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1、會計學(xué)1看圖寫作看圖寫作(xizu)第一頁，共38頁。Step 1: Step 1: 讀要求讀要求(yoqi)(yoqi)，審，審圖片圖片Step 2: Step 2: 列短語列短語(duny)(duny)，組，組句子句子Step 3: Step 3: 加連加連/ /副詞副詞(fc)(fc)，構(gòu)段，構(gòu)段落落第1頁/共38頁第二頁，共38頁。3）參考詞匯）參考詞匯(chu)： blind adj. 盲的，瞎的盲的，瞎的 stick n. 拐杖拐杖1）100 詞詞 2）完整）完整(wnzhng)敘敘述故事內(nèi)容述故事內(nèi)容 讀要求讀要求(yoqi)，抓關(guān)鍵抓關(guān)鍵Step 1. 讀要求，審圖片讀要求，審

2、圖片第2頁/共38頁第三頁，共38頁。 when, where, who, why, whathow審圖片審圖片(tpin)，六要素六要素5W: 1H: 何何 時時 何何 地地 何何 人人 為何為何(wih) (wih) 如如 何何 做做 了了 何何 事事Think1) Topic :2) Tense (generally):3) Person:第3頁/共38頁第四頁，共38頁。Step 2. 列短語列短語(duny)，組句子，組句子第4頁/共38頁第五頁，共38頁。visited a beautiful place wanted to take a photoran awaysawcross

3、ing a streetheld the stickhelpedcross the streetshowed thanks to took a photo 列短語列短語(duny)第5頁/共38頁第六頁，共38頁。 組句子組句子(j zi)Tom and his family His father of them.visited a beautiful place.wanted to take a photo第6頁/共38頁第七頁，共38頁。Last Sunday was a sunny day. Tom and his family visited a beautiful place. _

4、his father wanted to take a photo of them. ThenStep 3. 加連加連/副詞副詞(fc)，構(gòu)段落，構(gòu)段落第7頁/共38頁第八頁，共38頁。_, Tom ran away. _ he saw a blind man crossing a street.SuddenlyBecause第8頁/共38頁第九頁，共38頁。Tom held the blind mans stick _ helped him to cross the street.and第9頁/共38頁第十頁，共38頁。_, the blind mans daughter came to m

5、eet him. She showed her thanks to Tom. _, Toms father took a photo of them.After thatAt this time第10頁/共38頁第十一頁，共38頁。上下文要連貫，過渡要自然。上下文要連貫，過渡要自然。1.表并列的：表并列的：and, as well as, or 2.表轉(zhuǎn)折的：表轉(zhuǎn)折的：but, yet, however, although, even if 3.表時間的：表時間的：later, then, when, while, before, after a while, after that, as s

6、oon as 4.表因果的：表因果的：because, so, therefore ,as a result 5.表目的的：表目的的：in order to, in order that, so that 6.表舉例表舉例(j l)的：的： like, such as, for example/instance, 7.表總結(jié)的：表總結(jié)的：in general, generally speaking, in a word, in my opinion連詞連詞(linc)參考參考第11頁/共38頁第十二頁，共38頁。 EndingBeginning第12頁/共38頁第十三頁，共38頁。Tom is

7、 a kind boy andhe likes helping others. Tom is a kind boy wholikes helping others. 介紹介紹(jisho)(jisho)主人主人公公BeginningBeginning Tip : 介紹人物出場時用一般現(xiàn)在介紹人物出場時用一般現(xiàn)在(xinzi)時，時，盡量使用定語從句。盡量使用定語從句。第13頁/共38頁第十四頁，共38頁。EndingEnding談感想談感想(gnxing)(gnxing)Write about your Write about your feelings.feelings. Tip : 發(fā)表議

8、論用一般發(fā)表議論用一般(ybn)現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在時， 可使用感嘆句可使用感嘆句,建議句。建議句。What a kind boy he is!How good the boy is!Lets learn from him from now on. If we can do these, our world will be more and more beautiful. The more we do, the better our life will be.Why not do it right now？ 第14頁/共38頁第十五頁，共38頁。Step 1: Step 1: 讀要求讀要求(yoqi)

9、(yoqi)，審，審圖片圖片Step 2: Step 2: 列短語列短語(duny)(duny)，組，組句子句子Step 3: Step 3: 加連加連/ /副詞副詞(fc)(fc)，構(gòu)，構(gòu)段落段落Follow three steps. （寫作三步驟）（寫作三步驟）Structure分三段分三段第15頁/共38頁第十六頁，共38頁。1.1.如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，曲線救國表達，可采用變通的辦法，曲線救國，化難為易，化繁為簡?？傊?，化難為易，化繁為簡?？傊炀渥右_、得體、符合英語表達習(xí)句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習(xí)慣慣(

