A Werewolf Boy 原創(chuàng)

1、A Werewolf BoyWe settled in America for several years except my granddaughter who still studied in a university in Korea. Although we didnt live in a sumptuous house, we didnt live in a tacky place. One day, a telephone call from Korea told me that I should sell the old house I have ever lived and s

2、omeone intended to buy it. I was shocked and made a decision to go back to have a look at that house. I was an old woman but I was not oblivious so I could do it alone. My granddaughter picked me up at the airport. 1. As we arrived, there was an old big house with its chaos standing in front of us.

3、My granddaughter asked:” Grandma, have you ever lived in this old house?” “Yeah, but just for a period of time.” “But it looks strange as if a monster will show up.” “I had the same feeling with you when I saw it for the first time. Then I was 19 years old and as beautiful as you look like right now

4、.”47 years ago, my mother brought my sister and I to move to this house just because of my sick body. To be familiar with the new neighbors, my mother hosted them at home, but I dont like them for asking many private question which gave me a twinge in heart. So I walked in our yard and found a guita

5、r there. At night, everyone fell asleep but I kept a dairy that I thought I brought lots of hardships to my family. I just want to have a suicide. I cried. Suddenly I saw something glaring outside. I went out to see what happened. I opened a door of a warehouse and of a sudden, a wolf came out. I wa

6、s frightened and shouted. Next day, the neighbors heard the words and shared some potatoes with us. At this moment, we heard a strange voice near us. Its a wolf, no; its human being, but just like a wolf. It looked agitated. We asked a police to come here to take him off, but he didnt. Nobody could

7、help us to take him away, so we could only let him live in our house. As he lived like a wolf, he had meals with his hands and he couldnt speak any words or write them down. To our surprises, he could understand what we said in his underlying mind. So my mother gave him a name JinZhexiu . His existe

8、nce impinged on our life especially me deeply. At first, I hated him very much. He always looked out of the window at night, howling to the moon all the time and excited enjoying himself. One day, XuZhitai, the son of my fathers so-called friend came to see me, in fact, from my point of view, he cam

9、e to disturb me. But at last he ran away because he was afraid of Zhexiu. I felt surprised that moment and he helped me with moving away the heavy boxes. Little by little, my fears faded away and I found he was a kind boy who always protected us. Once we went to a crowded market, everybody moved rub

10、bing shoulders with each other while he shoved in order that nobody would get in our way. Suddenly, a huge st one fell down from a high building and he parried it so that my sister and I didnt be hurt. Theres a point surprisingly that also didnt hurt himself. Then I hope he could live like a normal

11、person, I began to read books in order to teach him write, speak, and dress him in a right way and he would like to follow suit. I always played the guitar for him. Until Xus coming broke up our happy days, he drunk lots of bear, destroying lots of things including my guitar and wanted to take me aw

12、ay and all of this scene were seen by Zhexiu. He became angry although he still couldnt speak a word, he grasped Xus body and howled, his hair and figure turned long, his eyesight became sharp and frightened in a moment, in other word, and he turned to be a wolf. As soon as he nipped, I said”please”

13、, this means do not do anything between us. So he stopped, and calmed down to look at me softly. He turned to be like a normal person. But many people saw the scene just now. Some police came to my home and wanted to take him away. I took him out of the house from the back door and sidled across the

14、 woods. I knew that we would separate from each other. But I said you should listen to them. I will go back to see you and then we will make a big snowman together. Ok?” He understood what I said and whats more, he spoke out some words” dont leave me.” I couldnt help crying and ran away. I dared not

15、 to imagine what would happen on him but I knew if he wouldnt hurt others, they would keep him in a small house and never let him out just like he lived ever since. Our family moved to another place soon and never came back there. My granddaughters words interrupted my thoughts, and she said “we sho

16、uld live here for one night to wait the purchaser.” She walked around the house and told me there was someone glaring at her but felt familiar. I smiled and paid no attention to it. But at night, I went to the small room he had lived in. Everything I saw shocked me, he still sit in bed and practiced

