高考英語指導(dǎo)寫作

1、上海高考英語備考訓(xùn)練上海高考英語題型訓(xùn)練：指導(dǎo)寫作一， 一等文要求，1， 結(jié)構(gòu)三段式：第一段：簡單明了，開門見山。如我們想表達(dá)小強(qiáng)很強(qiáng)壯，直接說 XQ is extremely strong. 觀點(diǎn)明確，一句足矣。第二段：分析為什么他強(qiáng)壯。A. 每天吃10頓飯，He has ten meals everyday! 詳舉吃的是什么。B. 每天運(yùn)動2小時，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 詳舉做了什么運(yùn)動。第三段：結(jié)論，與第一段呼應(yīng)，但不能完全照，要有升華。也可以提出希望和建議等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be

2、him one day!2，內(nèi)容和要點(diǎn)：話題topic必須符合題意，提示的要點(diǎn)必須寫全，一個都不能漏寫。確定主題、要點(diǎn)是要發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，還是舉出例子。如果有具體提示，寫作就等于翻譯，把提示內(nèi)容變換句式翻譯到位，全面切題。如果沒有提示，自已提煉，找到主題, 跟主旨無關(guān)的話不要寫。3，邏輯合理：遞進(jìn)：first, second, third, finally, to begin with, first of all, in addition, whats more, moreover, on the one hand, on the other hand, the last but not the l

3、east。轉(zhuǎn)折：but, yet, however, as far as I am concerned, in the meantime?？偨Y(jié)：in a word, all in all, in conclusion。4，語法和亮點(diǎn)：單詞拼讀和語法必須準(zhǔn)確，不可以有錯誤。在此基礎(chǔ)上，用幾個有難度的詞匯，編幾個高級的句型。一般詞匯和簡單句型要限量用，不可占字太多。 二， 三段十句話：1，三段布局：高考作文題型多樣, 有命題作文和材料作文。材料作文是根據(jù)給出的書面材料, 按要求作文。話題主要三方面：學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)生活，學(xué)生日常生活，社會熱點(diǎn)現(xiàn)象。無論哪種文體：記敘文、議論文，夾敘夾議文，應(yīng)用文、說明文、

4、圖片描述文都可以用三段法：引入，具體，結(jié)尾。記敘文：A. 背景介紹：時間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件。B. 故事發(fā)展經(jīng)過結(jié)果。C. 結(jié)局和感受。 議論文：A. 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)。B. 論據(jù)理由。C. 結(jié)論呼應(yīng)論點(diǎn)。圖片文：A. 描述圖片內(nèi)容，提煉觀點(diǎn)。B. 論據(jù)理由。C. 結(jié)論呼應(yīng)論點(diǎn)。日記寫法同一般記敘文或議論文。通知，書信，演講稿在引入部分寫話題，意圖，主題；在具體部分寫活動要求，具體內(nèi)容，觀點(diǎn)陳述；在結(jié)尾部分寫活動時間、地點(diǎn)、聯(lián)系方式、結(jié)語、總結(jié)、希望或號召。2， 十句成篇：Passage 1,1） Topic 話題2） Thesis 論點(diǎn)Passage 2,3） Transition 過渡句4） Arg

5、ument1 論據(jù)15） Detail 1 論據(jù)1的支持句6） Argument2 論據(jù)27） Detail 2 論據(jù)2 的支持句8） Argument3 論據(jù)39） Detail 3 論據(jù)3的支持句Passage 310） Conclusion 總結(jié)以上為議論文的三段十句結(jié)構(gòu)。根據(jù)具體情況可調(diào)整加減。其它文體在此基礎(chǔ)上略作修改即可。三， 具體各類題型寫法：1， 描述圖片類：P1圖片描述, 圖片主旨。P2 過渡句加論據(jù)和支持句。視字?jǐn)?shù)調(diào)整論據(jù)和支持句個數(shù)。P3總結(jié)。2， 夾敘夾議文：寫法1，P1 話題記敘或描述。P2 觀點(diǎn)或感想，寫2個論據(jù)和2個支持句。P3總結(jié)。寫法2，P1 話題和觀點(diǎn)。P2

