小學(xué)五年級(jí)英語(yǔ)各單元作文(上冊(cè))(共4頁(yè))

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上1. My English Teacher    Miss Tang is my English teacher. Shes very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games

2、 in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】    這篇作文的題目是“我的英語(yǔ)老師”，是一篇介紹人物的作文。小作者開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，直接點(diǎn)題，首先介紹了英語(yǔ)老師的姓名，然后逐一介紹了她的外貌特征、喜好、英語(yǔ)水平、上課特點(diǎn)以及師生情感等。小朋友們?cè)趯?xiě)作文時(shí)，要注意使用自己最熟悉的詞組，以免寫(xiě)出一些錯(cuò)句子。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意意思連貫、語(yǔ)句通順、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確、書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰、規(guī)范等。2. My Days of the week    Im a studen

3、t and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six oclock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven oclock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I dont have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on

4、 that day.【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】     這篇作文的題目是“我的一周”，小作者沒(méi)有說(shuō)一些空話，而是從自己的親身經(jīng)歷寫(xiě)起，敘述了自己一周七天的所作所為，并特別強(qiáng)調(diào)了星期天的喜好，寫(xiě)得自然、流暢。     小朋友們寫(xiě)作文時(shí)要注意人稱及謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的變化，要依據(jù)提示，結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際，寫(xiě)自己身邊熟悉的事情。3. My Favourite Food     Do you know what this is?  Guess! Its colour is

5、 yellow. Its long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. Its round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates a

6、nd candies are yummy. I like them very much.     How about you? Whats your favourite food?【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】     My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是簡(jiǎn)單地列舉出自己最喜歡的每一種食物，而是有詳有略地進(jìn)行介紹。整篇文章用詞準(zhǔn)確、語(yǔ)言流暢、沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。另外，文章中出現(xiàn)了一些生詞，可見(jiàn)小作者是用心查字典了。4. I can help do houseworkI am a girl

7、. My name is Li Ling. Im in Class Three, Grade Five. Im   helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too? 【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】   &#

8、160; 本篇作文的題目是“我可以幫助做家務(wù)”，作者主要敘述自己在家?guī)椭龅氖虑椋榻B自己的名字，所在年級(jí)及在家能做的家務(wù)，很詳細(xì)，到位。     小朋友們?cè)趯?xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)盡量寫(xiě)一些親自經(jīng)歷的事情，這樣會(huì)避免在作文時(shí)顯得太空，因?yàn)橹挥凶约航?jīng)常做的事情印象才會(huì)特別深刻。寫(xiě)作時(shí)還要注意大小寫(xiě)和時(shí)態(tài)。5. In The Kitchen     This is the kitchen of my family. Its big and nice. Look! My mother is cookin

9、g in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, theyre strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】     這篇作文的題目是“在廚房”里，作者根據(jù)自己家的廚房情況。介紹廚房里有微波爐和電爐，有一張大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及媽媽在做飯，

10、非常真實(shí)。      小朋友們，可以從觀察自己身邊的事、物寫(xiě)起，利用所學(xué)的句子，描述身邊熟悉的東西來(lái)訓(xùn)練習(xí)作。6. My Village     My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my villa