高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)寫作技巧[教學(xué)課件]

1、書面表達(dá)如何寫？書面表達(dá)如何寫？五個(gè)步驟1、審題、審題文字信息文字信息圖畫信息圖畫信息題材、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、要點(diǎn)題材、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、要點(diǎn)2、以詞及點(diǎn)：用一兩個(gè)單詞或短語(yǔ)寫出每句、以詞及點(diǎn)：用一兩個(gè)單詞或短語(yǔ)寫出每句 話的細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)。話的細(xì)節(jié)要點(diǎn)。3、聯(lián)詞成句：用聯(lián)詞成句的方法將上述要點(diǎn)、聯(lián)詞成句：用聯(lián)詞成句的方法將上述要點(diǎn) 的詞語(yǔ)擴(kuò)展成句子。的詞語(yǔ)擴(kuò)展成句子。4 聯(lián)句成文：聯(lián)句成文：注意：注意：主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)背景（適當(dāng)增加時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)條件等）背景（適當(dāng)增加時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)條件等）邏輯關(guān)系邏輯關(guān)系開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾語(yǔ)篇銜接語(yǔ)篇銜接5、檢查修改，規(guī)范抄寫、檢查修改，規(guī)范抄寫詞匯詞匯,句型句型 （高級(jí)）和語(yǔ)

2、法多（高級(jí)）和語(yǔ)法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）樣化（較復(fù)雜） 1.覆蓋了所有的覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn) 2. 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯和詞匯 3. 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 4. 語(yǔ)言得體語(yǔ)言得體要要點(diǎn)點(diǎn)全全連連接接詞詞語(yǔ)言地道，語(yǔ)言地道，規(guī)范規(guī)范 技技 巧巧1. 使用較高級(jí)的詞匯使用較高級(jí)的詞匯3. 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使給文章增

3、色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝整篇文章因此而生輝 。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫一使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫一篇有篇有“英語(yǔ)味英語(yǔ)味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。自然、緊湊。2. 使用較豐富的句式使用較豐富的句式一一 改變句子的開(kāi)頭方式，改變句子的開(kāi)頭方式，不要一味地都是主語(yǔ)不要一味地都是主語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭，接著是謂語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)，最后再加一個(gè)狀語(yǔ)。開(kāi)頭，接著是謂語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)，最后再加一個(gè)狀語(yǔ)。可以把狀語(yǔ)置于句首可以把狀語(yǔ)置于句首.The boy is very hungry and he hurried home.Hungry, the boy hurried home.The

4、boy, hungry, hurried home.二二. Transformation of sentences in writing(寫作中的句型轉(zhuǎn)換寫作中的句型轉(zhuǎn)換)A. 合并為簡(jiǎn)單句合并為簡(jiǎn)單句1.把其中一句改為分詞短語(yǔ)把其中一句改為分詞短語(yǔ)He had finished supper.He went out to have a walk then.Having finished supper, he went out to have a walk.二二. Transformation of sentences in writing(寫作中的句型轉(zhuǎn)換寫作中的句型轉(zhuǎn)換)2. 把其中一句改

5、為介詞短語(yǔ)把其中一句改為介詞短語(yǔ)He was brought in. His hands were tied behind his back.He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back. B. 合并為復(fù)合句合并為復(fù)合句1. The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered everyone of us.The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheere

6、d everyone of us.2 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful. which In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant C. 把復(fù)合句改為簡(jiǎn)單句把復(fù)合句改為簡(jiǎn)單句1. 把從句改為分詞短語(yǔ)把從句改為分詞短語(yǔ) She was anxious to

7、 find a job after she finished her studies. Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job.2.把從句改為介詞短語(yǔ)把從句改為介詞短語(yǔ)I insisted that he should go.I insisted on him going.三三. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句式，要靈活運(yùn)用以下結(jié)構(gòu)：式，要靈活運(yùn)用以下結(jié)構(gòu)：倒裝句倒裝句強(qiáng)調(diào)句強(qiáng)調(diào)句主從復(fù)合句主從復(fù)合句分詞狀語(yǔ)分詞狀語(yǔ)With 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)Though he is wealthy,

8、 he works hard.Wealthy as he is, he works hard.In spite of /Despite his wealth,he works hard.He didnt get up until 7 oclock.It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.Not until 7 oclock did he get up.I had a good idea.A good idea occurred to / struck / came to me.I came up with a good idea.注意使用詞組、習(xí)語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)

9、、表強(qiáng)調(diào)的詞來(lái)代替注意使用詞組、習(xí)語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)、表強(qiáng)調(diào)的詞來(lái)代替一些單詞，以增加文采。一些單詞，以增加文采。 四四.use “ complicated / advanced words” 一一 改變句子的開(kāi)頭方式改變句子的開(kāi)頭方式二二 句型轉(zhuǎn)換句型轉(zhuǎn)換A.合并為簡(jiǎn)單句合并為簡(jiǎn)單句把其中一句改為分詞短語(yǔ)把其中一句改為分詞短語(yǔ)把其中一句改為介詞短語(yǔ)把其中一句改為介詞短語(yǔ)B.合并為復(fù)合句合并為復(fù)合句C.把復(fù)合句改為簡(jiǎn)單把復(fù)合句改為簡(jiǎn)單句句把從句改為分詞短語(yǔ)把從句改為分詞短語(yǔ)把從句改為介詞短語(yǔ)把從句改為介詞短語(yǔ)三三 避免只使用一兩個(gè)句式，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句式，要靈活運(yùn)用諸如倒裝句、要靈活運(yùn)用諸如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)

10、句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞狀語(yǔ)強(qiáng)調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞狀語(yǔ)、with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等等. 四四 注意使用高級(jí)詞匯注意使用高級(jí)詞匯代替一些單詞，以增加文采。代替一些單詞，以增加文采。五五 有效使用連接詞有效使用連接詞，過(guò)渡自然，連貫通順，使文章結(jié)，過(guò)渡自然，連貫通順，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。構(gòu)緊湊。1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）3. Though Im weak, Ill make the ef

11、fort. (使用倒裝句)4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) 5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虛擬語(yǔ)氣）On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎樣使用較豐富的句式怎樣使用較豐富的句式Weak

12、as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過(guò)去分詞)7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使

13、用V-ing形式)8.I wont believe what he says. （使用狀語(yǔ)從句） 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Sin

14、ging and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress.邏輯角度邏輯角度時(shí)間順序時(shí)間順序空間順序空間順序合適的過(guò)渡性詞匯合適的過(guò)渡性詞匯邏輯角度邏輯角度對(duì)稱順序?qū)ΨQ順序轉(zhuǎn)折順序轉(zhuǎn)折順序因果順序因果順序條件順序條件順序讓步順序讓步順序合適的過(guò)渡性詞匯合適的過(guò)渡性詞匯 邏輯角度邏輯角度遞進(jìn)順序遞進(jìn)順序插入語(yǔ)過(guò)度插入語(yǔ)過(guò)度合適的過(guò)渡性詞匯合適的過(guò)渡性詞匯 1 漢式英語(yǔ)漢式英語(yǔ) 2 句式單一句式單一 平鋪直敘平

15、鋪直敘 3 基礎(chǔ)詞匯掌握不牢基礎(chǔ)詞匯掌握不牢 4 書寫不規(guī)范書寫不規(guī)范Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. No

16、w it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . 書面表達(dá)：書面表達(dá)：Now it is taking on a ne

17、w look. In the past, the school here was very small . Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you. In the past, the school here was

18、very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay herethe newly built teaching building/ May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has chan