10、xgun)(xgun)。2.2.分步描述常用過渡分步描述常用過渡第16頁/共38頁第十七頁，共38頁。A：一：一 二二 三原則三原則(yunz)（1）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（2）to begin with, then, besides, finally（3）on the one hand, on the other handB：精彩：精彩(jn ci)短語優(yōu)先原則短語優(yōu)先原則 (1) I like classical music and he likes classical music too. Both he and I enjoy class

11、ical music. (2) They say you are quite good. They speak highly of you. 第17頁/共38頁第十八頁，共38頁。What is good writing? Clear idea Correct grammar Complete passage Beautiful language Beautiful handwriting 第18頁/共38頁第十九頁，共38頁。第19頁/共38頁第二十頁，共38頁。第20頁/共38頁第二十一頁，共38頁。第21頁/共38頁第二十二頁，共38頁。I picked up the case.I sh

12、outed at the man loudly.After picking up the case, I shouted to the man loudly.把兩個或多個句子把兩個或多個句子(j zi)合并為合并為簡單句簡單句1、把其中一句改為介詞、把其中一句改為介詞(jic)短語短語第22頁/共38頁第二十三頁，共38頁。I gave the case back to the man.The man took out some money to thank me. Getting the case back from me, the man took out some money to th

13、ank me.2、把其中、把其中(qzhng)一句改為分詞短語一句改為分詞短語第23頁/共38頁第二十四頁，共38頁。I went to see a film this afternoon.One the way to the cinema, I saw a case fall off a mans bike.I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike.把兩個或多個把兩個或多個(du )句子合并成復(fù)合句句子合并成復(fù)合句第24頁/共38頁第二十五頁，

14、共38頁。I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could in order to catch up with the man.適當(dāng)選擇固定適當(dāng)選擇固定(gdng)句型句型I wanted to catch up with him ,so I stopped a taxi quickly.第25頁/共38頁第二十六頁，共38頁。第26頁/共38頁第二十七頁，共38頁。May 3rd,Friday Fine This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw The man thanked me very m

15、uch and wanted to give me some money. But I refused .It was such an interesting movie that I couldnt wait to enjoy it.Although I missed the movie, I was very happy to help others.第27頁/共38頁第二十八頁，共38頁。成文成文(chngwn)之后之后 一般語法項目(xingm)的檢查 人稱(rnchng): Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their o

16、ffice.時態(tài): One day, they are going to the island.主謂一致: Everyone in our class work hard. 習(xí)慣用法: He helps me in my English. Revise(修訂修訂)第28頁/共38頁第二十九頁，共38頁。 注意語序 (感嘆句，疑問句，賓語(bny)從句)Jim works very hard. So does Jack.(前后主語前后主語(zhy)非一人非一人)A: Jim works very hard. B: So he does.(前后主語前后主語(zhy)為一人為一人)He didnt

17、know where the bookshop was.The boys want to know how they should do it. 第29頁/共38頁第三十頁，共38頁。 符合(fh)習(xí)慣 My work is very busy.I very much like it.Im very busy with my work.I like it very much.第30頁/共38頁第三十一頁，共38頁。 書寫規(guī)范書寫規(guī)范(gufn), 卷面整潔。卷面整潔。第31頁/共38頁第三十二頁，共38頁。中考英語作文評分標準第一檔： 9-10分 內(nèi)容完整(wnzhng)，語句流暢，無語法錯誤

18、，書寫規(guī)范第二檔： 6-8分 內(nèi)容較完整(wnzhng)，語句較流暢，基本無語法錯誤，書寫較規(guī)范第三檔： 3-5分 內(nèi)容不完整(wnzhng)，語句欠流暢，語法錯誤較多，書寫較規(guī)范第四檔： 0-2分 只寫出個別要點，語法錯誤較多，書寫欠規(guī)范，只有個別句子可讀或不知所云。第32頁/共38頁第三十三頁，共38頁。近十年濟南市中考(zhn ko)作文好人好事好人好事愛護愛護(ih)環(huán)境環(huán)境04年幫助老人05年亂吐口香糖06年能否養(yǎng)寵物07年抓盜竊分子08年為災(zāi)區(qū)捐款09年幫助朋友(小鳥)10年動腦解決問題11年送受傷(shu shng)的人去醫(yī)院12年愛護動物13年幫助盲人過馬路第33頁/共38頁第

19、三十四頁，共38頁。好人好事類第34頁/共38頁第三十五頁，共38頁。環(huán)境保護(hunjng boh)類第35頁/共38頁第三十六頁，共38頁。 play with a dog, go out for a walkallow sb to do, keep pets, cant stop cryingcome up with an idea, buy a toy dog for his daughter play with the toy dog, feel happyLily and her parents went out for a walk. She saw a boy playing with a dogThey werent allowed to keep pets in the building. Lily couldnt stop crying.Her father came up with an idea. He bought a toy dog for his daughterLily played with the dog. All of them felt happ