2020-2021年英語中考英語書面表達(dá)20(附帶答案解析)1

1、2020-2021 年 英語中考英語書面表達(dá)20（ 附帶答案解析）1一、中考英語書面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1 （題文）書面表達(dá)在中學(xué)生機(jī)器人大賽上，出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機(jī)器人，它的主要功能有：1. 定時做飯、洗衣服；2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運(yùn)動；3. 處理緊急情況（如：撥打120）假如你是該機(jī)器人的發(fā)明者，請你介紹這個產(chǎn)品，并談?wù)勀愕奈磥碓O(shè)想。要求：1. 意思連貫，語句通順；2. 詞數(shù)80 詞左右；短文的開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）3. 參考詞匯：at a fixed time 定時emergency 緊急情況ccompany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentle

2、men,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I like to introdd uce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meal

3、s and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I m sure my

4、 new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people wi ll live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如thank you for doing ， I d like to d， ointroduce sb. to ， all of you ， at home ， do some washing， at a fixed time

5、， have a chat， play chess， do exercise， deal with ， a great help ， in the future 等。而 Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots. 等非謂語動詞和復(fù)雜從句的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)

6、作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的 最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu) 以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2. （ B）根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80-100體育運(yùn)動是中學(xué)生的共同愛好.請根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇題為What We Get from Sports 的短文 ,應(yīng)該包含以下要點(diǎn):1 , 學(xué)生參加體育運(yùn)動的興趣不同,理由各異.2 .多數(shù)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)疲倦時,通過運(yùn)動來放松自己.3 .男孩參加各項(xiàng)體育運(yùn)動,希

7、望運(yùn)動能使自己更強(qiáng)壯.4 .女孩也喜歡運(yùn)動，希望運(yùn)動使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條 .5 .你對運(yùn)動的觀點(diǎn).6 .注意:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字7 .短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù).8 .參考詞語:keep slim （保持苗條）What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in common an interest insports.【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But differentstud

8、ents have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most

9、, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩\(yùn)動的觀點(diǎn)和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作要點(diǎn)要包括：1.提出目前學(xué)生對運(yùn)動的不同看法及原因。2.具體分析（多數(shù)學(xué)

10、生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn)）。3.提出自己對運(yùn)動的觀點(diǎn)。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如have fun， in order to ， as for， in my opinion 等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。3 書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你將代表你校2009 屆畢業(yè)生在學(xué)校畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：回顧美麗的校園、生動有趣的教學(xué)、三年來的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助；祝愿（考生自擬，至少兩點(diǎn)

11、）。注意： 1. 90 詞左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 發(fā)言稿須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；發(fā)言稿不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.Thank you for listening!【答案】 Good afterno

12、on, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We hav

13、e learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers' efforts, our parents' support and our classmates' help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goo

14、dbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括回顧美麗的校園、生 動有趣的教學(xué)、三年來的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助；祝愿，在寫 作中適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順，符合邏輯，符合發(fā)言稿的格式，沒有出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名。4.假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Jack給你寫郵件表達(dá)了想?yún)⒓幽阈Ｊ钇跒橥鈬鴮W(xué)生舉辦的漢語夏令營的愿望，希望你告知活動舉辦的具體時間地點(diǎn)，活動安排以及你的建議。提示詞語：Chinese

15、classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題： When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held? What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp? What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holid

16、ay . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer.The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you

17、will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What' s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the

18、Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。2 .例文點(diǎn)評：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I 進(jìn)行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行

19、了收尾。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。文章條理分明，三個要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。3 .高分亮點(diǎn)：短語： as follows， take part in ， What s more， look forward to 。句型：被動句型，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，主語從句。5 為了宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事,“程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully ) ”是其中一個選題。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示, 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動。內(nèi)容提示：1.

20、 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點(diǎn)。要求：1. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫：詞數(shù)：100 左右 .2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱、老師和同學(xué)的真實(shí)姓名?！敬鸢浮縇ong long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher,Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn t wake up the teacher. S

21、ohe stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and itwas very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacherwoke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was move

22、d deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, 程門立雪(“Stand in the snow to wait forMaster Cheng respectfully) ”。目的是宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時態(tài)為一般過去時，靈活運(yùn)用動詞的過去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通過介紹這個故事，發(fā)表看法或者觀點(diǎn)。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題，例如:There was/wer

23、e. 注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，具有條理性。6 書面表達(dá)(本題15 分)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。為了使生活更美好，社會需要正能量( positive energy)。生活中，我們需要他人的幫助，也要學(xué)會幫助他人。請你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do? 本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；2. 說說你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會充滿正能量。 作文要求：1 不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2語句連貫，詞數(shù)80 個左右。作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不必抄寫在試卷

24、上，也不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop.【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cakeshop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl c

25、rying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others

26、 help. I stronglybelieve helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes,“her hand, the flavor in mine. （ 113w） ” 【解析】 【詳解】 本文屬于話題作文，描述對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以 及鼓勵大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上 下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)

