新高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)continuation writing（課堂PPT）

1、讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)的具體內(nèi)容讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)的具體內(nèi)容提供一段提供一段350350詞以內(nèi)的語(yǔ)言材料，要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、所詞以內(nèi)的語(yǔ)言材料，要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和所標(biāo)示關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)（給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和所標(biāo)示關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)（150150詞左右），將其發(fā)詞左右），將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。第五檔：第五檔： 21-25第四檔：第四檔： 16-20第三檔：第三檔： 11-15第二檔：第二檔： 6-10第一檔：第一檔： 1-5與所給短文融洽度較高，與所提供各段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)銜接較為合理。與所給短文融洽度較高，與所提供各段落開(kāi)

2、頭語(yǔ)銜接較為合理。內(nèi)容比較豐富，應(yīng)用了內(nèi)容比較豐富，應(yīng)用了5 5個(gè)以上短文所標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。個(gè)以上短文所標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。所使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯較為豐富、準(zhǔn)確，可能有些許錯(cuò)誤，所使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯較為豐富、準(zhǔn)確，可能有些許錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意義表達(dá)。但不影響意義表達(dá)。比較有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。比較有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。第四檔：第四檔： 16-20第五檔：第五檔： 21-25與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)銜接合理。與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)銜接合理。內(nèi)容豐富，應(yīng)用了內(nèi)容豐富，應(yīng)用了5 5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。個(gè)

3、以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。所使用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富，準(zhǔn)確，可能有些許錯(cuò)誤，但完所使用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富，準(zhǔn)確，可能有些許錯(cuò)誤，但完全不影響意義表達(dá)。全不影響意義表達(dá)。有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。記敘文閱讀理解能力記敘文閱讀理解能力記敘文書(shū)面表達(dá)能力記敘文書(shū)面表達(dá)能力讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)過(guò)程中存在的問(wèn)題：讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)過(guò)程中存在的問(wèn)題：續(xù)寫(xiě)內(nèi)容與所給短文在敘述意圖上不一致續(xù)寫(xiě)內(nèi)容與所給短文在敘述意圖上不一致續(xù)寫(xiě)內(nèi)容與所給短文在相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)上相矛盾續(xù)寫(xiě)內(nèi)容與所給短文在相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)上相矛盾續(xù)寫(xiě)內(nèi)容與所給短文在語(yǔ)篇結(jié)構(gòu)上不連貫續(xù)寫(xiě)內(nèi)容與所給短文在語(yǔ)篇結(jié)

4、構(gòu)上不連貫讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)的能力要求讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)的能力要求一、記敘文閱讀理解能力一、記敘文閱讀理解能力二、由讀到寫(xiě)的思維能力二、由讀到寫(xiě)的思維能力三、記敘文書(shū)面表達(dá)能力三、記敘文書(shū)面表達(dá)能力一、記敘文閱讀理解能力一、記敘文閱讀理解能力淺層的信息定位能力：淺層的信息定位能力：深層的文本分析能力：深層的文本分析能力： what, when, where, who, why, how等等厘清故事的發(fā)展線索厘清故事的發(fā)展線索明確文本的主要矛盾明確文本的主要矛盾關(guān)注故事的語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格關(guān)注故事的語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

5、 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a bette

6、r spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized t

7、hat she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the d

8、ark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she al

9、so saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Un

10、fortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _ It wa

11、s daybreak when Jane woke up. _2016年年10月高考讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)月高考讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)Read for informationwho:what:where:Jane, TomJane was lost. in the forest One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and

12、they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to

13、see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more co

14、nfused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She co

15、uld hear water trickling (滴落滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope

16、 it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking th

17、at she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _Read for the organizationIn what order is the material developed?One weekend in July, As night was beginning to fall, Jane rose at the break of

18、the day, But and it was getting dark again.It was daybreak when Jane woke up. time sequenceRead for the plotbehaviorsfeelingspara. 1quarrel, walked awayangrypara. 2 was lostfrightened, regretful, confused, para. 3 criedpara. 4kept moving, had to stop, wanted para. 5saw, drank, ate, felt strongerjoyf

19、ul, hopefulpara. 6 heard, took off, thinkinghopeful, anxiousBeginningClimaxEnding quarrelledgot lostcriedwantedsaw, drank, ateheard, took off, thinking that .angryfrightenedregretful(helicopters)joyfulhopefulno more helicopterswoke uprescued?feelings?Read for the language閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故