17、 every word I had taught him. He saw me and began to speak. He said: I know you will be back.” We hold tightly and I cried. That night, he read some stories for me until I fell asleep. When I waked up, he wasnt here, but the book was there. I was overwhelmed with all the things that seemed not conce

18、ivable. I went out to tell my daughter that I wont sell out this house and we left soon. The moment I left, I saw him making the snowman behind the house.1.1 We settled in America for several years except my granddaughter who still studied in a university in Korea. · 教師點評 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: besi

19、des, but, except, except for 或短語均含“除之外”之意。   besides: 著重于指另外還有。but: 側(cè)重指不包括在內(nèi)。except: 側(cè)重于排除在外，從整體里減去?？膳cbut換用，但語氣較強。except for: 多用于在說明基本情況或?qū)χ饕糠旨右钥隙?，還引出相反的原因或細節(jié)，從而部分地修正前面的主要意思，含惋惜意味。 · 批改提示 查看who和whoever，whom的區(qū)別。 · 批改提示 except表示“除了（不包括）”。注意與besides的區(qū)別。詳情點擊 1.2 Although we didn'

20、t live in a sumptuous house, we didn't live in a tacky place. · 教師點評 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: house, building, dwelling, shelter, habitation, home, residence 均含有“居住處”之意。   house: 中性詞，泛指一切供居住的建筑物，尤指適合一家一戶居住的房屋。building: 泛指一切建筑物，不限于居住的房子。dwelling: 正式用詞，僅指人們居住的任何建筑物。shelter: 可指長期或臨時的住處，也指簡陋

21、或臨時搭建的躲避風(fēng)雨的場所。habitation: 指長久或固定的住所或居住地。home: 指永久住家時，帶有家庭所特有的溫暖、情感等氣息。residence: 指大而堂皇的寓所或公館，也指法律上的居住點。 1.3 One day, a telephone call from Korea told me that I should sell the old house I have ever lived and someone intended to buy it. · 教師點評 · 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 sell.house 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 12 次  

22、 SeeAlso: sell home1236,trade house58,sell family53 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: buy, purchase 均含“購買”之意。   buy: 普通日常用詞，既可指日常隨意購物也可指大的購買。purchase: 正式用詞，指大宗購貨或購買重要東西。無感情色彩，強調(diào)物品的購得。 1.4 I was shocked and made a decision to go back to have a look at that house. · 教師點評 · 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 have.look 在教材中

23、出現(xiàn)過 3561 次   SeeAlso: take look13005,have face1325,have aspect493,have expression245,accept look13 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: resolution, decision, determination, resolve 均含“決定，決心”之意。   resolution: 指自覺地正式表示的決心，含極強的主觀能動意味。decision: 既可指重大的或一般的決定或決心，又可指在多種情況下作出果斷的抉擇，毫不猶豫地采取行動。determination:

24、側(cè)重堅定不移的頑強意志力。resolve: 語氣較強，強調(diào)克服感情上的軟弱，下決心干具體的一件事。 1.5 I was an old woman but I was not oblivious so I could do it alone. · 教師點評 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: female, woman, lady 都有“女性”之意。   female: 與male“男(性)的，公的，雄的”相對，強調(diào)性別，可指人或動物，但除用于科學(xué)和統(tǒng)計上外，大多含貶義。woman: 與man相對，側(cè)重成年婦女的特點，系成年婦女的通稱。lady: 與gentlema

25、n相對，強調(diào)所謂高貴的氣質(zhì)、品德和教養(yǎng)等。也指對女性的禮貌稱呼。 1.6 My granddaughter picked me up at the airport. · 教師點評 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: choose, select, elect, pick, prefer, opt 均含有“選擇”之意。   choose: 普通用詞，側(cè)重根據(jù)個人意愿和判斷從眾多的對象中進行選擇，著重被選者的優(yōu)點。select: 書面用詞，具有莊嚴、正式的感情色彩。強調(diào)精選。elect: 指按照一定的規(guī)章或法律，用投票等方式進行的認真慎重的選擇。 pick: 口語用詞