27、、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be for, adj enough to do, theother day, try one s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one s opinion, be supto, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine 等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】 寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起： 認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符 合要求。構(gòu)

28、思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給 出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。 初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還 要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7.近年來，習(xí)近平主席提出了實(shí)現(xiàn)中華民族偉大復(fù)興的中國夢

29、”。學(xué)校開展了 夢想少年的主題演講活動，假如你是張明，請根據(jù)以下提供的要點(diǎn)，以"I'm a Dream Teenager為題，寫一篇80 100詞的短文，向大家推介自己。（可聯(lián)系實(shí)際，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮） 注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。提示詞語： 1.be good at 2.help.with 3.followrules 4.cheer up 5.be popular with.6.volunteer to do something遵守校紀(jì)家 規(guī)，堂老師 同學(xué)我迎為了實(shí)現(xiàn)夢 想，努力學(xué) 習(xí)，擅長很經(jīng)常幫助同學(xué)，自 JS去醫(yī)院看望生 靠的孩子,使他們活潢開朗，身體 健康，經(jīng)常

30、鍛煉 喜政踢足球【答案】I'm a Dream TeenagerGood morning , dear teachers and friends , I am Zhang Ming . It's great honor for me to make a speech here.As a fifteen-year-old boy , my dream is to be a good teacher . To make my dream come true , I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects . Als

31、o, I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much , and I really enjoy sports . At school, I always follow the school rules , so I am popular with my classmates and teachers . On weekends, I'd like to help people . For example, I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital an

32、d cheer them up.In a word , I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day. That's all, Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學(xué)校開展夢想少年”的主題演講活動，假如你是張明，要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容，以"I'm a Dream Teenage兩題，寫一篇短文，向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的 材料提示可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題， 看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后

33、根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的 表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作。在寫作過程中，要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確的表達(dá) 出來，要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點(diǎn)，注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫。同時要注意語言的表述 應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最 好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富 多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。8 .上周，你們班就初中生能否騎電動自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。現(xiàn)在，請你根據(jù)下表用 英語寫一篇介紹討論情況的短文。注意：1.短文須包括寫作提示和表格中所列的全部內(nèi)容；2

34、.時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，書寫工整、規(guī)范； 3.80-100詞。生詞提示：electric adj.電討論結(jié)果25人表示同意35人不同意理由1.這樣很方便；2.能節(jié)約上學(xué) 途中的時間。1.年齡太小，騎電動車不安全；2.早上交通擁擠，騎電動車也快不起來?！敬鸢浮?Last week, our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go toschool.25 students of our class agreed with it , because they said it

35、 was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn' t agree with them. They said it wasnot safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles , for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the

36、students couldn ' t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇80-100詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)可知，本文主要以一般過去時態(tài)書寫。要注意把每一個要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來，不要遺漏任何一 個，書寫時一定注意時態(tài)的正確使用。觀點(diǎn)分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點(diǎn)。并 注意上下文要語句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀點(diǎn)的學(xué)生各自的理由，結(jié) 構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，書

37、寫工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school.They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldnbicycles ' t ride electricquickly.闡述各自觀點(diǎn)時，理由也很充分?？键c(diǎn)：提綱類作文。9 .近期某英文報紙就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機(jī)式父母）”這一話題展開討論。掃雪機(jī)式父

38、母”的特征是不惜一切代價為孩子掃除他們生活中遇到的一切障礙，解決一切困難，以便 他們可以輕松擁有成功的人生。請從下表的兩種觀點(diǎn)中詵擇一種觀點(diǎn)，并結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法,用英文寫一篇短文 投稿。觀點(diǎn)理解不理解父母出于對孩子的爰才這么做。父母控制一切，孩子沒有自由。自己的看法自己的看法要求：1、詞數(shù)：60-80詞。2、短文應(yīng)包括所選觀點(diǎn)中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3、短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息?！敬鸢浮坷腎 really can't understand the snowplow parents.For these parents,they control everything

39、.They clean all the obstacles in children's lives.In this case,they think children have a successful life easily.However,Children have no freedom to do anything.It is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn't do all the things for children.Because they also need the exper

40、iences in their lives.And these experiences play an important role in a successful life.In this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.Meanwhile,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【詳解】1 .題干解讀：本文是一篇話

41、題作文，要求就 “Snowplow Parents（掃雪機(jī)式父母）”這一話題 展開討論，并根據(jù)表格中所給出的提示內(nèi)容選擇一種觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法。在解答寫作這類試題時，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾，將主要句 型、關(guān)鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，然后再動筆寫作。2 .例文點(diǎn)評：本文時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第三人稱，輔以第一人稱。文章首先說 明不理解掃雪機(jī)式父母的原因，接下來說明自己的觀點(diǎn)，并闡述自己觀點(diǎn)的原因。3 .高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：in one's lives, in this case, in this way , in trouble 。句型：高分句型一： In this case, they think children have a successful life easily . In this case 在這樣 的情況下；這句話意為：在這