【英語】英語書面表達練習題含答案及解析

1、【英語】英語書面表達練習題含答案及解析一、英語書面表達1如今，很多城市出 了一種 色出行方式共享 （便捷而 受青 ，但同 也引 了一些 。 你根據(jù)提示以bike-sharing ），它因 保、Bike-sharing 寫一篇英 短文，表達自己的看法和建 。要點提示：Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（減 交通 力）AdvantagesTake exerciseProblemsThrow away, damage （ ） , be stolenAdviceCivilized（文明的） , follow the ru

2、les, take good care of注意：1. 短文 包括以上要點，可適當 ，以使行文 ；2. 文中不得出 真 的人名、校名及地名；3. 數(shù)： 80-100（文章開 已 出，不 入 數(shù)）。Bike-sharingToday, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities._【答案】 Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and

3、 more popular in many cities. Its known that it has many advantages. So its enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, its very convenient for people to go somewhere. 【高分句型一】 Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing help

4、s people take more exercise.In this way, its helpful to peoples health. （ ） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen. （ ）In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the

5、 rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful. 【高分句型二】（建 ）【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達了所有要點，語言表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在短文中使用了大量的復合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語，為文章增色不少，.如 : Its known that ithas many advantages.，F(xiàn)irst of all, its very

6、convenient for people to go somewhere. ， Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion, 等?！军c睛】本文要求以 “Bike-sharing ”為題，根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文，表達自己對共享單車的看法和建議。寫作時，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個要點：首先，闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點；其次，列舉共享單車帶來的問題；最后，根據(jù)問題給出個人建議。2 亞洲文明對話大會近期在北京召開，你的印度朋友Danny 收看了大會相關(guān)報道，

7、對華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，來信向你了解中國文化。假設你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一封回信給Danny。要點內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久，文化各異；傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，多彩習俗（舉一例）文明行為相互尊重，以禮相待；互學共鑒，共同成長（或自擬）身邊文明校園文明（自擬一點）注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 90 詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 回復必須包括所以要點，可是當發(fā)揮，是短文連貫，通順。3. 文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯 : civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I m glad to receive your letter. Since you are intere

8、sted in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Danny,I m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization

9、（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival,

10、 Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They arealso called “ three major Chinese holidays ” ine theChinacustoms.Here ofar eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette （禮儀） . Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all

11、learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you s

12、oon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny 寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信?！驹斀狻课恼滦枰榻B下中國的文化。表格中列舉了三個要點，寫作時注意不要漏寫。平時注意多多積累句型、短語。細心檢查避免疏漏。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀 ”為主，首先要認真讀懂圖表中的要求，對所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括，去粗取精；在寫作時目的要明確，要注意內(nèi)容的準確性和嚴肅性?！军c睛】寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。如but, so, then等?？梢赃m當使用高分句子。本篇文章寫的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is

13、one of theoldest and longest civilizations in the world中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette （禮儀），中國是一個禮儀之邦。3書面表達根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（lucky money ）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。同學們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？請結(jié)合自己的實際寫一篇文章，詞數(shù) 80 詞以上，文中

14、不能出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。內(nèi)容包括如下：1. 你的壓歲錢的來源和用途；2. 對合理使用壓歲錢的建議（至少3 點）；3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢，把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方。【答案】 Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes.

15、 Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is agood idea to buy something useful for our parents or teache

16、rs so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney ）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來

17、越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。同學們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達出來，不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的變化。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞?！军c睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子： In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following

18、 things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. 這些給文章增色不少。4近來，美國總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅 ”。你的美國朋友Sam 看過相關(guān)報道之后也很想學好中文 ,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他 ,提一些關(guān)于如何學好漢語的建議。要點提示 :1.課堂上認真聽講,做好筆記 ;2.不要害怕犯錯誤,與同學們用中文交流;3.課下經(jīng)常閱讀中文雜志、報紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語言類節(jié)目;4.經(jīng)常用中

19、文給外國筆友寫電子郵件等。注意 :1.詞數(shù) 80-100;2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫 ;3.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息;4.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,Im happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】 Dear Sam,Im happy to he

20、ar from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions. First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, its a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And dont be afraid of making mistakes. Third, youd better read Chinese magazines or

21、 newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【

22、詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam 寫一封信，告訴他如何學好漢語，題目中從四個方面提出了建議。通過審題可知，這是要求寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容應包括以下幾個方面：首先應和 Sam 先做一個交流，然后引出寫信的目的；接下來給出具體的建議，依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條，用正確的英語表達出來，還應注意補充一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實；最后寫一個適當?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，如希望建議對你有幫助等。文章應使用一般現(xiàn)在時，根據(jù)表達需要使用恰當?shù)娜朔Q。寫作時應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫完整的句子。如可以較常見的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主，簡單句的句型可以使文章

23、敘述清楚、簡潔。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復合句以及其他一些復雜句式。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達流暢。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給 Sam 寫了一封信，對他的漢語學習提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個部分：第一段是與 Sam 之間的問候以及引出 Sam 學習漢語這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First，Second， Third， lastly 等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正

24、確的時態(tài)和人稱，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語的表達習慣。語法規(guī)范、準確，用詞得體。文章中的語句以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher andtake notes carefully in class. 、 Second, its a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese 、 I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation 、 In a word, if