26、，多指從個人角度仔細挑選，也含任意挑選之意。prefer: 強調(diào)個人偏愛，不一定有選擇的行動。opt: 多指在幾種可能性之間進行選擇。 1.7 1. As we arrived, there was an old big house with its chaos standing in front of us. · 教師點評 · 詞序錯誤 請檢查an old big house，確認詞序是否正確。 big old· 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: attain, reach, achieve, arrive 均有“達到”之意。   attain: 側(cè)重指

27、在抱負或雄心的激勵下，以最大的努力去達到一般所不及或不敢追求的目的。reach: 常用詞，指到達某一空間、時間、目標(biāo)或發(fā)展過程中的某一點。achieve: 側(cè)重為達到目的所需的技巧、忍耐和努力。 arrive: 指得出結(jié)論，達成某項協(xié)議或作出某一決定等。 · 批改提示 big的近義表達有major/significant/substantial等。   Unnecessary or difficult navigation is a major frustration to users. 不必要或者困難的導(dǎo)航是用戶產(chǎn)生沮喪的一個主要原因。Significant c

28、hange must be significantly better. 重大改變必須是非常好的改變。This is the only substantial dispute. 這是唯一具體的爭執(zhí)。 · 批改提示 in front of表示“在.前面”，注意與in the front of區(qū)別。詳情點擊 1.8 My granddaughter asked: " Grandma, have you ever lived in this old house? " · 教師點評 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: ask, beg, demand, requi

29、re, request, implore, claim, pray, entreat 均有“要求，請求”之意。   ask: 最普通用詞，指向?qū)Ψ教岢鲆蠡蛘埱?，長、晚輩，上下級之間都可使用。beg: 指懇切地或再三地請求或要求，常含低三下四意味，也多用于應(yīng)酬場合。demand: 一般指理直氣壯地提出強烈要求，或堅持不讓對方拒絕的要求。require: 強調(diào)根據(jù)事業(yè)、需要或紀律、法律等而提出的要求。request: 正式用詞，指非常正式，有禮貌的請求或懇求，多含擔(dān)心因種種原因?qū)Ψ讲荒艽饝?yīng)的意味。implore: 書面用詞，著重指迫切、焦急或痛苦地懇求或哀求，常含較強的感情色

30、彩。claim: 指有權(quán)或宣稱有權(quán)得到而公開提出的要求。pray: 語氣莊重，指熱情、誠懇和敬祈的要求，現(xiàn)不很常用。entreat: 泛指一般“懇求或哀求”，含企圖說服對方或用熱烈的請求軟化反對意見的意味。 1.9 "Yeah, but just for a period of time. " · 教師點評 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: age, epoch, era, period, times 均含“時期，時代”之意。   age: 常指具有顯著特征或以某杰出人物命名的歷史時代或時期。epoch: 正式用詞，側(cè)重指以某重大事件或巨大變

31、化為起點的新的歷史時期。era: 書面語用詞，指歷史上的紀元、年代，可與epoch和age互換，側(cè)重時期的延續(xù)性和整個歷程。period: 最普通用詞，概念廣泛，時間長短不限，既可指任何一個歷史時期，又可指個人或自然界的一個發(fā)展階段。 times: 側(cè)重某一特定時期。 1.10 "But it looks strange as if a monster will show up. " · 教師點評 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: appear, emerge, show, loom 均有“出現(xiàn)”之意。   appear: 強調(diào)公開露面，被看

