TOEFL托福寫作高分滿分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析2020

1、TOEFL托福寫作高分滿分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析2020為了讓大家更好的準(zhǔn)備托?？荚?，給大家了托?？荚嚌M分范文，下面就和大家分享，來欣賞一下吧。托福寫作難點(diǎn)話題一覽Items made by hand or items made by machine, which do you prefer?Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand orby machine Which do you prefer一items made by hand or itemsmade by machine? Use reasons and

2、specific examples to explain yourchoice 寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析這道題還是比較具體的。不過選擇比較自由，無論選哪一種都行， 只要列出幾個(gè)好的理由。（注意，如果說家具的話也有很多種，根據(jù) 不同的種類，也可以有不同的偏好）手工：可以按照特定要求制 作，有特色，但缺點(diǎn)是成本往往會(huì)比較高。機(jī)械：一般批量生產(chǎn)， 所以相對(duì)缺乏特色，但同時(shí)成木較低，更容易獲得。木話題高分范文賞析There are a wide variety of products, such as clothes or furniture,which can be made either by han

3、d or by machine Both of thesemethods of manufacturing products have their advantages, and bothhold an important place in society To decide which is best, oneshould pare the advantages of each method. There are manyadvantages of making products with the aid of machines First,machine-made products ten

4、d to be cheaper than their handcraftedcounterparts As machines are very steady and do the exact samething every time they recreate a product, these type of productstend to have consistent quality. Frequently, handmade productshave extremes in their product quality; it can either be extremelygood or

5、extremely poor Finally, machine-made products have theadvantage of being able to use some finishes and materials thatcannot be used when creating something by hand. These include sometypes of steel, laminates, and enamel finishes There are alsomanyadvantages of buying handcrafted products When peopl

6、epurchase handcrafted products, they are supporting the arts andcrafts munities.Buying these types of products keeps many people employed, as ittakes much more time to create an object by hand Handeraftedobjects tend to have much more diversity, as it is almostimpossible to create an exact duplicate

7、 of an object if you aremaking it by hand Overall, I think that there are advantagesof using both machine-made products and hand-made products. Ithink that if one can afford to buy high quality handmade clothingand furniture, that would be the best situation. These types ofproducts tend to last much

8、 longer than their machine-madecounterparts, and one can be satisfied knowing that they aresupporting an artist However, if one cannot afford to buy highquality handmade products, it is probably better to buy things thatare machine-made Machine-made products tend to be of higherquality than poorly m

9、ade handcrafted products 托福寫作難點(diǎn)話題一覽Do advertisements promote things we do not need or products thatmay improve our lives?Some people say that advertising encourages us to buythings we really do not need Others say that advertisements_us about new products that may improveour lives Which viewpoint do

10、 you agree with? Use specific reasonsand examples to support your answer.寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析傾向于同意后者廣告的好處：介紹新產(chǎn)品；降低報(bào)紙、雜志、電視節(jié) 目的價(jià)格。廣告的不良影響（可大多情況下，那不是廣告的錯(cuò)，而是 制作者的責(zé)任，這些可以通過法制解決）結(jié)論是，廣告有很多好 處，也有一些不足，可是沒有廣告卻是不可以的。木話題高分范文賞析Over the last twenty years the amount of adverting we are subjectedto in our daily lives has in

11、creased dramatically. It has got tothe point where one can hardly turn his/her head without seeinga wide array of media images I tend to agree the fact thatadvertisements more often than not persuade us into buying thingsthat we do not need Often it is difficult to discern what a productis from an a

12、dvertisement Advertisers prey on our basal emotions,conjuring strong relationships between our primary drives andtheir product names or logos A prime example of this is perfume ads. In many of thesetypes of advertisements there are women in promising positions,but there is no mention of the actual p

13、roduct for sale Theseads draw us in and make us think that we can be better and morebeautiful if we have the product In addition to being manipulative,advertisements also fill our environments and our consciousnessThere is no taboo venue for advertisements; they fill ourtelevisions, radios, streets

14、and elevators Some advertisers haveeven taken to placing images of their products in our urinals oron boxers bodies It is impossible to get away from them. Toillustrate this point, all one has to do is to pick up a popularmagazine. While flipping through the pages, one will most likelyfind that for

15、every page of content there are at least two pagesof advertisements. It should also be noted that a significantportion of this so called content is actually advertising indisguise Finally, advertisements feed on our insecurities and oftensuessfully convince us that we have no value to society withou

