英一作文課堂筆記

1、大作文首段 是復習評分 , 重點小作文,文章格式,語域,看第二段提綱要求. 背誦優(yōu)秀范文: 仿寫, 改寫終點又是新起點 Lack of confidence 1 2 000,03，有人，無人比喻，擬人,01，03,10提綱讀懂正能量 人 動作，神態(tài)，語言，非人，擬人的意義，動作，下面文字提示，Einstein , ，Shakespeare 一幅畫 ，有人，游客的的行為 As is vividly depicted in the picture, two tourists are sitting on a boat. One is reading books, while the other o

2、ne starts to litter various kinds of (different sorts of) rubbishes , such as watermelons ,bananas and fish bones etc. 人 ，動作，文字提示很多畢業(yè)生，面對，四種不同的選擇 Many graduates face , four different choices , hunt for a job, take part in entrance exams for postgraduates , create a company/ start a business兩幅畫 分別描述，

3、比較，The picture does mirror a serious social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking. As is vividly depicted in the picture, we can see clearly that there were various kinds of fishes and only one boat. On the contrary, there was only one fish and a large number of fishing- boats in 1996. It is ob

4、vious that the number of fishes sharp decreased with the increase of commercial fishing.2003 green house bloom perish找找近義詞The picture does mirror a serious social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking. As is vividly depicted in the picture, we can see clearly that the flower can bloom when it i

5、s in an ideal condition. But when the flower moves out of the green house, it perishes under the rain and storm. It is obvious that the flower in the green house cannot withstand the wind and rain. It is not uncommon to say that some parents show all their love to their children they can afford , th

6、ey do not let the children do anything at home .However, a large number of children cannot make a living when they leave their parents. They are too weak to face the setbacks and difficulties. Therefore，it is urgent for us to take some measures to solve /tackle the problem. First of all, the parents

7、 should do their best to teach their children to be independent. Then, the children should raise the awareness of making a living. Only in this way can the children have a bright future. 人，跑，終點，起點 開始新的征程2004The ending line is also the start line.The picture is simple but significant. As is vividly d

8、epicted in the picture, there is a young man, who is arriving at the finishing line. To our surprise, he starts to a new journey instead of stopping. /He does not stop and starts to a new journey. The purpose of this photo is that the ending line is also the starting line.It is of great necessity fo

9、r everyone to have the ability of keeping moving. With the development of economy and society, competition is fierce. It， It is so serious/terrible for anyone to lack of keeping moving. Hence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on keeping moving. In fact, it has been universally acknowled

10、ged that the ability of keeping moving is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess. Some companies try to make it in international market when they succeeded in home market . Take Haier Group as an example, it has become one of the best companies in Ch

11、ina, it spares no efforts to enter the international market. Some famous world champions such as Liu Xiang, he always believe in himself even he became the world champion, so Liu Xiang often kept the world record. All in all, we should bear in mind that confidence is of great significance to anyone.

12、2005 大綱 歷年考題， 四六級作文，英語二小作文，英語一全部大小作文。Goalkeeper attacker football match The picture is simple but significant. As is vividly depicted in the picture, a football match is going on. The attacker considers the goalkeeper as a giant while the goalkeeper regards himself as a short person. The purpose of

13、this photo is that they enlarge the difficulties and lack of adequate / enough confidence. 2012bottle two people The picture is simple but significant. As is vividly depicted in the picture, two youngsters have entirely different attitude as soon as they gaze at a bottle on the floor. One man says:

14、No water is left, he looks so disappointed. The other one runs to the bottle happily, he says: Fortunately, there is still some water left. The purpose of this photo is that being optimistic /positive and being pessimistic /negative are two distinct attitudes towards life. 2000The picture does mirro

15、r a serious social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking. As is vividly depicted in the picture, we can see clearly that there were various kinds of fishes and only one boat. On the contrary, there was only one fish and a large number of fishing- boats in 1996. It is obvious that the number of

16、fishes sharp decreased with the increase of commercial fishing.It is not uncommon to say that ， Commonly , 主題It is of great significance/importance for us to protect our ocean resources. 問題的原因和危害Owing to over-fishing, the number of fishes has obviously decreased. If this situation goes worse and wor

17、se , we will not see any fishes. By that time, our ocean resources will disappear. 責任In fact , it is our great duty to protect the ocean environment. Therefore, it is urgent for us to take some measures to solve /tackle the problem. First of all, the central government must make some strict laws to

