is : The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging ! ! Theres an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I dont want to fail, so I create a plan for the following days. Since nothing is difficult if

41、 I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now. Ill spend the rest time efficiently. As theres no elevator to success, Ill try my best to do everything step by step! I believe that I can do it!,Its your turn! （ 滿分作文賞析）,Find out the mistakes in the

42、 following sentences and correct them.,1. I climed slowly and was very tried.,2. I think it is an unforgetable thing because I helped sb.,climbed,tired,unforgettable,somebody,3. On a friday afternoon, I went shopping with my mother.,Spelling（拼寫）,（others),Friday,4. I cant forget that day. Because it is the last time we can celebrate her birthday together.,I cant forget that day because,5. What a crazy day it was, I will remember it forever.,!,Capital letter（大小寫）,Punctuation（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)）,6. I will remembered that day forever.,re