高三短文改錯(cuò)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)練習(xí)

1、短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。作 文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、 刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏子符號(hào)（八）并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。AThis morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. At the noon we had a picnic on the grass. I eat too mu

2、ch, so I couldn't finish my sandwich. As I didn't know what to do with it, I asked my sister for advices. She pointed at the notice, that said, "No litter." And she asked me throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. Just then I saw an elephant coming slow towards us. Suddenly an i

3、dea came into her mind. I could feed the elephant by my sandwich and I did so in the end. Seen this, my sister smiled and said, "What clever you are!"BMr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works

4、 from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step

5、into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.COnline shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don' t like it, because onli

6、ne shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can't feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. A

7、s a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isn't reliable at all.DMy father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is

8、 easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food wa

9、s wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going toBeijing.Today we has the honor of invite Professor Smith to give us an English lesson. All ofus were deeply impressing by this unforgettable Engli

10、sh lesson. The professor began theclass in an amusing English story, which attracted our attentions at once. He spoke slowlyand clearly so that we could follow him well. Great inspired, most of us took an activepart in classroom activities. After class, many students being interviewed spoke highly o

11、fhim. They said never before have they experienced such interesting a class. From hislesson, we came to conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English whether we find a good way.FIn England, nobody under 18 are allowed to drink in a bar. Mr. Thompson used togoing to a bar near his house, or

12、 he never took his son, Tom, because he was too young.Then when Tom had his eighteen birthday, Mr. Thompson took him to his usual bar.After drinking at half an hour, Mr. Thompson said to his son, want to tea“chTyoomu , Ian useful lesson. You must always be careful never drink too much.”“ How do you

13、knhow you've had enough? ” asked Tom. “ Do you see those two lights at the end of the bar?When it seem to have become four, you've had enough and should gto home. ”“ But ,Dad, I can see only one. ” said Tom.Dear John,I'm very pleasing to know you are coming to study in Beijing. It is rea

14、lly good idea to improve your Chinese before the new term began. And now let me to tell you something about the school. First, it is very conveniently for you to get there by Bus No. 16. Next, the classes are very small. There are 24 teaching hour a week. After class, you can enjoy sports and activi

15、ties with other students. Stay with a Chinese family will provide you with a chance to practise your Chinese but know more about the Chinese family life. The time will suit you and only 200 yuan are paid per month. I'll get touch with them if you are interested in this school.Looking forward to

16、hearing from you soon.Yours, Li HuaHLast weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Dalian. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I search the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Dalian, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, we went to the train station and ma

17、naged to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue. After the dinner, I packed the things the suitcase, what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to show them off. Waving goodbye to them on the

18、 platform, I felt happily for them and wished them safe journey.答案A1. 第二句刪掉第一個(gè)the2. 第三句eat 改為ate3. 第四旬a(chǎn)dvices改為advice4. 第五句that 改為which5. 第六句throw 前加to6. 第七句slow 改為slowly7. 第八句her改為my8. 第九句by 改為with/on9. 第十句Seen改為Seeing10. 第十句What 改為HowB11. 第二句with 改為 on12. 第三句刪掉so13. 第四旬have改為has14. 第五句healthy 改為 h

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