20、事。閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said t

21、o Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mount

22、ain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for

23、 the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a

24、stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard

25、a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopte

26、rs came and it was dark. _ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _With no path to follow, Jane, she turned around, hoping to Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that Jane rose, hungry and thirsty.If only she had not left her mobile phone Never in her life had she tasted anything better.二、由讀到寫(xiě)的思維能

27、力二、由讀到寫(xiě)的思維能力細(xì)讀兩段續(xù)寫(xiě)的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)，理順續(xù)寫(xiě)段落的邏輯關(guān)系；細(xì)讀兩段續(xù)寫(xiě)的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)，理順續(xù)寫(xiě)段落的邏輯關(guān)系；圍繞劃定的圍繞劃定的1010個(gè)個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞，合理創(chuàng)新故事情節(jié)。關(guān)鍵詞，合理創(chuàng)新故事情節(jié)。Para. 1: But no more helicopters came and it was dark. How did Jane feel then? How did Jane struggle through the night? Did she fall asleep?Para. 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Was Jane rescued

28、? Who rescued Jane? How was she rescued? How did she feel then?The underlined words where020304 yellow blousewalkedTomhelicopterJanelakestreamclimbedat a distanceto her great joyClassify 10 key words into different groups._: Jane, Tom_: walked, climbed_: helicopter, yellow blouse_: lake, stream, at

29、a distance_: to her great joycharactersbehaviorstoolsplacesfeelings三、記敘文書(shū)面表達(dá)能力三、記敘文書(shū)面表達(dá)能力( (一一) ) 語(yǔ)言的豐富性語(yǔ)言的豐富性 ( (二二) ) 語(yǔ)篇的連貫性語(yǔ)篇的連貫性 ( (一一) ) 語(yǔ)言的豐富性語(yǔ)言的豐富性1. 1. 詞匯、句式、語(yǔ)法的多樣性詞匯、句式、語(yǔ)法的多樣性2. 2. 情感表達(dá)的多樣性情感表達(dá)的多樣性3. 3. 動(dòng)詞使用的豐富性動(dòng)詞使用的豐富性1. 1. 詞匯、句式、語(yǔ)法的多樣性詞匯、句式、語(yǔ)法的多樣性簡(jiǎn)單句，復(fù)合句以及強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句等特殊句式的使用情況。簡(jiǎn)單句，復(fù)合句以及強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝

30、句等特殊句式的使用情況。主被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)、主被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)、with的復(fù)合結(jié)的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)、虛擬語(yǔ)氣的使用情況。構(gòu)、虛擬語(yǔ)氣的使用情況。常見(jiàn)初級(jí)詞匯、高級(jí)詞匯，以及不同詞性的使用情況。常見(jiàn)初級(jí)詞匯、高級(jí)詞匯，以及不同詞性的使用情況。比喻、擬人、夸張等修辭格的使用情況。比喻、擬人、夸張等修辭格的使用情況。句式結(jié)構(gòu)：句式結(jié)構(gòu)：語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)：語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)：詞匯選擇：詞匯選擇：修辭手法：修辭手法：2. 2. 情感表達(dá)的多樣性情感表達(dá)的多樣性 Janes feelingswalked away, turned around, criedIs that for me?“Tom!

31、”“Help!”Night was beginning to fall.It was daybreak.confused,hungry and thirsty.walked away, turned around, criedwalked away, turned around, criedactionswordssurroundingsthoughtslooks “Another race, another race!” said the little boy. The wise old man stepped forward and presented the little boy wit

32、h two new challengers, an elderly weak lady and a blind man. “What is this?” said the little boy. “This is no race.” He said. “Race!” said the wise man. The race was started and the boy was the only finisher, the other two challengers left standing at the starting line. The little boy was excited. H

33、e raised his arms in delight. The crowd, however, was silent showing no sentiment toward the little boy. “What has happened? Why dont the people join in my success?” he asked the wise old man. “Race again.” said the man, “This time, finish together, all three of you, finish together,” said the wise

34、man.urgedaskdcomplainedrepliedcontinued3. 3. 動(dòng)詞使用的豐富性動(dòng)詞使用的豐富性Use more specific words to replace “say”.shout, scream, yell, roar, cry, whisper, interrupt, add, continue, tell, remark, predict, repeat,guess, implyrefuse, agree, admit, complain, smile, urge, apologize, sigh, beg, explain，promise, comfo

