英語雅思范文

1、英語雅思范文 Nowadays it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries, is it development a positive or negative effect?參考范文：Never before was travelling to alien countries so convenient and popular as in this century. This phenomenon is partially attributed to improved technology a

2、nd cheap flight tickets. Facing this travel frenzy, some are concerned that it will bring about too many side effects whilst others insist that is should be supported and maintained.Admittedly, cross-border travel has more downsides than one. Firstly, the carbon dioxide planes emitted is reported to

3、 be disproportionately more than that emitted by other transportation means. The carbon dioxide will lead to ozone layer thinning and thereby increase the probability of people contracting skin cancer. Moreover, being easier and more convenient to travel among countries means that some criminals cou

4、ld flee to other countries after committing hideous crime. This will pose a threat to local security and community stability.However, the downsides cannot overshadow its upsides. For starters, travelling around the world with more ease could expand individuals horizons and stimulate their love of li

5、fe and they will be more productive at work in the future. Moreover, companies could visit foreign markets more conveniently than before and as a result, they could locate potential target market and sell goods there or buy materials from there if the price is competitively enough. If a company coul

6、d flourish this way, employees will benefit and the society in which companies are operating will be more stable and harmonies. Last but not least, if more and more people are afforded opportunities to go to other countries, there will be less misunderstanding and more respect among countries. All t

7、hese will contribute to a diverse but harmonious culture.To sum up, despite the numerous drawbacks mentioned above, travelling to other countries with more convenience and ease is, by and large, a positive development.IntroductionRecent years have witnessed (背景)， which has aroused a heated debate of

8、 whether .(把要討論的話題引入進(jìn)來) Views on this issue vary from person to person. From my point of view, before airing my own opinion, I do think its necessary to analyze / explore this thorny issue from different angles / both sides of this thorny issue.Main bodyThose who (正面觀點(diǎn))tend to present the following

9、reasons. To begin with, In addition, . Whats more, .(盡量用不同的論證方法)However, other people may examine / explore this issue from another angle. For one thing, . For another thing, . Furthermore, .ConclusionIn conclusion, although its very difficult / hard to draw / come to / reach / arrive at an absolute

10、 conclusion to this issue, I would not hesitate to assent to the former / latter viewpoint because Im fully convinced that 萬能開頭：As Descartes(笛卡爾) once said:If you would be a real seeker after truth, it is necessary that at least once in your life you doubt, as far as possible, all things然后后面再加上你自己的模

11、板：although the authors claim that.is not wholly insupportable, it would still be a mistake to draw the conclusion generally. In my observation.Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wea

12、lthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the real world when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficul

13、ties . The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident, but in fact require closer examination. ( 58words )點(diǎn)評： 1+ 1 模式，最后 1 句為主題句。此段的主題句稍微有點(diǎn)特殊，它的確否定了前面所提到的觀點(diǎn)，從而表達(dá)出了自己的觀點(diǎn)，此外還引出了下文。特別是最后半句：but in fact require closer examination ，感覺是在拋磚引玉。The popular wisdom is that children of poorer f

14、amilies learn early on the value of a buck, and are thus naturally better suited to stretching moneywhen times get tough in adulthood. Inversely, the children of wealthy families, thoseborn with a silver spoon in their mouths, are believed to be completely ignorant of the value of money, having had

15、everything provided for them in their youth and oftentimes erroneously expecting the same situation in adulthood. They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility. This belief, though logical, overlooks one key point which is , of course, education. (100words)點(diǎn)評： 1 +3 模式，

16、第 1 句是主題句。請注意，從此段的內(nèi)容來看，這是個(gè)讓步段(即分析自己并不贊成的觀點(diǎn))。雖然 4 段論的作文的主體段是兩面討論，但是本人還是喜歡這樣的寫作，即主體段的觀點(diǎn)還是有側(cè)重的，把讓步段放在前面，最后 1 句話引出下一段，這樣過度地很自然，而且自己的觀點(diǎn)也比較明確!The basis of this argument is , of course, knowing the value of money, and the idea that children of the poor know this, and those of the wealthy do not . Who thoug

17、h, is in a better position to teach their children the value of money; someone skilled in earning and keeping it, the wealthy parent, or someone who can not seem to acquire it, the poor parent? Both wealthy and poor children are equally likely to acquire an education in money, whether it is formal,

18、or in the school of hard knocks. Conversely, both children are as likely to ignore this education. (101words)點(diǎn)評：這段的內(nèi)容感覺寫得不夠直接，還是在分析對方觀點(diǎn)的漏洞!請注意，前面讓步段已經(jīng)這么寫過了，那么這一段最好是正面地論證自己的觀點(diǎn)，這樣從內(nèi)容上來說更 convincing 一點(diǎn)!此外，需要說明的是，大家發(fā)現(xiàn)作者的內(nèi)容還是有一定深度，但是這是要有一定的英語功底才行的!如果英語功底不行的話，建議內(nèi)容不要寫太深，因?yàn)槟菢尤菀自斐煽脊倏床欢阍谡f什么!A poor child may believe that one can get al