16、ttheir products. Advertising was originally designed to showcaseproducts and inform us as to how they can improve our lives Thisharmless form has been replaced by a medium that viciously attacksour self-confidence and self-esteem. In conclusion, I posit thatthe main goal of advertisements is to conv

17、ince us to buy thingsthat we do not need As globalization continues to shrink theworld, advertising coerces all countries to bee consumer nations.托福寫作難點(diǎn)話題一覽Why people remember special gifts they have received?People remember special gifts or presents that they have receivedWhy? Use specific reasons

18、and寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析這道題目的要點(diǎn)在于special,考生需要從特殊這一點(diǎn)去進(jìn)行展 開。比如特殊的禮物帶來的特殊的意義，或者特殊的改變等等。當(dāng) 然，這種特殊也可能是因?yàn)樗投Y物的人所帶來的，或是在特定的時(shí) 間點(diǎn)收到的禮物等等。examples to support your answer 木話題高分范文賞析One custom that is prevalent in all societies around the globe isthat of gift-giving This is a time-honored tradition in allcountries, and evoke

19、s different feelings or emotions in all of us.Gift-giving has many different functions in Chinese culture Onecan receive a gift as a token of affection, or one can receive orgive a gift to stimulate business opportunities. In both of thesecases, the gifts are always well received, and serve the func

20、tionof a memento.Perhaps the most mon situation in which a gift is given is on aspecial day, for example, one s birthday or an anniversary. Thesegifts e to a person from loved ones, and usually symbolizeaffection or admiration.These gifts can be large or smal 1. For example, my father boughtme a dig

21、ital camera for my last birthday. This was a great present,and was quite expensive I did not appreciate the gift becauseof its moary value, however I valued it because it was a verythoughtful gift, as my father knew I was interested in photography.Other gifts have less moary value, but are still jus

22、t as meaningful.An example of this is when a boyfriend buys flowers for hisgirlfriend The flowers do not cost a lot of money, but they evokefeelings of happiness and love Gifts can also be given to stimulate business For example, manybusinessmen in China will take their most important clients on asp

23、ecial vacation to see the sights of another city This tripdoes not relate directly to business, as in many cases, thebusiness at hand is not discussed Instead, the businessman willoffer such a trip as a token of trust and respect. The clientappreciates this gesture, as it shows him/her that the busi

24、nessmanis serious about work, and values him/her as a customer. n bothof these cases, the gifts signify to the receiver that he/she iscared about and is important. It is always a treat to receive agift, and most people view this as a sign of friendship-Gifts serveas mementos of the people who give t

25、hem, which is why we hold themin special places in our hearts 托福寫作難點(diǎn)話題一覽Do you like a large shopping center being built in yourneighborhood?It has recently been announced that a large shopping center maybe built in your neighborhood Do you support or oppose this plan?Why? Use specific reasons and de

26、tails to support your answer 寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析這道題目的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)有兩個(gè)，分別是large以及in your neighborhood,既然是開在社區(qū)里的大商場(chǎng)，那么勢(shì)必會(huì)帶來商業(yè) 繁榮的影響，往好了說以后自己買東西會(huì)更方便，社區(qū)會(huì)更熱鬧更 有活力。往不好的方向展開則可以說社區(qū)的安靜氣氛會(huì)受影響變得 更加吵鬧，同時(shí)安全性以及交通出行方面也可能會(huì)受到影響。大家 喜不喜歡都可以找到展開的點(diǎn)。While the proponents of the plan to build a large shopping centerin my munity believe that

27、it will aid economic development, I thinkthat it will possibly do irreparable harm to our neighborhood The proposed shopping center will damage existing businesses,provide inferior products, and destroy the environment of ourpeaceful munity Research indicates that panies with less than 50 workers em

28、ploymore people and generate more revenue as a percentage of a nationsGDP than large-scale corporations This is true in America, wheresmall businesses are considered the engine of the economy, as itis in our munity where many people own and operate small shops Large stores can buy large quantities o

29、f goods at wholesale pricesWhile local grocery, that cannot buy products in bulk, will beunable to pete Once the petition is gone, the large store canraise its prices and lower its employees wages This classicexample of exploitative monopoly capitalism impoverishes a munitywhile enriching a small number of people The goods sold at the shopping center would be mass produced andnecessarily of inferior quality to the handcrafted local goods andfreshly grown local produce Cheap prod