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1、基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作四重奏: 1. 信息劃分 : 確定哪些相關(guān)的信息可用一句話表達(dá), 確保5個(gè)句子表達(dá)完所有的信 息 . 建 議 可 在 題 目 上 用 鉛 筆 做 ,的標(biāo)志 (完整性) 2. 列出關(guān)鍵詞組和句型 (準(zhǔn)確性) 3. 串聯(lián)句子: 用正確的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)寫(xiě)出準(zhǔn)確的句子, 并形成篇章 ( (連貫性) ) 4.4.檢查( (準(zhǔn)確性) )第1頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)句子的分類(lèi)簡(jiǎn)單句: 只包含一個(gè)主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子.并列句: 主謂結(jié)構(gòu)+ 連詞(and, but, so, or) +主謂結(jié)構(gòu) (或更多的主謂結(jié)構(gòu))復(fù)合句: 引導(dǎo)詞+主謂結(jié)構(gòu), 主謂結(jié)構(gòu) (從句) (主句) 第2頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)寫(xiě)一個(gè)完整的句子這幾句是正確的句子嗎?

2、 如果你認(rèn)為有誤, 該怎么改?1.The meeting will until 3:00.2.Work hard, you will succeed. 3.I have a brother, who is a doctor.4. There are only 4 students take part in the class.lastand whotaking/to take 第3頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)五種基本的簡(jiǎn)單句1.1.主語(yǔ)主語(yǔ)+ +不及物動(dòng)詞不及物動(dòng)詞2. 2. 主語(yǔ)主語(yǔ)+ +及物動(dòng)詞及物動(dòng)詞+ +賓語(yǔ)賓語(yǔ)Birds fly.Buses run from dawn till midnight.W

3、e are studying hard.We have read many books.They do shopping at the weekend.We are learning English. 第4頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)3. 3. 主語(yǔ)主語(yǔ)+ +系動(dòng)詞系動(dòng)詞+ +表語(yǔ)表語(yǔ)4. 4. 主語(yǔ)主語(yǔ)+ +及物動(dòng)詞及物動(dòng)詞+ +間接賓語(yǔ)間接賓語(yǔ)+ +直接賓語(yǔ)直接賓語(yǔ)5. 主語(yǔ)主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ)賓語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ) We are students.He became a scientist.That sounds good.He gave Tom a present.He offered m

4、e a job. We made him our monitor.The manager thinks the plan practical. He will have his bike repaired.I wont have you speaking to your mother like that.第5頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)并列句1. 用連詞/副詞 (and, but , so, for, or , not onlybut also, eitheror, neithernor, while, bothand, however, therefore)1) Li Ming is 18 years ol

5、d and he is a student in No.1 Middle School.2)Hurry up or youll be late for school.3)I must go now, for my sister is waiting for me.第6頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)2. 用 “ ; ”3. 用 “ ; + adv ”1) We fished all day; we didnt catch anything.1)We fished all day; however, we didnt catch anything. 2) The car was almost new; beside

6、s, it was in excellent condition. ,but we,so all 2) Lily does well in study; all the teachers think highly of her. 第7頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)復(fù)合句復(fù)合句里包含兩個(gè)或更多的主謂結(jié)構(gòu), 其中有一個(gè)主謂結(jié)構(gòu)為句子的主體稱(chēng)為主句，另一個(gè)些主謂結(jié)構(gòu)為從句，他（們）只能充當(dāng)句子的某一（些）成分，,如: 主語(yǔ), 賓語(yǔ), 表語(yǔ), 同位語(yǔ), 定語(yǔ), 狀語(yǔ)等. 根據(jù)他們?cè)诰渥又械墓δ芊謩e稱(chēng)為主語(yǔ)從句, , 賓語(yǔ)從句, , 表語(yǔ)從句, , 同位語(yǔ)從句, , 定語(yǔ)從句, , 狀語(yǔ)從句等. 第8頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)判斷下面

7、句子屬于哪種復(fù)合句1) When we shall have our sports meeting is still a question. 2) The letter says that they are leaving on Friday. 3)Thats what they should do. 4) We expressed the hope that they would come and visit China again. 5) This is the very dictionary that I am looking for. 6) As time went on, Einst

