概要寫作點撥PPT學習教案

1、會計學1 概要寫作點撥概要寫作點撥 Whilereading Whilewriting 第1頁/共14頁 Whilereading 1.Isthepassagea, ora? 2.Isthereanytopicsentenceorkeywords?Ifso, underlinethem. 3.Gothroughthesupportingdetailsorevidenceto checkwhetherthetopicsentenceorkeywordsyoufind is. outline (以議論文為例以議論文為例) topic sentence supporting details (con

2、clusion) 第2頁/共14頁 Whilewriting 1.Structure 1)Topicsentence* 2)Mainsupportingpoints/evidence 3)About60words 2.Language 1)Touseyourownwords* 2)Tobeconcise(leaveoutthedetails;reducethe examples;simplifythedescriptions;eliminateall repetitions.) 3)Topresenttheinformationfairly,donotgiveyour owncomments

3、4)Tense 第3頁/共14頁 Child raising Find out topic sentences or words which can best serve the main idea. Child raising is probably one of the most difficult jobs for people to do all over the world. Since babies do not come with child raising manuals(指南), couples, especially future mothers, have to lear

4、n from their mothers, aunts, mothers- in-law, or any other relative who is close to them. difficult Para 1： Topic： Characteristic s： Reasonsu 找對主旨句找對主旨句 Step 1 reading 第4頁/共14頁 As children grow up, parents have to find reasonable ways in order to help their children, advise them, punish them, lead t

5、hem to achievements, and teach them. Sometimes children under ten may behave inappropriately. For example, they learn to say offensive words and they show no respect for their relatives. I think parents in these cases should punish their children in a reasonable way. Children must know those kinds o

6、f attitudes are not good at all. . A detailed example u 忽略具體事例，或者一筆帶過忽略具體事例，或者一筆帶過 第5頁/共14頁 There are many aspects which influence parents in this hard job, for example, the culture in which they live, the economic situation in their society, and the religious environment. Para 4: One group consists

7、 of people who dont have economicalresources or education. Para 5: Other groups of people are hard workers or well- educated. u 例子若篇幅較長，應該簡要概括例子若篇幅較長，應該簡要概括Evidence 第6頁/共14頁 Step 2 writing How to express the key points by using your own words properly? Para 1 Childraisingisprobablyoneofthemost diffi

8、cultjobsforpeopletodoallovertheworld. Tip 1：分析句子結構，抓住重點信息：分析句子結構，抓住重點信息 Child raising is a difficult job. 第7頁/共14頁 Bringing up a child Child raising is a difficult job. Tip 2：轉換同義詞或者詞性：轉換同義詞或者詞性 is hard/tough work. Tip 3：轉換句型：轉換句型 It is rather tough to raise a child for people. Step 2 writing How to

9、 express the key points by using your own words properly? 第8頁/共14頁 Para 2 Aschildrengrowup,parentshavetofindreasonable waysinordertohelptheirchildren,advisethem, punishthem,leadthemtoachievements,andteach them. Tip 4 ：用一個可以涵蓋的詞匯概括幾個列舉：用一個可以涵蓋的詞匯概括幾個列舉 的并列詞匯的并列詞匯 educate their children Parents should

10、 _ to educate their children. adopt reasonable methods Step 2 writing How to express the key points by using your own words properly? 第9頁/共14頁 Para 3 Therearemanyaspectswhichinfluenceparentsin thishardjob. Tip 5：代詞轉換成具體信息：代詞轉換成具體信息 There are many factors that influence the parents in _. bringing up

11、their children two examples are given in order to make it clear Step 2 writing How to express the key points by using your own words properly? 第10頁/共14頁 Para 4: Onegroupconsistsofpeoplewhodonthave economicalresourcesoreducation. Para 5: Othergroupsofpeoplearehardworkersor well-educated. Tip 6：具體事例需要

12、概括其特征或代表性：具體事例需要概括其特征或代表性 In order to make it clear, two examples are given, which show that _ _ _ children raised in families with different economical and educational background may have different futures. Step 2 writing How to express the key points by using your own words properly? 第11頁/共14頁 outline Para.1：1st sentence reason Para.2: 1st sentence an example Para.3: 1st sentence Para.4 Para.5 evidence 第12頁/共14頁 Itisrathertoughtoraisechildrenfor couples,especiallyfuturemothers.Parents shouldadoptreasonablemethodstoeducate theirchildren.Therearemanyfactorsthat influence the parents in b