精編高考英語書面表達(dá)模板（名師點(diǎn)評）

1、精編最新高考英語書面表達(dá)模板用詞準(zhǔn)確;表達(dá)地道【試題回放】【安徽卷】假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校 格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn) 備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你給 她寫封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下：1表示贊成。1提岀你喜歡的欄目。1簡要說明理由。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2. 新的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。3. 適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。4. 參考欄目：欄目一olumndear mr. green,i am very excited to learn that we

2、 are going to start a magazi ne together that sou nds great! and i definitely agree with you on thatsome of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. say, "culture express" gives us a better understanding of the world. since people from different parts of the

3、world have d if fere nt values, it s necessary to learn from each other. this will offer a wonderful chance. apart from that, "blurt out" is pretty good for chinese student$ to learn english idioms and improve oral english. last but not least, 'entertainment is so cool! i he popular si

4、ngers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can* t miss it! teeriagers are just fond of the trendy things.well, i can t list more. i really can* t wait to read that magazi ne!yours faithfully,li hua【名師點(diǎn)評】這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導(dǎo)致了安徽省該年的英語作文分?jǐn)?shù)普遍偏低。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章,寫的的確是好,很地道的美

5、式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人 不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語，可不 是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral english, last but not least, celebrities, catchy 和 trendy 的大膽運(yùn)用,list, can't wait to 簡直是 perfect!況且文章 中沒有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。二.非謂語動(dòng)詞為作文添彩【試題回放】【北京卷】情景作文假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)

6、綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊 區(qū)植樹，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動(dòng)的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠 色行動(dòng)專欄寫一篇以"green action in our class"為題的英文稿件。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：郊區(qū)suburbsapril 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. in the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all t

7、he way. up on arrival we began to work immediately. some were digging holes some were carrying and planting young trees. others were watering . after getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees before leaving we took some photos to record our green action seeing th

8、e lines of trees, we all had a sense of achieveme nt.we feel it' s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點(diǎn)評】本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點(diǎn)連貫, 在語言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達(dá)。三.復(fù)合句為寫作增色【試題回放】【全國卷】假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國 圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳'和她的母親'白云二

9、現(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封信:1、自我介紹;2、祝賀蘇琳生日;3、感謝工作人員;4、索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右;2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫dear sir/madam,greetings from china!l m li hua, a student in sichuan. i* ve been a panda lover since i was a child. about three years ago i was delighted to learn that baiyun gave birth to her daughter su

10、lin and r ve been watching her grow on your website,. now she* s going to be three, f d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the us.by the way, could【have a photo of suli n

11、idken on her third birthday? thank you very much in advanee.yours truly, li hua【名師點(diǎn)評】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1自我介紹2信息來源3祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結(jié)尾。這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達(dá)到位。文章行文活潑,感情真摯，語言表述準(zhǔn)確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運(yùn)用 合理，結(jié)合了簡單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。好詞:1 .delighted ad

12、j.欣喜的,快樂的2.express v.表達(dá)3give birth lo v產(chǎn)生,生育好句：i'd like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the us.我祝福它生曰快樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達(dá)我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；句式準(zhǔn)確【試題回放】【

13、江蘇卷】2007年4月29日上午10點(diǎn)到11點(diǎn)，全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育活動(dòng)在各地大中小學(xué)校同時(shí)進(jìn)行，江蘇省1 , 100萬學(xué)生積極參與了這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生:1. 每天鍛煉一小時(shí)2. 健康工作五十年3. 幸福生活一輩子請你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時(shí)鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛?。注?1. 發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 詞數(shù)：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 參考詞匯：陽光體育活動(dòng)一a national student sports program;教育 the minist

14、ry of educationgood afternoon, everyone,the nationeil student sports program, waged by the ministry of education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10 : 00a.m.-ll:00d.m.on april 29 r 2007 in many primary and middle schools all over china. almost 11 million students in jiangsu prov

15、ince participated in this program.the ministry of education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for so years our whole life will be very enjoyablein my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is li

16、mited. health is a basic condition for our study. if we did not do exercises, we wouldrv t be able to get good study records. so every one of you, join the program now!區(qū)|thank you!【名師點(diǎn)評】本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一 段發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣,使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬 語氣，十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點(diǎn)之一。好詞：1 .wage v.發(fā)動(dòng) 2.aim v.瞄準(zhǔn) 3. advocate v.提倡好句 ：1. the ministry of ed