A 嬌 作文--目的和措施

1、作文高分特點 外表美結構美 合理的段落層次，讓人感覺條理清晰 每一段落要有一個主題句topic sentence和幾個支撐句supporting sentences 寫人狀物及敘事記敘文先寫主題句，給予總體評價，然后詳細介紹事件發(fā)生的人物，時間，原因結果等，最后照應全文，構成總分總結構。 議論文一般分三段：主題段提出問題或論點；發(fā)展段圍繞主題討論，舉例或講明道理；結尾得出結論。詞匯美 兩點詞匯不等于偏難怪的詞，而是使用生動，具體，形象的詞匯，關鍵是地道準確。 The job is very difficult to do. The job is very challenging. Seeing

2、 the lines of trees, we all felt happy. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.句式美 句式單一，缺乏生氣，哪怕無任何錯誤也難得高分。精彩句式的合理使用，會使本來結構單一語句乏味的句子極富可讀性。 單句變并列句/復雜句：緊湊，多變，靈活 省略與替代：避免不必要的重復和累贅 主動和被動交替：豐富句子多樣性 分詞及with結構：靈活，形象，緊湊 Only in this way can we live a healthy life. How time flies! It has

3、 been 10 years since we last saw each other. We will meet at the gate of our school, where a blue bus will be waiting. As the saying goes, Actions speak louder than words. With the bright moon high up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes.銜接美：增強句子間邏輯性和緊湊性銜接美：增強句子間邏輯性和緊湊性 There are many adva

4、ntages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible, First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up

5、. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life. In a word, lets greet eve

6、ry day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day. 在我們隊里有30名成員。Our team consists of/is composed/made up of 30 members.我們很容易找到了村莊。We had no difficulty/trouble (in) finding the village.這次英語演講比賽非常成功。The English speech contest was of great success.眾所周知，好的學習習慣對于學習非常重要。As is known to all, good learning habit i

7、s of vital importance to study. 我想到了一個主意。 A good idea occurred/struck to me. 我堅持寫了一年的日記，最后發(fā)現(xiàn)對我?guī)椭艽蟆?I have kept writing diaries for a whole year, which turn out to be of great help. 最后這次計劃失敗了。 The plan turned out to be a failure. 結果我的努力得到了回報。 It turned out that my efforts paid off. 當談到好的學習習慣時，我建議每天堅

8、持閱讀半小時。 When it comes to good learning habits, I suggest reading for half an hour every day. 隨著高考的臨近，部分學生變得越來越緊張。 With the final exam approaching near, some students are getting more and more nervous.目的和措施目的和措施 詞匯儲備： Be faced with(面臨), be concerned about(對擔憂/憂心忡忡) ，be impressed with, take measures/s

9、teps, take action(采取行動), deal with/cope with(處理), overcome/get over (克服),prevent/stop/keep sth from doing (阻止做某事), make efforts to do(竭盡全力做某事), spare no effort to do sth不遺余力做某事, do what/all/everything sb can to do(盡某人所能去做某事), effective, practical(實用的), urgent (緊急的), carry out實施, protect sth from過渡詞過

10、渡詞 列舉：to begin/start with, then, next, last but not least(最后但同樣重要的是) firstly, secondlylastly For one thing, .for another；On the one hand, on the other hand一方面，另一方面 原因：because of, as a result of, owing to, result from 導致結果：result in/lead to/contribute to/cause, as a result, therefore, thus 因此 遞進：besi

11、des, moreover, whats more, furthermore 此外，而且 轉折：however/but, instead, on the contrary 讓步: though, in spite of, despite 總結：in conclusion, on the whole, in a word, all in all 見解：as far as I am concerned(就我而言), from my point of view, personally speaking 環(huán)境惡化 environmental degradation 空氣污染濃度 air polluti

12、on concentration 溫室效應 greenhouse effect 酸雨 acid rain 空氣污染物 air pollutants霧霾 haze 空內空氣污染 indoor air pollution 氣候問題 climatic issues保護和改善生活和生態(tài)環(huán)境protect and improve the living environment and the ecological environment保護珍貴動植物protect rare animals and plants普及環(huán)保知識popularize environmental protection knowle