6、 事件起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果以證明論點(diǎn)。P3 總結(jié)說明事件，再次證明話題和論點(diǎn)。寫法3，P1回憶記述事件。P2感受、觀點(diǎn)。P3總結(jié)。3， 兩主旨議論文：有時需要寫兩個主旨，如第一個為什么喜歡讀書，另一個喜歡讀什么書?；虻谝粋€水為什么珍貴，另一個怎么節(jié)約水?？梢苑殖蓛纱蟛糠謱懀篜1 話題、一個論據(jù)和支持句。P2 過渡句、另一個論據(jù)和支持句。P3 總結(jié)4，建議型議論文：寫法1，傾向建議：提出一個問題，簡單說明該問題，并針對此問題給出多個建議：P1寫信目的，一個問題。 P2 針對這個問題若干建議。P3總結(jié)希望。寫法2，問題建議并重：提出兩個問題，然后給出相應(yīng)的兩條建議：P1 寫信目的。P2提兩個問題并說明

7、。P3針對兩問題給兩建議。寫法3，傾向于問題：提出一個問題，詳細(xì)闡述問題并分析原因，結(jié)尾給出一個建議。P1寫信目的。P2提出一個問題，原因及危害等。P3 建議、總結(jié)。5， 說明文和純事實(shí)新聞報導(dǎo)：同純記敘文，不涉及議論，只將起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果寫清即可。重事實(shí)輕情義。四， 寫作四步驟：1， 審題：主題，體裁，人稱，時態(tài)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。在試卷中畫出要點(diǎn)。2， 框架：打草稿：一定要打草稿，正式寫作再梳理錘煉。3， 成文：一要凝練，二要變化。使用過渡詞、從句、不同句型和詞組搭配。4，檢查：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語法錯誤。名詞查單復(fù)數(shù)和冠詞，動詞查時態(tài)語態(tài)和主謂一致。變換句式：不用過于簡單的結(jié)構(gòu)。總之：認(rèn)真審題, 提煉要

8、點(diǎn); 緊扣主題, 擴(kuò)詞成句; 表述準(zhǔn)確, 連句成文; 通篇檢查, 確保無誤。五， 英文文章開頭有兩種可以選擇：1，每段開頭空兩格，四或五個字符，段落之間不空行。2，每段開頭頂格寫，段落之間空行。兩種都可以，但是空格與不空格不能混用，第一種用的比較Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.Unit 1, 假設(shè)你是啟光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李躍華，你在學(xué)校公眾號 (public platform) 上看

9、到一張志者招募啟事。請根據(jù)該啟事的要求，寫一封郵件（郵件中不得提到自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校），就啟事中的三個活動任選其一，申請一份志愿者工作。校園開放日期招募志愿者學(xué)校將于2019年1月1日舉辦校園開放日，以增進(jìn)家校溝通，宣傳學(xué)校辦學(xué)成果，現(xiàn)就活動方案招募志愿者。活動一：拓展課程（expensive course）介紹，活動二：社團(tuán)(society)活動展示，活動三：學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)分享有意者請給校長室發(fā)郵件并告知：1) 你想報名參加的志愿活動2) 你參加這項(xiàng)志愿活動的理由 3) 你可以為該活動做些什么聯(lián)系方式：2019campus-open-day 2018年12月19日Dear Sir/ Madam,

10、My name is Li Yuehua. Hearing that our school is about to hold the open day activity, Im writing to apply for the volunteer job for sharing my learning experience.Ive spent my 12th year being a student. Small as the number is, I always think it easy to learn every course. So Im going to share my met

11、hods with our mates, for they can benefit a lot. Three steps, I think, consist of my work. First of all, I will divide our subjects into 3 dimensions, according to the different learning methods, and Im telling our mates that there is a unique trait in every dimension. Moreover, Ill introduce the ai

12、ds that I always use in my learning process, which may sharply improve our learning effect. Ultimately, with the Internet technology available in our life, I want to share some websites containing many useful documents, which can do good to our learning.Thanks for your consideration, and I would app

13、reciate it very much if I could take to the job. Yours, Li Yuehua Unit 2, 假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生盧平，你的網(wǎng)友王磊近日就學(xué)習(xí)時如何記好筆記發(fā)郵件向你求教，請給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件，郵件必須包括以下內(nèi)容：描述兩到三個不同的筆記類型及其特征，如何記好筆記的建議。Dear Wang Lei, Thank you for hearing from you about how to take notes. As is known to us, it is important to take notes when we are st