8、eins theory proved to be correct. 第9頁(yè)/共47頁(yè) 連貫性的要求是：句子前后之間要有照應(yīng)，有銜接，思想的表達(dá)應(yīng)該有序，清楚句子與句子之間的過(guò)渡要符合邏輯，不能造成歧義或矛盾第10頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Time order: First, First of all, Second, Third, Next, After that, Then Finally,第11頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Space order On the right, On the left, In the center, In the middle, Next to the, Beside the, Opposi

9、te the _, Near the _, Under the _, Above the _, On one side of the _, On the other side of the _,第12頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Transition signals1、遞進(jìn)：besides, in addition, whats more2、轉(zhuǎn)折和對(duì)比：but, however, on the other hand, 3、總結(jié)：in short, in brief, for these reasons4、因果和結(jié)論：as a result, due to, because of, thus, therefore

10、5、強(qiáng)調(diào)：really, indeed, surely6、其它插入語(yǔ)：worse still/whats worse, after all, if possible, 第13頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)培養(yǎng)英語(yǔ)思維-詞的搭配 大雨 大橋 大樓 大錯(cuò) 大寫(xiě) 大病 大地震heavy rainlong bridgehigh rise/large buildingbig/terrible/serious mistakecapital letterserious illnessmajor earthquake第14頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)句的表達(dá)注意漢英差異：一、狀語(yǔ)e.g. 她一周有三個(gè)下午在一家百貨公司做兼職。She work

11、s part time in a department store three afternoons a week.在我十歲那年我和家人經(jīng)歷了一次奇妙的旅行。 I took a fantastic trip with my family when I was ten years old.第15頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)二、謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞 漢語(yǔ)：無(wú)動(dòng)詞或多動(dòng)詞英語(yǔ)：?jiǎn)蝿?dòng)詞e.g. 我媽媽很漂亮。 My mother is pretty. 我們又唱又跳。 We sang and danced. 我們邀請(qǐng)他們到上海來(lái)玩。 We invited them to come to Shanghai for a visit.

12、你上課常常缺席所以我想要提醒你。 You are often absent from class so I want to remind you. 第16頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)三、主語(yǔ) e.g. 活到老，學(xué)到老。 One is never too old to learn. 很難說(shuō)誰(shuí)對(duì)誰(shuí)錯(cuò)。 Its hard to tell who is right and who is wrong. 昨天找到了丟失的鋼筆。 The lost pen was found yesterday. 上飯店吃飯很貴。Its expensive to eat out. 乘飛機(jī)旅行更舒適、便捷。 Travelling by pla

13、ne is faster and more convenient.第17頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)四、定語(yǔ)漢：常常是前置定語(yǔ)英：前置和后置定語(yǔ)e.g. 我們學(xué)校的所有學(xué)生 all the students in our school 左邊數(shù)第五個(gè)男孩 the fifth boy from the left 英國(guó)人的日常生活 everyday lives of the British 在中國(guó)騎車(chē)的人數(shù) the number of cyclists in China 幾種氣體的混合物 a mixture of several gases 第18頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)三到六歲的孩子Children from 3 to 6

14、years of age隔壁的音像店the music store next door用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)的信the letter(s) in English晚上最晚一班返回的公交車(chē)the last bus back in the evening城市生活的嘈雜、臟亂the noise and dirt of city life第19頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)玩/放松的時(shí)間time to play/relax當(dāng)一個(gè)音樂(lè)家的計(jì)劃plans to be a musician出國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)的機(jī)會(huì)the chance to study abroad供人坐著休息的安靜場(chǎng)所a quiet place for people to sit i

15、n/rest找到任何一個(gè)可以詢(xún)問(wèn)的人find anyone to ask第20頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)城市用水water used by cities不亂扔垃圾的習(xí)慣the habit of not throwing away rubbish我曾經(jīng)生活的村莊the village where I stayed/lived我昨晚吃的某樣?xùn)|西something I ate last night到月球去的宇航員astronauts who traveled to the moon孩子們喜歡吃的食物food (which) children like第21頁(yè)/共47頁(yè) 檢 查1.時(shí)態(tài)2. 主謂一致3.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)4

