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1、自由作文【習(xí)作要求】write eight or more sentences about the season you like best. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 1四個(gè)季節(jié)中任選一個(gè)季節(jié)。 2被選季節(jié)的特點(diǎn)(氣候、時(shí)間、事物、活動(dòng)等)。 3人們在此季節(jié)所從事的活動(dòng)。 4作者自己喜愛的活動(dòng)和感受?!緟⒖挤段摹?i like winter best. though it is very cold, it is good for skating. i often go skating on sundays with my father. when it snows, everything turns whi

2、te. trees and houses are covered with thick snow. how beautiful the world looks! my friends and i like to make snowmen. sometimes we make snowballs and throw them at each other. thats a very interesting game. i like winter holiday very much because the spring festival is the happiest time of the yea

3、r. 【名師點(diǎn)評】 這是一篇描寫季節(jié)的文章,文章難度一般。要求從自己的角度描寫季節(jié)和感受季節(jié)。應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)問題: (1)確定全文的時(shí)態(tài)。此文一般選用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 (2)除了對季節(jié)的描述,一定要有自己的見解,這是得分的重要內(nèi)容和關(guān)鍵所在。 作者用流暢的語言描述了冬天的景色。全文意思表達(dá)清楚,結(jié)構(gòu)緊密。優(yōu)秀作文評析(五)自由作文2【習(xí)作要求】write about what you are going to do after you leave school. 【參考范文】 when i finish school, i want to be a teacher. though teachers

4、 are poorly paid and they have no power, teachers are kind, respectable and learned, like angels. they lead the pathway to succeed. its quite sure that teachers are very important in modern world. we cant develop our country without knowledge. teachers teach us knowledge. i like all of my teachers i

5、n my school. i would like to be an english teacher. its very important for the students to learn english well today. ill try my best to be an ideal teacher. my students can make our country better in the future. 【名師點(diǎn)評】 這是一篇闡述觀點(diǎn)的議論文,作者用簡潔而流暢的語言表達(dá)了長大后想成為一名老師的愿望。論據(jù)充分,觀點(diǎn)明確,并且字里行間滲透了對祖國的無比熱愛之情和把祖國建設(shè)更加美好的

6、決心。優(yōu)秀作文評析(五)自由作文3【習(xí)作要求】請以my.為題寫一篇短文。要求:有時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物,字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80個(gè)單詞。 【學(xué)生習(xí)作】 my mothers birthdaymy mother is busy. she always busy works. (1) she often forgets her birthday. last sunday was my mothers birthday. i invited several friends to have a birthday party for her. it was five oclock. everything was rea

7、dy. the candles were on the cake. when my mother came back to home (2), she was very surprise (3). she asked, “whose birthday is it today?” we said, “happy birthday to you!” she was very happy. at that time lily gave my mother a nice present and said, “i hope you will like it” “ thank you. can i ope

8、n it now?” my mother asked. “certainly.” lily said. “oh, its a toy panda. how (4) a beautiful panda!” my mother said. meimei asked us, “would you like singing?”(5) “yes, we would love.”(6) we said. we all sang with my mother. that night my mother sang and danced like a little girl. she looked more (

9、7) younger than before. (1)把a(bǔ)lways busy works改為 is always busy working,因?yàn)閎usy是形容詞作表語,“忙于做某事”應(yīng)該用be busy doing形式來表示。 (2)要把to去掉。 home在此句中是副詞,不需要加to。 (3)本句surprise在系動(dòng)詞之后,要把surprise改成 surprised。 surprise具有名詞、動(dòng)詞詞性,其形容詞有兩個(gè),他們分別是 surprised 和surprising,其中前者多用來指人,后者多用來指事。 (4)把how改成 what。在感嘆句中how是用來修飾形容詞或副詞的,而what是用來修飾名詞的。名詞前可以有其他定語,單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞前記住要加上 a或 an。 (5)把singing改成to sing some songs, would you like后接動(dòng)詞時(shí)要加to。 (6)在love后面加上to。對 “would you like ?”問句的肯定回答應(yīng)為would like (love) 后加 to,因?yàn)檫@是口語中動(dòng)詞不定式的省略,也就是說to后面的動(dòng)詞短語省略了。 (7)把more改成much,因?yàn)閙ore不能用來修飾比較級。能夠用來修飾比較級的有:a little, a bit, much, ra

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