14、udying, which is also easily with no point for those of us who are inexperience. So let me talk about my ideas. I divide my notes into several types, which are in the form of record, abstract and feelings. First and foremost, the most commonly type l used to take notes is in the form of record. It n

15、eeds us to record detailedknowledge so that we can easily recall and absorb what we have learned through the note. It is equally vital to take notes in the form of abstract. It is mainly used to record some key points and difficulties, which can help us learn more deeply. Last but not least, the for

16、m of feelings is always ignored. But it can benefit us from summarizing the knowledge, improving our learning skills.Of course, taking good notes is icing on the cake. AsfarasIamconcerned,timeliness and persistence is the necessary points. Only when we take notes in time can we not forget the knowle

17、dge points. Meanwhile, persistence is the only way to win.In conclusion, how to take notes and how to take good notes need us to devote time and effort, which leads to learn better.Best wishes! Yours， Lu PingUnit 3, 網(wǎng)絡(luò)時代，人們常常不辨別真假就在社交媒體上瘋狂點(diǎn)贊(give the thumbs-up)或轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)(forward)，這種行為有實(shí)際意義嗎？請就此現(xiàn)象談?wù)勀愕目捶?，并結(jié)合

18、生活中的實(shí)例加以說明。In the age of the Internet, it is a common phenomenon that people are always giving the thumbs-up or forwarding without distinguishing right from wrong on social media. From my perspective, there is no point in doing so. The reasons are listed as follows. First of all, the action that we

19、give the thumbs-up also displays our inner fear that we are to be out-dated. Hence we try to catch up with the trend to follow others behavior, giving the thumbs-up unconsciously, which I think is often meaningless. What, s more, because of the explosion of information, the amount of fake news soars

20、, which means the news we see on the social media is likely to be false when we give the thumbs-up, we become the push power that makes the fake news spread and the action can result in serious consequences. For example, several years ago twenty-year-old actor named Mr Qiao quit his young life becau

21、se of the netizens, false comments. It is peoples unwise behavior that causes such a tragedy. If people can think twice before they give the thumbs-up or forward, I believe that fewer tragedies will happen.In a word, I firmly hold the view that giving the thumbs-up or forward without consideration i

22、s meaningless. I hope one day the trend will be reversed, and it needs the work of both you and me.Unit 4, 假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生王蕾。學(xué)校正在招募話劇團(tuán)（ drama club）和機(jī)器人社團(tuán)（ robot club）新成員。你在日記中表達(dá)獲知該消息時的感受，做出選擇，并闡述理由。On hearing that our school is recruiting new members of drama club and robot club, I cant wait to join o

23、ne of them. After deliberate thought about the advantages and disadvantages of both these two clubs, I decided to attend the drama club.On one hand, though, the robot club can show us the latest development of science and technology, I, as a girl, have little interest in science. On the other hand,

24、I have a fancy for literature and have kept writhing plays since I was ten. The drama can provide a wonderful platform for me to show my talent. Whats more, as a shy girl afraid of speaking in public, I am meant to change myself. Without doubt, drama club has more chance to perform in front of the p

25、ublic, which is a great chance the practice myself and overcome my shyness. Furthermore, joining the drama club can expose me to different friends sharing the same hobby. I am looking forward to beginning my journey in drama club!Unit 4, 假設(shè)你們學(xué)校正在向?qū)W生征詢選修課（optional course）的有關(guān)事宜。請你寫信給校長，提出你希望開設(shè)的選修課的名稱，

26、并簡明說說這門課應(yīng)該涉及的主要內(nèi)容以及開設(shè)這門選修課的意義。Dear Headmaster,Im quite glad to be informed that you are gathering ideas on Optional Courses next term. Personally, a course called English Appreciation will be a wise choice, which is certain to benefit us students a lot.I have come up with activities to be done in th

27、is course. One is to read English classics recommended by both teachers and students and the other is to listen to some relaxing English songs. My reasons are listed as follows.In the first place, it goes without saying that under an exam-oriented education system, seldom do we have opportunities to