35、rt, compromise，warnask, wonder, doubt, answer, reply方式方式態(tài)度態(tài)度問(wèn)答問(wèn)答 God felt sad and sighed to the butterfly, “Do you regret for what you have done?” “No!” the butterfly said firmly, without hesitation. “He was your lover, but now he stays with another woman. Without you, he couldnt have recovered.” Go

36、d said with pity. “I love him.” the butterfly said in a low voice, “although I cant be the one he loves, I want him to be happy. Never will I regret what I have done.” God smiled, “True love is the most invaluable thing in the world.” The butterfly then left the town with the best wishes for the man

37、.firmly/excitedly/seriously/jokingly/sincerelyin great surprise/a low voice/a soft voicewith delight/excitement/embarrassment/pride/respect/alarm/satisfaction/caution/ patience/certaintyMake your “say” more specific. “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you,” the little girl said sincerely. “Well, then,

38、give me your pearls.” “Oh! Daddy, not my pearls!” Jenny refused, shaking her head violently. “But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. And you can have her tea party outfit too. Okay?” “Oh no darling, thats Okay.” Her father brushed her che

39、ek with a kiss. “Good night, little one.”eyeshandsheadstare / glare at / look her in the eye / with her eyes shining/ filled with tearsHis eyes sparkle with excitement/ gratitudepat him on the shoulder/headgrasp/hold ones handspoint to sb/sthwave his handsnod/shake his head violentlyHe thought for a

40、 momentMake your narration more vivid with appropriate movement. But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again. Amid the dreadful darkness, strange sounds of wild beasts were heard. “If it werent for that stupid quarrel, I wouldnt be trapped here,” she thought to herself, regretful tears

41、 clouding her eyes. Surrounded by the fear and tiredness, Jane felt exhausted and finally slid into sleep. “Tom, is that you?”she murmured. “Tom, help!” In her dream, she saw a man extending his arms towards her at a distance. It was day break when Jane woke up. After a washing, Jane continued to fo

42、rce her way ahead. In the boundless search, she found it impossible to find a way out, which threw her into desperation. Fortunately, a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment. In no time did Jane rush to the rock and climb onto it. She waved her yellow blouse madly to the passing helicopter. T

43、o her great joy, this time, the helicopter spotted her. The moment Jane was reunited with her husband, her tears clouded her vision. They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.wordssurroundingsthoughtslooks( (二二) ) 語(yǔ)篇的連貫性語(yǔ)篇的連貫性 1. 1. 內(nèi)容連貫內(nèi)容連貫故事大意一致，寫(xiě)作意圖一致故事大意一致，寫(xiě)作意圖一致2. 2. 語(yǔ)

44、句連貫語(yǔ)句連貫 銜接詞的準(zhǔn)確使用銜接詞的準(zhǔn)確使用but/howeverneverthelesswhereasalthoughthoughunfortunatelyinsteadon the contrarybesidesmoreover furthermorewhats more whats worse worse stillsothusthereforehenceconsequentlyaccordinglyas a result One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp ov

45、ernight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked o

46、n for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her

47、 mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him a

48、nd tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had s

49、he tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few

50、minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _3. 3. 語(yǔ)言連貫語(yǔ)言連貫 語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格一致語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格一致 But no more helicopter

51、came and it was getting dark again. Amid the dreadful darkness, strange sounds of wild beasts were heard. “If it werent for that stupid quarrel, I wouldnt be trapped here,” she thought to herself, regretful tears clouding her eyes. Surrounded by the fear and tiredness, Jane felt exhausted and finall

52、y slid into sleep. “Tom, is that you?”she murmured. “Tom, help!” In her dream, she saw a man extending his arms towards her at a distance. It was day break when Jane woke up. After a washing, Jane continued to force her way ahead. In the boundless search, she found it impossible to find a way out, w

53、hich threw her into desperation. Fortunately, a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment. In no time did Jane rush to the rock and climb onto it. She waved her yellow blouse madly to the passing helicopter. To her great joy, this time, the helicopter spotted her. The moment Jane was reunited wit

54、h her husband, her tears clouded her vision. They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun. One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started

55、 to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake

56、. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she b

57、ecame. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear wat

58、er trickling (滴落滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would le

59、ad her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she shoul

60、d go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _3. 3. 語(yǔ)言連貫語(yǔ)言連貫 語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格一致語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格一致With no path to follow, Jane, she turned around, hoping to Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that Jane rose, hungry and t