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1、Unit1 寫作專項講練寫作專項講練 如何寫好英語旅游日記如何寫好英語旅游日記寫作要求寫作要求 本單元的話題是談?wù)搶W(xué)生自己過去的經(jīng)歷，圍繞本單元的話題是談?wù)搶W(xué)生自己過去的經(jīng)歷，圍繞“去某地去某地旅游旅游 展開，學(xué)生要能正確表達出在旅游過程中的所見所展開，學(xué)生要能正確表達出在旅游過程中的所見所聞所感。這一話題是以日記的形式呈現(xiàn)，所以要符合日記聞所感。這一話題是以日記的形式呈現(xiàn)，所以要符合日記的寫作要求。通常在正文上方，自左起寫上日期，星期幾的寫作要求。通常在正文上方，自左起寫上日期，星期幾和天氣情況，正文要用第一人稱和一般過去式來寫，同時，和天氣情況，正文要用第一人稱和一般過去式來寫，同時，適當(dāng)

2、寫些自己的感受。適當(dāng)寫些自己的感受。 1.1.語法：一般過去式語法：一般過去式 2.2.重點：重點：bebe動詞和實義動詞動詞和實義動詞日記的寫法日記的寫法日記的格式日記的格式 英語的旅游日記的格式和英語其他日記英語的旅游日記的格式和英語其他日記的格式大致相同。通常由書端和正文兩個部分組成。日記的格式大致相同。通常由書端和正文兩個部分組成。日記常以第一人稱記下當(dāng)天旅游中的所見、所聞、所做或所想常以第一人稱記下當(dāng)天旅游中的所見、所聞、所做或所想的事情。英語日記的書端是專門寫日記的日期、星期和天的事情。英語日記的書端是專門寫日記的日期、星期和天氣的。旅游日記還要寫明地點。左上角是日期氣的。旅游日記

3、還要寫明地點。左上角是日期( (年、月、年、月、日日) )、星期，地點。右上角寫上當(dāng)天的天氣情況、星期，地點。右上角寫上當(dāng)天的天氣情況日期的寫法日期的寫法 日期表達有多種形式。年、月、日都寫時，通常以月、日期表達有多種形式。年、月、日都寫時，通常以月、日、年為順序，月份可以縮寫，日和年用逗號隔開。日、年為順序，月份可以縮寫，日和年用逗號隔開。 例如：例如： December 16 2005或者或者 Dec. 16 2005 A) September 1, 2008或或September 1st, 2008可省略寫成可省略寫成Sept. 1, 2008或或Sept. 1st, 2008或或 th

4、e 1st of September in 2008(月份不可以縮寫月份不可以縮寫) B)只有月、日只有月、日 September 1或或September 1st(月份可以月份可以縮寫縮寫)（ 1或或1st都應(yīng)讀作都應(yīng)讀作the first）。）。 C)只有年、月只有年、月 September 2008或或the September of 2008(月份不可以縮寫月份不可以縮寫) 2. 星期也可以省略不寫，可將其放在日期前或后，星星期也可以省略不寫，可將其放在日期前或后，星期和日期之間不用標(biāo)點，但要空一格，星期也可縮期和日期之間不用標(biāo)點，但要空一格，星期也可縮寫。如：寫。如： Saturda

5、y, November 2nd, 2004；November 22nd, 2004 Saturday 天氣常用詞語天氣常用詞語 天氣情況必不可少。天氣一般用一個形容詞天氣情況必不可少。天氣一般用一個形容詞如如 :Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Snowy 等表示。位于日記的右上角。下等表示。位于日記的右上角。下面是一些常用的描寫天氣的英語詞語：面是一些常用的描寫天氣的英語詞語： 晴晴 clear/sunny/fine多多云云 cloudy 小雨小雨 light rain傾盆大雨傾盆大雨downpour 大雨大雨 heavy rain 毛毛毛雨毛雨 drizzle 陣雨陣雨 shower

6、有風(fēng)有風(fēng)windy 東風(fēng)東風(fēng) east wind 南南風(fēng)風(fēng) south wind 西風(fēng)西風(fēng) west wind 北風(fēng)北風(fēng) north wind 西南西南風(fēng)風(fēng) southwester 東南風(fēng)東南風(fēng) southeaster 東北風(fēng)東北風(fēng) northeaster 西北西北風(fēng)風(fēng) northwester暴風(fēng)雨暴風(fēng)雨stormy 炎熱炎熱 scorching heat 嚴寒嚴寒 icy cold 下雪下雪 snowy 思路點撥思路點撥1 1：開篇點題。指出旅行的地點，人物和時間。：開篇點題。指出旅行的地點，人物和時間。2 2：詳細描述。詳細講述所參觀的景點，以及在景點所進行：詳細描述。詳細講述所參觀的景點

7、，以及在景點所進行的活動。的活動。3 3：表達感受。對旅行做出評價，談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。：表達感受。對旅行做出評價，談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋＜炎髻p析佳作賞析 Tuesday,July 8st It was a fine day.I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents.One the first day,we went to Tiananmen Square and watched the flag-raising ceremony.It was really solemn.Then we visited the Great Wall.Like its n

8、ame,it was very great.The next day we visited the Palace Museum,the Summer Palace and Tiantan Park.We took lots of photos.We ate Beijing duck.It was very delicious.I also bought some souvenirs for my friends. Although i felt very tired ,I was happy.I hope to visit Beijing again.l 我喜歡北京我喜歡北京 This sum

9、mer vacation, I went to Beijing. It was a very great city! We went to the Great Wall first.Like its name,it was very great.We can see many mountians around. Then we went to visit Tianan Men Square.It was also fantastic. We lived in a small house in a Beijing Hutung, it was a traditional Beijing buil

10、ding called four-section compound. I enjoyed myself a lot. I love Beijing!My vacation Last summer holiday,l went to Beijing.It was quite hot.There are many good places,such us the Great Wall,the summer palace and the Forbidden City.I saw many foreigners taking photos on the Great Wall .Many kids cli

11、mbed the Great Wall without the help of their parents.I think their parents were proud of them.At last,l succeed in climbing at the top of the Great Wall.So I was excited.In addition to,there were many delicious snacks in Beijing.l think Beijing is worth a visit.What a great vacation I am going to s

12、pend half time of my vacation on sports this year. Playing basketball is always my favourite, so some of my classmates and I will form a small team and play basketball together. Sometimes we will have a match against some other teams. I will enjoy the sense when we win the game. Of course, I will sp

13、end lots of time on doing my homework. Its important for me to finish my lessons. If I still have enough time, I am going to visit Beijing City, and visiting Beijing is my dream from childhood to now. Oh, what a great vacation!My vacationWednesday,August 2nd It was a fine day! I went to several places of interest such as the Great Wall and Tiananmen square.I was amazed by Chinas historical background and the industrious Chinese people who built the Great Wall. People are very friendly here. I was greeted by amiable people who we