28、 expose ourselves to a pure English environment, which, however, can be made up for in this course. Besides, it can be said for sure that not only can this course help stimulate our interest in English learning, but they also play a vital role in relieving our heavy burden, thus enabling us to be mo

29、re willing to learn and to be more focused on our studies. Moreover, under no circumstance can we overlook the point that this course, without doubt, will help us a lot in improving our academic level, thus leading to a better performance in our studies.For the reasons above, I sincerely hope that y

30、ou will take my advice into serious consideration. Yours, TinaUnit 5, 中華中學(xué)為了進(jìn)一步規(guī)范學(xué)校的社團(tuán)建設(shè)，提高社團(tuán)活動的品質(zhì)，向廣大師生征求意見。假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生王敏，寫一封電子郵件給負(fù)責(zé)社團(tuán)的林老師，就你所了解的1-2個學(xué)校社團(tuán)發(fā)表意見。你的郵件需包括：1, 你所了解的學(xué)校社團(tuán)的現(xiàn)狀（亮點(diǎn)和不足）及其原因；2, 提出你對改進(jìn)學(xué)校社團(tuán)建設(shè)的建議。注：文中不得提及你的真實(shí)姓名或?qū)W校。Dear Mr. /Mrs. Lin,Hearing the news that you are collecting suggestions

31、for improving the school clubs, Im now writing to offer some suggestions which might be of use.I joined Calligraphy Club in my first year in high school, which helps me get close to the Chinese culture, and learn Chinese Characters. Personally, the English calligraphy should also be included. First

32、and foremost, English is now an international langue and of great importance in our daily life. Moreover, many students are poor at English handwriting, resulting in losing points in English exam. Not only can English calligraphy help students improve their handwriting, but it can also offer us chan

33、ces to be exposed to English culture.Another club I joined when I was a sophomore is Life Care Club, offering us opportunities to take care of the disabled both physically and mentally on weekends. However, I would like to make recommendation that the elderly living alone should also be involved bec

34、ause they are more likely to feel lonely than those living with their family, which may lead to some serious problems.I would appreciate it very much if you could take my advice into account.Yours sincerely, WangMinUnit 6, 2018年11月5日10日，首屆中國國際進(jìn)口博覽會在上海成功舉行。假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生盧平，學(xué)校英語報向全體高三學(xué)生進(jìn)行征文，題目為“The CII

35、E in My Eyes”.你有意投稿，撰寫一篇文章。稿件內(nèi)容必須包括：對“新時代，共享未來（New Era, Shared Future)”的理解：首屆進(jìn)博會向全世界傳遞了什么信息？對中國發(fā)展有何深遠(yuǎn)的影響？（中國國際進(jìn)口博覽會：China International Import Expo 簡稱CIIE）The CIIE in My EyesFrom November 5 to 10, 2018, Shanghai held the first China International Import Expo, the theme of the Expo is a new era, shar

36、e the future. To host the worlds first major national exhibition with the theme of imports is to declare with practical action that China will create more and more opportunities for global development, and that the door to opening to the world will grow wider and wider.The holding of the first World

37、 Expo shows China as a civilized country in the world. China welcomes people and cultures from all over the world. Import Expo is also an opportunity for Shanghai to build an international convention and exhibition capital, which will help to build the exhibition industry chain and service brand, ac

38、celerate the promotion of exhibition industry legislation, and form the city exhibition security model.The successful hosting of the World Expo has promoted the development of world globalization, followed by the implementation of Chinas Belt and Road initiative. Finally, the successful holding of t

39、he World Expo optimizes the world trading environment.About of all，Chinas first Import Expo will be left in the international economic history of a strong.Unit 7, 假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生王蕾。學(xué)校正在招募話劇團(tuán)（ drama club）和機(jī)器人社團(tuán)（ robot club）新成員。你在日記中表達(dá)獲知該消息時的感受，做出選擇，并闡述理由。Dear Dairy,I cant tell you how excited I am toda

40、y about the news that two clubs in our school drama club and robot club are recruiting members. You know I am a huge fan of robots and artificial intelligence: I keep up with the latest development of robots, taking priding in every achievement our robot scientists have made and dreaming that one da