16、.單詞拼寫(xiě)5.動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式, 過(guò)去分詞6.句子是否完整第22頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Writing tips:1.時(shí)態(tài)一致 必須注意所用時(shí)態(tài)符合上下文。如果用過(guò)去時(shí)敘述一個(gè)故事，就要保證通篇都用過(guò)去時(shí)，不要在作文中間變成現(xiàn)在時(shí)。同樣，如果是在談?wù)撈毡閱?wèn)題、現(xiàn)狀或日常習(xí)慣，就要用現(xiàn)在時(shí)，而不要用過(guò)去時(shí)。e.g. Yesterday I did my homework. It takes me three hours. His father thought he is good at math. She started her new job last week. She liked it. We didnt

17、 go to the party. We arent invited.第23頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Writing tips:2. 主語(yǔ)一致 應(yīng)該保持全文人稱(chēng)一致，這樣讀者才能跟隨一個(gè)邏輯思維順序。否則讀者會(huì)感到困惑。e.g. Although you may fail the exam, he can still be useful to the country. It not only provides you with lots of knowledge but also develops his interests.第24頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Writing tips:4. 詞序/語(yǔ)序 它能夠幫助準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)作

18、者本意并并避免意義含糊不清。注意要讓句子盡量保持英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。e.g. I already have had lunch. She with her mum traveled to Italy. I always be the winner of the piano contest. In China, he knew there were big floods. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.第25頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Writing tips:5. 并列句 用并列句能使文章更生動(dòng)流暢，它包含兩個(gè)獨(dú)立分句和一個(gè)

19、連詞，如：and, but, or, so等。e.g. They know what is better and they are always right. It was crowded. We were able to see him. It was crowded but we were able to see him. She is a top student. She is a talented musician. She is a top student and a talented musician. Though he doesnt have much money, but h

20、is heart is full of love. 兩個(gè)分句不要重復(fù)同一個(gè)單詞。每個(gè)分句都必須有一個(gè)動(dòng)詞；每?jī)蓚€(gè)分句組成的句子只能使用一個(gè)連詞。第26頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Writing tips:6. 復(fù)合句。 它包含一個(gè)主句和一個(gè)從句，由when, after, if等連詞或who, which等關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)。e.g. She was very old. She couldnt stand on the bus easily. She was so old that she couldnt stand on the bus easily. The result was not the most im

21、portant thing for me. The result would be known a whole month later. The result, which would be known a whole month later, was not the most important thing for me.第27頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Writing tips:7. 避免詞的重復(fù)。e.g. All in all, we had a wonderful trip. We travelled across Sydney, Canberra and Melbourne. We saw the

22、beautiful coast of Queensland. We toured all of Perth. We had a great visit with Dan. Perhaps we will go again next winter.第28頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Writing tips:3. 主謂一致/人稱(chēng)一致 確保語(yǔ)法正確。e.g. Things I hate to do is doing homework. What I hate to do is Every people start to learn English. Every person starts to learn Engl

23、ish. The activities can relax ourselves. The activities can help us relax ourselves./We can relax ourselves by taking part in the activities.第29頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)第30頁(yè)/共47頁(yè) 看圖作文難度稍大，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)它要根據(jù)圖畫(huà)呈現(xiàn)的內(nèi)容與所給的中英文提示相結(jié)合來(lái)表達(dá)其內(nèi)在涵義，描述圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容，使短文達(dá)意、正確、連貫。 看圖作文可采用以下幾個(gè)步驟：看圖作文可采用以下幾個(gè)步驟：1、理解圖意，確立情景、理解圖意，確立情景 2、注意所給的中英文提示、注意所給的中英文提示3、