32、見。emerge: 側(cè)重緩緩出現(xiàn)的過程。show: 語氣較強，強調(diào)“露出來”。loom: 指朦朧出現(xiàn)，好像從霧中浮現(xiàn)出來一樣。 1.11 "I had the same feeling with you when I saw it for the first time. · 教師點評 · 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 have.feeling 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 7055 次   SeeAlso: have opinion2989,have notion844,have impression781,have belief733,take feeling128

33、,accept feeling15 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: emotion, feeling, passion, affection, sentiment 的共同含義是“感情，情感”之意。   emotion: 普通用詞，詞義中性。泛指因外界刺激而引起思想情感從細微變化到最強烈的發(fā)作。 feeling: 普通用詞，含義廣。多指具體的或內(nèi)心的感受，或表露出來的強烈情感。passion: 指極強烈的感情、尤指憤怒、愛好等。也常指兩性間的愛情。affection: 指對人的愛慕或深厚、溫柔的感情。sentiment: 一般指由一種思想激起的感情，含較大的理智因素。 1

34、.12 Then I was 19 years old and as beautiful as you look like right now. · 教師點評 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: beautiful, fair, handsome, lovely, pretty, fine 均含“美麗的，漂亮的”之意。   beautiful: 普通用詞，含義廣泛，語氣最強，指優(yōu)美和諧，是一種幾乎接近完美的美。指人時通常形容女人或小孩，很少用于描寫男子。fair: 正式用詞，多用于文學(xué)中，形容女子和兒童，側(cè)重外表的美。handsome: 多用于描寫男性的英俊瀟灑。

35、有時也形容女人，指其五官端正，體態(tài)秀麗。lovely: 普通用詞，描寫人時，主要指女人和小孩的相貌，語氣不如beautiful強。pretty: 普通用詞，語氣比beautiful弱，多用于描寫婦女、兒童以及小巧玲瓏，精美可愛之物。fine: 指在容貌、身材或風(fēng)度等方面令人感到可愛。用于事物時，強調(diào)形式或內(nèi)容的優(yōu)美。 · 批改提示 注意區(qū)分look like和look alike的區(qū)別。 · 高分表達 高分詞組，as.as意為“和.一樣地.”,第一個as為副詞，表“一樣地”， 而第二個as則為連接詞，表“和，與”之意。 1.13 " 47 years ago, m

36、y mother brought my sister and I to move to this house just because of my sick body. · 教師點評 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: due to, owing to, because of, thanks to 均表示“由于”之意。   due to: 用于較莊重的書面語中，側(cè)重“起因于”，在句中多作表語，有時作狀語。owing to: 可以和due to換用，但在句中多作狀語，也可作表語。because of: 著重某種原因的理由，在句中通常作狀語。thanks to: 突出

37、一種感激之情，含“多虧”意味。 · 批改提示 move近義表達有progress/ develop/ advance 1.14 To be familiar with the new neighbors, my mother hosted them at home, but I don't like them for asking many private question which gave me a twinge in heart. · 教師點評 · 名詞錯誤 單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤，建議將many.question改為many.questions。 ·

38、; 低頻警示 many private question 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語 · 低頻警示 familiar with the new neighbors 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: ask, beg, demand, require, request, implore, claim, pray, entreat 均有“要求，請求”之意。   ask: 最普通用詞，指向?qū)Ψ教岢鲆蠡蛘埱?，長、晚輩，上下級之間都可使用。beg: 指懇切地或再三地請求或要求，常含低三下四意味，也多用于應(yīng)酬場合。demand: 一

39、般指理直氣壯地提出強烈要求，或堅持不讓對方拒絕的要求。require: 強調(diào)根據(jù)事業(yè)、需要或紀律、法律等而提出的要求。request: 正式用詞，指非常正式，有禮貌的請求或懇求，多含擔(dān)心因種種原因?qū)Ψ讲荒艽饝?yīng)的意味。implore: 書面用詞，著重指迫切、焦急或痛苦地懇求或哀求，常含較強的感情色彩。claim: 指有權(quán)或宣稱有權(quán)得到而公開提出的要求。pray: 語氣莊重，指熱情、誠懇和敬祈的要求，現(xiàn)不很常用。entreat: 泛指一般“懇求或哀求”，含企圖說服對方或用熱烈的請求軟化反對意見的意味。 · 批改提示 private的近義表達有nongovernmental。 1.15 S