41、y I will come up with my own design of robot assistant.While the drama club also holds an appeal for me. I would prefer to join the robot club. You know I have been fascinated by all kinds of robots, from the small simple ones which provide aid or fun in our daily life to the more complicated ones t

42、hat benefit human beings in various fields. As a member of this club, I will have access to materials, sources and innovative ideas about making and manipulating robots, which will bring me closer to my “robot dream”. Whats even greater about joining this club is that I will meet a bunch of vigorous

43、 teenagers who are just as crazy about robots as I am. Our knowledge of robots and enthusiasm for developing them, once combined, will prove so powerful that we may make a difference.Dear Diary, Im afraid I have to put you down and start writing my application for the robot club. Wish me good luck!U

44、nit 8, 目前中國的移動支付(mobile payment)非常盛行，越來越多的年輕人選擇使用移動支付，有的人認(rèn)為移動支付給人們帶來了便利，而有些人認(rèn)為這種方式存在安全隱患。請你談?wù)剬@一現(xiàn)象的看法。內(nèi)容包括：1. 簡要描述你或你身邊的人在日常生活中使用移動支付的現(xiàn)象。2. 通過與傳統(tǒng)方式的比較，談?wù)勔苿又Ц督o人們帶來的利與弊。（參考詞匯：微信Wechat;支付寶: Alipay; 二維碼QR code）Mobile payment, such as Paypal, Alipay and QR code, is one of the most innovative services tha

45、t enabled consumers to use their phones as wallets in various transactions. With the increasing popularity of mobile payment in China, there are more and more young people choosing to use mobile payment in their daily life. Take myself for example, I seldom go out with cash. Instead, I bring my cell

46、 phone. Wherever I go, whatever I purchase, I can choose to pay by scanning codes.Some people believe that, compared with traditional payment methods, mobile payment brings us great convenience and helps us to purchase any articles without cash, at anytime and anywhere. Since no cash is needed in th

47、e future, we neednt worry about wallets being stolen any more. Nor do we need to be afraid of receiving fake money. However, others hold a different attitude towards mobile payment. They think it will take more risks protecting your private possessions. For example, you might be monitored while payi

48、ng for what you have bought so that your account could be stolen and your private information could be compromised, resulting in damage to your property. As far as Im concerned, the mobile payment is under construction now. We should take a developing view about mobile payment. Despite the safety is

49、sues, it is obviously helpful to human beings as a high-tech product. The government should introduce relevant provisions to solve the safety problems to avoid its disadvantages. Then, it would be more popular in the years to come.Unit 9， 很多高中生會利用課余時間進(jìn)行知識拓展，現(xiàn)在有兩種常見的授課方式可供選擇：網(wǎng)絡(luò)授課(online teaching) 和傳統(tǒng)

50、面授(face-to-face teaching)，你更傾向于那種授課形式呢? 請說說你的理由。Nowadays, most students would prefer to consolidate and develop their knowledge during their spare time by enrolling at some after-school tutoring class. When it comes to selecting the teaching methods, students can have access to online teaching and f

51、ace-to-face teaching. As far as Im concerned, I would choose the former. There are three main reasons accounting for my choice. First and foremost, only by taking online teaching course can I learn it at my convenience. Apparently, in contrast with taking face-to-face teaching course, I can save a s

52、ubstantial amount of time on the way back and forth. In addition, taking online teaching course, not only can I stay in my study comfortably but I can be free of unfamiliar environment as well. Last but not least, there is no denying the fact that after downloading the online course, I have free acc

53、ess to watching it repeatedly at any time if necessary, which will contribute to my deep and comprehensive understanding of the course.From what Ive mentioned above, I am firmly convinced that I would make full use of the innovation brought about by the Internet and online teaching course would defi

54、nitely be a good fit for me. (198 words)Unit 10，請簡要描述圖片，并結(jié)合生活實(shí)際談?wù)勀愕目捶?。Much ink has been spilled about the process of achieving success. How much effort should we make before we eventually embrace the angle of success?Many people form an ideal picture of it, imaging a smooth and direct process. Unfortunately, the reality is quite the opposite. We go ahead, turn around, come back, encounter a corner and continue to do ahead, losing the