25、 you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well. 等等。5書面表達每個人都有自己心愛的物品，相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧！請以“A（ n）_ Ihave ”為題，描述一個或一件你心愛的物品，并談談你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意義。要求： 1. 請在題目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱;3.語言表達準確，短文連貫通順，80 詞左右。A（ n） _ I have_【答案】 A（ n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he

26、like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It s a black toy gun and it can shot somsmall plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun.They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.When I was a

27、little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun.One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor thenand my father didn t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. Aweek later, father put a box

28、to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it,father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I willremember my father s love forever. Every time I miss him, I ll take out the toy

29、 gun and sayyou, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述，要求是進行描述，并談談你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意義。寫作的難度是逐漸加深的，在討論其如何獲得的時候要注意正確使用時態(tài)，在談論意義的時候要注意表達的準確性，避免不熟悉的表達。寫作亮點：這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍，描述玩具槍的時候有適當?shù)募毠?jié)補充，例如a toy gunwrapped by yellow cloth （用黃布包著的玩具槍），這里用到了過去分詞作定語，作者還描述了玩具槍的功能（ small plastic pills），順便還描述了自己小時候玩槍的經(jīng)歷，

30、準確使用了時態(tài)。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時候不落俗套，講到了自己的家庭那時比較困難，父親是通過努力工作為我賺錢買槍的，寫作是富有感情的，也通過這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier ），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。6自信賦予人力量，帶給人快樂。擁有自信，人生處處是舞臺，生活越來越精彩。假如你是李華，請你為?？⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文，談談自信的重要性，分享一次使你更加自信的經(jīng)歷，并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕拧Ｌ崾驹~語： powerful ， h

31、appy， believe in ， keep doing提示問題：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we become more confident?Its very important to be confident【答案】 It s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick towhat we do. So it s valuable to u

32、s.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then Ibreathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and fin

33、ished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that

34、we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運用各種句式，采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確，簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。點睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如at the beginning of ；know about ； make a speech 等； When ； Although ；

35、 Then ； From then on, 等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。7書面表達為了配合 “足球進校園 ”活動，你們班開展了一次主題班會。請你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點提示，用英語向同學們介紹足球這項運動并談談自己的夢想。歷史悠久，深受喜愛常 識世界杯 4 年舉行一次男生女生皆可參加好 處利于培養(yǎng)團隊精神考生自擬（至少1 點）偶 像梅西，有足球天賦夢 想考生自擬（至少1 點）注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 90 左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；1.短文須包括所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；2.短文中不得

36、真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：梅西MessiDear classmates,I m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.Thank you for your attention.【答案】 Dear classmates，I m very excited to hear that China will build 20， 000 football-themed schools by 2020 Football has a very long history It

37、 is liked by people all over the world The World Cup takes place every four years Playing football has lots of advantages First ，both boys and girls can take part in it Second， it helps develop team spirit What s more， playing football is good for our health I m a football fanMessi is my hero He has

38、 a gift for playing football My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi I hope China will hold the World Cup some day Thank you for your attention 【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題要求按提綱的提示，介紹足球運動并談談自己的夢想。要求仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確本文主要從三個方面來寫：介紹足球運動及其好處；說說自己的偶像；談談自己的夢想。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的

39、時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習慣。寫作亮點：本文語言精煉，像第二自然段的 Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop teamspirit. What s more, playingotballfois good for our health.等等句子，簡潔，但是句意表達清楚；同時，本文用了被動語態(tài)、動名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式，使表達生動；用了 firs

40、t, second 等使得短文層次清楚。8 中國傳統(tǒng)文化源遠流長，代代相傳。近期各校都在開展學習中國傳統(tǒng)文化活動。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以 “弘揚中國傳統(tǒng)文化 ”為題征文，請你用英文寫一篇報道，介紹你校上周舉辦的“講中國成語故事 ”活動并談談你的收獲與感受。提示詞語：Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示問題： What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story? What did you learn from the activity?

41、What do you think of it?【答案】 The activity of“Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our schoolk. last weeIn order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each

42、 story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher.I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on t

43、he activity. 【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，只給了一些要點提示，但都不很明確。學生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外，還要進行適當拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實。2.例文點評：例文采用三段式；用第一人稱來敘述講成語故事活動；因為活動已經(jīng)舉辦，所以時態(tài)采用一般過去時；對參加活動的過程描寫完整且條理清晰。3.高分亮點：短語： in order to ，take part in ， lots of ， learn from ， in the process of ， Whats more， have agood time 。句型：被動句型。9 假如你是李華，你的英國筆友 Ja

44、ck給你寫郵件表達了想?yún)⒓幽阈Ｊ钇跒橥鈬鴮W生舉辦的漢語夏令營的愿望，希望你告知活動舉辦的具體時間地點，活動安排以及你的建議。提示詞語：Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題： When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held? What activities will be held at the Chine se Summer Camp? What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that y

45、ou are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday.Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this sum

46、mer.The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deep

47、ly.What s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，只給了一些要點提示，但都不很明確。學生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外，還要進行適當拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實。2.例文點評：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I 進行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標準書信格式進行了收尾。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來