40、o I walked in our yard and found a guitar there. · 教師點評 · 低頻警示 find.guitar 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: build, construct, found, erect, establish, set up 均有“建設(shè)，建立，建造”之意。   build: 普通用詞，含義廣泛，可指一切具體或抽象的建造或建立。construct: 較正式用詞，強調(diào)根據(jù)一定計劃進行的規(guī)模較大，結(jié)構(gòu)較復(fù)雜，要求較高技術(shù)的建造。found: 側(cè)重打下基礎(chǔ)或創(chuàng)辦，具體或

41、抽象事物均可用。erect: 側(cè)重指對高而垂直物的建造。使用不如build廣泛。establish: 著重穩(wěn)固地建成，可具體指國家、政府、學(xué)?；蛏痰甑鹊慕?，也可指信仰、信用、名譽、法律、制度、規(guī)則等的建立。set up: 作“建立”用時，側(cè)重于“開始”?？芍妇唧w或抽象的建立。 · 批改提示 find指一般生活中的發(fā)現(xiàn)。注意與discover區(qū)別。詳情點擊 1.16 At night, everyone fell asleep but I kept a dairy that I thought I brought lots of hardships to my family.

42、83; 教師點評 · 詞語錯誤 用詞不當(dāng)，建議將keep.dairy改為keep.diary。   diary是“日記”的意思dairy是“乳制品”的意思 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: sleepy, asleep 均含有“欲睡的”之意。   sleepy: 最常用詞，指人昏昏欲睡，或沉睡時的寂靜狀態(tài)。asleep: 作表語，多用于非正式的英語里，指處于睡著的狀態(tài)，側(cè)重動作的結(jié)果。 · 批改提示 keep近義表達有hold/ maintain/ preserve/ sustain 1.17 I just want to have

43、 a suicide. · 教師點評 · 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 have.suicide 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 118 次   SeeAlso: take suicide9,accept suicide5 · 批改提示 want的近義表達有intend，tend，lack，need。 1.18 I cried. · 教師點評 · 批改提示 注意cry和shout區(qū)別。   動詞cry常表示(因痛楚、恐懼等)“喊叫”， “哭泣”make loud sounds that express feelings such

44、as pain, fear, etc; weep；而shout卻表示(一般或快樂地)“嚷”，“叫喊“speak or cry out in a loud voice。 1.19 Suddenly I saw something glaring outside. · 教師點評 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: gaze, glare, stare, peer, glance 都有“看，瞧”之意。   gaze: 指出于羨慕、感興趣、關(guān)心或驚異而長時間目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地看。glare: 指用憤恨、兇狠或含敵意的眼光死死看著某人。stare: 側(cè)重因驚奇、好奇、粗魯無禮等而睜

45、大眼睛看。peer: 指瞇著眼睛仔細地或略為吃力地看。glance: 指匆匆地或粗略地一看，側(cè)重心不在焉地、匆忙地看一眼。 1.20 I went out to see what happened. · 教師點評 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: happen, occur, chance, take place 語都可表示“發(fā)生”之意。   happen: 普通用詞，泛指一切客觀事物或情況的發(fā)生，強調(diào)動作的偶然性。occur: 較正式用詞，可指意外地發(fā)生，也可指意料中的發(fā)生。chance: 側(cè)重事前無安排或無準備而發(fā)生的事，特指巧合。take place: 多

46、指通過人為安排的發(fā)生。 1.21 I opened a door of a warehouse and of a sudden, a wolf came out. · 教師點評 · 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 open.door 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 10839 次   SeeAlso: give door23,open doorway7 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: come, arrive, reach 均含“到達”之意。   come: 普通用詞，含義廣泛。強調(diào)到達的動作或進程，不側(cè)重是否到達目的地。也可用于比喻意義。arrive: 側(cè)