24、明確時(shí)態(tài)，理順?biāo)悸?、明確時(shí)態(tài)，理順?biāo)悸?4、連詞成句，然后再連句成文、連詞成句，然后再連句成文5、反復(fù)審核，修改錯(cuò)誤、反復(fù)審核，修改錯(cuò)誤第31頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)假設(shè)下面五幅圖畫(huà)描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段親身經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)畫(huà)面內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇80字左右的日記。 第32頁(yè)/共47頁(yè) 英文日記的格式 英文日記通常由英文日記通常由書(shū)端書(shū)端和和正文正文兩個(gè)部分組兩個(gè)部分組成。中、英文的日記格式大致一樣。成。中、英文的日記格式大致一樣。 英語(yǔ)日記的書(shū)端是寫(xiě)日記的日期、星期英語(yǔ)日記的書(shū)端是寫(xiě)日記的日期、星期和天氣的。左上角是日期（年、月、日）、和天氣的。左上角是日期（年、月、日）、星期。右上角寫(xiě)上當(dāng)天的天氣

25、情況，如：星期。右上角寫(xiě)上當(dāng)天的天氣情況，如：Sunny，F(xiàn)ine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy等。等。 日記的正文是日記的主要部分，寫(xiě)在星日記的正文是日記的主要部分，寫(xiě)在星期和日期的正下方，可以頂格寫(xiě)，也可以?xún)?nèi)期和日期的正下方，可以頂格寫(xiě)，也可以?xún)?nèi)縮縮3至至5個(gè)字母的空間。個(gè)字母的空間。 第33頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)今天下午我去看電影.go to a moviego to the cinema see a filmIts a fine day today.this afternoonI went to a movie happily this afternoon.第34頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)在路上,我看到

26、一個(gè)手提箱從一輛自行車(chē)上掉了下來(lái).On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a mans bike.on the wayfall down from / fall offsee / find + 復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)第35頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)我撿起箱子,并向騎車(chē)人大聲喊叫,但他卻沒(méi)聽(tīng)見(jiàn),走遠(yuǎn)了.I picked up the case and shouted to the man, but he didnt hear me and rode away. pick up shout to ride away第36頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)于是,我攔了一輛出租車(chē)去追趕失主.

27、I stopped a taxi to to catch up with the man.stop a taxicatch up with第37頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)我終于追上了失主,并把箱子還給他.失主非常的感動(dòng),他拿出一些錢(qián)來(lái)感謝我,但被我拒絕了.I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him.The man took out some money to thank me, but I refused.give back / returnrefuse 第38頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)May 3rd,Friday Fine This aftern

28、oon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a mans bike. I picked up the case and shouted to the man to stop. But he didnt hear me and rode away. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much

29、and wanted to give me some money. But I refused . 第39頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Useful sentences:Sayings and proverbs: On self-help: Pride goes before a fall 驕者必?cái)?. A good beginning is half done.良好的開(kāi)端是成功的一半。 Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。 Custom makes all things easy.有個(gè)好習(xí)慣，事

30、事皆不難。 Great hopes make great man.偉大的抱負(fù)造就偉大的人物。第40頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Useful sentences: Honesty is the best policy.做人誠(chéng)信為本。 Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.抱最好的愿望，做最壞的打算。 Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.世上無(wú)難事，只要肯登攀。 If a thing is worth doing, its worth doing well. 值得做的是就值得做好。 Where there i

31、s life, there is hope. 生活充滿(mǎn)了希望。/留得青山在，不怕沒(méi)柴燒第41頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Useful sentences: On health:A close mouth catches no flies.病從口入。An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一蘋(píng)果，不用請(qǐng)醫(yī)生。Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起身體好。 On motherhood:A mothers love never changes. 母愛(ài)永恒。第42頁(yè)/共47

32、頁(yè)Useful sentences: On friendship:A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友難，失朋友易。A friend is never known till a man has need. 需要之時(shí)方知友。 On reading:A good book is the best of friends, the same today and forever.一本好書(shū)，相伴一生。By reading we enrich the mind, by conversation we polish it.讀書(shū)使人充實(shí)，交談使人精明。Choose an author as you choose a friend.擇書(shū)如擇友。第43頁(yè)/共47頁(yè)Useful sentences: On entertainment:All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只會(huì)用功不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。 On life:We know not what is good until we have lost it.好東西，失去了才明白。Variety is the spice of life.豐富多彩是生活的調(diào)味品。Life is just l