18、punish/ fine the people who destroy the ocean resources. Then, the professors or experts should take up the responsibility for improving our ocean environment. What is more, we are supposed to /should raise the publics awareness of protecting ocean environment. Only in this way / Only by doing so, c

19、an we have a bright future.人生哲理,考過必須練習預測 僅作參考, 誠實守信, 反欺騙,誠信,信任 , 自私,奉獻, 目標的奮斗,避免盲目,迷茫, 勇氣. 參考其他成功學法則.正能量 愛心,善待環(huán)境,善待人和事情.文化 文化交流, 外語熱,中文熱, 外國人吃中餐,突出中國文化的優(yōu)越,國學 傳統(tǒng)文化.歷史 孔子,老子等. 科技: 手機,優(yōu)點缺點,互聯(lián)網(wǎng),短信,微信的優(yōu)點,流行文化. 圖購網(wǎng)購.環(huán)保,綠色生態(tài), 霧霾foggy 天的治理,堵車,機動車尾氣, 城市交通問題. 保護叢林,樹林,地球 . 野生動物,人口增長, 環(huán)保有助于改善公民的健康,讓國家和人民處于和諧當中.

20、兩代關(guān)系 : 啃老, 大學生就業(yè),失業(yè),待業(yè)問題, 老人養(yǎng)老的不易,參考2005年. 孝順,兩代的代溝,消除代溝,期待和諧.尊重差異 注意適當重復真題,修改,改寫命題, 真題第一,預測第二.2008 The drawing is simple but significant. As is vividly depicted in the picture, there are two disabled men, who are running fast through teamwork although each of them has only one leg. Obviously, it is

21、 teamwork that makes it possible for them to go anywhere they want to. 正面，負面，利弊兼有It is love that makes the world go around. 純正能量意義闡述主題 It is of great necessity for everyone to have the ability of teamwork/confidence/courage.With the development of economy and society, competition is fierce. It is im

22、possible for anyone to finish the work all by himself.黑團隊合作， It is so serious/terrible for anyone to lack of confidence. 紫色對自信Hence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on teamwork/confidence. In fact, it has been universally acknowledged that the ability of teamwork/confidence is the most

23、 essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.總結(jié)歸納Therefore/ Accordingly , it is vital for us to take some measures to enhance the sense of teamwork in our society. First, the government has the responsibility to educate every citizen to learn to cooperate with oth

24、er people. Then, we should remember / bear in mind that teamwork is of great significance to both our society and ourselves. Everyone should have the ability of teamwork. 包裝：Only in this way/ Only by doing so can we achieve success, Only in this way can our society become more harmonious.2005 As is

25、vividly depicted in the picture, a woman and three men, are kicking their old father back and forth like a football. Clearly, none of them takes care of the elder. The old man, that is, who is crouching on the ground and appears downcast and miserable. Obviously, it reflects a terrible phenomenon in

26、 China- some people are not willing to support their parents.It is of great necessity for everyone to assume the responsibility for the old parents. First and foremost, some people are , on the whole, making some excuses for refusing to care about their parents. They have forgotten how their parents

27、 took care of them. Furthermore, it is our great duty to do our best to treat our parents well, which is the traditional virtue of Chinese culture, in this way , we can improve the elders living standards and guarantee them a better-off life. As is vividly depicted in the picture, an American girl i

28、s smiling to us, wearing a traditional Chinese costume. Cultural exchanges play an important role in the world. With the rapid development of economy and communication, the custom of cultures are more likely to be accepted and shared by the people all over world. People are from all around, governme

29、nts and international organization should give priority to various kinds of cultures. By doing so, cultural conflicts and tensions can be relieved and shorten the gaps between different countries.Therefore, different cultures in the world should be encouraged. First of all, the government has the re

30、sponsibility to support the cultural exchanges. Then, we should raise the public s awareness of cultural exchanges . Only in this way can the world have a bright future. A positive view is of great importance/ significance to everyone. In the first place, an optimistic is confronted with difficultie

31、s and overcome them completely. In the second place, keeping optimistic endows us with confidence, courage, and hope, all of which compels us to work diligently. For the sake of optimism, our dream will come true. However, pessimist never think so, he seldom achieves himself, due to his cowardice an

32、d fear.Therefore, it is vital for us to have a positive attitude. First of all, the government has the responsibility to educate us to be positive. Then, we should raise the awareness of being optimistic. Only BLOOD typeAs is vividly depicted in the picture ,a great number of graduates are faced with four totally different choices-hunting for a job, taking part in the entrance exams for postgraduates, going abroad and starting a business.The purpose of this photo is that it is of great importance for graduates to make a w