47、重到達目的地或達到某一目標(biāo)。也可用作比喻。reach: 既可指到達目的地，又可指到達途中的中間站。強調(diào)經(jīng)過的周折或付出的努力。 · 批改提示 注意door和gate區(qū)別。   名詞door和gate均可表示“門”，但door指建筑物、交通工具或壁櫥等上的門that which closes the entrance to a building, room, etc；而gate 卻指籬笆門、大門等a movable frame, often with bars across it, which closes an opening in a fence, wall,

48、etc。 1.22 I was frightened and shouted. · 教師點評 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: cry, shout, exclaim, roar, scream, shriek, yell, call 都有“喊，叫”之意。   cry: 一般指因恐懼、痛苦、驚奇等而喊叫。shout: 指有意識地高聲喊叫，常用于提出警告、發(fā)命令或喚起注意等。 exclaim: 多指因高興、憤怒、痛苦、驚訝等突發(fā)感情而高聲喊叫。roar: 指發(fā)出大而深沉的聲音、吼叫或咆哮。scream: 指因恐具、快樂或痛苦而發(fā)出的尖叫聲。shriek: 指因驚恐

49、、痛苦等或其它感情而發(fā)出比scream更為尖銳、刺耳的叫聲。yell: 多指求援、鼓勵時的呼叫。也可指因外界因素刺激而發(fā)出尖厲聲音。call: 指大聲說話或喊叫，以引起某人的注意。 1.23 Next day, the neighbors heard the words and shared some potatoes with us. · 教師點評 · 低頻警示 share.potato 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語 · 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 hear.word 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 9 次   SeeAlso: hear Book23,try

50、word15,hear Scripture4 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: hear, listen, overhear 均含“聽”之意。   hear: 及物動詞，指聲音進入耳內(nèi)，但不含有注意的意味，即，只要聽覺正常，聲音進入耳內(nèi)，就能聽見。但在祈使句中，hear可指有意識的行為。listen: 及物動詞，指有意識地傾聽，強調(diào)行為的過程。overhear: 指偶然聽到，無意中聽到，也指偷聽。 · 批改提示 hear側(cè)重點是聽到、聽見什么，注意與listen to區(qū)別。   hear的側(cè)重點是聽到、聽見什么，而listen to 的側(cè)重點

51、為聽的傾向，如：listen! Do you hear someone calling help?這樣的詞還有l(wèi)ook與see。它們的側(cè)重點也不同，look重于"看"的傾向，而see重于看見沒看見。 1.24 At this moment, we heard a strange voice near us. · 教師點評 · 低頻警示 a strange voice near us 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語 · 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 hear.voice 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 3064 次   SeeAlso: try vo

52、ice7,hear articulation3 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: hear, listen, overhear 均含“聽”之意。   hear: 及物動詞，指聲音進入耳內(nèi)，但不含有注意的意味，即，只要聽覺正常，聲音進入耳內(nèi)，就能聽見。但在祈使句中，hear可指有意識的行為。listen: 及物動詞，指有意識地傾聽，強調(diào)行為的過程。overhear: 指偶然聽到，無意中聽到，也指偷聽。 · 批改提示 hear側(cè)重點是聽到、聽見什么，注意與listen to區(qū)別。   hear的側(cè)重點是聽到、聽見什么，而listen to 的側(cè)重

53、點為聽的傾向，如：listen! Do you hear someone calling help?這樣的詞還有l(wèi)ook與see。它們的側(cè)重點也不同，look重于"看"的傾向，而see重于看見沒看見。 1.25 It's a wolf, no; it's human being, but just like a wolf. · 教師點評 · 語法檢查 建議把 it's human being 改成 its human being (Did you mean.) 1.26 It looked agitated. · 教師點

