第1部分專題6技法4巧妙的過(guò)渡連貫的銜接

1、技法4|巧妙的過(guò)渡，連貫的銜接技法綜述連接(過(guò)渡)性詞語(yǔ)的使用是語(yǔ)言連貫性得以實(shí)現(xiàn)的最常用手段。在句與句之間，段與段之間恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┏猩蠁⑾碌倪B接(過(guò)渡)性詞語(yǔ)是非常必要的。中學(xué)階段應(yīng)該掌握的連接(過(guò)渡)性詞語(yǔ)可以歸納如下：1. 表示起始關(guān)系的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)above all ，first of all ，to beg in with ，accordi ng to ，as you kno w/as isknown，as is shown in ，when it comes to 等。First of all ， I think it important to make more friends

2、abroad.As is shown in the picture, a tree is knocked down by the strong wind, while the grass stays as it is.2. 表示時(shí)間順序的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)first(ly) ，sec on d(ly) ，third(ly) ，the n ， later，in the end ，fin ally ，at last，after that ，afterwards ，since then ，meanwhile 等。Secondly, we should get up early to memorize idi

3、oms and useful expressi ons.Mea nwhile,we all enjo yed the beauty of n ature.I had a bad cold last week. First， I had a running nose, but I did nottake it seriously. Then I began to cough. After that,I had a fever and feltweak. Fin ally, I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days.3.

4、 表示并列關(guān)系的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)and， or，also，as well as ，n either . n or.not only but also .either . or .not . but . 等。Work hard , and you will be admitted to a key university.Swim ming not only ben efits our health , but also helps us have a strong will.4 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)but , yet, however , while , otherwise , on the co

5、ntrary等。However , not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser.On the contrary, smart phones not only take up our valuable time,but also do great harm to our health.5. 表示因果關(guān)系的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)because ,as,since ,for, thanks to , due to , as a result of , so , t herefore , as a result/c on

6、 seque nee等。Tha nks to the doctor's timely treatme nt, he was saved.Therefore, I suggest we should be give n more time for sports and sleep.6. 表示條件關(guān)系的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)if, uni ess , in case (of) , as/so long as , on con diti on that等。I would be very gratefulif you can meet him at the airport.As long as you d

7、on't lose heart , you're sure to succeed.7. 表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)besides , in addition , what's more , furthermore , moreover , what's worse , still less , to make matters worse , worse still , on (the) one hand . on the other (ha nd) .for one thing . for ano ther . 等。In additi on,we should n

8、't n eglect that every one wants a frie ndly andpeaceful society.On the other hand,on li ne shopp ing also has many disadva ntages.8. 表示列舉事實(shí)的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)such as , for example/instanee, take.for example , that is to say ,as follows , in other words 等。Take Beijing for example, it is one of the oldest cit

9、ies in the world.That is to say , if you want to succeed, you have to believe in yourself.9. 表示觀點(diǎn)的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)in my opinion , in my view , in my point of view , as far as I am concerned , as for me , personally(speaking), I think. 等。In my opinion , people shall not smoke in public places.10. 表示總結(jié)的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)in s

10、hort ，in brief ，in conclusion ， in a/one word ，to sum up ，all in all ， on the whole ，in gen eral ，gen erally speak ing等。In a word ， success is important,and so is failure, because it's themother of success.All in all , travelling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and getready for the new

11、challe nges.”的閱卷現(xiàn)場(chǎng)（2016 四川高）某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)正舉辦“The Season I Like Best征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1. 你最喜歡的季節(jié)；2. 你喜歡該季節(jié)的兩條理由（如：氣候、景色、活動(dòng)、感受）。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2. 題目已為你寫(xiě)好；3. 行文連貫，語(yǔ)篇完整；4. 文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息。The Seas on I Like Best考生作文The Seas on I Like BestThere are four seas ons in a year. They are spri ng, summer, autu mn and

12、 win ter. What seas on do you like best? Perhaps you like spri ng best, but I like summer best. The reas ons are as follows. There ispienty of fun activities for teenagers in summer, including goingcamping, going swimming or travelling with friends. Summervacation is the Iongest of the year. Every s

13、ummer I stay at my uncle's house in the country for three weeks and enjoy a wonderful life there.I can also catch worms that are not found in win ter. I can see differe nt kinds of beautiful birds. I thi nk summer is certa inly more fun tha n the other three seas on s. I like summer best.點(diǎn)評(píng)與優(yōu)化名師

14、點(diǎn)評(píng)1. 本文的詞數(shù)符合要求，也沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)明顯的錯(cuò)誤。但是給人感覺(jué)好像是初中 水平；而且沒(méi)有分段，缺少銜接詞，因此層次欠清晰，屬于檔次較低的作文。2. 可以采用英語(yǔ)作文最常用的“三段式”作文，加入適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡銜接詞匯或句式，使其段落分明，層次清晰。3. 另外，我們可以用一些高級(jí)詞匯或高級(jí)句式對(duì)句子進(jìn)行提升。嘗試優(yōu)化作文提升The Seas on I Like BestWhen it comes to the seas on I like best, summer will always occur tome in no time . The reasons are as follows.First

15、ly, there is plenty of fun for teenagers in summer,such as goingcamp ing, going swim ming or travelli ng with frie nds.Secon dly,summer vacati on is the Ion gest of the year.As far as rm concern ed,every summer I stay at my uncle's house in the country for threeweeks, where I always enjoy a wond

16、erful life. I can also catch wormsthat are not found in win ter. In additi on, I can see differe nt kinds of beautiful birds.In a word,I think summer is certainly more fun than the other threeseas ons. Summer is really myfavorite .隨堂訓(xùn)練I.請(qǐng)用過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)完成句子1 . First of all/T o beg in with（首先）,the most sig ni

17、fica nt thing is to set agoal, work out a pla n and carry out your pla n step by step.2 . As far as I am concerned（就我而言），1 love wealth, but I value healthmore.3 .As is known to all（ 眾所周知）,shoes play an important role in our life, forthey can protect our feet from being hurt.4 . I lost my way in the

18、forest and to make matters worse/worse still（ 更糟的是）,it became dark.5 . Besides/In addition/What'smore/Moreover（ 況且）,I can experieneediffere nt cultures and wide n my kno wledge.6 . In a word/ln conclusion/ln short/ln brief（ 總之）,changes in our life inthe past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenien ce.n .書(shū)面表達(dá)（感謝信）（2017 鄭州市第二次質(zhì)量預(yù)測(cè)假定你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，上周日不慎 把書(shū)包遺失在操場(chǎng)上，里面有學(xué)生證、手機(jī)、錢(qián)包等物品，你校外教Mr.Smith撿到后上交給學(xué)校。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)封感謝信。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mr.Smith ，Yours，Li Hua【參考范文】Dear Mr.Smith ，rm Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle Sch