13、dge增強環(huán)境意識enhance the awareness of the importance of environmental protection改善生態(tài)環(huán)境improve the ecoenvironment加強生態(tài)建設improve the ecoconstruction防治污染prevent and control pollution Be faced with(面臨), be concerned about(對擔憂/憂心忡) ， be impressed with, take measures/steps, take action(采取行動), deal with/cope wi

14、th(處理), overcome/get over (克服), prevent/stop/keep sth from doing (阻止做某事), make efforts to do(竭盡全力做某事), spare no effort to do sth不遺余力做某事, do what/all/everything sb can to do(盡某人所能去做某事), effective, practical(實用的), urgent (緊急的), carry out實施, protect sth from Attach importance to sth 重視. Make a differen

15、ce 起作用、有所作為 Play an active role in在.方面起積極的作用 Live in harmony with nature 與自然和諧相處 Lead/ live a low-carbon lifestyle 采用低碳的生活方式 Put an end to使.結束 Do harm to 對有害 End up doing sth 最終 Keep the balance of nature 保持自然界的平衡 Maintain sustainable development 保持可持續(xù)發(fā)展優(yōu)秀句型表達優(yōu)秀句型表達(以環(huán)保為例以環(huán)保為例) We should keep a bala

16、nce between nature and human being so that we can live together in harmony. Weve come to a stage when we need do take action to protect our environment. Our government has taken a series of measures, aiming at reducing the environment pollution./ Our government has taken a series of measures with th

17、e aim of reducing the environment pollution. We have taken a great many measures, which turn out to be of great use/help. It is not words but actions that matters more for environment protection. It is hard to imagine a world without clean water./It is hard to imagine what the world will be like wit

18、hout clean water. As is known to all, environment is of vital importance to us human being. Measures should be taken to protect our environment./ Something must be done to /Immediate action should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment. Only in this way can we live a b

19、etter life. Only if/when we take effective measures/steps to deal with the problem can we prevent a worse situation in the near future. Faced with this severe problem, it is high time that we should take some measures. we took some measures. It is high time for us to take some measures before it is

20、too late. We should make every effort to protect our living surroundings from becoming worse and worse. The sooner effective/preventive預防m(xù)easures are taken, the better our world will be. What we are doing now will make a big difference to our future generation.起影響/作用(積極的) There is no denying that ai

21、r pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. When it comes to environment, we1 A number of factors might contribute to（lead to ）（account for ）the phenomenon（problem）. 2. The answe

22、r to this problem involves many factors. 3. Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.4. Instead of just throwing thins away, we can use them again.5. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment6. We should take part in the activities which aim to make people aware of the need to pro

23、tect our living environment.仿寫（舉一反三，靈活運用） 班長采取了一系列的措施，旨在創(chuàng)建一個和諧的班級。 面對這樣嚴重的疾病，采取一些日常措施以保持健康十分重要。 我們應竭盡全力來克服這些困難。 人們應該盡快采取有效措施來確保此類事件再也不會發(fā)生。 我們只有采取有效的預防措施，才能阻止疾病的迅速蔓延。 班長采取了一系列的措施，旨在創(chuàng)建一個和諧的班級。Monitor took series of measures, aiming at create a harmonious class.面對這樣嚴重的疾病，采取一些日常措施以保持健康十分重要。Faced with su

24、ch severe diseases, its of vital importance to take daily measures to keep fit/ healthy.我們應竭盡全力來克服這些困難。We should do all that we can to overcome the difficulties.人們應該盡快采取有效措施來確保此類事件再也不會發(fā)生。People should take effective measures to make sure that similar things will never happen again as soon as possibl

25、e.我們只有采取有效的預防措施，才能阻止疾病的迅速蔓延。Only when we take effective measures can we prevent the disease from spreading quickly.In recent years, a large number of cities in China have been afflicted by serious air pollution. Though there may be various causes for the phenomenon, the increasing number of motor-driven vehicles is widely accepted as the major source to the deteriorated atmosphere. Therefore, its high time we took measures to tackle the problem.To purify the