54、評 1.27 We asked a police to come here to take him off, but he didn't. · 教師點評 · 名詞錯誤 請檢查a police，集體名詞前一般不加a/an。 · 詞語錯誤 詞匯冗余，police前通常不加冠詞a。   一些集體名詞前通常不加冠詞a,包括：clothing,furniture,baggage,luggage,jewelry,traffic,information,machinery,merchandise,produce,scenery,people,poli

55、ce,cattle,poultry,vermin,clergy,militi,crew,public,church,mankind,humanity · 詞語錯誤 用詞不當(dāng)，建議將a police改為a policeman。 · 名詞錯誤 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤，請檢查a police。   典型錯誤如：People who commit a guilt should be punished. · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: ask, beg, demand, require, request, implore, claim, pray, entreat 均

56、有“要求，請求”之意。   ask: 最普通用詞，指向?qū)Ψ教岢鲆蠡蛘埱?，長、晚輩，上下級之間都可使用。beg: 指懇切地或再三地請求或要求，常含低三下四意味，也多用于應(yīng)酬場合。demand: 一般指理直氣壯地提出強烈要求，或堅持不讓對方拒絕的要求。require: 強調(diào)根據(jù)事業(yè)、需要或紀律、法律等而提出的要求。request: 正式用詞，指非常正式，有禮貌的請求或懇求，多含擔(dān)心因種種原因?qū)Ψ讲荒艽饝?yīng)的意味。implore: 書面用詞，著重指迫切、焦急或痛苦地懇求或哀求，常含較強的感情色彩。claim: 指有權(quán)或宣稱有權(quán)得到而公開提出的要求。pray: 語氣莊重，指熱情、誠

57、懇和敬祈的要求，現(xiàn)不很常用。entreat: 泛指一般“懇求或哀求”，含企圖說服對方或用熱烈的請求軟化反對意見的意味。 1.28 Nobody could help us to take him away, so we could only let him live in our house. · 教師點評 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: house, building, dwelling, shelter, habitation, home, residence 均含有“居住處”之意。   house: 中性詞，泛指一切供居住的建筑物，尤指適合一家一戶居住的

58、房屋。building: 泛指一切建筑物，不限于居住的房子。dwelling: 正式用詞，僅指人們居住的任何建筑物。shelter: 可指長期或臨時的住處，也指簡陋或臨時搭建的躲避風(fēng)雨的場所。habitation: 指長久或固定的住所或居住地。home: 指永久住家時，帶有家庭所特有的溫暖、情感等氣息。residence: 指大而堂皇的寓所或公館，也指法律上的居住點。 · 批改提示 help近義表達有support/ assist/ aid 1.29 As he lived like a wolf, he had meals with his hands and he couldn&

59、#39;t speak any words or write them down. · 教師點評 · 低頻警示 meals with his hands 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語 · 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 have.meal 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 584 次   SeeAlso: take meal142,accept meal33 · 搭配統(tǒng)計 動名搭配 speak.word 在教材中出現(xiàn)過 1067 次   SeeAlso: address word13 · 學(xué)習(xí)提示 易混詞匯: dwell, res

60、ide, live, lodge, inhabit, settle 均有“居住，定居”之意。   dwell: 文學(xué)上的用詞，口語中通常用live代替。reside: 書面用詞，指合法的永久性居住，也指在豪華的住宅里居住。live: 最普通用詞，指固定的居住，可以是長期的，也可以是臨時的。lodge: 指短時間或臨時住宿。inhabit: 強調(diào)人或動物居住在某個地區(qū)并已適應(yīng)某種特殊環(huán)境。settle: 側(cè)重指某人定居于城市、國家或地區(qū)，而不指居住的住所。 1.30 To our surprises, he could understand what we said in his underlying mind. · 教師點評 · 低頻警示 underlying.mind 在語料庫中無此用法，疑似中式英語 &